I'm back in action!, and since no one is naming Ash's sword!, I guess I'll name it.
Hey, I did gave you some time to leave a comment to name the sword, I'll, say it in Japanese " Shinokage " which means Death Shadow, come on!, I think it's a cool name, don't you think? Leave a comment below to write what you think about this.
Also holy crap! Thanks guys, this story is a hit in my book! And also I like the reviews and thank you for supporting this story and me!
Sorry if I was a little rude before, that was me angry, sorry. But anyway...
If you guys like it, thanks, now anyway let's see how Ash's training is doing in Chapter 3!
Chapter 3 The Training...?
"Where are we going Valerie?" Asked Ash.
"We're going to my training garden, I need a week to prepare you." She said as they walk to her garden.
"A week!, you've got to be kidding me!" He Exclaimed.
"I understand that this is sudden, but I need to spend time with you, so you can help me to defeat them." She said.
Soon a large shock came upon the palace!
"What in the hell was that?" Wondered Ash.
"No it can't be, they already located this place!, Sylveon come here!" She yelled.
"Sylveon!" -Sylveon.
"Woah that's a Sylveon, that's quite rare where I live, whoops better stop talking!" He said as he prepare his sword.
"Haha!, look at what I have here!, a beautiful goddess, just imagine the things I can do to you." Said the officer as he licks his lips and flick his tounge up and down repeatedly.
"You are disgusting!" Yelled Valerie.
"How in the hell are you here and who are you?" Asked Ash.
"No who in the hell are you, where are your manners kid?, show some respect to a superior!" He said.
"Wrong!, you should introduce yourself when you barge in to someone's home!" Yelled Ash."You got some guts kiddo, fine, my name is Harty, the officer of squad 48." Exclaimed Officer Harty.
"Squad 48?!" Gasped Ash.
"I never expected the hell army was this large!?" Exclaimed Valerie.
"I might as well tell the details since all of you are gonna die, there are 50 squads in the hell army and each number are ranked by the number that they are chosen."
"The lower the number, the stronger and higher ranked they are." Said the Officer.
"There's that many, so you're..." Exclaimed Ash but stopped talking when the Officer said it himself.
"The 48th strongest among the 50 squads." Exclaimed Harty.
"Also, that means you're the leading this squad right?, the that means, that I have to defeat you and this battle would be good as over." Exclaimed Ash.
"How naive." He said.
"Ahhhh!" Screamed Valerie.
"Sylveon!" - Sylveon.
Sylveon used quick attack on the soldier but was knock back by a Nether Spear.
"Damn you!" Yelled Ash as he watched Valerie being strangled by a hell soldier.
"Awwh, how pathetic, among the gods and goddesses, I never expect you to be weak, Valerie Fairy, the goddess of dreams." Said Harty.
"Hey kid look behind you." He said.
"What the-" Said Ash, but he soon stabbed by a Nether Spear by another hell soldier.
"Gahh!" -Ash.
"Ash!" Screamed Valerie.
"You're a young goddess, and I'm surprised Squad 50 didn't disposed of you when they killed your family!" Yelled Harty.
"Kill her!" Said Harty as he begins to laugh.
"Nooo!" Yelled Ash.
Soon a blinding light came upon, a endless world of darkness soon appeared.
Okay I have to admit this chapter is awesome! - Author notes.
"Young one, do you hear me." Said a strong deep hollowfied voice. (Kinda like Ichigo's inner hollow voice, it's pretty cool.)
"Who is it?, Where am I?, Who are you?" Asked Ash.
"Heh, you really don't know who I am, but I'll accept this time, very well, technically I'm your sword, you see those shadows above you, find the shadow that is your sword, and once you find it, learn my name, and find your way to power!" Said the strong deep hollowfied voice.
(I know this kinda similar to bleach in many ways but I really don't want to do a contrast between Bleach and Pokemon, seems weird, with Ichigo and Ash, and many other characters, what do you guys think?)
"How the hell, am I gonna find the shadow that belongs to me!" Yelled Ash.
"I've got to admit, I never thought, I was like you, but that story will come at another time, why don't you pick one, it's like a puzzle games like you humans like to play, so play." Said the deep hollowfied voice.
"Damn!, he's not helping me, who is he?, what does he mean that he's my sword?, and also that he like me?, what the hell is going on here!?" Thought Ash.
"Alright need to focus, and I better hurry." Said Ash.
"Focus, Focus, Focus..., There!" Thought Ash.
Then Ash flew off and went to a faraway shadow to left.
"Gahh!" - Ash. - as he pulled out the sword.
Soon the blinding light returns again and brings him back to world/ heaven.
"Destroy, Shinokage!" Said Ash as he performed the incantation for his sword.
Soon a dark black aura with a white outline engulfs Ash.
"What the hell!" Yelled Harty.
Then moments after, the dark aura soon disperse.
Soon Ash appears from the aura cloud, and his clothing and appearance changed.
His hair is now a silverish white hair that is slightly risen and is rigid.
His muscle tone is define and increase muscle mass.
Ash now wears a white jacket with black outlines that is open.
Also he wears a black y-shirt underneath his jacket and wears a silver belt with black chains all over his waistline, with black jeans and shoes.
Lastly Ash also wears a black +golden outline necklace too.
"If I were you, I'd leave her alone." Said an irritated Ash.
"Heh, as if I care, because she's dead!, HAAAAAA!" Said the hell soldier as he used his Nether Spear at Valerie.
"Huh?!, how in the hell did you?" Wondered the hell soldier but he soon been cut down by Ash.
"Gahh!, damn you!" Yelled the hell soldier as he spoiled Ash as his last words.
"I did warn you did I not." Said Ash.
"Ash." Said Valerie as she watch in awe as Ash defeated the hell soldier with ease.
"Grrh!, Raticate attack and use Super Fang!" Said Harty.
(Um, guys this could end out bloody, kids, please, don't read this if it's rated M, Thanks.)
"Shitenpiasa." Said Ash as he swung his sword at Raticate, creating a black shadowy wave. (The wave is like Getsuga Tenshou, but is black and white outline but shadowy.)
Raticate try to use Super Fang on Shitenpiasa, but fails to do the job, ending the Rat's fate.
The Rat in two, bleeding endlessly, the rat was dead, very dead.
"Son of a bitch!" Yelled Harty.
"Men!, attack!" Yelled Harty as he angrily fled.
"Yes sir!, huh?, why did he ditch us!" Said a hell soldier.
"Damn that was cold!" Said another hell soldier.
"Hey if I were you, I'd pay attention." Said Ash.
"Why you-!" - Hell Soldier.
"Take this!" Said a hell soldier as he charges to attack at Ash.
But Ash blocks it and used Shitenpiasa again, creating another explosion.
"Gah!" Yelled the hell soldier as he was sent flying to the pillars of the palace.
"The pillars, the palace, it's collapsing!" Yelled a hell soldier retreat.
"Tchh!, Valerie you okay?" Asked Ash.
"Yes thank you Ash, thank you for saving me." Said Valerie as she thanked Ash.
"You welcome, Shitenpiasa!" Said Ash as he used several Shitenpiasa at the hell soldiers, sealing their fate.
"Alright, we must hurry!, come Sylveon!" Said Valerie.
Recovered from its injuries, Sylveon followed its master and head outside.
Moments later... ...
"Is everyone okay?" Asked Ash.
"Yes, thank you." Said Valerie.
"Huh!" Ash surprised, and everyone witness the explosion of Valerie's palace as a huge fire engulfs it.
"At least we are safe for now." Said Valerie.
"Are you okay Sylveon?" Asked Valerie to her beloved Sylveon.
"Sylveon!" - Sylveon happily.
"Wonderful!" Said Valerie.
"Sorry for destroying your palace Valerie." Apologized Ash. (Also, Ash's sword release will be his base form if you don't mind.)
"Don't worry young Ash, eventually, we will have to leave this place, and build a new one." Said Valerie.
"Then where are we going to build?" Asked Ash.
"Within the prairies of treasures is where we will find our new home, it's where I met my first friend, a goddess, the flower goddess, Sarah." Explained Valerie.
"I see, so how faraway is it?" Asked Ash once more.
In your standards, it is about 5 miles away." Said Valerie.
"That's not too bad, and also our building will give us a location to the enemy, how are we going to survive there?" Asked Ash,
"Then we'll build underground." Replied Valerie.
"Makes sense." Said Ash.
"Young Ash, I am proud for what you done today, and your first training has been completed." Said Valerie.
"My training has been completed already?" Wondered Ash.
"That's right, since you were able to know your inner spirit's name and its incantation." Said Valerie as she was impressed with Ash's progress. (Okay I have to admit, this is kinda like Bleach.)
"Wow, I'm flattered Valerie." Said Ash.
"It's okay, don't flatter yourself Ash, come on, let's get moving okay." Said Valerie.
"Right." Replied Ash.
That's it for today.
I think this is the best chapter I ever write in this story.
Thanks you guys for supporting this story and me! Well appreciated, you can have a pat on the back for reading this story and writing great reviews/ comments.
Who knows if you write your own stories, I'll leave a review, just to let you know.
Oh and also, feel free to write a review for the badass super saiyan VEGETA series!, I just want to know what you think about it.
The series will be only on this story, plus I finally know how to use a poll for fanfiction, so please leave a vote for Pokemon: Advanced Kanto Arc: AshxMay or Dragonball Z comedies adventure series.
Oh one more thing before the super SAIYAN series thingy, can you guys and I beg you, please teach me how to use a image manager for fanfiction, because I'm really stump, call me stupid all you want, but please teach me, I will be truly greatful for that and thank you.
Alright then, Badass Super SAIYAN VEGETA series! Begin!
"Take this Kakorot, Big Bang Attack!" - Super Saiyan Vegeta.
"Kamehameha!" - Super Saiyan Goku.
"Damn you!" - Super Saiyan Vegeta.
" Why did you blow up the Earth Vegeta!" - Super Saiyan Goku.
"How many times do I have to say it Bitchface!, because I hate you KAKOROT! - Super Saiyan Vegeta.
" Well, well monkeys do come with monkeys." - Frieza.
" The only difference is, it's a bunch of super monkeys with no tail." - Frieza
"What the hell frieza!" - Super Saiyan Vegeta.
"What?, I thought Trunks kill you in cold blood?" - Super Saiyan Goku.
"The boy?!" - Super Saiyan Vegeta.
" Look at you Vegeta, you're a super monkey." - Freiza.
"It's super Saiyan you Shit head!" - Super Saiyan Vegeta.
"Frieza!, how in the world are you alive!?" - Super Saiyan Goku.
"You see, monkey, or should i say super monkey, is that I was tied in a cocoon by fairies with shit!, and I want to get out of there!, so why do you think I'm here for. - Frieza.
"Because you're a shit head." - Super Saiyan Goku.
"Get Rekt!" - Audience.
"Finally me and you agree with something." - Super Saiyan Vegeta.
" Son of a bitch!" - Frieza
"Destructo Disc!, Pizza!" - Frieza. ( Okay, took that one from Teamfourstar, but I can't help my self but to put it in the story.)
" Did you just throw pizza?, at my face?" - Super Saiyan Vegeta. (LOL)
"Hey!?, how come Vegeta gets a pizza but I don't?" - Super Saiyan Goku.
"Oh that's right!, here's two pizzas!" - Frieza
"Ohh yum!" - Super Saiyan Goku.
"How in the hell do you function?" - Frieza.
" I eat." - Super Saiyan Goku.
"Bitch!" - Frieza.
"First of all Frieza, how in the hell did you buy pizza!" - Frieza.
"I went down on Earth, get some money, and went to Little Caesar and bought Pizza." - Frieza.
"Wtf!" - Super Saiyan Vegeta.
" Can I have more." - Super Saiyan Goku.
"My god, how much do you eat?" - Frieza.
"Tons, literally tons." - Super Saiyan Goku.
Thats it for now, and remember to leave a review, favorite this story and more!
Also I apologize for being rude last time, I ask your forgiveness, later!
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