tobias pov
"Wow" is all I can say. I look at tris "Are you sure about this?" I ask. She looks up at me and slowly as if still thinking it over in her head nods. "Ok anything my gorgeous wants." I say. He expression changes to shock she softly says just over a whisper " your not mad, no protest, no long argument, no...nothing?" I laugh "tris I love you and I know I tell you everyday but I really do and if you want...um you know..." she cuts me off mumbling "sex". I awkwardly say "yea... that then, that's fine we can, just tell me if at any time you want to stop ok?" I say kissing the top of her head. "ok" I grab her hand and we stand up to walk to the apartment that we share.
tris pov
I'm ready
no your not
YES I AM!
I shake my head slightly to get my head to stop arguing. Am I ready...should I have said anything...what if I don't like it...who am I kidding tobias is the most wanted guy in Dauntless of coarse i'm going to enjoy it... I just hope i'm ready!
We arrive at our apartment and as soon as Four opens the door I run inside go to the bed room and lock the door. I wipe off my makeup because I don't tobias hates it. I grab a red push up bra Christina bought me and some lacey panties that match then I put on a loose top that has the dauntless flames in the middle so its easy to take of and put on some black shorts, really short and I look at myself in the mirror. I sigh. Ok tris you can do this Tobias loves you he wont make you do anything you don't want to. I take one last look in the mirror and walk out the door. I look around the living room "Four...Tobias" I hear nothing. I walk around scanning the room with my eyes.
Suddenly I feel hands on my waist and I squeal as Tobias lifts me over his head. Then brings me back down to the ground and kisses me softly on the lips. I wrap my hands around his neck and his hands go to my waist. I lift my legs and wrap them around his waist. He lifts me up and he licks my lips asking for an entrance. I open my lips and he slips his tongue inside.
he walks forward into the bedroom and he lays me softly on top of the bed. "You ok?" he asks. I nod thinking how sweet it his that he is only thinking about me. He starts at my jaw and kisses down my neck and when he reaches my collarbone he kisses each of my ravens.
Hey Hey Hey I promise to update soon at the most 3 days... anyway I got a review saying I needed to use punctuations and grammar stuff like. that person out there that said that I TAKE CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISISM YOU ARE LUCKY YOU REVIEWED AS A GUEST BECAUSE IF YOU DIDNT I WOULD HAVE REPORTED YOU BECAUSE SAYING IM PATHETIC DOES NOT COUNT AS CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISISM SO YOU NEED TO STOP AND I DONT USUALLY CURSE BUT SINCE YOU CURSED AT ME I CAN CURSE AT YOU SO SHUT THE F*** UP BECAUSE I AM NOT PATHETIC. Now that I have that anger out of my system REVIEW ! And sorry you had to read all that but I had to say that to the person.
PLEASE READ! I need you guys to tell me if you want me to just say they had sex or describe all of that stuff if so im going to have to change the rating so tell me in your reviews if you want me to describe or say so... yea see you guys later well I actually cant see you so write to you later? anyway BYE :)
ps. sorry about any mistakes I just really wanted to update since I didn't yesterday.