You know. I realized yesterday as I tried and failed to fall asleep why I didn't like Sleepover. (ended up falling asleep at like 330, go me!) BECAUSE I FORGOT AN ESENTIAL PLOT POINT! ARGHHH. THE WHOLE BEST FRIENDS PART was going to be this big running thing::growl:: So. Since going back and fixing it would change the story entirely, I'm going to post an Alternate Deleted Scene version right here. Before the next what if! XD So its like a What…? Not enough to be a What if because it would have the same things happening, but some tweaked lines. I would have backed it up before they were 'together.' Pout.
AND before I write this, THANKIES for the help with Xaldin. I usually tend to back off limits because I try to use the Learn thing but I always accidentally pull up the Beast's limit. Boo. Waste of my MP. I love my Master form. I love Valor better but I put Beast in instead of Goofy. I'll run around the castle and level up, tis a good place to start. BUT my sis is taking the pS2 away to college in a few days, so boo.
ANYWAY!
What….if…?
The author forgot an essential plot-point in the previous
chapter and wouldn't let it go until she wrote it out?
((I'm basically going to skip around here. its like. NOT a full out what if, but like a skeletal form XD Shit, you don't even have to read this, it just makes me feel better! XD))
So Axel would come in...
"ROXY I'M HOOOOOOME!" Roxas' door was kicked open as Axel strolled in, making a showstopping appearance. "You will never guess what Marluxia told me about today! It's called a sleep-over!"
Roxas looked at him warily. "…What is it?"
Axel shook his head, laughing. "You just have to come see!"
So then they would go in his room and Roxas would freak, but Axel would give him 'The Look' and then…
"Come on Roxy! Stop freaking out!" Axel said, trying to placate him. "Marluxia says that best friends do this all the time!"
Roxas stopped his protests monetarily, raising an eyebrow. "…Really?"
Axel nodded vigorously. Roxas sighed. "Why not."
Axel squealed and pulled Roxas into a hug. "First…"
THEN the whole straightener business... And after Axel got his hair done...
Roxas coughed awkwardly as Axel admired himself in the mirror. He does look…good…great…astounding… Roxas couldn't pull his eyes away from Axel. He swallowed loudly, shifting in slight discomfort.
Axel looked over at him, raising an eyebrow. "Something wrong, Rox?"
Roxas forced a grin. "Nothing at all. What's next?"
Then the makeup ordeal, where...
Roxas looked at the pile of makeup warily. "…Are you sure that best friends do this all the time?"
Axel nodded, smiling. "Of course they do! It's all in good fun, right?" He smiled as he pulled out some eyeliner, motioning Roxas to sit on the bed.
Then there would be sleeping bag riding, WHERE...
Axel grinned as he threw Roxas a sleeping bag. Roxas looked at him dryly. "Let me guess. Best friends do this all the time?"
Axel smiled, opening a portal to the entrance hall.
SEE how it would be subtly added through the damn thing::fumes at self:: AND i made up the entrance hall thing, but its a flipping castle, so its plausible. Anyway, getting off track...
SO then, they would return from sleeping bag riding, Larxene thing included, then the whole END would change! Ahem...
Roxas sat down on the bed, warily eyeing the sleeping bags as Axel put them away, still chuckling about Roxas' meeting with the wall.
"It wasn't that funny," Roxas pouted. Axel laughed harder, coming to sit down next to Roxas on the bed. "So is there anything else that Marluxia said we should do?"
"No," Axel whispered quietly, turning towards Roxas with fire in his eyes. "But I bet I could think of something…"
Roxas' eyes widened as Axel moved closer to him. "…Axel?" He crossed his eyes as Axel moved even closer. Roxas held his breath as Axel moved within millimeters of his lips. Roxas closed his eyes and closed the gap, covering Axel's lips with his. However, he missed slightly, kissing the corner of Axel's mouth. He pulled back, blushing profusely. Axel chuckled softly.
"Care to try again?"
Roxas turned redder, nodding. Axel smiled, pulling Roxas closer to him. "Let me help you with that…" he closed the distance between them again, slowly lowering Roxas to the bed as he kissed him fervently. Roxas groaned as Axel slid a hand up from his waist to stroke his collarbone.
"Axel…"
THEN I would have cut to the next morning, and Demyx would be slightly surprised to see them together, but wouldn't comment any different as is. THEN...
Roxas chuckled slightly as Axel went on his angry tirade as he threw on clothes for breakfast. Axel stopped in his tracks, looking over to him. "What's so funny?"
"Do best friends dothat too?" Roxas asked, leering at him.
Axel smirked, approaching the bed again. "Of course they do…" Axel murmured, reaching down to kiss Roxas and trail kisses down his neck, "And they will continue to do so again and again….as soon as I go kick Larxene's ass!" He declared, straightening. He looked down at Roxas expectantly. "Revenge is in order. Are you coming?"
Roxas smirked, sitting up. "You bet."
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…AND THAT'S how I would have gone. So I guess its' like…the ALTERNATE Sleepover.
Don't mind this. I'llreally update I swear. I'm still pondering about the next one.
Pick whichever of these you would have enjoyed, hell, you don't even have to review if you don't want to.
…I can't believe I just said that.
Take it as a rare token. But yeah. I FEEL BETTER!
freaky-hanyou