Fluttercry
The slight chills from the early autumn blew past Ponyville, making its way to the far end of town. A trace of the wind continued to a forest however. Out on the edges of the Everfree forest, a cottage which served as home for several critters and creatures had its windows lightened up by the reserved Fluttershy, even tough it was late at night.
Laying on her side in the cozy couch which she always liked to do after a hard day of work, she stared right up in the ceiling while filling her mind with everything she had learned the past few weeks. She was nervous but still concentrated enough to not loose her cool. Even if she clopped with her hooves sometimes to get some restlessness out of her system, she still felt everything was under control for the moment. She looked around inside her cottage, at all the birdhouses and even at Angel who slept in his basket located right next to the couch she laid in.
Fluttershy recalled the memories from all the events and discoveries she had learned. First was Twilight; who suddenly a few weeks ago locked herself inside the library, refusing to speak or even meet anypony. Not even Spike was allowed inside. But Fluttershy remembered when she one day flew up to the bedroom window of the library, were she saw the purple filly crying herself to sleep in her bed every time she checked.
Apparently it happened at the same day as Applejack had lost control of herself. Big Macintosh was worried of her since all she did was going to the local bar every day, only to come home later drunk and with bruises from who knows what. She didn't say anything to anypony either, but Fluttershy, who had visited her to ask about their unicorn friend, knew that it had something to do with Twilight's sudden change of behavior. A-J was resting on a pile of hay, sleep talking about how sorry she was for doing 'that' thing whatever it was to the mentioned pony.
Then the most weirdest one of them all happened; Pinkie Pie and Ditzy Doo, baiting Fluttershy to spy on them as they performed a sexual act containing horrible things such as pain and tears. The yellow pegasus shivered from remembering those images. And to a coincidence; only a few days after that, Fluttershy could have sworn she saw Rarity leave Sugarcube Corner with an extraordinary weird expression on her face. The day after that, she had also seen the same white unicorn with a few scars on her hooves which she tried to conceal when in public.
And even if those happened to be the oddest and/or weirdest, they were nothing in comparison to the day she found Rainbow Dash. The filly had to hold back a tear when she thought of that unfortunate day when the blue pegasus was found brutally raped by somepony. The nurses at Cloudsdale hospital said she would be healthy in a few days, but might be forced to get some therapy because of what must have happened to her. Fluttershy left her friend yelping in her sleep at the hospital as she had to return home, a decision that still haunts her only because she knew it was too much for her to see her friend like that.
Fluttershy rolled over to her back while covering her face with her fore-hooves. No matter where she looked, all her friends were in complete despair. Tainted with sorrow, scarred by grief and plagued in all the ways memories possibly could. Could this be the very beginning of all the cracks in their friendship? The filly didn't want to think that way. If her friends dispatched one after another, the mental torture would probably take her life one day. And what about Rainbow Dash? Wouldn't it be terrible to wake up and knowing all of her friends are in disorder? It couldn't end like this, and Fluttershy suddenly got determined to prevent this. But what could she possibly do to restore everything back to normal again?
She sat up on the couch and thought about it for a good while. After a moment of distress in the lack of ideas, she glanced down on her yellow, soft and flawless body. In a flash of insight, she came up with an idea, but it would be a real long shot...
The pegasus carefully closed the door to her cottage behind her to not wake the animals inside from their beauty sleep, then flapped out her wings and lifted into the air. She already knew her goal, since it without doubt would be the best one; Sugarcube Corner.
It wasn't too far from midnight, Ponyville was dark and silent with its inhabitants asleep. Fluttershy had reached the confectionery, but her plan involved flying up to the third story's window where Pinkie's room was. She bit her lip to concentrate the smallest amount of strength in her right hoof when knocking on the glass. No response. Another knock, but it had the same effect. Even when she tried to use her voice instead, which caused less noise then a mouse, she failed to gain the pink pony's attention. But soon Fluttershy realized a big flaw in Pinkie's security: her window was unlocked, giving the pegasus entrance by just slightly pushing it inside.
With a sigh she flew in like a fairy and landed on the wooden floor. It was completely dark inside the room, leaving her no other option then continuing to use her silent voice. "Pinkie. Pinkie, are you awa-", she whispered before getting stricken blind by the lamps in the ceiling.
In a swoop, the pegasus was pushed over to the floor by the pony named Pinkie Pie. With the yellow filly on her back, the earth pony sat on top of her stomach with a big smile on her lips. "Surprise! I was awake all the time! Aha ha ha ha! Gotcha, Fluttershy!", she said and laughed with a loud voice. The pegasus, however, gasped for air from the shock.
After things have cooled down, the two ponies sat in front of each other in the center of the room. "You see, Pinkie. I... uhm... need your help with something, if it's okay for you", Fluttershy said. The earth pony winked several times and replied, "anything for you, Fluttershy! You know that!".
The pegasus brought up the subject about all of their friends and how worried she was for them. Pinkie giggled unconsciously when the part with Rarity came up in the beginning, but soon turned her smiling face upside down. Her jaw dropped and her eyes got wet from hearing about Twilight, Applejack and especially about Rainbow Dash's condition.
Fluttershy hanged with her head with that saddened expression during the entire explanation without getting interrupted by her friend. Pinkie was just seconds from sobbing when her friend looked at her. The burst of sorrow shot trough her emotions as she jumped over to hug Fluttershy.
Two fillies with sorrow on their minds now embraced each other, clutching tightly to remove the fear of being alone. "What are we gonna do, Fluttershy?", Pinkie whispered while trying to hold back the tears. The yellow pony stroke her friend's pink mane, being the strong one. "It's okay, Pinkie. I... I think there is a... uhm... way to solve everything, but as I said; I really need your help". The earth pony released the hug and listened to Fluttershy's plan. Moments passed on with the pegasus' voice dominating their conversation. And after just a few minutes, there was a smile on the earth pony's lips again. The exaltation boiled up behind her happy grin, almost causing her to jump on the spot with happiness. Meanwhile, Fluttershy was finally done, "...and I think that would do. But only if you can help, I'm not good at it, you know...".
Pinkie charged her legs with all her might to jump straight upward, almost hit her head in the ceiling, landed perfectly, then threw herself to hug the pegasus. "Oh, Fluttershy! Of course I will help you! There is nothing-huffing-puffing I wont do for you, especially when it's about helping our friends!", she said with the innermost happiness her heart could hide. Fluttershy gasped at first, but just a second later smiled to hug back.
Princess Celestia brought out the sun once again to let all ponies greet the morning. Two ponies who didn't really had time for that was the earth pony and pegasus pony inside Fluttershy's cottage. Angel who sat outside with an annoyed grimace on his face wondered why not even he was allowed inside. Not was it only because of his late breakfast, the white bunny was also concerned about Fluttershy's health. All night there was an unending source of noises coming out from every part of the house, and no matter how he looked at it, there had to be some problem with his mistress.
But finally during the late morning, Fluttershy opened the door out of her cottage to get stricken by the sun. The bunny stared shockingly at the yellow pegasus, soon giving up the idea on figuring out what the hay happened to her and walked inside instead. Fluttershy was exhausted, way too exhausted to say hi to anypony or even minding her messed up mane. But thanks to her long living with animals, she had subconsciously already brought out food for all the critters inside her house, and was actually outside only because she had to care for the other ones outside. After finishing everything to do, the door to the cottage closed behind her. You could however see Pinkie's silhouette from the door, standing on her hindlegs and waiting for Fluttershy. The day went on with more noises, but when princess Luna brought out the moon, the cottage was silent without anypony leaving it during the entire day...
A new dawn passed over sweet apple acres, waking up Big Macintosh and Apple bloom, but not Applejack. The bruises on her body from the bar fight she picked last night needed some resting, so she really had no plan on leaving her room at all. All she did was turning around to lay on her back. However, she was sleeping very easy, causing her to feel that somepony was watching her. So when the amber orange pony opened her sore eyes, a maniacal grin with two wide-open eyes above it scared the living apples out of her. But before she had time to scream, the intruding pony brought up a thin napkin with chloroform and covered Applejack's mouth with it, quickly ending the unnecessary scene that was about to be caused. The passed out farmer was thrown into a big, brown bag perfectly fitting her size, then carefully smuggled out from her room, leaving the apple acres on top of the ponynapping character.
Inside the library in Ponyville, Twilight pressed her face to the soaked pillow. Her misery wouldn't allow her to sleep more then a few hours each night. The terrorizing memory of being deflowered by her friend never stopped haunting her. All mental pain and suffering caused her to flip over on her back and nuzzle deeper inside the pillow, forgetting to actually care if she could get out of it. Suddenly, when the unicorn wanted to get her face out in the air, she realized she couldn't. Somepony violently pressed the pillow harder onto Twilight's face, releasing a panic inside her mind before passing out in a few seconds. Without any traces of a fight or break-in, Twilight was carried out in an identical bag from the library.
A fresh afternoon passed by Carousel Boutique. Opalescence was sitting inside on the windowsill while looking out on all the carefree birds taking off from the ground. Everything was uninteresting for her, nothing at all could amuse her even the slightest. Not even the mysterious pony jumping down from Rarity's bedroom, sneaking away with a bag on its back. The white cat yawned and went to her basket to sleep.
Back at Fluttershy's cottage, the yellow pegasus walked soaking wet out of the shower with a towel around her neck. As she dried away all the relieving water still on her body, the door to her house was bucked inside violently. With a terrified expression, Fluttershy dropped the towel and staggered before realizing who it was in front of the door. "Hiya, chuttershy! Ah goch then all, juscht like fhlanned!", Pinkie yelled with her mouth filled with ropes which she bit to drag in the three bags inside the cottage. The yellow pony didn't understand a word she said, and so asked Pinkie to say it again. After spitting out the ropes, she repeated with a happy grin, "I got them all, just like planned!", then opened bag after bag to roll out the ponies inside them.
"Applejack; we need to wake her up from the chloroform. Rarity; I think I hit correctly with the table-lamp in her head. And... oopsie! I better blow some air in Twilight; I suffocated her with a pillow". Fluttershy stared at the pink pony with fear shivering inside her. "How can you do all this, Pinkie? Doesn't it feel wrong to use such cruel methods on them?", she asked. Pinkie, about to place her mouth over Twilight's own mouth, looked curiously at Fluttershy and halted. A little giggle left her throat.
"Ha ha ha, what do you mean, Fluttershy? You make it sound like I'm some kind of crazy pony who constantly kidnap ponies to take them to my basement and torturing them while raping their cut up bodies before slaughtering them to bake cupcakes from their carcasses...", she replied with high speed. "WHAT?", Fluttershy yelled. "What?", the earth pony said back with a heavily confused look in her eyes. A moment of awkward silence passed by with them both starring at each other. Fluttershy then forgot what she actually said, reminding herself it was Pinkie Pie, after all...
Twilight flashed open her eyes as the last piece of air was blown down inside her lungs by Pinkie. After pushing her aside and then sitting up with a coughing yell, the unicorn looked around to see Fluttershy with a gentle smile. It relieved her to know she was outside of danger, but her calmness was removed when she noticed the passed out Applejack and Rarity laying next to her on the floor. Out of all ponies, did A-J really had to be there too, she thought. But before she had time to stand up on all four and ask what was going on, Fluttershy walked over to her. "Relax, Twilight. I will take care of this. Uhm, and I hope it's okay for you to just listen to us for a few seconds?", she said silently but still clearly enough for the purple unicorn to hear. And even if she had problems with the farmer being in the same room as herself, she was wondering why Rarity also was there, obviously against her will. "Okay, tell me. But make it quick, please...", Twilight said with a sigh.
Pinkie merry skipped over to Rarity to shake her awake, but she staggered at first when realizing how many scars the white unicorn already had placed on her hooves and lower parts of the legs. All three of them looked a little disgusted at the wounds before the fashion-pony finally woke up. She touched the part of her head where the lamp recently struck her. "Ouch, ouch. Aw, there must be a terrible swelling on my head", she whimpered before truly trying to stand up. When Rarity demanded an explanation to why she was here and what happened to her, Fluttershy told her to just stay put and wait till Applejack was awake too.
With all three ponies brought from their unconsciousness , there were now a heavy atmosphere between them all. All of the ponies sat in a circle next to each other in the following order; Rarity, Twilight, Pinkie, Applejack and then Fluttershy. The purple unicorn looked away from the orange pony with her forelegs crossed even though the one she avoided tried to get some kind of eye contact.
Rarity simple looked at her hooves, completely ignoring the others and longing to get home so she could cause some new wounds to herself for her own sexual pleasure. Fluttershy would in normal cases never be able to speak up, but that's why she wanted Pinkie to help her. After clearing her throat, she only gained attention from Pinkie.
Another clearing, no attention.
All the ponies were so caught up in their own problems, so there was really only one way out: Fluttershy had to think of her pegasus friend, summoning great amounts of courage and anger at once by doing so. Her right hoof gained power equally to a lightning bolt, striking down without any prior warning to the floor with a slight aftershock. All the other fillies quickly turned their heads to the maddened Fluttershy as she yelled with a high-pitched voice.
"CAN YOU LISTEN TO ME?", echoed trough the cottage, scaring all the critters outside just for Rainbow Dash's sake.
The attention from all the ponies grew from zero too one hundred percent in an instant, allowing the yellow pegasus to calm down like nothing happened and talk regularly after clearing her throat for the third and last time. Pinkie watched in excitement with a bag of popcorn in her hooves which nopony as usual knew where she got it from. "I understand that you all have some problems with each other, but I...", she only had time to say before getting interrupted by Twilight who suddenly uncrossed her forelegs and pointed at Applejack.
"Problems? That's the last thing you can call it! That cowgirl over there did things you never could understand to me!", Twilight hollered out while facing the orange earth pony. Applejack responded in an unexpected way by hanging with her head, "ah 'now, Twi. But even tough it caused me lots and lots of sadness, ah still don' regret it, ya know...", but that was like throwing dry wood into a fire for the purple unicorn. She tensed her eyes with an angry look and charged her friend, pinning her defenselessly down to the floor while screaming more at her. "No regrets? Are you kidding me, you freaking redneck pony! Do you know how much I've been waiting for the day I would give myself to the princess? And you just lock me up in your cellar, drug me and then rape me! And to top it all of, you just ran away after you were done with me, you disgusting...".
But when Twilight came to that part, Applejack felt the tears soaking her cheeks while yelling back in complete sorrow. "That ain't true, Twi! I've already told ya ah love you! And ah told you ah wanted to make ya mine! But when ah understood wha' ah did to ya, ah just... ah jus' couldn't take it!".
The yelling continued for several minutes without anypony acting or engaging to stop them. But amazing as it was, it never developed further into a fight. Twilight still stood above Applejack. Rarity had lost interest and began glancing on her scars again, but it was at that moment Fluttershy finally jumped in. Pinkie was halfway trough her popcorn bag.
"Girls! You two stop it right now! I already understood what this was all about from the beginning, and now it's time we settle it!", she yelled with determination. The two arguing ponies looked at the pegasus with shock written over their faces, instantly snapping away from the angry replies. Pinkie crumpled the empty space of her bag of popcorn before laying it behind her back. Fluttershy gulped hard and closed her eyes for just a second.
The same moment she opened them again, her lips shuddered out the first words of her explanation. "I'm sure that even if you all have a grudge against somepony in our group of friends, I'm also sure none of you got one against Rainbow Dash, right?", she began with, causing all the ponies to doubt their strong emotions. "Well, Rainbow is at the hospital in Cloudsdale right now. I found her just a few days ago; and she had been... raped".
That line caused Rarity to finally look at her yellow friend again while the other gasped. Still down right determined, Fluttershy continued, "and both me and the doctors understood what must have happened to her, we just don't know who did it. She has probably already awakened, so now WE must be there for her", then ended with a clear hoof stomp to the floor again. Everypony was amazed over Fluttershy's ability to speak up so much, but they still got the message.
"But what will she think if even one of us are missing? In this time of need when support probably is the only thing that can keep her alive? Oh no, her friends are in dilemmas with obvious solutions they just can't see", she said ironically. Twilight was about to interrupt again with small traces of anger in her mind, but the yellow pegasus lifted from the floor and gently flew over to face the purple unicorn with a maddened expression herself. "For an example: Twilight here wanted to give her virginity to princess Celestia as a one-night stand, but lost it to Applejack who did it because she LOVES her! Now the unicorn is stuck in self-pitying because of how long she waited, and thereby ignores A-J's feelings for her. I don't know, but it seems kind of much better to do it the first time with somepony who loves you for who you are then somepony who just can enjoy your body, still being locked away from any ability to commit since the two of them are teacher and pupil".
Finally, the unicorn turned down her head to the farmer again, but this time with a saddened expression instead of angry. "It all makes sense...oh, Applejack. Can you forgive me? I was blinded by my own foalishness, I just...", Twilight said with tears coming up from her eyes before the two orange forelegs stretched out to put themselves around her neck. Applejack was already red around her eyes from all the silent crying during Fluttershy's speech. With shudders in her voice caused by huge quantity of joy, she whispered, "I've already forgiven you, Twilight. Ah love ya, ah told ya already", then starred passionately at the purple filly. Their eyes met in the most connecting way, slowly bringing them closer to each other. Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie smiled when the two loving ponies' muzzles touched each other, linking together their lips as a sign of new start for both of them. The pink pony clopped her hooves and giggled, "oh, goodie! That's two in a row, Fluttershy! Now for Rarity before the last part, come on!
The mentioned unicorn glared at both of her friends as they walked closer to her. "I must say I have no idea what you mean is wrong with me! Can't I do what I feel like, anymore?", she complained to defend herself. But now was the time for Pinkie and Fluttershy to prove what they had worked on the entire night. The earth pony stroke her right hoof along Rarity's muzzle, dipping her eyesight into the unicorn's eyes. When she realized it was lust that covered inside those blue eyes, she heard a rather frightful thing from the mouth just a few inches away from her own, "I'm sure we will give you something else to like, miss Rarity...", she said silently.
Pinkie turned around to scuff down Fluttershy to the floor. With a yelp, she carefully landed on the soft carpet, but this was far from over. With her head still turned towards the white unicorn, Pinkie spread and placed herself between Fluttershy's thighs, reaching with her foreleg to rub the sensitive spot. A small cry left the yellow pegasus' mouth before she threw her head back, gaining attention from the couple about to make things hotter. They both broke the kiss with saliva still connecting their tongues and looked at the moaning pegasus.
"No... Pinkie... already...?", she succeeded to say between her groans. Pinkie just nodded without breaking eye contact with Rarity. The spot Pinkie rubbed started to get slippery, soaking her hoof as she caressed the pink lips a bit rougher. Rarity stared at the two, starting to blush when the same hot sensation blew past her mind. "What is it, Rarity? Do you want some of this innocent pony? Do you now?", the earth pony said to tease her, which worked outstandingly. After those taunting words, the white unicorn slowly walked over to them both, her tongue licked around her lips as she now stood next to Pinkie, glancing at her to get a finally granting.
Fluttershy looked at Rarity with a tear about to leave her eyes, and that was all she needed to get that warm, familiar feeling between her thighs. She bend over to hide her muzzle between the yellow hindlegs, closed her eyes to enhance the pleasure, then engaged with the first stroke by her tongue on the wet marehood. Pinkie grinned, she didn't plan on being a bystander in all of this, so with a little push, she squeezed in with her head next to Rarity's in order to get her share too of that sweet flower.
The two tongues cuddled each other, sometimes pausing to slip inside each others mouth before continuing to please the sweet spot in front of them. Fluttershy breathed harder, "Ah, it feels... it feels too good! Pinkie, Rarity, be careful! I... ah... I might... not hol~ld...", but the two horny fillies kept up to taste her even more, ignoring the pleading from this delicious pony. She stretched out her forelegs to lay her hooves above each head that pleased her, "oh... not.. that fast... no...", then she let out a lustful, loud groan.
Whats she wasn't aware of was that the two other fillies suddenly had the urge to join in. The sight of the Pinkie and Rarity lapping the cute pegasus, forcing her to enjoy and whimper became too much to keep themselves dry. They both looked at each other, sending messages trough their eyes that it was okay. Then, in a matter of seconds, Fluttershy looked straight up at the the two faces covering her sight to the ceiling. Without saying a thing, Applejack and Twilight were now part of the orgy.
The most colorful daisy chain you could find took place inside the isolated cottage. All of them laid on their sides with their hooves around the flank in front of them. The order was Pinkie, Rarity, Fluttershy, Applejack and then Twilight, who connected the ring by pressing her tongue inside Pinkie. Lustful moans and squishing noises from their tongues licking each others pleasure spots echoed trough their ears, pushing the excitement further for every second that passed. Twilight was the first to reach her own peak, blushing heavily before interrupting her tongue to release, "ah! Applejack... ah... aah!", then finishing off with a muffled whimper.
A-J got most of the juice on her tongue, instantly trying to collect it all in her mouth. Just a few seconds later, Rarity's voice could be heard too, "oh yes, darling... don't stop, don't... uuaaaah!", then released all her lusts at once in Pinkie's face. As the pink pony giggled over her own excitement, she felt it coming too. A chain reaction were all the remaining fillies came at almost the same time. Pinkie tensed her body, Applejack twitched her hindlegs and Fluttershy felt like it was burning inside her nether. A united holler of moans left their mouths as the last stains of juice poured down from their faces to the floor...
Fluttershy still had that distinctive color of red on her cheeks when Rarity and Pinkie, laying next to her on each side, stroke her mane. They both still laid on their sides and slightly panted. "I must... say, Fluttershy. You held longer then I... expected from you. How come...?", the white unicorn asked the pegasus. "Let's just say that she had some help...", Pinkie replied and winked. Rarity giggled, but she was about to get a question too.
"By the way, Rarity. How was this compared to your own self-entertaining?", the pink earth pony asked with a trace of irony in her words. The white unicorn hesitated at first and dragged down her lips, but when Fluttershy glanced at her with a begging look in her eyes, all doubts were washed away, returning her smile while nuzzling into to the yellow pegasus' neck. "I'd say this was much better. And besides, the scars didn't look too fabulous anyways...", she said which relaxed the two others. Then when Pinkie threw a look at the two other girls who already rested in each others embrace on the floor, enjoying the afterglow, she laid her right foreleg over Fluttershy's tummy and thought "mission accomplished". The yellow filly smiled and thought almost the same...
Another day had passed. In a big room with several cloud beds in two separate lines, Rainbow Dash with her ravaged, short-stumped mane looked outside the window from her hospital bed. And even though her own bed was warm and comfortable, she still couldn't put her mind away from the pain between her hindlegs. It hurt and burned every time she tried to turn over, leaving her restless as well as tortured from all the memories she knew would be a struggle to get rid of.
There was nopony else in the big room, so she was all alone without any company except from the nurses who passed in and out to check her. She felt awful and pathetic. Was this the strong and cocky Rainbow Dash? No, just an empty, deflowered shell. She thought of herself as nothing else but a whore; a cheap, easy-manipulated foal with no dignity left. A tear raced down her cheek. She had no plan on stopping it, nothing would stop. All she wanted was somepony to be there for her and remove those horrible feelings from her.
Suddenly, the door to the big room opened, but the blue pegasus didn't care. She knew she was all alone in this. Then when she realized it was several hooves hitting the floor made of clouds, a weak glance appeared in the corner of her eye.
"My goodness, darling! Are you alright?", Rarity yelled as she ran trough the room to stand next to Rainbow. "We heard what happened...", Twilight said gently as she got to the bed too. Rainbow turned her head to face the friendly crowd surrounding her bed. "An' of course we're all here for ye, sugarcube", Applejack mentioned while resting her foreleg on the purple unicorns back. Rainbow still had the same expression on her face, but when Pinkie Pie suddenly jumped in from the window, she quickly turned around with a shocked face. "Because that's what friends are for, Dashie!", she said with a loud voice to show how happy she was to see her again.
The surrounded pegasus looked at all of her friends without any traces of even the slightest joy over seeing them. But as she toured by them with her eyes, she noticed the last pony entering the room. Fluttershy with a unquestionable smile walked over to the bed. The others made room for her to get close to their pegasus friend, turning their heads to see them both. "How are you, Rainbow? We were all so worried for you", she said with her old, usual tone. All the other ponies nodded in agreement, changing their happy faces to the more saddened ones.
Rainbow Dash thought about her situation for a second. What happened to her, all the pain and suffering she remembered, the agony of being thrown down to the lowest. But now when all her friends were here, worried to death over how she was. If she still was the courageous, brave and loyal Rainbow they all knew and loved so much. This was the time when she was supposed to be the energetic one.
In a few moments, the blue pegasus realized this wasn't her. Where was the awesome pony who knew that her friends would be there for her? When the mentioned moments had passed, she shook her head and giggled. "Aw, c'mon guys. Ya know me; I can take a few hits, especially when you are here", she said with restored self-confidence.
All of her´friends cheered to hear those words. Pinkie Pie flipped out and jumped up on the bed to hug the laying one, Rarity hugged Fluttershy with tears in her eyes, the yellow pegasus answered the hug, and the blue filly loved them for doing so. It was just like always, like it should be. But even though all this filled her with happiness, one thing bothered her to no end; Applejack and Twilight kissing each other; with open mouths. Like a bad replay, she slowly succumbed to a horrible feeling she didn't want to know.
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Okay, wow! People reading this story and adding it to their alert lists after just a few days. What. about. that...
A short note, now when the first five parts of this story have been brought to light:
Thank you for the reviews I've already received, it feels like my heart is about to burst only by reading them and noting you already got hopes for the next parts.
I will however make a brief pause with this story, since I want to add another story next to this one, soon coming up named as 'Royal pleasures' (rated M). And I'm pretty certain most people in this part of knows what it probably will contain :) Ponyville's lusts' will return shortly when the two first chapters of my new story are up. Feel free to tell me what you think of the two.
Thanks yet again for the reviews, I'll look forward for more of those in the future, just so you know.
Brohoof on ya all!