Chapter three the Battle 4 the caln
thx jazzie-kun 4 th good review! and stop flmaing the stroy!1 i bet u cant right such a good story!1!1 I think you could pick any story of the site and it would be better
StarPaw walkd over too the appentice's den. Insid she saw her sister's FlamePaw and lakePaw and hr frend JazzPaw (a.n: jazzie-kin ur my bff!) waz slepping on the mos. Apparently her sisters became apprentices before her, Yes! Finally someone has some sense!
"JazzPaw get up." She cried. JazzPaw opend her brlliaint blu eyes and looked at hr. Jazzpaw is a pretty cool name just not for Warrior cats.
"Do yo want 2 go on pattrol wit me?" she asked. Did anyone else have trouble understanding that?
"Sure!" Said JazzPaw getten up from the moss. They leavt and went two the entrnse too camp. Bad spelling is Bad
But then, a cat came in thru the entrnce! It was BlackStar!1!11 I like Blackstar…
"Shadowclan are attaking!" She yelled. All the cats came out from there dens. She jumped on a cat and clawd him and he ran of. So, to Starpaw's logic, one cat makes a whole clan attacking and she can defeat a LEADER with no training?! *Cough* Mary Sue *Cough*
"Good job StarPaw!" FireStar called, "The last cat i new that culd fiht lik that was SandStrom. Your a good fihter!" Who is this Sandstrom? Is she a badly spelt clone of Sandstorm?
StarPaw was happy. She wus a good fihgter! Maybey this was wat the prophcy meant. Just…..*Facepaw*
thnkx and ples no more flams *Throws a flame and burns the story*