Hey guys how are you doing? I hope the answer is "fine", I want to thank everyone who has reviewed my story and my special thanks to Shadow, man is refreshing to know that my story still gets you interested as many of the others, that only means that I'm doing a good work with the challenge so far.
Anyway guys i would like you to help make this story more interesting for you, "And how are we going to help?" you ask? well is simple really, the only thing you need to do are two things.
First - Develop your own clan with your own bloodline limit, ninken, fighting style, something cool and in some way unique BUT nothing godlike, no one can be immortal, and I know what you are thinking right now "What! you ran out of ideas already?" the answer is no, i have plenty of ideas but i like when the readers (you) can have your fun too and what better way than let you build a cool clan to help the Uzumaki's later in the future.
Second - Think of a cool name for the Eye of the Jyuubi and Ranmaru's Kekkei Genkai (I already have two names for Ranmaru's, but i need to work in the translation of Disruptive Eye or the Crimson Eye, and the Jyuubi's eye as the Jigokugan (something like Infernal Eye) but maybe you can think of a better name, thought I will stick with the Jigokugan for a while) I would summit a poll in the future.
And that will be all about this challenge, is up to you if you want to take part on it, most of the ideas will be accepted anyway, but i repeat no god-like powers please nothing that lets you turn your foe in chocolate and candy, or that lets you turn your insides out with just a snap of your finger, sent me the details of your clan, bloodline limit, and some background story (preferably that have problems in Haha Island or all sea country, Nagi Island, and O'uzu Island) your clans would start appearing after chapter 16 and I will stop accepting clans after chapter 21, i will add more clans later in the future but i don't think it will be before chapter 85 or so.
I don't own Naruto, or any character that appear in this story.
Now with the story.
Training X Feelings X Useless
"Ok kits I think you have been here enough for my liking so how about you get out of here?" Naruto looked at Kurama.
"I don't know, but something tells me that you like the company, anyway i think is time we get a decent sleep but before that lets change this creepy place, if you are going to be jailed inside of me at least you are going to have the best jail ever!" Naruto closed his eyes and started concentrating.
The jail started to fade away and the sewer to melt away, now the were in a forest "I like this place kid, you may not be a bad host after all"
"Good to know you like it Kurama, see ya later" Said Naruto walking away.
"See you later Kuri-chan" said Hinata kissing Kurama's nose and fading before he could say something about his nickname.
"If the others get wind of what happened here I will not hear the end of it" said Kurama drifting off to sleep.
Naruto opened his eyes to see it was still midnight, he turned to Hinata and saw her smiling to him.
She snuggled in his chest once again and Naruto stroked her hair with affection, Hinata once more lifted her head and kissed Naruto on the lips, once they parted they went to sleep, happy with the outcome of what had happened on Naruto's mind.
xX Konoha - Next Morning Xx
Tenten was training with her father, it had been two years since she was adopted into the Emiya household by her now mother, Emiya Rin.
"Tenten-chan, you need to focus more into the style, if you really want to be a strong kunoichi like Tsunade-sama, then you must take your weapon mastery to another level, but i can't help you if you don't take it seriously" Said Emiya Shiro, the only master weapon-smiths Konoha.
Shiro was known for his skills with weapons and his stunts at the third shinobi war, He got the nickname "Archer" for his speciality with bows and excellent sight.
"Come on dear don't be so hard with her, she is trying hard and she is improving fast, or do I need to remind you that she wasn't born in this family? even so you started training her when you saw she had potential" said Rin while hugging her daughter.
"Don't worry dear you will do better next time, and you will only get better with hard work and practice" Tenten smiled at her mother's words and nodded.
"I need to go with my team, Otou-san, Okaa-san, I will see you later" said Tenten running out of the house.
She really liked her new family and the attention her parents gave to her, ever since she saw her father's weapons it immediately woke up a special interest into learning her family's ways.
"Tenten-san you are late!" yelled a boy in a full green spandex suit, and brows as big as caterpillars.
"I'm sorry, i was with dad training in the family style, but i can't get the hold of it" Said Tenten with a saddened expression.
"Is not a surprise seeing as you were not born in that family, destiny decreed you to be a failure in the arts of the Emiya clan" said Neji with a straight face.
Tenten couldn't understand how Neji could be so heartless, she always cared for him and helped him train and get up whenever he failed, but when she need it the most he only pushed her lower.
"Neji! That was not the right thing to tell to your own teammate and friend!" scolded a man in a green spandex suit just like the one the previous boy had.
"I don't care if it was right or not, it was the true and she needed to hear it, her destiny is to be useless" Neji smirked seeing how angry his sensei was getting.
Tenten couldn't take it anymore and started to runaway.
"Enough, Neji go run one hundred laps around Konoha and think about what you have done!"Neji started to run around Konoha but something inside of him was bugging him.
Tenten ran inside her home and towards her room, but Rin noticed this and decided to go and check over her daughter.
She entered Tenten's room and started comforting her daughter "Ten-chan? what is the matter honey? why are you crying?"
Tenten hugged her mother and cried even more "Neji said that my destiny was to be a failure in our family style!" she said between sobs.
Rin frowned at this and raised her daughter's head "Now you will hear me! I don't know who does that Neji think he is but he doesn't know a thing about our family! your father took years to be as good as he is now and it was only because he worked all his life to protect the ones he care the most! he was not even proficient with weapons till he was twenty! and even so, he took another six years to develop our family's secret jutsu! so let that smart-ass say whatever he wants, he is only an emotive boy who just wants attention for himself with all that crap about destiny!"
Tenten was shocked at her mother words, she couldn't believe that her father was not always the war-hero she thought he was.
"But father always says..."
"He only wants you to improve, he knows you want to be strong like Tsunade Senju, if your father is a bit harsh is because he wants you to train harder, but he loves you with all his heart and is so proud of you for trying to be stronger everyday" Reassured Rin to her daughter smiling.
"Thanks kaa-san, you are right, i can't let that jerk put me down like that! even if i like him so much!" Tenten realized just what she said and quickly blushed and hid her face in a pillow leaving Rin amused at her daughter antics.
"So that's why it hurt you so much eh?, well you only need to show that jerk who he messed up with, ne?" smiled Rin and then left her daughter's room.
"You are amazing you know that? only you could cheer our daughter like that" a white haired man hugged her from behind.
"Of course I am! so you better take care of me!" Shiro only laughed at this.
xX Wave Xx
"Itachi nii-san, Hinata and I are going to train!" Itachi nodded and turned to Tazuna.
"I will be your guard today Tazuna-san, Zabuza-san is still too weak to move and his apprentice is taking care of him" Itachi and Tazuna started to walk towards the bridge.
"Are you sure is ok to leave them in the house?" asked Tazuna worried for his family.
"Please be assured that your family is going to be ok, Zabuza and Naruto made a deal and Zabuza wouldn't let anything harm his honor" Tazuna nodded at this and relaxed a bit.
With Naruto and Hinata.
"Naruto-kun, do you think we should try and talk with Kuri-chan again? maybe he can help us with some training.
"Ok Hina-chan lets do that" They both closed their eyes and went into Naruto's mind-scape.
xX Back at Konoha Xx
"Ino! what have i told you! I want you to become a good kunoichi for the leaf, I know Tsunade is a strong ninja but I don't approve her like someone you should look up to, she left the village when we most needed her, she is just a traitor!" Said Inoichi Yamanaka, the truth was, he used to look up to the sages too but when the kyuubi's attack took place and they weren't there to help he got disappointed.
But for Ino to reach Tsunade's strenght was her main goal, she wanted to learn medical jutsu and help the others, just as "he" would always help anyone that needed it.
She had been Sasuke's fan-girl just to fit in the academy but, her heart already had an owner.
"I don't care what you think father, i will become a great kunoichi!" yelled Ino slamming her door.
Inoichi just rubbed his temples, her daughter was really impossible!
And there you have it!
To summit your clan just write all the data in the Review in order or send me a PM and i will gladly take a look and add them to the story.
I hope you liked this one and get ready for the surprise!
R&R
