Me: This is going to be a serious chapter. Thank you to the people who have reviewed so far, especially x3AnimeLuver. I deserved the criticism. I'll try better on my chapters. Anywho, this is what I think the first duel gang battle would have been like.

Yusei: Why do you say 'anywho' instead of 'anyways'?

Me: I don't really know… Anywho, I don't own Yu-Gi-Oh 5ds, but I do own Sky.

Sky: You really do have an issue with saying 'anywho'. Maybe you haven't done it in a while, but you still say it.

Me: Like I said before, I have no idea. So, just read the rewritten Chapter 7.

Chapter 7

My part in the Turf War wasn't hard at all. I mean, when the place you're trying to break into isn't guarded in the slightest, well… Easy as pie. All I had to do was waltz on into the building and turn off the power in the control room. Soon after, Crow and Jack meet up with Yusei, Kalin, and I, but we split up, Yusei coming with me.

The two of us end up having to go to the top floor, which appears to be a haphazard storage space, cardboard boxes everywhere. I close my eyes and concentrate, now being able to see energy. The auras of two people stand out amongst the dull gray of the boxes. I blink, and my vision returns to normal. 'They don't know we're here yet,' I think to Yusei. 'There're two people here. You take care of the one hiding over there, alright?' I point in the general direction of a corner.

'Sure thing,' he replies.

We walk our separate ways, and the member of Team Ninja attempts to scare me. I don't even flinch. Instead, I let the grappling-hook adaption Yusei and I put together to latch onto his Duel Disk. I hear similar sounds from Yusei's direction, so I guess that means we can start.

The brown-haired, green-eyed teen in front of me attempts to untangle his Duel Disk. I laugh, "Sorry, that's not coming off until we Duel. Loser's Disk gets smashed."

He snarls at me, "How dare you mess with me? I'm Tobu, the leader of Team Ninja! You… you're just a girl that thinks she can Duel but really can't. I'm surprised whatever team you're on let you join."

I smirk a little. "You should wait until after the Duel to trash-talk, shortie. Of course, you won't be, because I'm going to win."

Tobu's face turns bright red, and he shouts, "That's it! No one calls me 'shortie'! You better be prepared to lose!"

"Well then, let's do this thing!" I shout.

Tobu's Life Points: 4000, Sky's Life Points: 4000

"I'll be going first," I say. I quickly look at my hand. "Alright, I Summon Subterra Gorem in Defense Mode, and then release him in order to Special Summon a stronger version, Subterra Hammer Gorem."

Subterra Hammer Gorem ATK: 2000, DEF: 3000, Level 5

A tall monster like a statue of rock appears, his coloring mostly dark brown but with yellow and dark orange parts as well. A dual-sided hammer is strapped to his back.

"Next I activate Subterra Hammer Gorem's ability, Grand Impact! Once per turn, you take 500 points of damage."

The living statue pulls the dual-sided hammer off his back and throws it straight at Tobu. Then the hammer returns like a boomerang, and it returns to Gorem's back.

Tobu's Life Points: 3500

"With two face-down cards, I'll end my turn," I finish.

My opponent glares at me. "Lucky shot, girl. Too bad it's my turn now, I draw! I activate my Spell Stop Defense! This forces your monster into Attack Mode."

My rock-man stands up from his kneeling position and returns to his normal coloring. I don't change my facial expression, but I'm not very pleased with that. 'Well, I still have my face-downs,' I think.

"Next, I can Special Summon Cyber Dragon because you control a monster and I don't," he continues. "Cyber Dragon, attack that pile of rocks!"

Cyber Dragon ATK: 2100, DEF: 1600, Level 5

The classic mechanical serpent appears, and then attempts to blast a stream of blue energy at Gorem.

"Nope, I activate my Quick-Play Spell, Book of Moon," I counter. "This forces your Cyber Dragon into face-down Defense Mode, thus ending your attack."

"Grr… I end my turn with a face-down."

I draw my card, look at it, and smile. "I assume you wanted me to fall for your face-down. Mmm… Dimensional Prison, right?" Upon his facial expression of surprise, I grin even more. "Well, I'm using my Mystical Space Typhoon to get rid of it!"

A tornado starts up, throwing several boxes around but mostly tearing apart the face-down that is, indeed, Dimensional Prison. "Don't think you're getting off the hook that easily," I continue. "I Summon Pyrus Dragonoid in Attack Mode!"

Pyrus Dragonoid ATK: 2000, DEF: 1500, Level 4

My dragon appears, his underside orange and his back and head red. He has two bat-like wings, of which the underside is tan. A single dark yellow horn is at the top of his head.

"Then I activate the Equip Spell Mage Power and Equip it to Pyrus Dragonoid! Now he gains 500 ATK/DEF for each Spell or Trap I have. I count two, so that means 1000 extra power for my dragon!"

Pyrus Dragonoid ATK: 3000, DEF: 2500

"I'm also going to use Subterra Hammer Gorem's effect once more, taking away 500 more of your Life Points!"

The hammer hits Tobu again, this time knocking him to the ground.

Tobu's Life Points: 3000

"Subterra Hammer Gorem, attack and destroy the face-down Cyber Dragon with Taros Hammer!" I declare.

This time, the hammer glows a bright orange-yellow, and it stays in the rock-man's hand. He charges at the face-down, and it flips up to reveal the curled up form of Cyber Dragon. Upon impact with the hammer, the mechanical serpent-dragon shatters.

"Pyrus Dragonoid, attack him directly and end this Duel!" I shout. "Boosted Dragon!"

Pyrus Dragonoid pulls his head back and lets out one giant fireball. It shoots at Tobu, taking away the rest of his Life Points and causing his Duel Disk to explode.

Tobu's Life Points: 0—Winner: Sky Fudo

I start walking away without a word, not that Tobu was saying anything to stop me. I'm pretty sure he's trying to comprehend his loss to a girl. 'Yusei, you can stop Dueling your person. I just beat the leader.'

A few moments later, Yusei walks over to me. He spots the dumbstruck Tobu. "Ah. Guessing he was the leader?"

"Mhmm. Pretty easy, at that." I clap my hands together. "What are we waiting for? The others need to hear about this!"

That was how my first Turf War went down. There were many others, some of which we almost lost. But we always pulled through. In fact, the only other really significant time was the Turf War with Team No-Securities…

To be continued…

Me: So, did you like it?

Kalin: Yeah, but why'd your character get to defeat the leader? This is like 'World Championship 2010' all over again. I didn't get to do anything.

Me: Hey, at least I let you stay the leader, even though my character is older than you.

Kalin: *walks off grumbling*

Me: Ah…. Please review, even if you are criticizing the story.

Me: Yep, I'd love some criticism. Preferably constructive, but it doesn't really matter. I love anything that can help me get better at writing.