A/N: Hello again, people. I am back to give you another updated chapter (12,531 words) and sorry that it took a long time to post this. Sorry, I was at summer camp this summer which was one week which causes me slow down the chapter process. So there 60 reviews which some of them were questions and suggestions which are still terrible and badly-implemented ones but I answer those ideas. I will not try to answer all of the reviews.
Also, Attention Readers as I want to say something to you guy. I am going to rewrite some of my early chapters as some of them were quite bad and short which I feel that not many people would read my story that much now but I would still write the next chapter too at the same time.
Time to answer some of your questions.
King 0f Powers: Thank you for said that, I was angry that every time in Fate series and fanfic stories explain a Naïve Newcomer (Sometimes it is Shirou) about the Holy Grail and each class definition which is just few word for each one. They don't explain properly and would always glorify Knight classes mostly likely Saber class as best of the seven classes and the strongest of the Servants which Saber class are overhype to the point of exaggerated information that is not clearly true at all. Saber class is just good with a sword and nothing else. I am also sick of seeing a person pick the same class, over and over . I mean, it's one of the blind spots the mages who made the ritual have, like the stupid preference for knight classes and hate on caster and assassin for no reason. They just can't see anything new as being worthwhile.
Caster and Assassin are the most useful of all and most appreciates having as your Servents, they are not the flashy or the stronger in stats but if you know how to use them correctly then it gets the job much quickly than other classes (Lancer, Saber, and Rider) who rely on their Noble Phantasms which are simply brute force to use as the last resort. People who play MMORPG's, Role Playing Games and Fate Grand Order game would know what I mean, which how many time those Caster and Assassin class save your ass from a total party kill.
Yes, you guess Paracelsus and one of the Hassan are next in the next chapter which I am going to summon three servants at once to get to the main event as quickly as possible. Oh about Paracelsus, He seems to regrets and disgusted for betraying Misaya and her father after he does it so he is not much of assholes as he wants to be your friend.
MaxHD2490 chapter 19 . Jun 24: Look up the above of King of Powers for that is your answer. Her weapons for firearms would be modified with an extremely strong version of Reinforcement and other Noble Phantasm that the Bullets traveling faster than the speed of sound are unable to surpass the speed of a Servant's weapon, but their rate of fire leaves them only able to parry and power of the bullets becomes unimaginably destructive compared to normal, allowing stray bullets to tear large holes in cement and concentrated fire to reduce a small truck into an unrecognizable mess of iron chips in a matter of moments. Also, the melee weapons well other than combat knives are stronger to cut man in half. Mages are typically very good at magical combat, but inexperienced in things like C-4 and sniper rifles
Darebear the bear: The Executor, Templar, Monster and Magical Girl, what the hell do those classes do anyway? they do not give any Class skills at all. I do know that Beast, Gunner, Gatekeeper, Alter Ego and Temptress are actually Extra Classes.
Sun Drake: I would not say this again, I would summon one of the Hassan as I hate how fate fanfic stories are almost or alway treat The Hashashin with little to no respect for fate series like there is little focus on which there is 6 or 7 of them in the group. Which why do people keep change the Assassin class that is supposed to be Hassan-i-Sabbah for someone else which I hate people who keep doing that for someone who is much of half-assed Assassins which are not actually Assassin. The purpose of an Assassin is a killer who works things behind the shadows, not openly. The Nasuverse version of them is in dire need of more characterization so in this story I am going to show how real danger they are supposed to be and how they are supposed to be used as an Assassin class.
I would summon little Jack but not as the first assassin to be in the chapter so stop ask it.
Kai Hyoudo chapter 19 . May 31: I have no idea why you want me to add OC from crimson dragon emperor fanfic into my story.
Xylade: Lancelot, Gilles de Rais, and Caligula only recognize (identical stranger) face not the voice. The Command Seals does not do anything for her, it just gives Her authority over the Servants, it does not give her absolute orders of unconditional obedience that can either restrain or reinforce the action of a Servant. The Berserkers class would listen to her as they are more mechanical Servant but if they go out of control there is nothing that she can do to stop them but wait for them to calm down
Galer: Yes, Queen's blade is actually good, you just have to get used to seeing boobs and asses in your face. The strange part is that the later episodes were much better received than the first couple, which boosted its popularity in a more positive way. Despite the Fanservice overload, the story unfolds in a rather interesting direction.
Feriyen: Every time I summon a Servent(s), I alway explain who those Hero(es) are what history behind it properly and no I do not copy and paste from Fate Wik for each one that we have already know it.
Billy Reb: A modern hero as a servant, you're an idea is promising but there's a problem with your suggestion choice of historical figures. Some of them are too recent to have any good in stats and would have a weak Noble Phantasm (Mata Hari) or none at all. Some of the modern heroes can overcome this problem like Nikola Tesla who his scientific contributions changing human society on an incredibly large scale have turned him into a focal point of human history, which grants him significant power for someone so recent or Thomas Alva Edison who developed many devices that greatly influenced life around the world which his Noble Phantasm WFD's main power that is an audiovisual media's massive impact in bringing the truths of the world to the people, its light cancels the Mystery that gives Servants most of their power.
The reason why the Holy Grail can't summon modern heroes as they need to be legendary as in Chuck Norris-type legendary and I know that Nasu has said that people in recent history have a harder if not impossible time to get in the Throne of Heroes because of modern weaponry (the legend would some time go to the weapon, not the person)
But still, I would take Simo Hayha as a modern hero for now because many people consider him to be one of the ultimate examples of a Badass in real life, having racked up more confirmed kills than any other sniper in history No matter what, "The White Death" will always be remembered as the greatest sniper in human history. Also in Fanfiction web, I have seen two Fate stories that have Simo Hayha in it which are Nerve Damage by CrossyCross(Dead Fic now)and Fate White Death by Forzarismo (not been updated sine Mar 6)
I also make sure I am not making too many OC servants to add into my story which would be are around four of five as I have seen too many fanfic writers make an OC character with an OC servant and rarely do they turn out good, I'm not sure why, to be honest most of the time they tend to be all over the place and anything about them can be pulled out of a hat (if you understand what I'm saying)
MaxHD2490 chapter 19 . May 30: Benjamin and Flanna don't know about Ruler and Avenger Servant classes as they got the information from the book they were reading so they not heard about those two classes.
MaxHD2490 chapter 19 . May 31: While Modern and World wars heroes might be lacking in physical powers, but tend to reach awesomeness parity through sheer effectiveness and sheer determination. Modern heroes are also weak against Magus or Caster class as modern Servants who may not have a Magic Resistance skill if they do have one then lower ranked version of it (Rank E or D) but it not going to help that much when there are a lot of spells attack them all at once. But compare to past and Legend Heroes, the Modern or World wars heroes are easy to understand orders much better as they painfully aware that they are weakest heroes.
Modern and World wars heroes also get along with each other far better than all the past and Legend Heroes , especially the ones with higher moral standards who have ideals that clash too much to have a functioning bond that doesn't require bantering.
And about Artemis and Orion or Medusa's sisters Stheno and Euryale. Artemis jacking Orion's summon and One could make an argument for Stheno and Euryale, due to their limited monstrosity, not really being divine.
Hyperomegasonic26: A confrontation between Jeanne Alter against Ciel and Riesbyfe would be welcome but there would be no one on one duel just gang up on them. Also, Caster classes are a real dangerous opponent against humans and modern Magi like Medea if serious, she can give Touko or even Aoko Aozaki a very difficult fight that was all there in the wiki of Fate series in Medea page. Her high-speed divine language skill means her spells take effect immediately, and no magus can replicate it as the language of the gods is lost in the present day.
If Medea fights against Ciel and Riesbyfe, it would be near- one side battle but Ciel and Riesbyfe were given cooperation from the Association and the Church, allowing them to get their hands on what lies within the deepest parts of the Evocationary area of the Association and sends the Seventh Scripture in Ciel then the battle could have a different outcome. But good luck with that, the Magi of the Association rarely share the result of their own researchers between each other would never give secrets stuff to Ciel and Riesbyfe who are part of Church.
About Arcueid and Tohno Shiki, there is an issue to that as both are not part of Association or the Holy Church, they have no reason to go to the United States of America.
Tohno Shiki's Mystic Eyes cause great damage to his own body and mind if he uses them too much, he also doesn't want to kill his opponent in Kagetsu Tohya and can't use them for 95% of the story anyway. Also, can he kill a servant? not when they have a physical body but while he sees their lines of death, he isn't strong enough that he can maintain a head-on fight against a servant and actually cut the lines. Tohno Shiki would lose in the battle of attrition which his Mystic Eyes would soon kill him then the servant.
Arcueid at 30% power is around that of four Servants, she will very likely win when only faced with one Servant-level opponent in this state, but even with her power, she would still potentially be overwhelmed when faced with two opponents of that level. she has bad compatibility against those like Gilgamesh. Servants utilize Noble Phantasms, while she utilizes her backup, leading to differences depending on affinity. She simple-is-best fighter and an all rounder with high chances in most fights, but doesn't go well with those of high versatility. if she wounded then she's recovering incredibly slowly, also she is vampiric so she would weak against Holy weapon.
Queen Medb as a welcome villain well not really as when you summon her, she's not actively malicious and more like a pampered poodle who was used to be spoiled by everyone. She would be mostly nice to the protagonist(Benjamin), Cu Alter or try to get normal Cúchulainn in her pant. Other people, not so much.
Solomon as the Big Bad of this plot with plans to eliminate all humanity and the world, he would be a lawful good character here because really, Solomon wants to wipe out humanity because they don't know how to self-rez? Really? At least give him some twisted ideals if you're going to keep him lawful good Nasu. For shame. His Personality would almost like Gilgamesh.
Scáthach and Merlin can be summoned in this story as there are some spoilers involving Arturia that already show you don't have to die to be a Servant.
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Detective Augustus and Detective Valerio was studying the crime scene as the perimeter was taped off with barricade tape in order to keep only those necessary on site. The coroner and the paramedics were clearing up the dead bodies and talked to some civilians. More than a dozen officers were walking around the crime scene, several taking pictures or bagging things such as weapons(wands and spell staffs), and books as evidence (yes some of the Magus wield those kinds of weapons like Tokiomi Tohsaka in Fate Zero). Each of them was careful not to contaminate anything that might incriminate some of the witnesses. Let's say it was not pretty at all.
There were nine corpses that were everywhere in the open field with blood spilled around the place and guts on bloody grass. There was even one body whose ribcage was shattered up by a bolt of an arrow which was glued to the tree. From the study of the arrow, it seemed that the arrow was pulled back to an inhuman strength to its limits and impacted him in his chest with so much force into it that he died when his skull shattered into pieces when he crashed into the tree.
"Man, look at that poor bastard," Detective Augustus mumbled to himself as Detective Valerio flipped through his small notebook a couple more times.
"Yeah, I know right," Valerio nodded as he looked down at his notebook and read what he wrote. "I don't know which one of those Archer people shot him, but from the look of it, this man was shot very brutally," he replied.
I wonder what the hell caused that man to do something that pissed them off so much," Augustus asked himself inside of his mind. He knew he was right about them, held back for some reason due to the museum. "From the looks of this crime scene, this is what it looks like when they are not holding back and go for the kill."
"If you think that is ruthless my friend," Valerio pointed at a man cut in half from the top to the bottom, which spilled out of something you do not want to say. "That, my friend, is possibly the most horrifying you can get without throwing up. And with enough strength to split the man in one slice very easily, that shows they are on a whole different level."
"The fact that that the blade went right through the man with greater ease than a hot knife through butter, oh god, what was boss thinking when he wanted to hunt them down, even with backups," Augustus said worriedly as he didn't want to deal with them face to face. "We are going to need a bigger army to deal with them. No, we need every army we have in the US to fight them."
"Every army in the US?" Valerio said as he pulled a pocket-handkerchief out of his pants pocket and wiped the sweat from his eyes. "More like the entire army in the world to deal with them," he replied back as he gazed at another corpse with slash lines across his chest and a hole in a broken heart that killed him quickly with a sword.
"Alright, my friend," said Augustus, "So what have we got?"
Detective Valerio flipped through his small notebook once more and read one of notebook pages, "From what reports I have gotten, most of the witnesses said that they have no idea how they got here. Every one of them was just going about their normal lives at their homes or outside doing their businesses and pretty soon their minds were blurred for a moment. When they cleared their minds, they were surrounded by dead bodies with the Archer class, whoever they were."
"Let me guess, they were kidnapped?" Augustus asked as he knew that each city in New Jersey has reported violent crimes per 1,000 residents, like Camden, a city with an estimated population of around 80,000 people, is by far the most violent place. "Because kidnapping is one of the rarest cases to be with, as I see more cases about Murders, Robbery, and Burglary than kidnapping ones."
"You are right about that, they were tied up with rope and some of them were chained together, but to kidnap a group of civilians without anyone noticing the act is mysterious," Valerio answered. "And the strangest of all is that they were told that a bunch of Satan-worshiping cults was trying to sacrifice them, which caused those Archer classes to save them."
"Anything else the suspects said?" Augustus asked, hoping that they had left some evidence.
"Well, from what the witnesses said, one of the suspects, the Greek archer, was carrying relics in his hands while he was talking to them before leaving the scene." Valerio then put away his notebook. "Did you see their occult stuff?"
"Yeah, this is way more strange now," Augustus said as he pulled out a leather bound book from his pocket. "Found this from one of the corpses, spent some time reading through the thing." He gave the book to Valerio who read the title "Heaven's Feel."
Valerio took the book and opened it, reading it slowly. "The wish-granting Holy Grail, summoning Heroic Spirits into the present world and commanding them, a battle to the death?" He frowned a bit at what he read. "What is this, some kind of fantasy novel or tabletop role-playing game?"
"I would think that, but from the way the notebook said it, there is a history of this Heaven's Feel and functions about the system. It was so odd, but there was some sort of logic in this book," Augustus sighed as he couldn't convey the words to him as the book even detailed the eccentric occultist stuff that made the magic sound like science. A lot of it was still inside of his head, but he could actually get a vague grasp of it. "Did you find out who those victims were? Because you don't just kidnap a bunch of people off the street and try to sacrifice them."
"Well, judging from their clothes, we can suppose that they are foreigners," Valerio answered as he kneeled down to see one of the body bags, which was on the floor, and unzipped it to show Augustus. "From the way their skin, clothes, and hair are, we have to analyze if they maybe are from Great Britain, France, or Germany. But the only question is..."
"Why are they here? For what reason?" Augustus inquired. "There are no ID cards or any records of them," Valerio made a note if any of them used the airports or ships. They've got to be using their names somewhere there."
"Got it," Valerio answered as he wrote in his notebook as a reminder. "So what happened to Sergeant Jeffrey? Did he go somewhere?"
"He is off to visit an army base to see an old friend from the army to get permission to search some military documents," Augustus answered as he reached into his pocket, pulled out a cigarette and lit it. "He is looking for information the old-fashioned way and he hopes that his old friend has some intelligence about who they are."
"Any ideas who they are?" Valerio asked his friend as he watched a dozen officers just do their work. "They just came out from the middle of nowhere and shocked the entire world with their unknown super powers."
"I am not even sure what we are dealing with, but I have read some of the articles during car trips making speculation about them as a super soldier, reaching as extra-terrestrial life forms," Augustus replied, feeling unsure about the articles' reliability of their information. "But I think all of the articles are horse shit and must be on drugs or something."
"Maybe they are watching too much Men in Black on movie night," Valerio jokingly replied as to not try to snicker. "Or perhaps that radio host guy made up a lot of shit lies."
"You mean that Alex person who keeps shouting about New Jersey turning into a police state, and outright saying we, the cops, are tools of foreign governments or the secretive power elite," Augustus crossed his arms and rolled his eyes. "Like I fucking care about that paranoid schizophrenic Texan radio host."
"We're practically in the middle of scratching the surface. First, those super people and then foreign occult practitioners with some strange things happening," he groaned and pinched the bridge of his nose. It was a loud sigh, like the one that conveyed extreme frustration and confusion. "Not only that, but I also have to deal with the media."
"Was it fun?" Valerio asked, which caused him to roll his eyes again. "Possibly not, right?"
"You bet, it was just as much of a blast as you can remember," Augustus sighed as he went to the food table and grabbed a piece of French bread with tomatoes and mozzarella on the top. "Not every day you get cornered by reporters and get a microphone shoved in your face, barraging you with loaded of questions and trying to make you look bad in front of the world news."
Then he chewed his complimentary snacks while he and Valerio stood off to the side of the crime scene, observing.
"Augustus, I've been meaning to ask this, but do we have any ideas what is going here?" Valerio questioned. "Or in this state, I mean?"
Augustus stopped chewing his food and gave him the look. "You'll have to be more specific than that my friend."
"There are super humans with terrific abilities that can level up a building and foreigners who have come here for some purpose, which those Archer classes exterminated them in extremely ruthless ways," Valerio said uneasily. "I don't need to mention the strange-looking ship, but I probably should. All of that crazy stuff is enough to run a season of an old American show and no one knows what is going on."
"To be honest, I don't know either. And an entire night wouldn't be enough to tell what has happened here in a way that made sense to us," Augustus said with steel in his voice as he wanted to know too and he won't turn his head the other way, pretending it didn't happen. "Because we are going to find out who's behind this and we will have them arrested, even if we have to spend our life searching for evidence."
"Do you think those people are from a foreign government or a secret service?" Valerio speculated as he tried to find some two cents into it. "From the way they are dressing, I think they are from an uncommon place." Most of the dead bodies were wearing black business suits attire and some of them were wearing hoods with it (Yes, the hunters or Enforcers wear those attire in Fate Apocrypha manga go check it out)
"Whoever they are, I bet to find out who they are." Augustus was not a kind of person who was easily scared. If those foreigners clearly had a strong hold over the police and the government to arrive here, then we would rat them out," he said with fire in his eyes. I have a feeling that there will be more of them coming here and searching for something."
"Are they looking for the group that was on the World News?" Valerio said, putting the pieces together. "My guess is that those foreigners did something to piss off those super people to kill them and take something from them."
"You are maybe right, Valerio. It is conceivable that someone authorized those foreigners to be here to perhaps hunt the group down due to particular circumstances." He slowly put his own pieces together. "I certainly agree that some things are kept secret from everyone."
"So you think that those foreign occult practitioners are suspected to be involved in a conspiracy of a huge magnitude?" Valerio asked as he wiped his sweat that was forming on his brow. "And that some kind of secret organization is recruiting foreigners, occult practitioners to do their work?"
"I don't believe that occult stuff, some magic crap that I cannot begin to understand, but I do believe those foreigners would not hesitate to kill us and keep secret from being revealed," Augustus said in a serious voice. A gun and badge won't even hold them back, he was certain that this powerful secret organization would silence everyone who had the slightest knowledge about them and would go after him and his friend too.
"There's something more to this than just a skirmisher battle here," he narrowed his eyes. "We can find out the reasons when we bring one of them in."
A police walkie-talkie that was in his pocket blared out, "Inspector?" The detective picked it up and brought it up to his ear.
"Yes?" the detective answered as he listened to what the walkie-talkie was saying before placing it back into his pocket, and then he turned his head toward his friend.
"What was that?" Valerio asked.
"We have two more victims. A citizen found them in an alley. Both have been shot with arrows," Augustus said as both of them began walking forward to their car and got in. "And the strangest of all is that the two bodies were found out in the alley close by the crowded streets, just a few hours ago."
"So two more foreigners were found in an alley which was near crowded streets," Valerio said as he wrote it down in his notebook. "Something tells me that whoever those foreigners are, they are being too fishy for the police find them. It's like they want us to find them easily."
"Anyway, we're wasting time. Let's hope that the next crime scene gives us more clues as to what is going on here," Augustus said as he started the car. "Or tell us who they are."
Sergeant Jeffrey was searching the internet for the chain of heaven. He has found nothing at all, not even a hint or clue as to what the title should mean to him.
He even had to visit an army base to see an old friend from the army to get permission to search some military documents. Jeffrey told his army friend about his experience at the museum and about those super people close up. Jeffrey didn't have the permission to look up the secret military documents, but his army friend could search for him. He went to a nearby local library to search through some military books and still nothing at all.
He asked a librarian to check if there was another military book for him to look in, which the librarian ended up searching for him. He got a call from his army friend saying he found nothing about the ship, the weapons or any information on them.
"Just great," Jeffrey cursed as he turned the next page and still found nothing on them. "I am beginning to feel that I am wasting my time here."
He grabbed his coffee cup and took a sip from it. Hours and hours of searching everything from military technology to weapons engineering.
"I'd assume that the library could give me a clue about them, but it's of no help," he sighed to himself as he put the most recent book away to the side.
Unfortunately, all of his efforts only yielded nothing at all.
"Well, I shouldn't have expected to be able to discern who they are just by looking alone anyway," Jeffrey said to himself. "But I don't think that I know much more than when I first saw them."
From what Jeffrey had learned from his experience at the museum, he was able to deduce that Archer of Black was Greek. His archaic style of dress was cloth in leather armor that gave him the appearance of a Greek bowman and what appeared to be a teacher from the way he spoke.
However, the fact that he has hair that looks naturally grass green made things extremely difficult for him to pinpoint any likely person from his database. Also, barely knowing his combat abilities only added to the already difficult task.
"And this already difficult task has two more classes that I need to know who they are," Jeffrey mused as he put a hand to his chin, recollecting all of his knowledge.
The other one, the Archer of Red, is a female who was in her teenage years and wearing a verdant green dress-like, which is really troublesome as she has what appears to be ears and the tail of a lion, as well as cat-like paws. He was not sure how to find a similar person close to that description and those telltale signs. Maybe she was born with some kind of physical defect? But from the actions from the museum video, she looks like she hasn't suffered greatly from any physical functioning, mobility, dexterity or stamina so he could possibly be wrong.
And the last one was the most challenging of all. Lancer, who was so artificial with a doll-like appearance and beauty that was too perfect, which is hard for Jeffrey to tell if Lancer is a man or woman at first glance. And the fact that Lancer is only wearing a plain tunic does not look valuable in any way. There are many types of tunics in the world, making this even harder to find out what Lancer is and what location this person is from.
"A waste of time, but I suppose I can at least have a little bit more information when I leave this place," Jeffrey muttered to himself as he concluded his review. "Perhaps I'll have better luck uncovering more later. When I get to find them, the more the better."
Just then, a trolling old magician himself decided to give this man a bone for a good reason.
The librarian returned back with another military book for Jeffrey to research any information about the group.
"Mr. Jeffrey, here is the book that you wanted," the Librarian said as she gave the military book to Jeffrey, who was looking intently at the book she had in her hands. "Are you ok, Sir? You look exhausted."
"Oh uh oops. Sorry, I was just concentrating on something," Jeffrey said as he rubbed his eyes. "Yes, I am ok, just worn out from my experience at the museum and meeting those super people."
"Are you talking about the museum incident that happened days ago?" the Librarian asked as she adjusted her glasses.
"Well yes, I happen to actually go face to face with them," Jeffrey answered as he took another sip of his coffee cup. "They didn't harm me or anything because they didn't have any time with me at all."
"Oh really? Tell me what they looked like," the librarian asked as she took a chair in front of him while he explained about the event.
Jeffrey began to describe his role in the museum incident, meeting face to face with Lancer, Archer of Black and Red, then the Leader of the group. He then described each of them with good details of their physique and their weapons while the Librarian concentrated on every word he said.
"Do you know, Jeffrey, that this Lancer person reminds me of a character from the Epic of Gilgamesh book," the Librarian said in deep thought, which caused Jeffrey to raise his eyebrows.
"What do you mean?" he asked with a puzzled face. "What kind of character do you mean that caused you to compare him to someone from a book?"
" Enkidu, a character from an epic poem that was from ancient Mesopotamia," the Librarian answered as she gave him the book. "It dates back to the Third Dynasty of Ur (Roughly about 2100 BC) and it is often regarded as the earliest surviving great work of literature. "
"You should read about it," the Librarian said as she got off of her chair and went back to her work while Jeffrey read the book.
After a few hour of reading the book, Jeffrey begins to realize that Enkidu has almost the same description as Lancer because Enkidu was said to be formed from clay and saliva by Aruru, the goddess of creation, to get rid Gilgamesh of his arrogance as Enkidu engages him in a wrestling match as a test of strength which cause them to because fast friends. They go on heroic adventures together, including the slaying of Humbaba, the guardian of the Cedar Forest and the Bull of Heaven. The gods later strike Enkidu than Gilgamesh with a fatal disease for killing Humbaba and the Bull of Heaven.
Enkidu's death fills Gilgamesh with violent grief and an incredible fear of death. Gilgamesh spends the rest of the poem searching for immortality, but his repeated failures force him to accept that death is part of living.
"Wait a min, Lancer has almost the exact same characteristics as Enkidu like how Lancer can spring into the air that defined gravity and land on the ship and how he looked like a mannequin," Jeffrey said in a surprised voice as he tried to place the piece together. "Is this even possible?"
"Unless, he is Enkidu himself?" He thought to himself. "No, that's impossible. This is a coincidence. A big coincidence."
"There's no way Lancer could be a lump of clay brought to life by gods. It sounds ridiculous, is it?" Special forces, Super soldiers, and Aliens are the only things he can speculation about who they are but a character from an epic story is a little bit too much for him to believe that
However the title that Lancer give him a clue, The Chain of Heaven which Enkidu was called by that because he is meant to kill, restrain or control Gilgamesh's arrogance or ego. So this couldn't be a coincidence, right?
Also, could be that other classes have stories based on them then that mean they are a character from myth too. He picks up his stuff and asks the Librarian that he can borrow the book which she said yes.
When Jeffrey got into his car and sat down, he quickly writes his notebook about Lancer and Enkidu as possibly the same person which he wasn't sure about this but it better than no information at all.
"Mythological figures, huh I never thought I'd be in this situation," Jeffrey said as he turns on the engine of his car and drives it. "Let hope that information I have aren't true because this going to be very hard to deal with this."
If this group happen to be heroes from myths and legends then Jeffrey is going to retirement after this shit is over as he can not handle this anymore.
Flanna was less dressed than she would like to be.
Now as for the whole being less than clothed. She had a black sports bra while Chiron was behind her back, put his hand on her spine, checking the tattooed marking engraved into her very skin as the great sage was an expert on healing that he taught Asclepius in the art of medicine who later became the god of medicine.
After that incident in the basement, Flanna started to not feeling very well as she felt that her stamina was been drained in multiple directions as she looks tired and barely conscious which Benjamin have to spoon feed her when she felt hungry.
"So what do you found inside of my body?" Flanna said as she huffed in pain. "Is there something wrong with it?"
Everytime Chiron touches one of the tattoos markings in part of her body which causes her to be in pain.
"It seems that you aren't suffering from a self-inflicted death via prana drain." Chiron answer as wipe some of the blood off of her back.
"A What now?" Flanna asked with her eyes brows rise as she flinches in pain every time he washes the blood off.
"Oh, I am sorry about that statement." Chiron scratch his hair and put some oil on her back. "I near forget that you are new here about the Servant and Master terms."
"You see when an individual, usually a magus summon a Servant from the summoning ritual, the person is granted a total of three Command Seals when forming a contract with one Servant, to providing magical energy for their Servant, the magus would need to use their Magic Circuit connected magical energy to make it easily for the Servant to get energy from their Master," Chiron answer and wrap bandages around her back. "It is possible for a Master to contract with as many Servants as he/she wish, but even if the Master is first rate and excellent Magi having too many Servants is hazardous to the health of a Master due to magical energy consumption."
"So what is the limit of having more than one servant?" Flanna asked, want to know as much as possible about this Master and Servant stuff. "Without been drain to death?"
"The limit would be around two servants with a first rate Master but three if it is possible to depend on the type of servant or classes he/she has summoned," Chiron said as he tightens the bandages. "But if two of them are fighting on the battlefield at the same time then the master have to split his/her magical power by the number of Servants which divided the energy thus making each servant weaker instead of directed to one of them."
"So am I running a risk of dying of extremely high rate of mana consumption for each servant on the battlefield?" Flanna asked concern as she put the piece together about what is going on with her body and thought that she probably wouldn't be able to move even a single finger while supporting them. "Then this is troublesome for me."
"That is not an issue Flanna, you are not going to die of magical energy consumption as you see that we are resurrected for a second life so we have our own supply of energy and we can maintain a certain amount of energy if we are fighting or use our Noble Phantasms," Chiron said as he was done with the bandages. "With the Holy Grail here, we can resupply with a full of energy every time we come here without the need to draining you to death." "My Independent Action skill at Rank A allow me to only need backup from the Holy Grail when using Noble Phantasms of great magical energy consumption." He then put away all of the supply back in the fist aid kit and wash his hand with a towel
"Can you tell about the command seals that are gluing to my skin?" Flanna said, put her black long-sleeved shirt back on. "The Holy Grail didn't just put those fancy tattoo on me for no reason."
"For some reason, I can sense absolute authority from you but at the same time I can sense that Benjamin is my Master," Chiron said as he was in deep thought. "Also I can feel a small amount of prana from you but this magical energy is not from your body, it like it comes from the Holy Grail itself."
"So you tell me that the Holy Grail has transferred Manas to my body and transfer it again to you?" Flanna questioningly. "Like a tanker truck using a hose to pump gasoline into gas station storage and then using fueling nozzle to many different cars, right?"
"Something like that but that is all I can understand about the tattoos markings," Chiron answer the question as best as possible to her. "The best answer about that tattoos would need a Caster class to help you understand and study deeply about it."
Thank, Chiron I would try to get a Caster servant to solve this issue," Flanna said as she got up from her chair and stretch her arms around her body. "By the way, what do you think about our new servants a few moments ago?" She asked as she thought about each of new servant. "Can we trust them?"
That Black Knight makes her very nervous just been around him as whoever this Knight is, he has been doing nothing but sits in dark corner talks to himself in loud or quiet voice from his huge helmet-muffled vocalizations.
The only word she'll ever get out of him was just.
"Ar...th...ur"
"Arthuuurr"
"AAAARRRRTTTHHUUURRR!"
Everyone can still hear that voice from the basement even from upstair of the house
Whoever this Arthur is, Flanna knows that of the Black Knight ever lays his eyes on this person, he would go berserk and gets more enraged which he would target this Arthur person that cause him to have tunnel vision and thus get blindsided whenever this Arthur is around.
Benjamin tried to talk with the Black Knight in a hope of getting to know about him but all he can get from him was just mindless scream and nonsensical rambles about that Arthur person. Benjamin also trying to take the helmet off and see what he looks like underneath it but unfortunately, it looked like the helmet is gluing to the black armor of his which cause Benjamin to give up take it off.
Chiron put his thought into his mind before give his answer to her. "I could say yes we can trust them for now but that Black Knight it is best to leave him alone for now." "From what I can tell about him is that he is born with numerous abilities and aptitudes rather than called a high-spec person."
"This Berserker is quite overpowered as I said," He response. "Completely overwhelming that I feel that I would lose against him in a short time."
"Whoever he is, let hope that this Berserker can follow an order as any other servants," Flanna said to remember the Black Knight kneel before her for a good reason. "And I am going to make sure he would listen to me and my brother."
"So about the last one what do you think about that other Knight?" She asked. "And her stats too?" Flanna was kind surprise that this other Black Knight who was a female, by the way, is mounted on a black horse. That cause Flanna to think female Knight was Rider class but to her shock, the female was a Lancer class on a black horse.
"The female Knight is quite powerful too, her stats is mostly Rank A or plus while her Agility and Luck are C and D Rank," Chiron answer as he crosses his arms. "And her Noble Phantasm which is one, by the way, is A++ Rank."
"An another servant with A++ Rank of Noble Phantasm but still why do I get the feel that lance is actually more powerful than then it look," Flanna said in worry. "And what about her Personal skills and Class skills?"
"Riding Rank A, Charisma Rank E, Mana Burst Rank A+, Blessings from the End of the World Rank A and Magic Resistance Rank B." Chiron answer as he took a quickly looks at draconic Black Knight a few moments ago at the basement.
"Mana Burst and End of the World?" Flanna asked. "What are those skills do anyway?"
"Mana Burst is a skill that infusing one's weapons and body with magical energy and instantly expelling it like jet blast and Blessings from the End of the World is something that I do not know what it is," Chiron answer. "I would actually know what it is if the draconic Knight tells us her true name." From the moments, the female Knight was summoned in this world she has refused to say her true identity when Benjamin requested her name but she did give him her nickname as a hint "The Storm King" which both of them never heard a servant with that kind of nickname before
"It is best to let her keep her name a secret for now," Flanna wave her hand as she doesn't need to know everyone stat's and Noble Phantasms every time they summon to this world as long they are following an order. "I respect people's privacy and as long it doesn't make a problem to us."
"And for the Black Knight, I am going to try to found out who he is."
Why?"
"Am I still here?"
"Alive again."
The Berserker unknown as the Black Knight sat in the dark corner, ponder in deep thought.
He remembers about his life, his love, his downfall and some part of the Holy Grail War he had fought in it.
Days from before his onset of madness.
He was originally born and raised in France, he had heard rumors of the King of Britain. He believed the King of Knights in Britain was pure nonsense which he had grown tired of people comparing him to this "King Arthur", and so he had ventured to England in the midst of battle to see the king for himself.
Which he met the King as soon as he landed in Britain in the midst of battle. She shone on that battlefield like a star fallen to Earth, and her Sword of Promised Victory shone with the light of a true King among Knights. The awe-inspiring figure of that small knight upon horseback was burned into his memory, it carved a deep impression of the King when he saw the sight of a young boy riding on his horse, gallantly swinging her sword in a horde of invaders.
So he begins to fought side by side with the King in that battle, and for his accomplishments, he was granted the honor of speaking with her as a friend and invited to Camelot as a guest. Before long, he began desiring a seat on the Round Table. The oath this voice swore called to his mind the oath he once made to the fair King of England, after witnessing her in battle.
In that moment, France's greatest knight became England's greatest knight, and he swore his fealty to King Arthur Pendragon and for many a year lived as the first among King Arthur's Round Table.
For the most part, his life had been a good one. He had shared meat and mead with the greatest of kings and served alongside his liege-lord for many years. He had held the highest seat of honor next to the king, in the greatest court ever known to England. First among the Knights of the Round Table, and the Queen's Knight. His loyalty had never been questioned by the king.
Many famous exploits of his, had been as an idol among knights. He had lived chivalrously and was an unrivaled warrior. All the women of his time wanted him, and all the knights wanted to be him. And the entire time, He had maintained a modest demeanor as a knight should have. Raised by the Fae to be the King's most noble Servant, he stood at the height of honor, the epitome of excellence. Famed for his renown, loved for his chivalry.
But an affair between his greatest knight and the queen was discovered. Before that one, single tragedy had been set in motion by Agravain and the dissenters. Then, in that moment of passion and madness, fallen. Damned by his own desires, damned to be remembered as the adulterer, the traitor. A single action, fueled by something as innocuous as love, led to the ruin of Camelot, the devastation of a Dream.
The memories all came back to the Black Knight as his consciousness returned once more. The condemnation free look of his king, who refused to even blame him or acknowledge any wrong he had done, only gave him a sad, sad smile. The look of pure rage on his old friend's face was etched permanently into Black Knight's mind, a seething glare that reflected the burning desire for revenge for his brothers who never ever forgave him. And Guinevere who her beautiful countenance has become more ragged by the day with sorrow, and wrinkles of dilemma were etched into the ends of her brows, never stared at him the same way ever again.
All of these memories and images replayed themselves again and again in his mind, and that only escape available to him that he can end his torment is to drown himself in madness and give into the blackest shadows of the human heart.
His blade the once Holy sword that would never be damaged, made to be wielded only by a perfect knight, is now stained by the blood of his fellow knights he had to slaughter due his rescue of Guinevere would forever be tainted by the sin of betrayal, there is no need to praise his name for the Black Knight is alienated, the ridiculed, the despised. And there is no need to envy his body for he is the shadow under the radiance of Heroes the champions of men and warriors of peerless skill.
A birthed of the darkness of glorious legend, this Black Knight would forever be serving as a negative symbol of the Arthurian legend. The greatest and the worst of all knights
His legend could never be undone, but he could have wished to do things differently. He could put a stop to Agravain before his wicked deeds were done. Maybe he could fly to Camlann and join by King Arthur's side, disregarding the wrath of Gawain. He could even try to save his beloved without killing his brethren knights. There were any number of alternatives his path could have taken, with but one thing he could not yield: his pure and sincere love for Guinevere.
What he can remember of his memories of the Fourth Holy Grail War, he recalls various flashes of memory from that time, but they are usually obscured, and he experiences them more like the foggy recall of restless dreams after a long sleep. The images may be blurry, and the voices distorted. Overall, the most vivid memories he possesses of that war are of his initial summoning, a battle with a Golden Knight who called himself a king of heroes, a chariot pulled by divine bulls, soaring across the sky in a ferocious dogfight, and above all else he remembers the times he met his king on the field of battle.
The rage had consumed him like a black fire in his heart, and in the end, he was victorious over even the King of Knights. At least, he would have been but his Master died, and the Black Knight fell. In a redoubled attack and in that moment, Arturia slew her best knight one desperate attack, the weight of the world was pulled from his shoulders. Through dying by his king's sword, he had faced her judgment and he was allowed to experience sanity and clarity once more, in his dying moments. The raging storm of Mad Enhancement dissolved from his mind and allowed the blue skies and a faint rainbow, to grace his psyche
He confessed his sins to his king, mentioned that all he ever sought was her judgment. In the end, even as a Berserker, he was happy for he got to die as a knight should, in his king's arms. It had been what he had wanted all along.
Still, the question is why is he here again?
Could this be a third chance at life for redemption?
"Maybe?"
Thankful the Holy Grail who feeding his mind with what he needed to know what happen in the fourth war which he is now aware that he received the judgment he so long desired from his king, and he already knew he had her forgiveness since she never blamed him from the start.
"Could my King be here too?" the Black Knight thought, intends to search out his king convinced that King Arturia would not lose the next battle that followed his own execution at her hands. He intends to loyally serve his king once more and fight by her side. His only wish now is to forever fight in service to his king.
"Berserker?" a female voice cause him to look up to see his new Master with a stoic face, have maroon hair and dark red eyes. "Can you understand me?" She asked as she waves one of tattooed marking engraved into her hands in front of him try to get his attention.
Wait, he has two masters to serve? The Black Knight thought in surprise as he senses absolute authority from her but at the same time, he can sense that boy after few min ago was his Master too. He nodded his head as it makes little different as he slowly rising, as much as he loathed it. It merely did not feel right, standing so close to his Master, looking down on her.
The maroon haired woman began to speak, and his mind ceased wandering, abruptly focusing on her, and nothing else. She introduced herself. Flanna and her rank. These names meant nothing to Black Knight, and yet he knew that she signified a woman of military standing, one to be respected.
Then Flanna asked the Black Knight his name. "Who is the one that the Holy Grail had summoned back to this world? Who is your true identity, Berserker?"
He remained silent for a pregnant second. In all of his travels, he had never told anyone his name.
Knight of the Cart. The Red Knight. The Black Knight. The White Knight. They were all titles that he had gone by. He did not like taking the credit for anything, and yet, he still became known as the greatest knight of the world. This blade of his was his staff of office.
Still, his anonymity would avail him little. As she told that there is no Holy Grail war at all but a shadow war against the Magus, not one where he would be known to the world once more. The hellish glow of the Black Knight's visor while still quite vibrant in its intensity, was no longer a reddish hue but now a deep, blue light with knightly azure.
Flanna waits for an answer from the Black Knight who remained still as stone for a long moment before his hands reached up to his helmet, unclasping it. Slowly, he removed it, revealing a flaming skull (The nightmare that the Kariya is having in Fate/Zero Season 2 Episode 20) which cause Flanna to step back out from that horror face.
"Is that your real face, Berserker?" Flanna question as she tries to see past through the flaming skull but is unable to discern his face. "Or is it still part of your Noble Phantasm?"
The black fog painting the black knight's entire body began to swirl and contract. Within the rushing mist, the Black Knight's true face was finally revealed his true colors. The black helmet vanished in a sudden flare of the shadows and slowly flowed forth into his right hand, revealing himself and his own Noble Phantasm full for the first.
The blade under the light was like the murky water of the lake as it shone with a dense black ebony plate, it has a finely-textured and has a very smooth finish when polished, making it valuable as weapon but it's spiky with crisscrossing chains on the hilt, black to match his madness and generally looks pretty evil like a demonic sword of a mad warrior. The very appearance seems menacing and twisted like his black armor
She now scans the feature of the newly unmasked Black Knight. His feature is a distinctly Caucasian, though there's this misty outline that gives the impression that the man in front of him is a bit ghastlier than usual, almost like a spirit. His blackened face, the visage of a living dead man who has lost everything to a curse, his mouth full of pointed teeth like a shark as a result of the Mad Enhancement, a face that made him as gaunt and pallid as a phantom, his eyes that should have filled with hatred only give eyes filled with sadness and shame that any tears they could shed would never make up for the blood that once spilt in the name of love.
The pale man kneeled down before Flanna stab the blade into the concrete floor and with a voice of reverence
"I – am -Sir Launcelot du Lake, King Ban's son of Benwick, and knight of the Round Table, Master."
Sir Lancelot du Lac known as Knight of the Lake, the slayer of dragons, the undefeated in duels, and committee of adulterous affair though that last one can be left out for now. He was the son of King Ban of Benwick and Queen Elaine and one of the Knights of the Round Table in the Arthurian legend. He was also the father of Galahad an illegitimate son by Elaine of Corbenic knows as The Grail Maiden or Grail Bearer who love him but does not return her love which may have died of a broken heart because Launcelot did not return her love and affection. He never failed in gentleness, courtesy, or courage. Launcelot was also a knight who was very willing to serve others.
He typically features as King Arthur's greatest companion, the lord of Joyous Gard and the greatest swordsman and jouster of the age until his adultery with Queen Guinevere is discovered, causing a civil war exploited by Mordred which brings about the end of Arthur's kingdom. There were many sources that tell us of the love shared toward each other of Lancelot and Queen Guinevere. There may be some truth to this since Lancelot was a favorite of the Queen's, and he rescued her from the stake on two different occasions. It was at one of these rescues that Lancelot mistakenly killed many Knights, which led to the disbandment of the Round Table. After the Queen repented to an abbey as a nun, Lancelot lived the rest of his life as a hermit in penitence.
The love between Lancelot and Guinevere remains one of the most common and most often reinterpreted elements of the Arthurian story. It is a frequent and enduring theme in poetry, drama, fiction, and film. Lancelot's life and adventures have been featured in several medieval romances, often with conflicting background stories and chains of events.
Flanna's reaction to his true name is quite shocked for a well known Knight in Arthurian legend to be a maddened Berserker, a savage hound, and not as a noble Saber was nothing short of sacrilegious. She stares at the blade Arondight, the sword promised to only the greatest of knights. Arondight, tainted by its master in a fit of rage, the holy luster stifled by a demonic black.
Lancelot. The greatest knight the world had ever seen. But her vision and the bestial visage that stood before her had been too far apart for her mind to make the connection.
"What cause him to because this? Lancelot, a Berserker class. A mere shadow next to the shining example of what knight should have been." Flanna thought as she still has the same stunned expression.
But first, she needs to know what his stats, and his Noble Phantasms as the maroon haired woman grabs her notebook from her pocket and a pen to write on.
"Hmm.." Flanna studied the knight's feature for one more time before continuing again, "It's probably a bit selfish of me, but it would be nice if you can tell me your Noble Phantasms and your stats, Lancelot." She paused a bit before continuing "Yes, I know that you don't want to be known for other servants but it best to tell what can you do and don't worry I can keep your secret for a while."
Which Lancelot nodded his head a little as he was never that proud of his own deeds, he did not perform his feats of arms for the sake of glory or recognition, but because it was what he does
Berserker: Sir Lancelot, a well known Knight from Arthurian legend
Attributes and Stats
With his Mad Boost power on
Strength:A, Endurance:A, Agility:A+, Mana:C, Luck:B, N. Phantasm:A
With his Mad Boost power off
Strength:B, Endurance:B, Agility:B, Mana:C, Luck:B, N. Phantasm:A
Class Skills
Mad Enhancement: Rank C, Boost up all parameters except Luck and Mana by one rank, but in exchange, he can no longer think and speak properly and succumbs to the soul-crushing despair of his guilt. To ease that guilt, his Mad Enhancement sends him into a demonic, seething rage that is especially kindled by the little he can understand: things important to him, or people he once knew, depending on who they are and how he knew them.
Personal skills
Eternal Arms Mastership: Rank A+, At this level, one's mastership of combat arts has reached the point of being said to be unrivaled in one's era. By complete merging of mind, body and technique, it is possible to make use of full fighting skills even when under the influence of any sort of mental hindrance. In other words, this guy was so skilled that his techniques were engraved into his instincts, meaning that while he can't do any special tactics, his body knows exactly what to do to hurt you the most of all and which body part is your weak point.
Protection of the Faeries: Rank A+, Lancelot receives a rank up in his Luck parameter, when positioned on a "battlefield", any place that feats of arms are possible including assassination attempts, one-on-one duels, or ambush attempts. Which is the reason why his luck is so high for a Berserker class?
Magic Resistance: Rank E but is a D-Rank when he is not in Mad Enhancement. His low Magic Resistance is granted by a ring amulet to the same degree of an amulet that rejects magical energy on a Single-Action spells, but his madness drops the ability a rank. It can only somewhat reduce damage from magecraft instead of nullify it.
Noble Phantasms
For Someone's Glory: Not For One's Own Glory: Rank B+ for an unknown reason. This Noble phantasm causes him to merely obscures his identity, stats and abilities, shrouding him in a black haze that obscures his body and prevents others from gauging his abilities. With his full rationality, it could make him appear to be other people entirely but only human shape which he can alter the appearance of his clothes, armor, weapons, and body in order to do this, or can simply conceal the details of their appearance from observers.
Type: Anti-Unit
Range and Number of Targets: zero and one person
Knight of Honor: A Knight Does Not Die with Empty Hands: Rank A++ It is a passive ability that allows Lancelot to grabs hold of anything that can be even remotely conceptualized as a weapon like piece of scrap iron with his gauntlets and he recognizes that he wishes to wield it, it instantly gains the property of becoming his Noble Phantasm with a D rank weapon. If he takes another Servant's Noble Phantasm of a superior rank, its quality will be maintained while under Berserker's control. He auto-masters anything that is conceptually recognized as a weapon that he picks up, any weapon he picks up becomes a Noble Phantasm and is capable of killing a Servant. Swords, spears, axes, sub-machine guns, Gatling guns, fighter jets, shields, armor, and lampposts. It doesn't matter his can be called endless of everything. If it's an object he's got his hands on and can be considered a weapon, he's a master at using it.
Type: Anti-Unit
Range and Number of Targets: one range and targets 30 people
Arondight: The Unfading Light of the Lake: Rank A++ It is Lancelot's true Noble Phantasm, which seals For Someone's Glory and Knight of Honor once it is drawn. It increases all of his parameters by one rank and the success rate of luck are doubled, boost all of his already high stats and makes him an absolute monster which raising him from fearsome to borderline broken. Due to the legend in which Lancelot slew a dragon, Arondight deals additional damage to Heroic Spirits who have a dragon attribute or dragon
This Black sword isn't just better, it makes him better too, look at this stats below with Mad Boost power on and Arondight is drawn
Strength:A+, Endurance:A+, Agility:A++, Mana:B, Luck:A+, N. Phantasm:A
Personality: From what I can tell about him is that he is accurately portrayed as knight of true character and honor, who from an early age was considered perfect in his chivalry. Raised by the Fae in the ways of Chivalry, Lancelot was taught to respect and admire women. It is a lesson that has remained with him through the years. Also, he has a dedicated somber nature, seems to suffer a lot from his past so it is best to not talk about his past so much.
STRENGTHS: Lancelot holds the title of the World's Greatest Knight for a reason. He is an absolute monster in all forms of close quarters combat and the most effective hand to hand fighter, capable of using any weapon. He is unrelenting, blessed by the Fae even in his madness, the ultimate fighter. He's pretty much custom-tailored to annihilate Servants in single combat. Add that he can become an instant expert due a combination of Eternal Arms Mastership and Knight of Honor with literally anything he gets his hands on, and you have one broken Servant. He's powerful enough already, but when he takes out his true sword all of his already extremely high stats go up yet another rank because of that nothing or anyone can hit him would slow him down
Additionally, his Noble Phantasms can be used regardless of Madness, because they are mostly passive effects.
WEAKNESSES: As most of his Phantasms are constantly active, he incurs a massive prana drain through the roof (Which I fear he would drain me to the death), one that excludes all but the most powerful of masters from effectively using him. Furthermore, he has no activatable Phantasms, and by extension, not much in the way of ranged assault, unless he happens to have a master who deals in guns which I happen to have it pretty soon in the future. Also, his main Noble Phantasm, Arondight it multiplies his magical energy upkeep many times and the downside being that it seals both of the aforementioned Noble Phantasms while it's activated.
Levels of Reliability Rating: In regards about his Masters, he is loyal to both of me and Benjamin as well, as a knight should be. He addresses me and my brother as his superiors in regards to his own station as a knight and acknowledges them both as Masters, that he owes a debt to for calling him forth and allowing him to be resurrected for a three chance. His loyalty to me and Benjamin is second only to his commitment towards his king.
An Issue with Order?: Surprisingly for a Knight from the Knights of the Round Table, he has no issue with an order that is a cowardly strategy, it maybe has something to do with him been a Black Knight or have no pride as Knight no more
Flanna looks at the stat who she has written right now.
"The Best Knight of the Round Table,exemplary of Chivalry, he who has never lost a single duel." Flanna once retreated to her own mind with the latest revelation from her servant. "While his massive prana drain is quite a problem but thank god that Holy Grail is here to resupply servants a full of energy with their own supply of energy." "But still, I am still worried that he drain more then I can let give him."
She then notices that Lancelot was still had that same sadness and shame face which cause her to stroke his head
"There, there."
Flanna said as she began to caress on Lancelot's forehead. "I don't know what happen about your past in full detail but please do not punish yourself." "As your Master, I am to order you, Lancelot of the Lake, to calm your temper and do not yield to the despair within your heart." I have no need for a blind monster, but the services of Camelot's most skilled knight."
"Yes, Master," Lancelot kept his gaze lowered, but he understood the situation entirely; the maroon haired woman was his prana supply, while the boy after her was the contract holder, his expression having shamed to a determination face which he put his helmet back on his head. "I understand."
"I respond to your summons, in accordance with the Holy Grail - as Servant Berserker. I ask of you..." The Black knight paused, before her. "Allow me to ask you - are you, my real Master?"
Which Flanna responded as to inform Berserker about the issue with Command Spells and Master stuff. "I transferred Manas from the Holy Grail itself to my body and transfer it again to you but you should be careful of drain more energy from me because if you do drain a lot from me then I can actually die from it." However, the young boy after me was my brother but he lacks the experience as a Master or general as I suppose that term better, I would be acting as your Master, and you are to give every indication that you are following an order from me not my brother yet."
"This is an order from your substitute Master. Your primary duties will be to protect and defend my brother Benjamin from any enemies as a VIP (a very important person)." Flanna instructs him. "Do I make myself clear?"
"As you command, Master," Lancelot began, his voice as gentle and warm. "I shall serve him as his sword and shield, by your order."
As those two were talking to each other, a Draconic knight was view on them. "So, Lancelot is here, he has turned from a Greater Knight in the world to something like this." "Lancelot who was the subject of people's admiration was reduced to this state as a mad warrior." "Is it my fault that I died on that hill that all the lives were scattered because of my action?"
"Wait..which one was my memories?" The Draconic knight holds her head, try to remember her life. "I was dreaming for a long time." She has memories of all the events but she was very sure those are not her own memories. While rest of the Servants are seen as ghosts, this version servant get a special mention. This Servant got merged with legends which were connected to her after her death, the way her Noble Phantasms were created. The legend that made up her Servant image is not the King who pulled the sword from the stone and was gifted Excalibur by the Lady of the Lake, but the legend that the King is a participant of the Wild Hunt after death.
The Wild Hunt are a group of spectral, nocturnal horde with the accouterments of hunting, horses, and hounds in mad pursuit across the skies or along the ground, or just above it. The group were recorded in folklore all throughout ancient, medieval, and even early modern Europe but was especially concentrated in the Germanic lands of northern Europe. In Scandinavia, it was called Oskoreia (Terrifying Ride),or Odensjakt (Odin's Hunt). In Middle High German, it was called Wuotanes Her (Odin's Army) and in modern German Wütende Heer, (Furious/Inspired Army) or Wilde Jagd (Wild Hunt).
The group thought to presage an omen of war and signifies the coming of war or tragedy, or at best to look upon the riders is perilous. It is also considered an omen of death, as the riders are the souls of the dead themselves. People encountering the Hunt might also be abducted to the underworld or the fairy kingdom. In some instances, it was also believed that people's spirits could be pulled away during their sleep to join the cavalcade. A girl who saw Wild Edric's Ride was warned by her father to put her apron over her head to avoid the sight. The abductions or disappearances affiliated with the Wild Hunt are most common during or before times of war.
There are many legends of the Hunt, the hunters may be an unidentified lost soul, a deity or spirit of either gender, or may be a historical or legendary figure like Theodoric the Great, the Danish king Valdemar Atterdag, the Welsh psychopomp Gwyn ap Nudd or the Germanic Woden (or other reflections of the same god, such as Alemannic Wuodan in Wuotis Heer ("Wuodan's Host") of Central Switzerland, Swabia etc.) but group mentions a leader, notable among them is that the cavalcade is led by Odin, the god of the dead, inspiration, ecstatic trance, battle frenzy, knowledge, the ruling class, and creative and intellectual pursuits.
"No it doesn't matter, Master, servant, I don't care as long it is an order that let me crush my enemies into pieces," She said to herself before look at the Holy Grail itself. "Who ever thought about what sleeps within the grail?" She then left the basement room does not notice that Holy Grail was briefly flashing Blue and Yellow and Good to Red and Black and Evil before turning back to it normal color.
Shirou, Rin, and Luvia arrived outside of El-Melloi II's office. Luvia stepped forward to knock on the door.
"Who is it?" Lord El-Melloi II said through the door as he was sit down in his chair, reading his one of the pages in his file.
"It's Luviagelita Edelfelt with Shirou Emiya and Rin Tohsaka," Luvia replied back.
"Oh good and just right in time." Lord El-Melloi II said as he put his note away into the desk drawer. "Come in."
Luvia, Shirou, and Rin entered the office to see him with a cool and calm face who stays collected in almost any situation. Even when something is surprising to him, he doesn't let it show on his face; almost nothing can disrupt his expression of cool annoyance.
"Welcome, please take a seat." Lord El-Melloi II greeted as his eyes who are sharp and precise gaze at them.
Luvia, Shirou, and Rin took their seats and wait for him to speak about the main stuff.
"I assume that you've heard the news." Lord El-Melloi II said as his face begin to bore a tremendously sour expression.
"Yes." Shirou and Rin replied.
"You brought us here because of the Holy Grail war, isn't that right?" Rin implied as she knows about Lord El-Melloi II who was a highly distinguished professor and have risen quickly to rank even on the other side of the world she did the best to keep track with the Clock Tower. She didn't have much of details but knew that he had survived the Fourth Holy Grail war. Not only that he was a veteran of the war and a lord so he knows some information of what is happen right now.
"Correct. I'll get straight to the point since we cannot waste time. We're in a crisis that could plunge the world into chaos. Since you two have experienced the previous Holy Grail war; I ask you two, will please assist us?" Lord El-Melloi II implored.
Shirou and Rin looked at each other before giving an answer.
"We will gladly help you," Shirou said with steel fire in his eyes. "I cannot let get this person do whatever he wants." "I don't care if it's a wish-granting device or a path to the Root; that Holy Grail is not nothing's worth for people to killing each other over."
"That's right, I will fight to win the war and eliminate this Holy Grail," Rin said with a serious face. "Still, we would like to know who restored the Holy Grail?"
"I don't know, in fact, no one knows about it until now. This was an unexpected turn of events. I didn't expect the Holy Grail would resurface this early or any to be one. The Mage's Association and the Holy Church was not aware of the Holy Grail war until the news broadcast. Furthermore, we didn't expect the servants to commit robbery on a museum in a public place while revealing the existence of magecraft to the whole world." Lord El-Melloi II explained with some information he has.
"Why would the servants do something like this?" Shirou wondered as Servants who are summoned into this world would try to avoid been seen by public people as part of the rule of Holy Grail War and would be implanted by Holy Grail for a basic level of knowledge from about the time period into which they are summoned to decrease of culture shock(The feeling of disorientation experienced by someone who is suddenly subjected to an unfamiliar culture, way of life, or set of attitudes) to prevents and making a scene by the servants.
As for example, a Servant from Ancient Greece being freaked out by cars or cellphones or have to spent a long time explain all this stuff to them which have to delay the war for a bit to get the Servant to get used to it.
"Isn't it obvious? There were collecting catalysts to summon more servants." Rin explained. "But this doesn't make any sense. Why need to collect more catalyst. The Holy Grail war has seven classes, one for each servant. Meaning that the Holy Grail can only summon seven servants. Eight if you include the Avenger class." The Holy Grail would need requires sixty years in order to amass enough mana to summon seven or eight (if is very lucky to get some leftover for one more) Servants.
"You are correct, but according to the news broadcast. The servants that appeared were: Lancer, Caster, Rider and two Archers." Lord El-Melloi II stated.
"Two Archers? How's that possible?" Rin exclaimed as during the Third War, two Edelfelt summoned a servant of the Saber class, so there were two Sabers to watch out in that War but that because of the Ore Scales trait of the Edelfelt bloodline. The close thing for multiple Servants of the same Class was during the Fourth War was The Hundred-Faced Hassan who allowed his Noble Phantasm to manifest in up to eighty separate bodies but each individual is only a shadow of the whole
"I don't know how, but it appears that this new restored Holy Grail is powerful enough to summon more servants of the same class," Lord El-Melloi II explained. "A much greatest scale of the war."
"Then this isn't an ordinary Holy Grail war, we must be careful," Shirou said as he looked bewildered as seven was already troublesome but having to fight more servants to be able to win, that was a monstrosity, how can anyone make sense in such chaos battle. Shirou was already imagining the scale of destruction that would happen the moment they would arrive in the city to see a battle between many servants of the strongest beings humanity had to offer.
"Indeed." Lord El-Melloi II said as he eyed Shirou at his disbelief at the number of servants that would be summoned in this war. "Which is why I have sent some of the enforcers to America to investigate what is going on there, but I haven't heard from them in a while. I have already fear they might've been killed. Which is why we must act now."
"So what's our plan?" Shirou asked as he was eager to participate the war as soon as possible.
"The four of us would go to America and take advantage of prana-riched soil to summon our servants and stop whoever is in this conflict." Lord El-Melloi II explained. "This war will be different than the one you have fought in."
"Wait what! Luvia is going with us?" Rin exclaimed, shocked that Luvia is going with them. "Why do you need her to come with us?"
"Is there a problem with her?" Lord El-Melloi II asked as his eyebrows rise to that question
"I don't think it's a good idea to bring Luvia with us. She has never experienced the Holy Grail war. She'll just get in the way." Rin said, list some of half ass excuses why Luvia should not come with them.
"What! Are you implying that I'm weak?" Luvia defended. "I can defend myself just fine. In fact, you don't want me to be on this team because you don't want another girl getting in the way of your alone time with Shirou if you get my meaning."
Shirou and Rin blushed at Luvia's statement. Back in Fifth Holy Grail war, Rin has to make a contract with Shirou to give him mana in the most inopportune times. Also, Shirou couldn't tell his bespectacled monk in training that he also lost his virgin to two other women too due that time.
"Why you little b***!" Rin insulted.
"Enough!" Lord El-Melloi II shouted, getting Luvia and Rin's attention. "Now's not the time for bickering. Rin, the reason that Luviagelita is coming with us is because she's the only Magus capable enough to deal this kind of situation and the only Magus available at this time. Now, I see that you two don't get along. I suggest that you two set aside your differences because failure is not an option. Do I make myself clear?" He asked as many other Magus were not available for him to use right. The Mage's Association has more manpower which it is an advantage over the Holy Church but Vice Director of the Mage's Association Barthomeloi Lorelei was using most of the manpower to guard the vaults and workshops prevent anyone from stealing any important stuff.
He also heard Freelancer magus or bounty hunters were get contracts by many Magus families which cause the Mage's Association who actually wanted to hire more Magus to unable to get more. It looks like Lady luck is not on their side for a while.
"Yes Lord El-Melloi II." Rin and Luvia said in unison.
"Good. We will be leaving to America in 30 minutes." Lord El-Melloi II said as he opens one of the desk drawers to reveal a tattered remain of a king's cloak in a box which was a reminder and token of a dear friend.
"Lord El-Melloi II, do you have any catalyst we can use?" Shirou asked as many relics of long ago have become increasingly harder to find as numerous of it were getting taken or stealing from a left and right for the upcoming Holy Grail War.
"I have some that we can use. It should be enough for all of you." Lord El-Melloi II said as he lighted another cigar. During his time on Clock Tower, he was rewarded with some catalysts when he restores the El-Melloi house that was on the verge of ruin. While he doesn't need more catalyst as he alway has one but still it wouldn't be good to leave a nice relics behind. In fact, he didn't think he would need some of them so soon. "I have some preparations to make so I expect you to be at the front entrance."
He then hands out three catalysts which are a piece of a Spartan shield, an Indian amulet and a wooden piece of a bow to each one. "Here our holy relics that we would be using as the catalyst for our summoning ritual once we get there."
Rin was beamed up by this, she would actually be given an actual object from the Age of Heroes. She half thought that she would have to go buy one with her money which isn't that much now. Oh, by the way, every time Luvia and Rin end up fighting each other with their bare hands or lot of Jewel Magecraft at each other which cause Luvia to accusing Rin to be stingy because Rin used fewer jewels against her. Rin may not be poor, but she is nowhere near Luvia's level of wealthiness.
"Alright now, you three has to go right now," Lord El-Melloi II said as he watches three teenagers leaving to pack up their stuff while puffing his cigarette. He then sighs to himself, he knew that the Clock Tower or the Mage's Association would likely try to make him fight for them but he wouldn't allow that to happen. He had his own mission, this wasn't about honor or glory; this time, he would make sure something like this would not occur.
He looked at the catalyst in his hand, the strip of cloth from Rider's cape, know that Iskander wouldn't recognize him as Servants are mere copies of the Heroic Spirits contained in the Throne of Heroes. But that wouldn't stop him as he would dive right into the den of madness once again with his king who would not remember him at all. But still, if his liege wishes to fight, to win and conquer then his king's wishes were be his wishes too.
He smiled at his thought, march again to war. "But this time, I'm much more experienced, deadly, and capable that I was before now."
So, a lot of things are going on here in this chapter. The police characters are on the move and are try to understand what is going here as there is little evidence to give them hints but there is a sign that they are close to the answer. Meanwhile, Flanna is trying to understand about Master and the Command Spells that was on her body while she found out that it just give her authority over the Servants, it does not give her absolute orders of unconditional obedience that can either restrain or reinforce the action of a Servant. She was providing magical energy to a Servant that is not from her but from the Holy Grail. She then talks to Lancelot who she manage see to see who was he and able to get him to calm down while they are been watch by Lancer Alter who is Artoria but at the same time she is not. Meanwhile, Shirou, Rin, and Luvia were had a meeting with Lord El-Melloi II as they now work together now and are make plan to summon their servants in America's prana-riched soil
Time to answer some of the Guest reviews.
Guest chapter 19 . May 30 How about the spear of Longinus for Ben (is the spear that stabbed the son of god): That spear could be good but a lot of Christians people and servants would be pissed off or upset that Benjamin uses that spear as a weapon and which Holy Church Executors would go after him instead while calling him a heretic for hold that Holy spear.
Guest chapter 19 . May 30 Why did Lancelot kneel before Flanna is it because she is his true master or is it because she reminds him of Guinevere: A little bit of both as Command Seals is supposed to make a deep bond connection with each other. Like how many Servants' attachment toward Benjamin and Flanna because they're similar or to the Servants' beloved. For example, Cú Chulainn mentioned that Flanna's maroon hair reminds him of Scathach.
There are Servants who are little crazy with the bond like Caligula who make a comment that Flanna is beautiful like Nero or Agrippina the Younger (Fourth wife of Emperor Claudius). Phantom of the Opera emotionally attached to the Flanna while makes a comment that her voice sounds just like Christine ( The chorus girl, who becomes the object of obsession, passion and love for the mysterious Phantom of the Opera.) Kiyohime who sees Benjamin is the reincarnation of Anchin (The handsome monk who was the love interest of Kiyohime)
Guest chapter 19 . May 30 Will Flanna get paired up with a servant: I am not sure about that because I am not good with Romance but I can try to do that.
Guest chapter 19 . May 30 What kind armor will it be will be like medieval or Swat armor: Mostly like a Swat Armor with some medieval part on it.
Guest chapter 19 . May 30 Don't listen to Blockme he's being an idiot I don't mind flanna Benjamin does need someone who trusts and who better than his own family: I know right, said a lot of negative stuff without said any positive about my chapter. I was get rid of the cliche where the main character has to hide something danger or something that should not be seen by other people from his/her friend and family which they simply refuse to see anything too strange or see all other sorts of supernatural happenings often happen right in front of people's faces yet saying some excuse before going back what they are doing. Also, Benjamin lacks the experience of what to do so he needs some help from his sister.
Guest chapter 19 . May 30 Could put the Golem Jewish folklore has a servant maybe berserker: I would think about it because it like a good servant to add into my story
Guest chapter 19 . May 31 what was that spirit was it the true grail spirit or is it a servant: Angra Mainyu and no The Holy Grail is not corrupted well maybe a little bit.
Guest chapter 19 . May 31 Will Benjamin, Flanna, and the Servants participate in the battle in Tokyo when the crossover with Gate begins: Yes , the group would participate in the Battle in Tokyo, I also try to make the Battle a bit long and not a curb-stomp battle where you send your soldiers with modern warfare experience and weapons against pre-medieval armies. I also try to change the Special Region Empire to been a little bit more combat pragmatist and would learn many lessons from the battle of Tokyo and Alnus hill as without the resources of their vessel (the Allied nation's army) they can't afford to just throw away lives and equipment.
The reason why I want to change and improve the Special Region Empire as too many time do people and most anime make a really badass hero but a real generic villain or vice versa. So I need to make them a credible threat and not a group to be underestimated instead of been steamroll
So epic heroes need epic villains to make the story even better with epic last villain stand like the Star Wars the Force Awakens movie who made the villain (The First Order) who has learn from their mistakes, improved on the Empire's formula in a number of ways and would not fly into a rage and kill a messenger who brings them bad news as the First Order's numbers are much smaller than the Empire's which is why I love that Movie as make a better villains who can use their head then the Movie is much better than before. Just make a good hero but the very bad villain in the story would a stupid movie or book to watch or read is not worth it.
Guest chapter 19 . May 31 Can the caster servant recreate mystic codes like Kayneths because that could be very useful: Yes they can create mystic codes as a difference in quality between Mystic Codes forged by Caster class and those of normal Magi is like heaven and earth. But to recreate a mystic code of Kayneths's Volumen Hydrargyrum is that they need to catch and study it.
Guest chapter 19 . Jun 3 How about different crossover with Elfen Lied and Tokyo Ghoul KanekixLucy: I would not make a crossover with those two as I have little knowledge about both of them
Guest chapter 19 . Jun 4 Make a Highschool DXD crossover: I do not need to make a Highschool DXD crossover as there is some good Highschool DXD crossover
Guest chapter 19 . May 31 how about a karambit knife and a United Cutlery M48 Ops Combat Bowie Knife for flanna first one can be good for quick attacks: Those could be good one for the first knife for Flanna to use but last one maybe not good knife to use
Guest chapter 19 . Jun 26 Can you have Jesus be summoned and maybe as Ruler: Well, technically he is a god in Christianity and a prophet in Jewish and Islamic him as Ruler class, I don't think so as Ruler class is self-defense mechanism of the Greater Grail. Also, he's not a fighter at all. So Nope.
Guest chapter 19 . Jun 25 For Flanna vs Kiritsugu what would happen if it was the same battlefield where he fought Kirei: Then she has to rely on the equipment that she has brought to evening the odds against Kiritsugu. If you have better equipment, you can handily defeat anybody for an example being the armed guy fighting an unarmed opponent. Even a two-bit thug wildly flailing a knife or pole has a large unskilled, but the strong advantage over the unarmed guy, never mind the ones who have enough experience to know how to use their weapons well. In contrast, it takes a lot of skill to take down an armed opponent while unarmed.
Guest chapter 19 . Jun 1 In your analysis of a fight between Flanna and Kiritsugu and seeing the fights Kiritsugu had like against Kayneth and kirei I would think Flanna has the edge because she has more combat experience for being in the army and also being younger and better health and also Kiritsugu time alter was countered when he fought kirei When he adjusted his distance and also without Avalon he almost died when kirei punched him plus origin bullet effects only work on a person own mana if Flanna has a reinforcement magic from a caster origin bullet won't harm her because it's not her magic what do you think: Flanna has fought in one war which is the Gulf War so she lacks the experience of veteran soldier compares to Kiritsugu who has experienced a number of countless missions and he appears in the conflicts of various areas, and always when the conflict is the most heated, at the point of destruction. But Flanna has better equipment than him which most of his Combat tactics and tricks are not going to work on her who have better armor and better weapon which look up above of Guest chapter 19 . Jun 25 to explain better.
About the Origin Bullet, it would be bad for a living being to be hit by it but this bullet poses an even graver threat to Magi in particular. There is a little outside of magecraft capable of blocking it unless they are protected by the military-grade armor of an armored vehicle which Flanna's armor have better materials and it is a Noble Phantasms of C to E rank. Most of Kiritsugu's opponents who are orthodox Magus do not expect to have to deal with human weaponry which he was so used to fight that type of enemy but fight against someone who is not Magi but a soldier is going to be quite hard to say.
Guest chapter 19 . May 31 Interesting chapter and since Kiritsugu is gonna be summoned how about he helps Flanna with strategy against the magus since he is the magus killer and maybe have him train them to counter the magus: Yes, He would help her with strategy against the magus train them because the Holy Grail is here which he going to make sure no Magus is going to get their hand on it. He would least listen if Flanna has a good plan
Guest chapter 19 . Jun 1 How about the armor the Saiyans and the Friezas forces wear for Benjamin its pretty tuff and you could have servants make the armor and get the materials: There is an issue with that Armor as it said the Battle Armors is made of an unknown material, which is said to be stretchy, yet very durable. But I have no idea where can you get that material to make something close to that.
Guest chapter 19 . Jun 2 In Grand Order Zhuge Liang was Waver so will it still be him or will you use a different appearance like Dynasty Warriors : The one from Dynasty Warriors because it makes no sense for Zhuge Liang to possessed Lord El-Melloi II body as there are many temples and shrines built to commemorate Zhuge Liang. Some of the most famous ones include the Temple of the Marquis of Wu in Chengdu and the Temple of the Marquis of Wu in Baidicheng.
Guest chapter 19 . Jun 4 Will you summon Simo Hakya(as an assassin)? I know its 2001 but technically you can summon him from the future since, in Throne of Heroes, the concept of time doesn't exist. Besides, I wanna see Flannas reaction on him being summoned: Yes I would summon him as Assassin, but Archer could work too. Hiding in the forests of Finland in freezing temperatures would give him good ranks in Presence Concealment. He could have Battle Continuation, for having been shot in the face with a friggin ANTI TANK RIFLE and lived to kill the guy who shot him. Perhaps some variation of Vlad's "Demonic Defender of the State" where he establishes a territory to defend and his parameters go through the room there, like how he spent basically all his time in the forests killing invading Russian forces. And his NP, I do not think he would need one
Guest chapter 19 . Jun 7 What will happen when Irisviel and Kiritsugu are summoned and when the war is over will they stay at bens house, will Illya be living with them: Irisviel and Kiritsugu would stay in Benjamin's house for while due War against Association and the Church and while it is over then they can go back to Emiya residence with Shirou Emiya and Illya as one happy family. Also, Taiga Fujimura would soon know who they are.
Guest chapter 19 . Jun 21 There's a weapon which is complicated to master but can be useful called rope dart(scorpions spear) which is deadly and might help against other Magus from afar: Benjamin would not use that rope dart as he is not much of assassin person and might kill himself use it but Flanna and Assassin class can use it like Hassan and Kiritsugu can use it much better. How it function would be like the Assassin's Creed series
Guest chapter 19 . Jun 21 How about a naginata or a trident with an enchantment for Benjamin: The Naginates would work with Benjamin and Flanna as Naginatas were often used by foot soldiers to create space on the battlefield. They have several situational advantages over a sword. Their reach was longer, allowing the wielder to keep out of reach of his opponent. The long shaft offered it more leverage in comparison to the hilt of the katana, enabling the naginata to cut more efficiently. The weight of the weapon gave power to strikes and cuts, even though the weight of the weapon is usually thought of as a disadvantage. The weight at the end of the shaft and the shaft itself can be used both offensively and defensively.
And trident could work but it uses as fishing usually have barbed tines which trap the speared fish firmly. While it's also a weapon that never seemed to actually show up on any battlefields - the closest polearm I can think of would be a spetum. It did show up as a gladiatorial weapon, but it was never a real instrument of war because it's effectiveness was limited. Historically the three-pronged tridents were more often seen initially as pitchforks as an improvised weapon of farmers in case of bandits or wildlife attacks. These were later adapted into more martial weaponry for simple town folk resulting in war forks, tiger forks, and tridents. You never really see their later adaptations used in any formal combat, though.
The tridents strength comes from its extra points (widening its threat range), the ability to couple nicely with the net, and lastly the extra prongs helped as a catch guard if you were really good/lucky enough. That being said it was not implemented in war tactics because the trident is a heavier spear, and wouldn't couple well with an equally hefty shield. Due to its extra prongs, especially in typical roman formation, you run the risk of getting tied up with another soldiers weapon or getting your trident snagged during a strike. This made the trident an ideal dueling weapon but not a practical weapon of war.
Guest chapter 19 . Jun 26 How about a suit based on Resident Evil soldiers like Hunk for Benjamin: It would be more like Swat armor but still have the color of the Resident Evil soldiers. He would wear it later in the future.
Guest chapter 19 . Jun 25 Can you have Asako the female assassin from Fate Zero(yes that's her real name) in Bens harem: No because it makes no sense as when you increase their Bond level, Asako who serves as the frontman said you have gained their loyalty as a Servant and are honored to serve you. So no I would not put her in Ben harem
Guest chapter 19 . Jun 24 For the Queens Blade crossover could be like that world is in trouble so Justeaze Einzbern and Zelretch chooses a person to be the master of all the servants but they have real bodies and are sent to that world together and they meet Leana and Risty (after they escape the castle and the battle with Melone) they team up and travel together to save the world: That idea of your is too ridiculous and you add too many steps to it. I make the story with simple or small steps for people understand it.
Guest chapter 19 . Jun 23 How about a side story where Benjamin is summoned in his battle suit as a servant in the Fourth or Fifth grail war, his noble phantasm could be his family (his sister, wife, and child), his weapons and the ability to get weapons from other defeated servants because of his bond with them: I am not making a side story about Benjamin as servant who fight in the Fourth or Fifth grail war.
Guest chapter 19 . Jun 4 For original servant designs how about Thor be based on the marvel movie, Raiden based on mk9 Ares god of war, asura asuras wrath and some based on persona series designs: Thor could be and I would think about persona series designs but the rest are just looking for trouble so no on those Gods. And Kratos no chance for that to happen as that guy hate gods so much that he would go kill them and everyone else.
Guest chapter 19 . Jun 2 Here is an idea: if Hans Christian Andersen ever uses his noble phantasm "Märchen Meines Lebens" on servants make them actually go through ascension, what do you say?: The Caster class would take some of the Mana that is from the Holy Grail and pour it into the summoning ritual and this gets quite hard to explain it to you
Guest chapter 19 . Jun 24 Can you add Kirei Kotomine as a servant but make him be a good guy like for example the good part of him is was separated when the grail got destroyed in the fourth war and now there's kirei based on fate zero who is the good person who is Caren's father: Unless they made him into a servant like they did with Kiritsugu then yes
Guest chapter 19 . Jun 10 How about the statue of liberty has an NP for a president like similar to what happen in the movie Ghostbusters 2: I have no idea what are you said and sound too ridiculous
Guest chapter 19 . Jun 7 how about servants based on urban legends like the kuchisake onna, girl from the gap, eight feet tall, snake woman, satoru-kun, herne the hunter: No, they can not be a Servants as they would be more like an existence closer to that of wraiths if you go to Fate wiki and search up Spirits and scroll down to the Wraith then that is it look like.
Guest chapter 19 . Jun 3 How about game x overseas with fate stay night like final fantasy x, romancing saga minstrel song, Persona, and dragon quest 8: Final fantasy X could be a good crossover with it and Persona too. Romancing saga minstrel song and dragon quest 8, I never heard of those game before.
Guest chapter 19 . Jun 2 It would be interesting for Diarmuid to fall in love with flanna because she might remind him of Gráinne and Sola and they have a similar hair color to Flanna but make Flanks immune to his curse: He still remembers the Fourth Holy Grail War unless he has amnesia due to the mental trauma caused by the various events of the Holy Grail War, only remembering certain key parts that gloss over his misery. Make Flanna immune to his curse that would be a good idea but Diarmuid to fall in love with her that is a huge issue with that
Guest chapter 19 . May 31 Hey what do you think about Benjamin summoning Adam and Eve as servants: Eve would be an Assassin class, she would have a different name which is Hawwah a Hebrew word meaning living one or source of life and Adam is that Golem Keter Malkuth(Caster of Black owner) Noble Phantasm who is an exceedingly large golem of fifteen meters in height.
Guest chapter 19 . Jun 24 Here's some firearms for Flanna amt hardballer 45 long slide pistol, riot gun, a minigun, grenades(explosive, incendiary, flash), Colt Model 1903 Pocket Hammerless, m4 carbine, Winchester Model 1897: Thank for those firearms as some of them can bring in gun store and some of them cannot buy for civilian so Flanna have to go buy in a black market but a minigun you know that gun is real hard to use with both hand
Guest chapter 19 . May 31 How about giving Ben Sai as a secondary weapon because they are a versatile and can snap a sword maybe give them an enchantment to the last longer: Sure I take it for Benjamin as a secondary weapon good at stopping a sword
Guest chapter 19 . May 31 since your going to give benjamin a lighter armor how about the suit red hood uses in under the red hood (you can make materials for it just make the design the same) because it's a type of suit that won't restrain him and is not heavy and I have seen in the movie he fights with no problem: Benjamin would wear the suit red hood first which from Batman Arkham Knight and also have distinct camouflage pattern to it that grants a tactical advantage then he wear Swat armor later.
For pairings for Ben: Atlanta, Tamamo no mae, Frankenstein, and Nero: Atlanta nope she swore to be chaste but she is better with Achilles. Tamamo no mae, well obvious. Frankenstein, if Benjamin succeeds in making her open her heart. Nero, I am not sure that she want to have a worthy companion who was faithful to her or want to be loved with every ounce of her being.
For pairings for Flanna: Diarmuid, Emiya(archer) and Cu Chulainn (lancer normal): All of them would be a ship teases
Guest chapter 19 . May 31 Neat chapter and will Arcueid Brunestud (fate extra berserker) make an appearance and could she maybe be a possible girl for Ben's harem: Arcueid Brunestud was added into the Fate/Extra because of fanservice which was the reason why she is there. There is an issue with her as Fate/stay night's beginning happens at around the same time as the events of Tsukihime end and Tsukihime takes place around the beginning of Fate/stay night, so Arcueid Brunestud is still alive. Also, this servant version of her have whimsical nature and speaks to the main character as if they are friends, smiling all through their conversation. She would not be Ben's harem but just friends and yes she would make an appearance.
Guest chapter 19 . Jun 28 There's a story called Savior of Heroes its fate story where a group of people goes to the past and change events can you make a story like that either OCS or x over character like for example FNAF spirits (Freddy, bonnie, Chica, foxy, golden Freddy, puppet, and plush trap could be the kid from the fourth game) are reincarnated and trained then sent to that world and time before Medea meets Jason and them haves abilities based on elements like earth, shadow, wind, water, light, illusion and fire and have weapon like Chica could get scissor weapon like from kill LA kill: That story you would say about was the person I was trying help with it before I was writing my story. Thankful he got better of writing his stories now and I am not interesting with that idea
Guest chapter 19 . July 2 Make Air Gear crossover please!: Oh Air Gear, it possible to make a crossover with that as, unlike many other fighting series. In Air Gear, the action is typically well paced and the story doesn't drag out longer than it should. The art is fantastic, and the series is just a lot of fun to read but a criticism about it is that the main conflict of the series and the driving motivations of most of the characters are a bit contrived. The extremely well developed main cast began as typically clichéd shounen characters before evolving who all have hidden depths that is not surprising at all. It going to be hard write that crossover with Fate stay night
Guest chapter 19 . Jun 16 how about an OC that is a friend of Benjamin to help him out or you can use him for the other Fate stories. Thank for that I would take that OC of your
Guest chapter 19 . Jun 6 How about story based on visual novels/games like teaching feelings it has a good story could you make a story based on that with the same girl but different main character: While the Setting in this visual novel takes place in a different timeline so yes I would take Sylvie with burn scars all over her body in my story somewhere in the future chapters. This visual novel does incredibly well as it is all about the feels and the small heartwarming moments it slowly hands out as the girl lets her guard down and starts showing emotions over time. But while the game is pretty good, but alas, the lack of a proper ending does reduce it overall quality somewhat.
Guest chapter 19 . Jun 24 For the future x overs with fate can you still had Illya like has a servant maybe with her magical girl power since its a class: Why do Illya has something to do with future x overs?
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