Lies, cover ups and babies

by becca.84

This will be another cheating story. The story begins as Christian and Ana are engaged. Christian is still very much a dominant trying to live a 'more' lifestyle with Ana, but is struggling to make it work. Ana is trying to show him more while also being his submissive, how will this ever work? Will they make it to the alter with each other or different people?

14. Authors note

Hi everyone this is not a chapter, just want to address some issues.

First I want to say thanks to the people who have IM'd me and sent great reviews I thank you so much for the support.

Now for those that want to slag my story is one thing, but for to turn around and also slag others for reading and posting nice and encouraging comments about my story, you people are disgusting. Fair enough you don't like my story, no need to cuss out others who may be enjoying it. I'm not writer or even in the writing profession not by any means and honestly when I started this story I wasn't expecting anything in return. Just to put my ideas on here and see what people though. A bit of constructive criticism is fine, I don't mind that, how I can improve my story etc as I said I am not a writer. But the people that just want to continuously bag out my story honestly can just piss off. Far enough say "my story is stupid", you left a review and said what you thought ok then, but just to continuously carry on spewing hateful things it isn't very nice.

If you don't like my story simply do not read it, heck I'm not forcing you to and if you don't like it fair enough to, but I will continue this story for the few people that are following and commenting on it, I honestly didn't care if that number was 10 people, 100 people or 500 people I'm not trying to achieve anything here but to keep my mind active. If some people are still interested in reading and following it then I will be still interested in writing it. And for those of you that don't then DON'T CONTINUE READING IT!