heyyyyyy bitches. im back with another chapter! im so surprised that i did XD

im so lazy.

Anyway...I've always thought how its rlly cool when ffn-ers reply to reviews in stories. so yah, though there's only one review so far. thats so good though!

"AcousticNotepad": thank u so much!! your one review made my day, and brightened it even more when i saw it under your favourites on your bio (yes i look at reviewers' bios and shit to get to know my readers). And this is only my first draft, revised for spelling and such. "dawn" is gonna rock the warriors lemonzies!!

speaking of rocking the lemonzies, let's try to get ten favs or follows on this story. that would make my week or more.

well, enough me letting my mouth fuck off. on with the story.

oh...i almost forgot. if anyone would like to beta or knows a good one, please recommend them to me. I would love a beta!

Breathless. That one word describes my feelngs right now.

The clearing is beautiful, at least in my opinion. I love the swaying beech trees. I love the way the holly seemed to watch us. Dare us. The thistle seems to be hiding its cruel talons. I love it. I sneak a glance at Heronfeather, his gray eyes shining proudly.

"The holly looks like Palefawn daring Mousepaw to defy her." Heronfeather shuffles close to me and wraps his arm around me, resting on the small of my back. "The holly also looks like it's daring me to do this."

He grips my chin, gentle yet firm. In one fluid movement, he connects his lips to mine. Passion fizzes in our mouths. I pinch myself. Heronfeather would never be my mate. I'm...I'm just...Briarsong. An invisible warrior. The perfect she-shifter that he-shifters disgust.

But I can't bring myself to fight my doubts. I moan quietly, opening my teeth and sliding my tongue into his mouth. He responds by sliding his own into mine. We explore eachother's mouths. His is warm and humid, like my pussy, except it's better because this is real. This is Heronfeather.

He pulls back and gazes at me. "I gather you agree with me?" he says, a smile tugging on his lips.

I nod, breathless.

He purses his lips. "Well, I've loved you since Leopardstone was your mentor--I was a new warrior. And I know you've been after me since you were still Briarkit. Since we both love eachother, let's jump right into it."

I tilt my head, puzzled. "You mean, sex?"

He nods. "Yup. You want to?"

I grin. "Yes!"

He pulls his shirt off. I stare at his hard abs, though women have those too, as warriors. I slowly take my shirt off, my breasts bouncing. My tits are already perked up. Heronfeather removes his capris. He is completely naked.

I quickly take off my capris, revealing my wet pussy to my mate. We stare at eachother. His cock is hard, pre-cum already oozing from the tip. It's average size, but it looks huge to me because it's the first time I've seen a cock (well, other than cat forms) and it looks huge. I shiver at the sight of cat-like barbs coating it. I didn't think our neko forms had barbed cocks. Well, shit, they do.

Shit is a perfect word for this situation, or so I understood the Mundanes. It means feces, but is also similar to MoonClan's sake, just more...colourful.

Heronfeather sidles up to me. His cock presses against my bare stomach. "I-it's huge," I whisper.

He laughs. "You should see Nightstep's. It's the biggest of all, I swear to MoonClan."

My stomach turns. I'm glad Nightstep won't hook up with me. Heronfeather reaches his fingers and starts rubbing my clit.

"Don't worry," I say. "I'm no virgin. I spent my cherry fantasizing about you."

With a grin, he sticks three fingers in. I gasp in shock. He slowly starts pumping them while rubbing his cock around my fluttery stomach.

"Oh...," The moan escapes my lips. "Just do it."

I drop to a natural cat position, though I stay in my neko form. I feel a heavy weight on my back and twist my head to see Heronfeather scrabbling his paws to get a good position. I turn back around and immediately feel a gentle nip on my neck. Of course. All females get scruff-held while mating. Then I feel something hard poke at my entrance. It's Heronfeather's cock.

"Ready?" he whispers. I nod. He plunges.

Three words describe how I feel. Breathless in pain.

hey again. sorry it was so short. i feel short chapters more often is better for my style and for consistency. im rlly pantsing this, so allegiances will be up and updated until they are all filled out.

btw Mundanes are humans. and nekos have human hands but feline feet.

fun fact: Daisytail is the creekclan deputy.

i was hoping to get her and heron to also pov. heron was supposed to for this chapter XD

i guess next chapter. until then, bitches.

PECAN