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Chapter Three The Traning Under The Star What happened to the other stars?
OMGOSH GUkys im so sorry but SOMEONE glares at rainy days FLAMED ME AND I GOT REALLY HURT. OKKAY IF you dont LIKE thestor y you dont have to readit u know. Go Rainydays! Also, suck it up princess, flames are a part of fan fiction.
Chapter Three The Traning Under The Stars Oh yay! The stars are back!
Shadowclan run from the camp. StarPaw smiled. Shed one! Noone cod hurt her family now . Shed one, Starpaw zero
StarPaw!" said FireStar. "Its time we train!" I want to show you how to fight!" Straight after a battle, seems legit
"Ok." Sad StarPaw happl;y. "but yo just saw I culd fight, write?" "Well, ya." said FireStar. "But I wnted tol see if that was all you new." How can you 'sad' something 'happily'?
"Ok." They went to the frost togather and the other cats cleaned jp the bodies. "Ok StarPaw" said Firestar one they got their. "We'll start with how to dog." Bark bark!
"Cmon thas too easy!" yelled StarPaw. Shed just beat BlackStar she was ready for anything! Firestar: "No need to yell!" growls as the ringing in his ears become louder.
"ok Ok" mewled FiresTar, lets learn how to claw an oponit. Who is this Fire's tar? -
"Ya." Yowled Starkit.Who apparently became a kit again. She jumped at FireStar not Giving hiM time to attakc. "She hit his side he didn't move he was to surprise.d she clawed him and he started bledding. Aren't you supposed to train with your claws sleathed? *Gasp* The Mary sue did something wrong! "wow StarPaw" he said ".Your doing awesome." "Really?" gaped StarPaw. She didn't think she was doing that god was she relly special like the porphesy meowed? How does a prophecy meow?
"Yes StarPaw." Snarled Firestar. "I couldnteven get away in fast enough. Only scourg was did that before.," Whoah Firestar no need to snarl
"OMGOSH REALLY?" asked StarPaw. Scourg?1? THE SCOURG? She dherad so muchj about him he was really evil and killed alot of cats. "I'M LIKE SCOURG? "I didnt mean it like that" FirePaw sad fastly. "I ment you wer a good fighter. Its really cool." At that minute he thought to himself 'Starpaws so kawaii look at her eys and her fur. Do you even know what that means?
"Oh ok thanks." They trained floor awhile later StarPaw beat FireStar 8 times once she let him win to make him fel bettar and b y the last one she was alittle tired. Just, Just…..no. Firestar could beat you miss Sue with a swipe of his claws.
"Hey FireStar can we hunt now." Said StarPaw. "im kinda hungry." CODE BREAKER
"Oh we'll if you want." Firestar was disappointed he and; starPaw had been having so much fun. So they went huntng, StarPaw messed up a couple times but FireStar said it was okaysince it was only her second time (she'd had her first time when she was a littlekit and she and FireStar had snuck out together that's why he chose her as his apprentice_. Yeah right
Later that night StarPaw locked up at the stars. Ohhhh so that's where the stars went! She and Firestar had'd so much fun this day. Theyd brung back enough food for the hole clan. So they're suddenly helping this new 'hole clan' hey?
Locking upn at the stars she turned to her best friend, JazzPaw, and said, "Do you think well ever be up there." Jazzpaw never!
"Ya totally." Said JazzPaww. "I mean youll be l,eader and I'll be depudy one day well have too!" If Starpaw becomes leader of Thunderclan….oh Starclan!
"Ya." Said StarPaw smiling she loved JazzPaw NOT IN THAT WAY U SICKOS!) Hey you're the one who typed it not me. they were best friends. She loked up at the stars again and smiled and fell asleep wit the Starcaln voices whisper in her head. I'm afraid that's Starclan plotting your death sweetie.
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