This is just some extra stuff to give it more plot. Warning: long chapter and another surprise guest. Seriously I've tried to fix as many glitches from the app as possible. I don't write with no space between each word and no / like that. It's the app acting up. Sorry for the weirdness, it's not me.
Rey's POV:
"Ready?"
"Yeah."
He squeezed my hand before walking into the thick fog. I felt another presence of the Force but quickly shook it away.
I was a step behind Ben. The rocks crunched under both our feet but that's all you could hear.
He didn't call for any stormtroopers to come out just yet. Because of such silence, I'm sure he could hear my heart racing. If he couldn't hear it, he sure felt it.
"C'mon," he whispered as he grabbed my hand.
"Get your lightsaber ready." I nodded, placing a hand on my belt.
He didn't want me coming on this mission but if I didn't come, he might be killed. I didn't understand why he couldn't just let stormtroopers do the job. Maybe he wanted to see the face of the people who tried to kidnap me and kill pulled
his lightsaber off his belt and ignited it. The crackle of it seemed so loud.
"Ben, we should go back."
He ignored me, still facing forward.
A shot came right at me from the side. Ben held up his hand instantly with a blink of an eye, stopping it.
"Go find them."
I looked up at him. He had the same look that he did on Star Killer, before he fought Finn.
I began running towards where the shot was fired.
There was a young boy, maybe fourteen, holding a blaster.
I raised an eyebrow. "What?"
His body stiffened once he noticed me. He held the blaster with shaky hands.
"Sorry miss."
I heard unfamiliar footsteps behind me. There were more than one closing in on me. This was an ambush.
The fog hid them so well, I couldn't tell where they were attacking from.
One man grabbed me by my waist.
"Ah!"
I elbowed him in the face and took my staff out, hitting him against the head with it. He fell to the ground.
Another unknown came charging at me with a sword.
I swatted my staff under his feet, causing him to fall.
They just kept coming and I kept beating them with my staff.
As I was fighting one, another caught me from the back and held my face.
"Ah, let go of me!"
"Why is such a pretty face sleeping around with Kylo Ren of all people?"
He pulled my hair down. I screamed out.
"Being the First Order's slut may have its perks though."
This guy was too strong. I was too scared to use the Force.
He released me suddenly and fell to the ground. Ben was behind him, with his hand raised.
"What did you call her?"
The man grabbed at his neck.
He let go of his choke hold and walked around in front of him.
The man coughed, wobbling back up.
"Oh please don't tell me, you already forgot you assigned us-"
Ben swung his arm back and into the man's face. He fell on the ground again.
Kylo scowled and ignited his lightsaber.
I grabbed his arm.
"Wait! You can't do this!"
His breath was shaking and so was his arm that I was holding back.
"Please..."
This is going too far. What happened to him? This isn't what I wanted.
The man on the ground looked at us.
Ben lowered his saber and looked down.
I calmed down and let go of his arm. "I'm sorry," he mumbled.
He swung his blade up with both hands and killed the man. I screamed but it was too late.
My eyes were wide and my mouth was shut tight with terror.
He put his saber back on his belt and stepped up to me. I didn't move but I looked away.
He grabbed my wrist and I gasped.
"Look at me Rey."
I knew if I didn't he would've gotten rough with me. Hesitantly, I glared him in the eyes, tears flowing down.
"I'm still Kylo Ren."
He let go of my wrist and walked past me.
I made sure he was really gone for me to let it all out. My knees gave in as I looked at the man he just killed.
I covered my mouth with my hand as I grabbed a handful of gravel with the other.
I was in over my head. There's no way I could've ever changed him, especially for me. I thought he did care but I was so wrong. Poe and Finn were right. I should've just given up when I still had a chance.
The fog was coming heavier than before making me feel more isolated than I already was.
Back to square one.
"...Rey..."
I stopped crying as I looked up to the familiar voice. A voice I only heard as a child when I was asleep or when I was afraid.
I got up.
"Is anyone there?"
I fixed my robe on my shoulders.
"You should know who I am. Don't you remember?"
The fog began clearing. A man wearing Jedi robes and a beard stood before me except he was transparent.
We stared at each other for a while. How did I know him?
His gentle smile eased my mind from what I just witnessed.
"Wait...Grand-?"
I heard Ben calling out for me. Through our training together I learned to keep in my Force energy, almost like holding my breath.
When I looked back, the man was gone. I began running.
Kylo was still a monster, a beast. Everything he said or did before was a lie.
There was a dead tree up ahead. I hid behind it and covered my mouth, holding my staff gifted by the First Order to my chest. Every sound could be resonated in this area. There were no vibrations or even an echo of wind to hide in.I shutmy eyes.
Suddenly it all made sense.You already forgot you assigned us...
Benassigned this mission. The bomb, the stormtroopers, they were all a ploy, but why? I did notice he's been blocking me since the explosion went off. A new anger fueled in me. He was right, he was still Kylo Ren.I'd rather die here than go back withhim.
/He deceived me.
"Rey please."
He was close. My heart was pounding. I kept in the Force.
"Are you afraid of me?" I heard a crack in his voice.
Please don't do this.
"Snoke would kill me if I didn't do it. I would've been...suspected."
I heard him getting closer. His lightsaber ignited. The crackle made my face burn with terror.
"If I proved that I had a weakness, I would be dead."
What was he saying? I slowly lifted my hand to my saber.
"You're my weakness Rey."
I let my guard down for a split second. The Force was back up and he found me. He cut down the tree. I screamed, getting out of the way.
I ignited my lightsaber and his clashed down with mine.
He scowled and I gave him daggers.
"You lied to me."
His lip twitched. "I had no choice."
I spun away, lightsaber ready.
"No not just that. You lied from the very beginning. You never cared. You tried to purposefully kill me."
That hit something in him. He swung his saber at me but I hit it aside.
"I wanted you on my side!"
"All you cared about was you and your power. You used me to get just that. You're weak no matter what Kylo Ren."
He swung down at me but I hit from the side twice until he stepped back. I kicked him to the ground.
All those days he held me gently as I cried or caressed my face in his hands lovingly were a joke to him.
That night we spent together was nothing to him. He's probably done that with so many other girls, I was just another one on his hit list.
He looked up at me like he did on Star Killer Base.
I felt ashamed with myself for ever getting close. I actually enjoyed it and thought it was genuine. I threw the First Order's staff on the ground next to him.
"Goodbye Kylo."
I put my saber back and ran away.
Ben's POV:
I was having serious déjà vu. The girl hated me and now she was gone. Maybe I should go back to how it was before I met her again. I stood up and began walking back to the ships. There were only two instead of three. Dammit, I don't know if I'll be able
/to fix this.
