Good job w/your 1st ever chapter! Maybe a little short, but hey! Everybody's gotta start somewhere. And Sans? You can't hurt the author no matter HOW hard you try. I have experience with noobs, okay? They won't let ANY of the characters near them...NOT ONE.
Thank you so much! :)
Sans: Whatcha mean 'Author'? You mean crazy voice thing that trapped us in here? Don't care. I'll find a way, just watch me. *Eye flashes dangerously*
Frisk: Yeah! Sans never gives-! Wait yes you do. A lot actually.
S: Frisk, princess...let me be scary."
F: But your not! Your just a silly cute lil' angel!"
S: This sweet lil' angel is gonna bite you if you don't stop talkin'!"
F: Yeah right! Besides you have flat-! Oh...shit.
S: Yep! Two fangs right here with your name on em'.
F: ... *scoots as far away as possible which was six inches*
S: Heheh! Not so cute and lil' arn't I now Frisky?
F: You look like a vampire Sans.
S: What am I gonna do next, sparkle in the sun? Now come over here so I can bite cha!
F: Hello question box thingys? I would like some questions please! Sans is starting to creep me out.
S: Hehehe...