ok guys i got only 3 reviews and 300 and some odd views sooo i decided that im going to do a poll on if im a good writer decent or bad.i would also like to thank Factionmixer and Dauntless bravery 12 for your "continued support" but i'll try to use your ideas well anyways heres chapter 4.(evil laugh)
Tobias/Four pov
"Eric truth or dare?" "Dare of course I'm Dauntless" "I dare you to hang over the Chasm" she says while winking at Chris. "WHY THE HELL WOULD I DO THAT" says Eric.
When we get to the Chasm Eric simply lifts his leg over the railing and almost falls over and i start to laugh. "not so funny when it happends to you" Chris says. He just shoots her a death glare and gets into postion Lynn starts her wacth and we all look at her like she's wrong in the she looks at us "we do need some Intates you know". we mumble some fines and whatevers.
by a minute and a half Eric starts to slip so me and Zeke are near the railing in case he falls so we can cacth secertly if he does fall i wont be using all my sterngh to grab "3 MINUTES LEFT" scearms Lynn and thats when i notice Tris and Kayla are missing and i have no idea where they are and i start to wonder if they went back or if there talking about her Digence and saw an oppritonity to slip out. god i hope there safe..."FOUR A LITTLE HELP HERE" yells Zeke and when i look i see that Eric sliped and Zeke is holding onto him.I quickly grab him but not using all of my strength and start to pull him up.
When Eric is the railing we head back and it looks like every one else noticed that Tris and Kayla are missing cause Christina looks like she lost her makeup when we go through the Pit People take one look at me and start to laugh and then i rember the makeover Uriah gave me and i start to shoot death glares and then they stop laughing.
When we get back to the Apartment we sit in our deformend circle and Tris and Kayla come back we all scearm "WHAT" at the same ...'we... arent..the...only truth..or dare..game today" she says in between laughing thats were you two went says thats were we Kayla now whos turn is replys Eric and he looks at truth or dare he i say with a i dare you to play seven minutes with i but theres a whats that me Tris say at the same you have to let Christina tape it and send it to Tris's borther.I look at tris to see if shes cool with this and she nods like its no big i say yes.
ok this one was longer by a bit oh and i still need a beta reader so PM me bye