Hey there thank you so much for the reviews, everything was so creative but one really got to me, so read to see who I picked.

I will porbably use the ohers though, after all this a version of Romeo and Juliet there will be LOT of kisses, so lucky you guys.

Here we go!

It was her Romeo.

Susan looked into the strangers eyes she saw trust and love in the deep brown orbs, it was him the man from her dreams, he was real he was there in front of her she could see him.

"It's you!"

Caspian stared at her her voice was so pure and sweet and gentle.

"Me?"

She listened to his voice it was so smooth and handsome, but there was somehting there, his accent.

"You're a telmarine." her voice was not afraid, in a way it was almost excited.

She backed away from him ever so slightly it was a millimetre at most but worlds for him all thet time he had waited to speak to her, now she will just dismiss him, he and Robin will be found and imprisoned he will have failed his uncle as well. He closed his eyes waiting, bracing himself for her to scream or run.

He felt something on his face, it felt strange usually someone would attack you from a different angle, he opened his eyes and saw her deep blue cyrstals staring back at him, he looked at her in confusion and said in shock even more as she had removed his mask and was looking at him for the first time.

"Why are you not screaming or running from me?"

Susan sighed, she didn't know soemthing was pulling her to him, this was her chance her first chance to be loved, properly not just courted.

"Why would I run?" she lied weakly, she knew exactly why he thought she would run.

Caspain looked at her, yet again, did she even know that they were enemies her tone of voice however sweet was confusing, he had to tell her now he had to be brave and tell her, he stood up looking over the balcony towards the sea.

"Our kingdoms have been enemies for as long as I can remember, did you not know that?" his voice was calm although he was angered he had to do this,

Susan sighed of course she knew that but it was time for the truth, she removed her mask as if she was removing her facade.

"Yes, I do, well of course I do High King Peter is my brother." her voice wobbled slightly in her speech, he placed his arm around her slowly, she felt so warm and comforting, he wanted to hold her there and now for all of his life.

He nodded in acknowledgement, he knew so well of her brother it was all his uncle would ever talk about and rant about, he was his uncles worst enemies the reason why Caspian was even there in the first place.

"I understand, but you never answered my question, are you alright?"

Susan looked into his eyes, she felt as if she was in a dream he was the first person she had ever met that really understood her.

"Honestly no, I'm not. I dance with every man in there I have twirled around in so many arms, yet I have never been held in love, only by my mother, they don't want me they want my looks and my title, Peter said I should be married by the end of the year! I can't do that I need to fall in love all just like in the novels I read!"

She sat back down on the edge of the balcony as tears began streaming down her face, she had held it in since she had first been crowned.

Caspian leaned slowly around her and whispered in her ear as gently as he could, he had to try,

"Will you dance with me?"

She looked up at him smiling and replied softly,

"Of course, with you I'd love to, if you tell me one thing."

Caspian looked at her soaking in her beauty.

"Your name."

He suddenly realised he had never told her his name,

"It's Caspian, Prince Caspian the tenth your majesty."

He was a prince, a prince of Telmar, Peter would have definitely killed her now but she didn't care anymore, she loved him, she stood up and placed herself in front of him smiling softly and said,

"And it's Susan by the way."

Caspian put his arm gently round the top of her slight waist and placed her creamy white hand in his strong hand. They waltzed round the green grass slowly yet in their heads they were moving so quickly. The had only just met yet they felt like they had known each other and been in love forever.

Star crossed lovers.

They were dancing and smiling for so long they had both lost track of time the sun had set hours ago and the stars were setting the scene on them both of them it couldn't be more perfect they were young and in love, their silhouettes framing then in the moonlight the gap between them as she laid her head on his chest, she could feel his heart beating. I t was beating for her, just as hers was for him. She looked up at him, as he was taller than her, he looked down at her, the gap was getting smaller and smaller and was about to close until she heard someone calling her from across the other side of the garden.

"Susan!" it was Edmund she looked up quickly and turned to Caspian forcing herself to pull away from him,

"Quick, go to the far side of the gardens you'll find a maze follow the path of lilac roses they will lead you to the centre, I'll find you."

Caspian nodded to Susan he was tempted to kiss her there and then leaning in slightly towards her for a split second then pulling apart from her quickly and then ran, Susan stood watching him his hair flowing in the wind his arms moving around the sides of his body, he was somewhat elegant, she had no idea why she was looking at him in this why, but she liked it. This was being in love, and she liked being in love.

She knew she would see him again, she knew the passage like the back of her hand since she had designed the maze, only she knew the way to the centre. She had made it as an escape from the world there was a passageway in the centre that led all the way through the hill in which cair paravel lead and out onto an unknown part of the beach that she had all to herself.

She snapped out of her head and focused on what was actually going on, she looked at Edmund who was looking for her without success. He turned back towards the ballroom, her heart stopped when he yelled,

"Peter!"

She knew her brother would find Caspian and probably kill him she had to go after him, so she ran towards the maze to find him as her brothers were left in confusion.

"Edmund I told you to find her!" said Peter hands on his hips in a stance of anger in front of his brother, it had just gone midnight and it was getting dark nobody had seen his sister since she had wanted some air hours ago.

"Well she's not here is she." said Edmund plangently stating the obvious.

"Well done Ed." said Peter in frustration as he turned around looking back into the ball room, everyone was about to take their masks off, he and Edmund already had she needed to be here.

"Unless she went into the maze..." said Edmund a gleam in his eyes.

Peter sighed they couldn't find her in there, but they had to try.

"Come on." he said reluctantly as they walked slowly to the maze, about to face the challenge of going through it!

Caspian was about to loose hope of seeing her again, he felt as if he had seen thousands of roses and yet had not found the centre of this maze yet, yet he had to keep going he was desperate to see her, he began to try and walk slowly now, suddenly he saw no more lilac roses, his mind was ripped apart in frustration and in anger turned around and walked back to find another path of lilac roses.

Susan had been running for so long, she had removed her shoes about three paces in the maze , she was sprinting now, her curls dancing wildly in the wind, she had to find him, ignoring her heart that was about to fail from lack of oxygen she carried on regardless, she felt something in her hand, it was her mask she must have picked it up, she threw it on the ground carelessly and carried on running, determined not to give up.

Peter and Edmund had reached the front of the maze and decided to take a wing and turned left, the wrong way, yet they had a method by shouting at their sister at least they knew she was in there,

"Go ahead Edmund it was your idea." Peter said insisting his brother to shout her.

"Well she listens to you more." Edmund argued back, this was true, Peter was always listened to, his kind nature had almost slipped away even so his anger would be stronger than usual ever since he was crowned king, everyone listened to him.

"Fine." said Peter.

He shouted her name as loudly as he could and listened for her, it was dark now so they could barley see a thing anyway, but hope would not be lost yet.

Susan turned at the shock of Peter's voice but kept on running until she bumped into something, she gasped when she realised, what or who rather she had fell on, Caspian. He stared up at her smiling, their noses were touching almost, they stared into each others eyes, it was the very first moment that would change their lives forever. He felt her gasping on his face her bright blue eyes staring wildly into his.

Their lips touched, for the first time.

It was beautiful for once in their lives two heart were beating for one thing, not in fear or sadness, or pride but in love.

They pulled apart smiling at each other, Susan wanted to scream so did Caspian, they felt like they were in a world of their own, all of their own. They felt as if fireworks were going off around them it was a wonderful sensation.

They got up holding hands they were bout to kiss again when Susan heard Peter's voice coming closer towards them.

"Susan!" Peter shouted in frustration this time, he had been searching for ages, Edmund following behind him, he turned to his brother and said,

"This is hopeless she might not even be in here!"

Edmund had always had sharp eyes and had picked up the mask from the floor of the maze and was staring at it, it was Susan's.

"She is in here Peter." said Edmund showing him the mask.

"So this means were going the right way." cried Peter thankfully and walked quickly onwards Edmund following him, shaking his head if only his brother would see it was him who found the mask.

Susan upon hearing her bother's voice was running to the centre of the maze, her hand held in Caspian's, he ran behind her noticing how pale her skin was in the moonlight, and how her hair flew backwards when she ran. He was in love, he was really in love with her.

They got the centre of the maze at last Susan smiled and pulled back a string of vines leading to a door, Caspian watched her as she moved he noticed how delicately she used her hands when pulling back the vines and pushing on the door handle, only to fail to open it.

Susan's mind clicked she remembered what she had done, she had got a key fitted, she had made the maze about a year ago yet had only been down to the beach five times, despite it being her absolute sanctuary.

She walked over to the solid gold statue of Aslan in the middle of the square centre and pulled out a small door on the stand Aslan sat ona nd pulled out a small metal key and opened the door leading to the beach.

Sorry it took so long but sadly there will probably not be an update for like till June time as I have exams, so sorry but please answer my question,

What is your favourite love song?

Please review lots of love missmusicaltheatre3!