A/N: Over 4,000 views! By the way, thank you all for your ideas! If I don't use them for this dare, I will definitely use it for another (if that is alright with you)

Miss Amazing: Okay, thanks for the constructive criticism-I'll try to make Tris a bit... nicer, I guess. See if this chapter softens her a little. What- You don't like cliffhangers? :P

Guest, Fourtris46, fictionator1234: Something like that will happen... Sooner or later :)

Sheo4ever: I don't know... I'm hoping that the story will be at least 20 chapters long, though. At most, perhaps 40?

Jemmie: I'm sorry that you're going to crazy, lol. Try to stay sane, lest you avoid reading my stories forever.

Laser97: "So unfair" :P Here's your update then.

Random Person 16: Lol, thanks. But it's obvious- I'll never be as good as Veronica Roth. I don't want to sound snobby, or anything, or I like the plot of this story better than the entire war and killing and Tris dying thing that Veronica did. :( I cried over that part (when that idiot David shot Tris).

I LOVE ALL YOUR IDEAS BY THE WAYY (Thank you so muchhh)

Disclaimer: Don't we all fantasize about being Veronica Roth?

And without further ado... Here's your long awaited chapter


Chapter 7 (Tobias' POV)

"Alright... I dare you to..." I bit my lip. I had waited the entire year for this moment, and I hoped Tris wouldn't be too surprised or shocked... "I dare you to come to the Pit, bring all the initiates and everyone else in this room, and then you'll see what'll happen."

Tris' eyebrows raised, confusion in her beautiful eyes, "Um... sure." To everyone else, she said, "Get up, we're going to the Pit!"

Everyone got up, and followed Tris to the Pit, me in the front. When we arrived at the center of the Pit, far enough from the chasm so I wouldn't need to shout, I got down on one knee and pulled out a small black velvet box. I opened the box and gulped, hoping that no one noticed my nervous state.

"Tris Prior, I remember a year ago when you asked my when I loved you. Months later, here I am, answering your question from my heart: You make me a better person, and every time you aren't with me, I feel like half of myself is missing. I know that fate didn't brought us together, we brought ourselves together, starting from that moment that you jumped into the net and took my hand. I will never hurt you, and I will love and cherish you for as long as my heart beats, as it beats for you, and only you. I know it's going to be hard and we'll have have ups and downs every once in a while, but I am sure that we are meant to be. Tris Prior, will you make me the happiest man ever and marry me?"

The entire time, I stared into her mesmerizing blue-gray eyes, watching as they turned from confusion to awe. Tris' hand was covering her mouth, and suddenly, she pursed her lips together. "Did you honestly have to dare me to do this?" I glanced down at the gray floor.

The jumble of nerves came back, and I knew that my face was exposing my anxiousness to all the initiates and my friends. "Tris?"

She smiled, and laughed her beautiful laughed. Next thing I knew, she had thrown herself into my arms with joyful tears in her eyes, kissing me, and was yelling "Yes, Yes, Yes!" over and over.

I smiled and picked her up, spinning her around as I deepened the kiss. Zeke let out at low whistle, and Uriah yelled, "Get a room!" She pulled away shyly as everyone who was in the Pit and within earshot to hear what happened started clapping their hands and stomping their feet.


Somehow, Zeke, had pulled us back into his apartment to continue the game. Of course I smiled. That was Zeke- the Pit could have a huge barbecue and Zeke's first priority would be to finish the games.

Neither Tris nor I could wipe the goofy grins off of our faces. Tris had kept examining her ring as we walked back to Zeke's apartment. I spent many points on it, but that didn't matter. The ring was black with gray winding up the band. In the center, there was a diamond, and surrounding that, there were black and silver stones, representing the Abnegation and Dauntless in us.

"Six, it's your turn." Zeke reminded.

She glanced up from looking at her ring and said, "Huh? Oh yea. Christina, I guess you won't need to try to show our relationship anymore, now that Four basically told all the initiates that we were dating the entire time. And revealed my name." She glanced at me, with playful "anger" in her eyes. "Peter, Candor or Dauntless?"

"Dauntless," he replies smugly, obviously thinking that Tris couldn't do anything that bad to him.

"I dare you to say 'in bed' after every sentence you say, starting now."

"Can't see the harm," he grinned. Tris raised her eyebrows. "In bed," he quickly added on.

"Lynn, Candor or Dauntless in bed?" Peter asked.

"I'll take a Dare, but not in bed," she replied coolly. Peter turned red.

"I dare you to gulp down an entire bottle of extra hot sauce in bed. You are not allowed to drink water until 10 minutes later in bed."

"Sure," she replied, obviously having done this before. Too bad Peter was too stupid to think of anything original.

Less than a minute later, Lynn had finished her dare, and sat quite calmly, as if the sauce wasn't spicy at all.

She pursed her lips, and said, "I'm bored, can we go on to Never Have I Ever?"

Everyone agreed.


Alyssa's POV

"What's Never Have I Ever?" I asked, genuinely curious. I never played that game in Amity before.

The guy named Zeke (or was it Uriah) said, "It's when one person says something they have never done before and if you have done it, then you have to take a shot."

"But won't we get drunk?" I was confused- why would they want us to be drunk?

"Isn't that the whole point?" Some other Dauntless member, friend of Four's, I suppose, said.

"Okay then..."

"I'm starting!" Tris said. Now that we know her as Tris, and not as the mysterious Six, it seems like she's more open toward us, less mysterious. Four, on the other hand...

Tris said, "Never have I ever kissed my own brother."

Zeke and Uriah take a shot, while Four shoots a weird look at his best friend Zekes direction.

"It was a dare!" Both Uriah and Zeke defended.

Next to Tris sat Four, who said, "Never have I ever given or gotten a hickey."

Tris, Lynn, and the majority of the initiates took a shot. Including me.

Uriah said, "Never have I ever made out with someone simply to make someone else jealous."

Zeke and Shauna both took a shot, glancing at each other.

Marlene said without thinking much, "Never have I ever used a pencil in school."

Everyone, excluding her, of course, took a shot. I stared at her incredulously. I asked, "Then what did you use?"

"Black pens, of course," she said with a tone that implied that the answer was obvious.

Zeke stated, "Never have I ever read a whole newspaper."

This time, only Tris, Will, Justin, Snow, and Clement took a shot.

Uriah ruffled his eyebrows. "Okay, you Erudite transfers, I understand, and Will, you were once an Erudite. But Tris? The all great Dauntless prodigy?"

"It was for school!"

"Moving on..." Shauna said. "Never have I ever wished I was the opposite gender."

No one took a shot, except for Lynn. Well, obviously, I thought to myself.

Pretty soon, it was my turn. I thought for a minute and said, "Never have I ever gotten less than an A- on any school assignment or test."

Everyone, except the Erudite transfers, took a shot. Will took a shot as well.

"Seriously, Aly?" Tesa asked me.

I rolled my eyes, and said, "School was always easy for me."

I see Tris and Four glance at each other, and then their eyes darted towards me, but it happened so quickly I wasn't even sure that it actually happened. Tris whispered something to Four and then told us that they'd be back in a minute.

What was that all about? I wondered. Did they know my... secret?


A/N: I'm sorry, everyone, that I didn't update on Thursday. There was an orientation on Thursday for USDAN (Awesome camp, I was nominated and received a scholarship there), and on Friday, I was busy grieving that school was over. :'( Is anyone else sad that we have to wait an entire Summer before school resumes? And I also have to miss Karate the entire summer because of language school. -.- But since my parents already paid for it... :'(Okay, enough with my excuses...

TRIVIA:

What place did Lynn get at the end of initiation?

I'll try to update by Monday (no promises this time, in case something happens and I have to break my promise)

Love you all, review?