A/N: Over 4,000 views! By the way, thank you all for your ideas! If I don't use them for this dare, I will definitely use it for another (if that is alright with you)

Miss Amazing: Lol, thanks-Every time I leave a cliffhanger, I try to make the next chapter kinda interesting and make the cliffhanger worth it. Hey, if you took the time to give me constructive criticism and read my story and all that, you deserve the shout out :)

Sheo forever: I'm hoping it'll be at least 20 chapters, maybe 25 or 30. At most, 40 chapters? Thanks-I thought the speech was a little weirdly written because, idk, I'm still in school so I typically don't talk about marriages and proposals and all that. I feel like it was a little rushed though. Idk, give me your opinion :)

fourtris4ever26: Thank you- you answered the trivia correctly as well, but that was last time, and I (I'm sorry) don't want to change the chapter's beginning because I already did something else with it. Sorry :/

dauntlexx: Not exactly... I didn't mention Alyssa's secret flat out, but I did hint it a bit in Chapter 4, I believe. That was a cliffhanger :P Well, I tried to make it a cliffhanger.

AnnaBella: Thanks-was it honestly that good? I thought it wasnt' that good because I'm not exactly a daughter of Aphrodite-I'm a Huntress of Artemis, and I don't know much about what happens during proposals. I am after all still in school XD

Booklover4610: Aww thank youu 3

Jemmie: Whoops. I didn't update Monday (I HAD SCHOOL IN MY DEFENSE~ :P) Wait-did you just threaten me? (runs away screaming at the top of my lungs)

Blingablong: The idea was given by a lot of the readers and reviewers so I can't exactly take credit for it :P

All those who participated in the trivia and got the answer correct:

Divergent4610, a guest who didn't leave his or her name, Divergent124

All those who participated in the trivia and tried, but didn't get the answer correct:

Jemmie (Hey, it wasn't hat far off though. She was 3rd place)

Disclaimer: I'm not Veronica Roth and I do not own the Divergent series (if I did, Tris wouldn't have *SPOILER ALERT* gotten shot by David and died)


Chapter 8 (Tris' POV)

"What do you think? Is she?" I whispered to Tobias using frantic hand motions, although, in this dark passageway where there were no cameras, I doubt he could see the motions.

"She could be. But we won't know for sure until either the second stage, Tori tells us her results, she tells us her results, or when she is, God forbid, dead in the chasm, where Eric most likely pushed her in."

"But don't all the signs point to the fact that she most likely is... you know... like us?" Even though I already passed initiation and no longer have to worry about being discovered by the Dauntless leaders in the fear landscapes or fear simulations, I still fear that I will somehow be discovered if I even uttered the word "divergent" anywhere outside of Tobias' and I's own apartment where we knew there were no cameras or recorders.

"What are the signs? Just because she got good grades in school doesn't mean anything," Tobias answered.

That might be true, I thought to myself. Suddenly, something clicked.

"Remember when she was talking about us possibly being together after she spied on us when Hestia tried to kiss you?" I smile, laughing inwardly at how Aly didn't know that we knew about her spying on us.

"Yea. And...?" Tobias replied, dragging on the second word to make it sound like a question.

"During lunch, I heard her squealing to Tesa and Snow about how she suspected us to be together. She sounded really Amity-like," I stated.

"Of course she did. She did come from Amity after all," Tobias reasoned.

I pursed my lips, frowning a little. "Yea, but if she was a true and full Amity, then how come she decided to transfer to Dauntless, knowing full well that if she wasn't Dauntless, then she could possibly not pass initiation?" I inquired. I knew that Tobias was just rejecting this because he was so anxious about Eric or Max finding out about any Divergent people, whether they be a member or an initiate, so he tried to avoid thinking about those possibilities. He refused to acknowledge the knowledge. Do I even make sense right now?

"True that... We can think about this later, but for now, we need to get back before the others get suspicious. The walk from here to Zeke's apartment is alone a 10 minute walk."

"Fine."


(Snow's POV)

Four and Tris opened the door and come back in, sitting down right where they were before they left nearly 20 minutes ago. Unintentionally, my eyes dart to eh ring that glittered on Tris' finger. I still couldn't believe that Aly was right: our 2 instructors were together after all. It was weird-I was used to being correct, and I didn't even predict that they'd be together. I couldn't believe that Alyssa the Amity knew it and I didn't. Maybe she came from Erudite but dressed as an Amity to make everyone not heed her much attention... It's actually a pretty smart strategy. Maybe that's what Tris did to pass initiation as first. But she said that not everything was physical, so she must've done well in other stages as well. I dismiss the idea that Alyssa might've came from Erudite, disguised as an Amity. If that was truly the case, then how come I never saw her in Erudite before?

By now, nearly everyone was drunk. Some of the Never Have I Evers were a little weird. Like, I think Peter said that he never hugged anyone before. In his LIFE. Wow. A Dauntless initiate also said that he had never walked in on his parents while they were doing you-know-what, and at least 4 Dauntless-Born initiates took a shot. These Dauntless adults are weird! So many people were drunk, passed out, or looked like they were going to pass out or throw up. I, thankfully, wasn't. I didn't want to experience a hangover tomorrow before training started. It would probably reflect badly on my performance and rank at the end of Stage One.

Tesa took so many shots, before and during the time when Tris and Four went outside to talk, I assumed, and didn't look very nice. I hope that she won't be sick. Otherwise...

Well, Aly was a whole different story. She, unlike me, took many shots. Unlike Tesa, she looked unfazed by the drinks. She was actually pretty alert and tense when Tris and Four went outside and ever since. It's like nearly 20 minutes and she has simply been sitting there, back straight, shoulders tense. I wonder what was going on with her. She looked like she was anxious about something, and I wonder why that is. After all, she was from Amity, who were mainly all happy, care-free, without a worry in the world.

Suddenly, she said, "Guys, don't you think it's a bit late? What if we aren't alert enough tomorrow during initiation for Gun Training? We'll be ranked badly. I suggest we go back to the dorms and call it a night."

It was true. According to my watch, it was past midnight. Drowsily, everyone (who wasn't passed out, that is) nodded. Those who were passed out on Zeke's carpet and couch were slapped until awoken and stumbled to the dorm.

Before we all left, I could have sworn that Zeke muttered that this was a lame party. Well I'm sorry Zeke, I guess that nearly all of the Dauntless members being here to dance and drink before and half the initiates being passed out or drunk isn't good enough for you.

Not even five minutes later, I was asleep, tired from the first day of initiation. My last thought before I drifted off to sleep was "I hope that initiation won't be this tiring every day."


A/N: That was suckish. I feel like I rushed some things. That the party lacked detail, etc. Ugh~

I have a question for you guys. Can I get some fears for Stage Two? And Stage Three? It may be a little to early, but I need a lot of ideas because each person has 10-15 fears on average, right? Thank you!

Trivia:

What were all of Tobias' fears?

Till next time