ok guys guess what. I got a Beta!YEY so now i can continue without have so many complaints (factionmixer i reread your review and it sounded mean)well anyways as promised 2 chapters a day so *drumroll*CHAPTER 5 (evil laugh).
Tris POV
"I dare you to play seven minutes with Tris"."I would but there's a whats that me Tris say at the same you have to let Christina tape it and send it to Tris's brother"he looks at me to see if im cool with this and I nod like its no big and he says yes.
GO says Eric and we start to make out (im going to skip the details cause im only 12 and never done that stuff before)
7 minutes later me and Tris have sex hair and i kissed her lip gloss off so go to freshen up we clean our selfs up and Chirs has sent the video messege Tobias asks Mar to play 7 miutes with Eric and there goes her shrit then Uri says truth and was meant to say what his weirdest fear and im asked to give a lap dance to the first guy i see and i lose my jacket a cluple of truths and dares later Caleb shows up.
"BEATRICE WHAT WERE YOU DOING IN THIS VIDEO IS THAT YOUR BOYFRIEND" he starts to scearm at me and calm down "it was a dare but yes he is my boyfriend" i say that Caleb takes a swing at Tobias and then he punches him and then theres a big fist fight untill Kayla flips them both and they say ow "what was that for" "you are two idiots who where fighting so i broke it up and i dident feel like having a black eye today."
whatever says caleb can i sure says Kayla sitting back down and twidiling her whos turn is it says caleb sitting beside says Zeke."Caleb is it truth or dare" "dare" he says in his worrid vocie. "I dare you to shoot ten people in the back with a panitball gun he says."
again another short chapter im really trying hard not to make them that way but you guys arent giveing me sujetions IM WRITING THIS FROM SCARCTH HERE PEOPLE I NEED SOME TYPE OF HELP