I honestly didn't think I would get so many OC requests, I got about 10 OC requests in all. Please forgive me if I didn't use your OC for chapter 2. OC requests are now closed until further notice.
OC'S THAT MADE IT
Bancy Hatter the Mismagius
Safari the Pyroar
Harrison the Shiny Swellow
Tsubaki the Leafeon
Juan the Tauros
Melody the Lopunny
Mohammad the Persian
Mobin the Aipom
Kim yong the Sawk
Alice Burton the Ampharos
I will open up OC's later when I have introduced each OC's enough to work on new ones. Here is chapter two.
I stood there totally dumbfounded. Hopes Point Academy was humongous, much more bigger than I expected. There was a cool and unusual breeze blowing by while I stood there in a group of 25 other students including me. We all stood in front of two large gates that joined together by a huge piece of shining emerald stone with the letters H and P embedded in gold. Here I am standing in front of the academy of legends and tales, which only the selected few who succeeded in finance or academic scores could attend.
Near the back of the crowd, one could hear Madam Rose and Takaku arguing with each other which I learned to ignore. Everyone else rather not listen to them or showed some concern over their behavior. While in the back of the group, one could hear Harumi humming to herself and dancing along with her humming with cherry blossom petals from an unknown origin fluttering around her gracefully. Near the center was a Persian flaunting off his wealth to a group that didn't seem all to impressed with his behavior. We suddenly covered our ears, only mines defiantly decided to perk up at the noise of clinking metal. The giant gears keeping the gate closed suddenly started turning with roaring defiance. The gate began parting, separating the H and P. This parting revealed a garden that was perfect and spotless, the garden itself was the true definition of pure beauty and perfection. In the center of the garden held a beautiful fountain of crystal blue water that made nearly impossible minimal noise. On either side of the fountain were statues of Arceus and Mew looking onto a garden looking pleased at what has been created in front of them, between the fountain and the statue was a maze of hedges, much like the garden maze of Versailles. And above it all was the sky which was impossibly cloudless. From somewhere deep within the garden I could hear a brook, babbling and running to a lazy pace. A speaker from the wall crackled at first, then went to a smooth voice.
"Welcome students, to Hope's Point Academy! You will be given a five star lunch upon entry! After that we would all like to see you in the library." The speaker than clicked off.
A Lopunny clicked her fan closed and dusted off her dress which told me she was probably from rural Europe. Smiling gently she said with a Germanic-Dutch accent."So this is the legendary Hope's Point academy? Quite fancy."
A Pyroar repositioned her stance and placed a hand on hip. "Agreed, and that 'Five-star' lunch is sounding good about now." She chuckled.
A Tauros laughed hardily. "Haha, I'm about starving por la comida." His huge muscles threatened to tear the seaming of his shirt. His spanish accent seemed to attract the attentions of some girls here, if not, his muscles sure did.
Dan looked up at the school's golden roof, and sighed, then spoke with his Australian accent. " Alrighty mates, c'mon, don't be cowards." Lien hit him on the side of the head for calling the others 'cowards'.
Obediently, everyone began walking away from their spots to the gates into the garden. There it was revealed that a few bayleefs have been keeping care of the garden, tending to its every needs. I assumed that they were the maids for the entire academy itself. Even though I was the only one who seemed truly astonished and in awe seeing this academy from inside the walls. In front of us, there stood the academy building itself, at first it seems like a golden piece of work, but closer inspection revealed the 'gold' to be yellow bricks. However, the building matched up with its surroundings in perfect harmony with the scenery set around it. The entire school itself was supported by gold framed columns that hid most of the windows of the school from plain sight. The school nearly mirrored the L'Opera in Paris, right down to the horse ornaments. There was a small waft of avocados in the air, coming from the kitchen in the academy.
"I...Um..." A very nervous and shy looking Sawk managed to force out stumbling on his own words.
"Ha! So that's what the academy looks like. It complements the entirety of the garden and the enviroment around perfectly." A Swellow said almost enlightenedly. He seemed different, noticeably different. He was shiny which made him look elegant.
"Oi, Ireland ye say?" An Ampharos asked. "When I was just a wee child, I spent my days in Wales and moved to Ireland right after." she said with glowing pride.
"I'm Alice, Alice Burton III." she greeted
"I'm Bancy Hatter." A mismagius said, male by what i supposed.
The entire group walked through the garden's main centre route taking in the grace and scenery that surrounded them. Madam Rose occasionally stopped to admire a few roses in the garden that was like hers.
After walking along a few distance, I happened to bump into someone."Oh, I'm sorry..." I got no response. The Aipom, a male by appearance, Only nodded and walked ahead. The entrance was enormous, but grand and very European styled, it sparkled from cleanliness. And in the hot and humid summer air, we stood there, fanning ourselves. After a while the doors finally opened up allowing a cool breeze to blow into our faces, cooling us off. The smell of avocados grew stronger and sweeter which has eased up everyone's tensions. The opening of the doors revealed an elegant and well-furnished inside. Well polished marble walls complemented the inside and outside as well as the polished 20th century royal wooden furniture. In the main room laid a huge fireplace that warmed the surrounding area with comforting warmth, sputting out a few crackles and pops once in a while, and on either sides of it led to two grand staircases which merged into one above the fireplace. And to top it all off the mantel was decorated with a portrait of the academy itself. The maids welcomed us in and gave us all tea, hot and steaming.
"Help yourself to some tea!" One radiated with cheerfulness. "Make yourself at home."
As if they grew up to this style of living, some of the richer kids bowed and sat in the main room, warming up by the fire's warmth and catching up on their conversations. The more academic kids stood back almost dumbfounded at this style of living and the beauty of this place, everyone except Blitz. I looked around looking for him, but as I was met with no luck, I quitted.
"Some broche with your tea sir?" A maid came up to me and asked.
I shook my head. " No, no thanks ma'am." She flinched at being called ma'am, probably because no one never adressed her as that. With no other thing to do, I turned around where Blitz was standing, smiling deviously. "Wah! Blitz, where did you come from?!" I flinched, he only smiled as if nothing happened.
"Oh? Did I scare you? I was standing behind you for a few minutes, wondering when you were gonna find out." he giggled.
"Please never do that again." I begged.
"Sorry," he chuckled. "I love seeing people's reactions."
The smell of avocados filled the room again, this time, stronger and more clear. As long as I could remember, my mother and I use to love Avocados, it was her favorite. I use to love avocados too, but now it repulses me and I'm sickened by them. Every time I see or smell them, I get uneasy, It reminds me of my mother. I excused myself from the room as I found a room labeled 'Library'. I pushed open the wooden door and the smell of books and old dust replaced the avocados smell. The whole thing though seemed a bit off. I felt a cool chill down my spine. I wasn't the only one in here. Within the maze of books and shelves and counters, I finally found an opening with a few reading tables. Within this grand castle styled library, I found a Leafeon reading deep within a book. I tried to ask for a seat but instead I heard a creak at the front door. It must of caught the Leafeon's attention because she looked back and jumped from surprise.
"Oh I'm sorry... are you ok?" I apologized.
The Leafeon blinked. " Yeah, it's not your fault, I'm fine."
"erm, mind if I sit here?" I asked.
" I don't mind at all!" she smiled.
"Thanks... what's that book your reading?"
"Oh? It's called Animal Farm, It simulates what happens to the uneducated when left with power." She said enthusiastically.
"Oh, sounds interesting." I smiled back.
" Indeed." she smiled.
"I'm Blaze, you can call me Tyler if you want." I greeted using my usual greeting.
"I'm Tsubaki, nice to meet you."
"What are you two doing away from the others?" We heard a voice saying.
" I believe they just wanted to read a book here in peace." Another voice spoke.
" Very well. Welcome, I am headmaster Alakazam. Your school principal and headmaster." he revealed himself from behind the bookcase. He seemed to float.
Tsubaki smiled. " Hello Headmaster Alakazam" She said glowing with enthusiasm.
"And I'm his assistant! Sir Malcolm de Callegmine IV! Your class teacher, adress me as Mr. Callegmine." Proclaimed a Raichu standing right next to the headmaster. His glasses shined brightly.
While Tsubaki greeted herself with the others, I couldn't help but notice the Furfrou I saw on the bus was here as well. Now she is coloring her Blaziken artwork. Not only is her drawings life-like, but as well as her shadowing and coloring, It was pure art. I went to take a closer look but then the front door burst open.
The Tauros from before came in having what I'd assume is a 'strength' competition with the Ampharos from before. He showed off his enormous muscles, nearly tearing his shirt apart. His biceps veined and bulged as he glowed with pride. The Ampharos wasn't at the least impressed and picked up a nearby table stacked with paper and books, with a single hand.
"Don't ye mess with any one from Wales." She smirked.
Mr. Callegmine yelled. " Put that down! That is school property!"
She let the table fall to the floor, The legs of it collided with the hardwood floor with a large thumping sound telling me it was at least 70 pounds in weight. I looked back again after that display, and the Furfrou was gone again, only this time, her drawing was left on the table unattended.
Here ends chapter two, I hoped you enjoyed this chapter, Sorry if it wasn't descriptive enough, It's a bit nervewracking to work with an OC and make it so the person is happy how I introduced it. Any way, OC's are no longer accepted until further notice, or until I feel confident working with more characters.