HEY GUYS! Ok I just wanted to say soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry for not updating at all this week I am soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry I am a bad person *hitting self in the face* ok I am going to try and make this long but im not that good at making things long sooooooo yea my teachers are stupid they just are they don't realize I have somewhat of a live outside of school (notice I said somewhat) but please review they make me happy and motivate me to right ok enough of me and onto YOU.

anze(guest)- thank you your review was really nice and it made me feel special thank you and I am glad that you like my story.

I wake up. Last night comes flooding back. I officially have 6 fears. I large smile crosses my face I realize I am smiling too wide and I have been for too long so I close my mouth. I turn around to find Tobias not behind me. I look around the room till I find him with no shirt on smirking at me with 2 cups in his hands.

"Hey cutie what you so smiley about, huh?" I glare at him and cant keep the blush from crawling up my face.

"I didn't see you wake up. You could have smiled just as big as I did I just didn't see it." I get an idea. I grab my robe and head for the door.

"Tris where are you going?" He asks nervously.

I laugh "Oh, just to the control room so I can look through the footage and find out if you were smiley when you woke up." I say innocently, I walk toward the door and my hand is on the doorknob when I look back at him. Fear fills his eyes.

"OK fine, I might have been a little happier then usual when I woke up this morning and remembered last night." He finally gives in.

I laugh. Then I stop and get serious. "Tobias can I ask you something?" He sees my seriousness so he picks me up bridal style sets me on the bed, then sits down himself. He holds our hands between us, and looks into my eyes as I stare back into his dark blue.

Mr. SUPER SEXY! pov

I wonder what's wrong. I love Tris and if something's wrong I am NOT going to stop till I stop it. I hold her hands after placing her on the bed. I try to show her through my eyes how much I love her.

She shakes her head "This is stupid." She mutterers.

"Tris, just tell me I will understand." I really need to know what's going on. She sighs and looks up at me.

"Was I good enough for you?" she looks at me as I try to process this.

"Tris I'm going to tell you the truth, that is the one thing I hate about you, you don't see your own beauty. I love you I love everything about you but you just don't see IT!" I am starting to get frustrated but stay calm.

"You have a great figure, a great smile, I just adore your laugh, I like it when I make you blush, I like how adventurous you are, I love how when we first met you didn't throw yourself at me, you are so different and special and amazing and I find you just so... well SEXY! You just don't see it!" As I was talking I had stood up and was walking around. I turn to look at her. Her jaw is dropped and she is just staring at me.

"I'm sorry?" she says softly. It sounds more like a question. I sigh louder than necessary. She wraps her arms around my neck and my hands go to her waist automatically, its a natural instinct. I kiss the top of her head.

"I just love you so much it hurts right here." I pock my chest.

"I feel like my heart is about to explode with love for you I just thought that last would have shown you.

She hugs me tighter and I hug her back being careful not to crush her.

"Lets go get breakfast." She says pulling away. I smile and we go eat a breakfast of waffles, bacon and of coarse dauntless cake. Oh and don't forget tons of happy kisses with the love of my life. Tris.

this is the longest chapter I have written to you guys...I think, anyway the next chapter or the one after that will be the last chapter. DONT CRY! My friend and I will be writing a sequel to this story soon we actually haven't thought of a title yet but if will be under the name divergent1213 ok my little readers I hope you review and I will update soon.