Knight Girl

by HO0T HO0T

Max disguised as a man is the best fighter in the land but she has a secret. Lisa & Bridget are Princesses and are invited to Fangs Kingdom for a ball, where he is supposed to find a wife. Max is their (the princesses and queen Val's) bodyguard and goes with them. There she meets the pyro twins and the silent lady's man, Fang. How will she handle being both a Knight and maid?

5. AN: Do I keep writing?

Hey Guys HO0T here.

I haven't gotten many reviews for this chapter... I know it wasn't the best and I need your help to edit it I just can't seem to think of what i can write to improve it?

Or should I stop writing it? I mean I know what iIm going to write for the next chapter but should I bother?

And if you guys still think it's a good read should I do a different POV?

I've been thinking of writing in Angels or Iggy's or Gazzy's? and deffinately introduce Nudge and Ella more into the plot.

But should I do it? Do you guys like where this story is going anymore?

PLEASE review and tell me!

Flying High

HO0T HO0T