Hiya! No reviews? Oh well...
Lilypaw: New story!
Seedpaw: 'Cloudpaw's Hope'
Runningbrook: What'd you think? I need OCs so there will be an Oc sheet ^.^
Lilypaw: To the story!
"I thought Jayfeather was watching them!"
"Watching her?! I'm blind you mousebrain!"
"But she's a pregnant queen! She needed a Medicine cat!"
"I was helping Briarlight!"
From the moment a voice had called out the alarm, the clan had been in panic. Squirrelflight was in a panic and Bumblestripe was ready to bolt into the blazing forest.
"Well blaming everyone and worrying won't help us at all!" Ashpaw called, eyes blazing in the eerie light of the flames
Silence fell over the clan.
"Ashpaw's right, Squirrelflight! Take two other cats with you on this rescue mission"
Squirrelflight nodded
"Who will go?"
"I will!" Firepaw called immediatley
"No you won't!" Squirrelflight scolded
"He can if he wants" Bramblestar mewed "His worry will make him fearless"
He's almost quoting Firestar! Specklepaw thought I know what I must do...
"I-I will go to" Specklepaw called quietly
"A team of apprentices?! My mate and her kits are in danger!" Bumblestripe growled
"But that means also we won't be such a loss" Firepaw pointed out, Squirrelflight started to speak, obviously horrified by the prospect of losing both her kits
"And I have experience with fire." Specklepaw mewed coldly. No one knew Specklepaw's past, but no one doubted it was horrible. Most cats were silenced by the coldness of her voice.
"Now c'mon!
Duskpaw led Dovewing through the smoke. She spotted a gap in the flame and looked back. She was surrounded.
"G-go!" Duskpaw stuttered, coughing on the smoke.
"Not with out you!" Dovewing replied
Suddenly with a surprising amount of force, Duskpaw pushed the queen through the gap. An instant later the spot where the gap was burst into a flame, surrounding Duskpaw in a looming wall of fire. Smoke covered Duskpaw like a blanket. Duskpaw felt her vision start to get fuzzy as she breathed in the smoke. Suddenly, her legs felt like limp and feeble twigs and she collapsed. Dark spots danced in front of her eyes, and she could faintly feel the flames getting ever closer. And with that, Duskpaw fell into the darkness.
Ta-da! How'da like it? Please review! Bye!