The Ice Queen- Chapter 6

Alrighty… First a Thank you to all my reviewers and followers I never thought That this story would do a good as it is so Thanks guys you all really help me writ… A New chapter on the way… Please forgive me if my last chapter seemed a bit confusing… I decided to put a bit more of a death seen involving the characters… Inuyasha will die in the same way.. It will just be explained better as too how it happened as He wakes up in Seshomaru's castle… Anyway.. On with the story… Hope you guys enjoy…

I wake up in the tub in Naraku's castle and gasp as I realize that I had probably already stayed in to long. I quickly rinse the shampoo from my hair and gather the supplies which I had bought with me. I dry off and dress In the red kimono with a black Obii and quickly get ready to leave.

"Kanna," I say, "Take me to go see Naraku, I am ready for what he has to do to me for me to be able to get my revenge."

Kanna nods at me and leads the way down a dark hallway. She knocks on a very decorative door made out of wood. It almost looks like the roses on the door are real.

"Come in, Miko" I hear Naraku say.

I slowly push open the door and walk to where Naraku is pointing for me to sit down. "How are you, My little Miko, are you ready to finally get your revenge on Inuyasha and his undead girlfriend kikyo." He asks

I look over at him and smile sheepishly, "Of course Master. Do what you have to do so that I may be strong enough to defeat them myself. I want to make HIM suffer the same way HE has made me suffer. And he will suffer, won't he master?"

Naraku looks down at me and smiles "Of course,"

I feel as he chains me to the chair and slowly leans me back. He starts gathering what almost looks like bunch of surgical supplies. " Now miko, since you have been a good girl, I am going to put you to sleep so that this doesn't hurt as much,"

I nod my head at him as I feel the needle slowly guide into my skin. I feel the needle release the liquid and feel as my eyes slowly shut.


Naraku smiles as the little miko slowly closes her eyes. He goes through his supplies and slowly starts injecting her with a bunch of different coloured liquids. He smiles to himself as he works. The miko turned out to be quite the little surprise to him. He would have never in his life expected her to be this agreeable. The Hanyou must have done something pretty foolish for her to be this mad at him. He finishes with the liquids and watches as the miko begins to change. Her face and her body grow narrower and her innocence seem to almost disappear. Naraku smiles as he watches all the emotions humans have seem to almost completely disappear from the very body of the Miko who will no longer be a miko.


I slowly open my eyes and mov around. I can already feel some of the changes in my body as I move around. "Naraku, master," I am awake...

You feel as he slowly moves towards you and turns lights a candle so that you can see better. "How do you feel?" he asks

"You look up at him and watches as he blinks slowly, " I feel, different.. But a good ind of different, I don't feeel like Kagome the Miko anymore, I feel changed... I feel... I feel like I want to kill something.. BUt I also fee incomplet... Like I need the other half of... Of my soul... I must kill Kikyo so as to gang access to my full powers," I reply.

Naraku smiles at you and says "You have turned out to be quite a beutiful Demoness, Kagome, would you like to see yourself,"

I look up at him and smile as I nod my head, "Of course I would..."

Naraku slowly unities me and guides me over to a mirror. I examine myself... My eyes they are a deep... Almost bloody looking red... My body Is also cahnged... I look sexy.. almost like a model... But not a sickly thin like they are... My face is also changed as well... It is narrower and my lips thicker and redder.

I look over to Naraku and grin to myself " I love it... I look dangerous and sexy all in one... Thankyou ver much Master Naraku... I love what you have done to me...


Alright I know this is short... Hopefully it will hold you over till I can get settled into a new place and will be able to update more often... Anyway Read and Reaview... Let me know waht you think... I expect som constructive criticism as it makes me a better writer...