It's A Wonderful Life, Sasuke

by thisaccountislikesuperdead

In the progress of being rewritten. Please read the updates in the last two chapters! Two brothers wish the exact same thing at the exact same time. "I wish I didn't have to live with myself." When their soon-to-be gaurdian angel switches Itachi into Sasuke's body, and Sasuke into Itachi's, what will they learn about each other? NO yaoi

27. Update! I'm back!

Hi peeps! I'm ugala5777, and the writer of "It's A Wonderful Life, Sasuke."

It has been several years since I've been here- I was in eighth grade when I first discovered . Cut to today, and I am graduating from high school THIS MONTH. Wow!

As I am still interested in writing, I had been trying to write a novel, but had intense writer's block and have been unable to finish just yet. So, because this here story is the only one I've ever finished, I forced myself to read it and see if there was anything I could possibly learn from this extremely amateur story.

To be completely honest, I was impressed by the writing style-not bad for a jr. high kid. However, it was rather cringe-worthy to me for many reasons. So, if there is anyone still there, how would you feel about a rewrite? I would spend much more time on the content. Here is what I would fix:

1. Orochimaru. Rape is something that should not be joked about so lightly, and I apologize profusely if I made anyone uncomfortable. I know I was in a position of extreme discomfort while reading some scenes, and even skipped a few because I was so disgusted. *goes back in time to smack my eighth grade self*

2. Amane. Unfortunately, this brain child of mind annoys the crap out of me. I don't know how anyone else feels about her, but she is an obnoxious little creature. There must be a way to make her more likeable...

3. I got a bit lazy with the end, because I was always hasty to upload chapters. Therefore, the end and the other exciting scenes and chapters were not so exciting. They're ninjas! They need action!

There are other things, but these are the top three. I still want it to be a lighthearted, fun story, so the characters are supposed to be a bit OOC. However, I also want it to be something that will PULL at one's heartstrings when it has to. I enjoyed writing this fanfic- it was a great stress reliever and a way to let go for an angsty teenager. Now, I want to make it better, because I've grown. But I'll only do so if you support me. I'll keep the original story up, but if you want a rewrite, either PM me or post a review.

Thank you all for your support!

-ugala5777