Thanks again for the review loki94! You are the best!
As for your question: "where are superman and kell-El?" :
I was going to explain it on the chapter I am currently writing, chapter 5. Kell left after the ceremony and superman returned to the past, maybe they will appear in the story, I haven't thought about it yet.
I've been writing the chapters pretty fast! I am enjoying writing this story, I hope you like it
Darn, It's pretty hard to write a fighting scene :/ Its pretty hard to write in general, specially on another language, 'couse my first language is Spanish.
So, I am planning on getting a beta reader soon ;)
*I improved some things in this chapter, like the fighting scene*
Chapter 3: crashing in
Flashback:
Five days after brainy left the legion, he settled down on his ship near a desolated planet, orbiting around it. He was hiding from brainiac, making sure the chip didn't get on his hands.
The ship wasn't near as homey as the legion's ship was, this one was small and reminded him of his childhood, witch wasn't exactly a good thing. Without finding any other place to live, he unpacked and decided to stay there .
He spent his days working on his new lab, trying to create a weapon to defend himself, since he no longer had his fighting mode or any weapons by the matter.
For the next week he orbited around the planet developing a weapon to defend himself. It was small, it purple cannon with the new logo on his face,the three white circles. It shoot a magenta beam that could surpass even metals.
Also he did a pair of magenta shields, they came out just like the one in his belt, to make the shield with twice the ratio and time it could be on. He wore them like the old part of his armor on his arms, being purple with three dots.
Exhausted for overworking, brainy went to sleep, he wanted to call his friends, but it was still too soon to face them. After considering it for a few minutes, he decided to check on their frequency, curios to know what were they doing.
As soon as he activated the ring's communication system, it started to flash red. His frequency was being monitored, probably by brainiac, giving his location away.
Quickly he disconnected a few wires, jamming his communicator. He ran towards the controllers of the ship and tried to go to another location far from his current place, however, this time, the systems didn't respond this time. Trying again to hack into the systems he heard something strike the ship.
it was to late
Before he could do anything the walls were blasted open. Brainy's eyes widened, brainiac had find him.
"this was easier than I thought, I thought finding you would be harder than this" the evil android chuckled
brainy glared at him, it was hard to walk on the room with the walls broken and the space sucking him out. The coluan ran out of the room and forced the doors shut. seconds after, brainiac opened them with his own arms, went inside and then shut them tight.
brainy started to fire his new weapon towards him, the magenta beams shot just beside him, but he was too fast, he jumped all over the room evading them without much effort.
brainy was getting tired of this, so he decided to make up a plan.
brainy aimed towards his arm, brainiac quickly realized this and stretched his arm out of the way. Predicting the move, brainy shot towards the direction he just starched and blasted his arm away. However before he could continue his attack the arm quickly regenerated.
the android gave a evil smile to the younger coluan, he calmly walked towards were the shocked teen stood.
brainiac wasn't fighting back, he was trying to evade the shots coming from the green coluan... almost like he was toying with him.
"I won't give you the chip!" brainy glared at him, he chuckled again
"I am not looking for that useless piece of junk anymore, I am behind something…or rather, someone else"
brainy was confused, why was him after him? He couldn't corrupt his files anymore; he was no longer a computer, so what did he want from him?
Brainiac then actually began to attack, he transformed his arm into a canon, jut like the one brainy use to have, he charged at him with the weapon in hand, brainy jumped to the left, evading the blow. brainiac glared at him and began to shoot beams from the cannon arm, brainy evaded them with no problem with his force belt.
each of the blasts made brainy back off a little with the force these had. he used the little time he could keep the shield on to formulate a plan. the extremities would grow back if he blasted them, the weak point had to be his central processor. the middle logo on his head.
before he could think how to successfully strike there his shield disappeared, out of guard, one of brainiac blasts hit him on the chest, making him stumble to the floor.
Brainiac extended his arms, grabbing the wounded brainy into the air, he struggled to get out of his grasp, but it was no use, he was to weak now.
"lights out brainiac 5" brainiac send a powerful shock of electricity towards brainy, who screamed and passed out. Brainiac smiled and let go the boy.
"pity, that someone that holds a power and intellect like yours has to be so weak. you are a disgrace to the braniacs"
"think again!" the teen jolted awake and send a blast to brainiac's forehead, leaving a small hole, circuits were visible. brainiac had several malfunction, he shock his head in pain, trying his best not to shut down his systems.
brainy stood in front of him, also in pain for the wound on his chest. but even more impressed for what just happened, how did he handle a jolt of electricity without passing out?
he left the train of thought when he realized that brainiac was up and moving towards the exit. brainy ran as fast as his wounded body would allow him.
he stopped to aim towards the android, but the android clicked a button, making all rooms shut tight, they both were now in separate rooms.
"auto destruction sequence activated, 60 seconds" the ship turned red, all the doors closed with brainy inside, brainy looked at the window, brainiac was flying away into a ship shaped like a skull, similar like the one 'he' used when he was possessed by brainiac.
"not again!" he ran towards the controls
"40 seconds"
he began to type on the machine, but it wasn't of much use, he needed to connect himself to the computer in order to stop the sequence, nothing was responding.
"20 seconds"
desesperate he tried to think of a solution, he tapped his feet on desperation. he then hurried to his room to get his mother chip and his time bubble tech.
"5 seconds" he stood up
"4 " he closed his eyes.
"3" he tighten his fists
"2" he raised his arms
"1" he activated his force field around him.
When the blast came, he struggled to keep his shield on, the force produced by the blast threw him closer to the planet's orbit and this one quickly drew him into its atmosphere.
brainy began to fall thousand of kilometer per hour into the planet, using his flight ring he managed to slow the fall by a lot, the shield was slowly fading away, he was losing consciousness, he felt the wound ache every second worse. when he was about 10 meters from the floor, he couldn't keep going, the shield deactivated. He crashed into some trees on the surface.
He passed out
I think the fighting scene sound better than the one from before, tell me what do you think ;)
critics are very welcome, they really help me to improve :D
