A/N: Hello! Sorry I haven't uploaded in a while. School is kicking my ass this year. But enjoy my retelling of My Immortal!
Chapter 5
AN: STOP flaming! If you flame that means you're a prep OR a poser! The only reason Dumbledore swore at them was because he had a headache, okay? And on top of that he was mad at them for having sex! P.S. I'm not updating until I get five good reviews!
Dumbledore made Draco and I follow him while he shouted at us angrily. "You fools!" he cried. I started to cry and the tears ran down my pale face. Draco comforted me softly. When we got back to the castle, Dumbledore took us back to his office where Professor Snape was waiting angrily. "I'm sure you're wondering why you're here Professor." said Dumbledore.
"Indeed." Snape said.
"These two were having sexual intercourse in the Forbidden Forest!" Dumbledore said angrily. "Having sexual intercourse, an action that is already frowned upon in any kind of wizarding school but also doing it a place that was already forbidden! Or did the name of the forest itself slip your mind?! You will both be given detention for two weeks! How dare you?!"
"I did it because I love her!" Draco yelled. Everyone was quiet. Snape still looked mad but Dumbledore waved them away. "Very well. You may go to your rooms."Draco and I went downstairs to our dorms. "Are you okay Ebony?" Draco asked me gently. "Yeah, I guess." I lied. I went to the girls' bathroom and I brushed my teeth and my hair. I changed into a low-cut black floor-length dress with red lace all around the edges. When I left the bathroom Draco was standing in front of the bathroom door.
He hugged me. "I love you Ebony. You're beautiful and I love every bit of you." I was so flattered, even though he wasn't supposed to be here. "I love you too, Draco." We kissed and said goodnight. After that we reluctantly went back to our separate rooms.
A/N: Hello again! I just wanted to say that the detention will be briefly mentioned but I don't want to deviate too much from the story. I only put in the detention because, wizards and magic aside, getting off scotch free for having sex is a bit unrealistic. So, on wards to the next chapter!
Chapter 6
AN: Shut up preps, okay? P.S. I won't update until you give me good reviews!
The next day I woke up in my bed. I put on a black miniskirt that was ripped around the ends and a matching top with red skulls all over it, with black high heeled boots. I put on two skull earrings and I spray-colored my hair purple. In the Great Hall, I ate some Count Chocula cereal and a glass of blood to drink.
Suddenly someone bumped into me, spilling the blood all over my top. "You've got to be kidding me right now!" I stood up and turned to the person who had bumped into me. I was looking into the face of a pale boy with spiky black hair with red streaks. He was wearing so much eyeliner that it was going down his face and he was wearing black lipstick.
He had stubble on his chin. "I'm so sorry." he said in a shy voice. "T-that's alright. What's your name?" I questioned. "My name is Harry Potter." he mumbled. I was surprised. He didn't wear glasses anymore and his scar was gone. We sat down and talked for a while. Then Draco came up behind us. "Hey Ebony, I have a surprise for you." I smiled and followed hi out of the room.
Chapter 7: Bring Me To Life
AN: Well, okay you guys, I'm only writing this because I got five good reviews. By the way, I won't write the next chapter until I get ten good reviews! Stop flaming or I'll report you! Ebony isn't a Mary Sue okay? She isn't perfect, she's a satanist! And she has problems, she's depressed for Gods sake!
Draco and I held hands as we went upstairs. I waved to Harry as we passed. Misery filled his dark eyes. I guess he was jealous of me and Draco. When we got upstairs we went in his room and locked the door. We started kissing passionately and we took each others clothes enthusiastically. We got on the bed and we started kissing again. Then we started to have sex. All of the sudden I saw a tattoo on Draco's arm. It was a black heart with an arrow going through it. On it in bloody letters was the word, Harry!
I was so angry. "You bastard!" I shouted angrily, jumping out of the bed. "No! No! You don't understand! Let me explain!" Draco pleaded. But it was too late. "No, you fucking idiot!" I shouted. I put on my clothes angrily and stomped out. Draco ran out of the room, still naked. I stomped down to the dungeons where Harry was in a class with Snape and some other students. "Harry Potter, you fucking bastard!"
Chapter 8
AN: Stop flaming! If you do then you're a prep!
Everyone in class stared at me and then moved their sights onto Draco, still naked, as he ran into the classroom. "Ebony, it's not what you think!" he cried. My friend Hermione Granger smiled at me in understanding. She flipped her waist length black hair. Hermione changed a lot over the summer. She was kidnapped by Muggles when she was a baby. She recently found out her dad was a vampire and her mom was a witch. Voldemort killed her mother and her father commit suicide because he couldn't live without her. This caused Hermione to become depressed and she wished that she had known them before they died.
"What is going on here?" Snape said coldly. "I can't believe that Draco cheated on me with you, Harry!" I shouted at him. Everyone gasped.
DRACO'S POV
I don't know why Ebony was so mad at me. I had went out with Vampire before Ebony but he left me for a girl named Britney, a prep. We were just good friends now.
EBONY'S POV
"I'm not dating Draco anymore!" yelled Harry.
"Yeah fucking right! Fuck off, you bastard!" I screamed. I ran out of the roo and didn't stop running until I got to the Forbidden Forest where I lost my virginity to Draco and started to burst into tears.
A/N: Hi! I just wanted to say I am so sorry Hermione. Also I own none of this, thank god. I hope you enjoy and I will try to upload sooner than last time.