Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's: The Rose's Guardian

by ClyxicRyse

What if Akiza had someone with her from the beginning, someone who was there with her when her powers awaken, someone who was there with her when her parents brought her to Duel Acadamia, someone who was with her when she joined the Arcadia Movement. Meet Haruto Izinski, Akiza's Twin brother and her guardian.(OCxAkiza sorry Yusei)(under rewrite)

4. NOTICE

NOTICE

Hey everyone, I'm sure you all would be really happy to get a new chapter but I'm afraid that that's not the case here, I'm sorry to say this story will be on a slight hiatus for a bit, now the reason for this is because I don't like how I did things, like how I focused too much on my OC and completely neglected the other characters, and now I can't seem to think of a way to bring them in without forcing it and that bothers me.

I'll be spending this time thinking the plot over and what I can do to fix the problems I found and possibly try to flesh out Haruto and Akiza's relationship, I know you guys said you liked their moments with each other but I feel like I could do better.

Now there is another possibility I've considered and that's to rewrite the story which sounds stupid since there's only 3 chapters but it would give me a fresh start plus nothing would really change besides how I start the story because I started this when the plot starts to thicken and didn't give myself a lot of room to work with so I would probably start it earlier.

Now the rewrite is a last resort option for if I just can't seem to think for a way to get this to work, but at the same time I would like your guys opinion on this should I try to make this work or should I do a rewrite, this will probably last for a month just to get everything together and again I'm sorry if you were excited for the next chapter.