Hey there thanks for all the reviews really interesting opinions on colours but I loved the way everyone described their colours. Although I found it strange nobody picked pink, I love pink shame!

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Just me , and to answer your question, kind of but I couldn't really see anyone as that character but it becomes clear why they are not friends later on so yes and no really.

(If you gave me a colour and I have not mentioned you, sorry but it's because I have to update quickly, but I will happily still take them and use them in other chapters.)

Anyway better get on with this chapter.

Susan sat looking at herself in the vanity, she had been reading all morning and had taken lunch in her room, she had only seen Lucy that day and was waiting for Lucy to come back in. She had visited earlier on just after breakfast bursting with excitement.

The reason why Susan was in her room was her brothers, Lucy had told her earlier on today despite being sworn to secrecy that they had been going crazy planning this and did not want to give away anything to her, she had not even seen her dress, she also had no idea what the theme was, this worried her slightly since her brothers could be pretty inventive sometimes, and not in a good way.

It was 3 o clock the ball started at seven yet Lucy said they needed to both be fully prepared so she was awaiting her sister to bring all the servants to do hair and make up and everything else. Susan sighed pulling up her pale face with her index fingers and sighing at herself in the mirror, she did not want all this fuss.

Un lucky for Susan Lucy had just walked through the door, an army of servants behind her, for only once in her life Susan wished Lucy her dear sister would disappear. Yet that thought was swiped away quickly as Lucy clapped her hands and began ordering the servants around setting them to work.

"Susan you must get a bath go, go!"

Susan smiled softly at her sister and slipped into her ivory en suite and tried her best to relax in the bath, failing miserably as all she could hear was her sisters squeals of excitement. After a while Lucy went to her own bathroom to bathe and Susan finally relaxed for the first time that day and drifted slowly to sleep in her bath.

Caspian on the other hand felt as if he hadn't relaxed in a long time, it had only been one of the longest days of his life, from when he sun rose and he and Robin had left hi uncle's castle until now where they were just crossing through the woods, cair paravel was just in sight but was only the size of his little finger. He held his finger up to the sun comparing it to cair just staring at it for a while until Robin butted in,

"Caspian, what are you doing?"

Seeing the look of disturbance on his face and with no excuse popping into his head he decided to act intelligent, and said,

"Well I was just looking at the direction of the sun, seeing what the weather would be like this evening. "

Robin scoffed and looked forward and then at the map repeating himself trying to find the right direction, Caspian noticed the leather bag on the side of his saddle and asked,

"What is in that bag?"

Robin looked at him with a smirk and began,

"Well, little did we know, until this morning in fact that this was a masked ball so your uncle gave me two this morning to wear."

Robin reached into the leather bag and pulled out two masks. One was a pale grey colour with a silver pattern the other was gold, the colour of Narnia opposite red.

Pointing to the gold one Robin said,

"This one is yours, your uncle insisted on you wearing the Narnia colours so you could fit in with the numerous crowds at the ball."

Caspian nodded, it made sense. He was quite happy to be going to Narnia, his uncle had let him stay for a few days, under cover of course yet he had always wanted to see Narnia.

They rode on, edging nearer and nearer towards cair paravel and little did Caspian know towards the love of his life.

Susan had been dreaming one of the strangest dreams of her life yet it was calm and peaceful in some way,

She was standing on a balcony, similar to her own yet it was all white, everything around her was white until thousands of roses began to fall around her gently hitting the bright white floor, their petals slowly dropping off the floating around freely in the air, the air from what she could tell was quite warm and comforting. She looked off into the distance and saw a man coming towards her on a pure white horse, it was barley visible in the white background. The man had golden brown skin and deep brown eyes which were so kind and gentle. His hair was the colour of dark chocolate was flowing softly in the breeze. He rode up towards her balcony and was about to open his perfect mouth and show his pearly teeth when she heard a tap and someone calling her name causing her to wake quickly, snapping out of her dream.

"Susan!" shouted Lucy through her sister's bathroom door rapping on it wildly.

Susan rushed out of the bath wrapping herself in a towel to dry herself of and then slipped on her white robe and went to see why her sister was so agitated.

Lucy was stood ordering servants around like she was mental using far too many hand gestures.

"Susan, it's nearly five o'clock we only had two hours to get everything ready, quick get your hair done!"

Susan went quickly to a chair smiling at her servant as she began to curl Susan's hair, this took almost an hour. Then another servant came and put her make up on and then yet another put on her white corset and underskirt, this gave Susan a clue that the dress would at least be pale colour, she hoped her sister hadn't picked something too extravagant.

She gasped as the last servant pulled on her last corset string just as Lucy walked through the door, she was all ready now, Susan stared at her younger sister she looked beautiful.

Lucy was wearing a lilac silk dress, it spelt out Lucy perfectly girly but not as girly as pink. She wore silver slippers to match and had her hair straight yet braided back out of her face, she was wearing minimal make up and of course her silver crown, whiiched matched the lilac well.

"Wow Lucy you look amazing!"

Lucy smiled at her sister,

"Wait to you see your dress, come on hurry."

She pulled Susan back into her room where her dress was laid on her bed, it was the most beautiful thing she had ever seen.

The dress was a pure white, it had a fitted to half with a floating silk bottom. It was topped with a light red lace down till the silk bottom just below the knee. There were white pearls lining the sweetheart neckline. Susan went and touched it softly it even felt amazing, she turned and smiled at Lucy in awe.

"Lucy it's gorgeous!"

Lucy smiled in excitement and giggling, said,

"Well try it on then!"

Susan and her servant went into the dressing room and put on the dress, Susan found it hard not to cry at the beauty of it.

When she came out in the dress Lucy's mouth gaped open it was prefect, she knew she had picked it right as soon as she first saw it, it framed her figure perfectly, it would be a complete miracle if not man it there did not faint! Her hair fell sideways over her bare shoulder curling delicately. Her make up was simple yet it defined her bright blue eyes making them even more prominent., the red lipstick had the same effect on her heart shaped lips. It was all topped of with a pair of pearl earrings that hung slightly and a silver necklace with one single pearl coated in silk. She wore a pair of heels lined with silk on the outside making the hoes white, despite being heels they were still comfortable enough to dance in., of course there was a lot of dancing at balls.

"Susan you look beautiful!"

Susan hugged her sister, she was in tears,

"Thank you Lucy this is amazing!"

Lucy pulled away fussing.

"Don't cry, your make up will run! Come on we must find Edmund and Peter the ball is about to start!"

Squealing with excitement they ran out of the room towards the grand staircase to meet their brothers, Susan now wanted this ball, after seeing how much effort had gone into it all she had to want it now.

Caspian was stood at the bottom of the grand staircase with the rest of the crowds awaiting the arrival of queen Susan, he looked around the room many people were wearing red and golden, just like him despite it being unnatural he loved the Narnia colours of red and gold, red was so passionate and gold was so noble they went together perfectly.

Robin was wearing grey to match his mask, the dull colour with a hint of silver nobility matched Robin completely, Caspian didn't hate Robin it was just that he got far to snobby at time, he was just about used to his annoying behaviour but not quite yet. He studied the top of the grand staircase just like the rest of the crowd trying to catch a glimpse of what was going to happen.

At the top of the staircase Peter was stood waiting for his sisters along with Edmund. Peter was wearing a green shirt to match the colours of the hills and plain black pants, where as Edmund wore a royal blue shirt to match the sea. Both of them however wore a yellow cummerbund to represent their sister through the sun.

They both gasped when they saw their sister she looked stunning. The dress framed her perfectly the colours matching her skin and eyes.

"Susan you look stunning." said Edmund in awe,

"Thanks Ed."

"Final surprise, Susan." he said covering her eyes.

Lucy placed her white mask in her hands after putting on her own lilac mask on.

Susan opened her eyes, as Edmund stepped back putting on his blue mask. Susan smiled as she was putting on her mask.

"This is amazing." she had no more words to describe all that her family had done for, she had no idea how to top this in the future.

Peter, who was now wearing his green mask was speechless, when Susan went to take his arm to go down the stair he whispered in her ear,

"I suppose I will be fighting off men then!"

She giggled slightly and then smiled as she walked down the staircase.

The crown fell silent when she first arrived. Caspian looked up at her, she was an angel she was so beautiful. He was then suddenly entranced, and from that moment he knew he would love her for all of his life.

The party began as the music struck up, it was different to telmarine music, it was slower and less intimidating, yet it was fast and jolly for any of the faster dances. The dancing was spectacular despite being so any, every single person seemed to know every step.

As he watched Robin went of like a shot trying to find out information Caspian watched as Susan dance with one man after another after another. He saw her talk to people drinking fine wine, in fact drank one herself. Then finally after one last dance with her brother ,Peter she said to him loud enough so he could her hear over the folk music,

"I need some air, I'll be back in a minute."

He felt so drawn to her with love he knew he had to follow her and did, walking slowly a different way into the large gardenover looking the sea.

Susan sighed, she felt so happy yet so sad, she couldn't believe Peter would do this, he had thrown her a party yet had forced her to dance with so many men. She thought hse had made it clear that she did not want any suitors at the moment, she wanted to fall in love slowly and romantically, not be forced into it. Out of control she slowly began weeping.

Caspian suddenly felt an invisible force drawing him to her and went and put his arm round her, her skin felt so soft and warm despite the cool breeze for the sea.

"Are you alright?" he asked her trying to hide his accent, he did not want her to repel from him too quickly.

Susan turned and looked at the man in shock he was so handsome, it was him, the man from her dream!

It was Rome, her Romeo.

WOW that was a long chapter, well for me! Hope you all enjoyed it!

Question: What would be your dream first kiss?

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