Chapter 34
Avoid
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I'm having mid-term exam next week so really busy these days…. Oh I wrote this about a month ago.
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Song Used: Alluring Secret~ Black Vow (Kagamine Rin/Len)
Translyrics by Enn
May rubbed her hands together, her friends were staring at the brunette. She understood, she really did. Drew still liked Dawn with all his heart, at least she thought that he is, he didn't have any room left in his heart for her. Maybe, just maybe. But he did have a room left for a 'girl' friend….
"May?" Dawn called and May turned around to face the blunette.
"You are not mad at me, right?" Dawn's voice was filled with caution.
May smiled, she can't possibly be mad at Dawn. She couldn't, "No I'm not mad. I am not, I'm just, sad…" May said with sad smile. Dawn sighed in relief and worriedness. Dawn gave her friend a sympathetic look.
May stared out the window, it seemed like just yesterday they won Sinnoh Idol but it was now all over. And they were now one of the tops singers and stars in the Sinnoh region.
"May, can I talk to you?" Zoey asked and May stood up. She followed Zoey out of the room.
"Wonder what they are talking about." Dawn said.
"Yeah, what's with leaving us?" Misty said with her arms crossed.
"Maybe it's a secret?" Leaf guessed.
"Even a five-year-old can say that." Misty said.
"That's an insult to all the five-year-olds Misty." Leaf said and everyone sweatdropped.
The two girls returned after few minutes and May didn't look very happy.
"What is it?" Marina asked.
"Our dear darling friend Zoey here wants me to do a duet with Paul." May said with obvious sarcasm rubbing off of her voice.
The girls burst into laughter, except for May and Zoey. The two waited until the laughing was over.
"Were you serious?" Misty asked.
"Yes, and I have a plot planned out for them. Actually I need three more actors, two males and one female." Zoey said.
"Since it's Paul, Dawn should do it, right?" Marina said, elbowing Zoey. Zoey laughed and nodded, making Dawn groan.
"Why? I don't want to…" She said.
"Aw, come on Dawn. You will look really pretty in the dress. Do it for me, please? Please?" May said as she sparkled her blue eyes at the girl. Dawn sighed, she did feel sorry for May and she wanted to get rid of the feeling so much, maybe doing this will help her feel better.
"Fine." May did a 'hooray!' and gave Dawn a big hug that squeezed Dawn.
"Let go of me, May." Dawn said as she slightly pushed May away. The brunette giggled and released her.
"Well just to tell you that, this time the lyrics are written by Kenny so don't blame me for anything all I did was to write music." Zoey said as she dialed Kenny's number.
"I'm sure she wrote the story though." May said and the others nodded, making Zoey sweatdrop.
Emergency meeting, that's what Kenny and Zoey called it to gather Black Divine members all together. The sky was blue, the wind wasn't blowing which was unlikely in early February. But no one complained about being outside of the dorm for this.
"Is it necessary to call all of us when you need only five of us?" Drew asked.
"And one only appearing for five seconds." Jimmy added reading through the plot.
"Exactly, we need to choose!" Kenny said, making them all sweatdrop.
"Dawn's the girl then is Drew's going to be here?" Ash asked.
"Just put him, and Gary! Two actors." Jimmy said, ending the meeting in less than a minute.
May glanced at Drew, who was talking to Kenny about his role. May was glad that no one talked about that day, especially Drew. Paul eyed May as she buried her head into her knees, isolated from her friends. Paul stood up and walked to her and sat right beside her. May looked up and glared at him.
"What do you want?"
"Maybe an explanation." Paul said watching his friends.
"I don't need a comfort from a jerk who hurted my friend." May said as she rested her chin on her knees.
"Never intended to do that. And I can't even realize the depth of the love I have for her." May rolled her eyes and stuck her tongue out, making a disgusted face but she knew that she wasn't mad at Paul anymore, neither was Dawn.
"If you love her so much, then why don't you tell her straight? Why just leave it like this?" May asked.
He shrugged, "I don't even know why I am talking to you but I'm scared."
May blinked.
"You? Scared? I thought that was impossible."
"I thought so to, but remember that few months ago when she and I fought." May sat straight up and looked at Paul.
He closed his eyes, "I don't have that feelings for you anymore. Let's just do this without fighting, we can agree on that, right?" On May's lips a small smile formed and she looked up at the sky. So clear and blue that it was almost transparent.
Zoey stood up and with a can on her hand, she walked to the trash can right next to May. While tossing the can into the bin she leaned down and whispered, "Maybe it's time to tell her."
May looked up, shocked and surprised. Zoey smiled softly and walked away. Paul narrowed his eyes as his gaze followed Zoey who was now talking to Dawn, who was waving at May. May sighed and Paul looked down at the ground, feeling awkward a bit.
Paul walked down the hallway of the dorm, thinking about what Zoey was telling May. Something that only they knew about, something that was so secret that they had to hide it. Paul then saw May and Drew together talking about the music video plot. "I can't believe I have a role to shoot." Paul heard Drew saying, "Well Zoey have a crazy mind and Kenny's getting affected by it." May said with a giggle. Paul walked away from them, not wanting to ruin May's moment.
He walked down and literally ran into someone, who turned out to be Dawn. She fell down on her butt and frowned at the plumheaded teenager.
"Ow…." She groaned. Paul hesitated for a moment but let his hand out which she didn't grab. She stood up, dusted herself, and walked past him saying, "Don't get too excited about the music video, I'm only doing this for May." She said. Paul stared at her back while scratching back of his neck and then walked away, regretting everything he'd done.
May waved her hand and walked back to the room. She then remembered what Zoey said and frowned. She, frustrated, kicked a nearby wall and because of the pain she hopped around, looking like a total idiot. She bit her bottom lip and after letting out a huge sigh she walked to the room.
Dawn was waiting for May. She wanted to ask about the theme because Zoey wasn't around, possibly talking or flirting with Kenny. She hoped for the former. The door opened and Dawn stood up and saw the brunette she was waiting for.
"May! I was waiting for you!" Dawn cried out.
May raised her brow, "What do you mean?"
"I was wondering about the plot, I mean it is bit weird and odd, isn't it? Oh and showy, I can't believe I am pretending that with Paul." May flinched, after hearing what Zoey said she perfectly understood what the plot was about. She gulped and laughed nervously.
"Why don't you ask Zoey?" May said.
"She's not here. She's with Kenny. And she told me to ask you, saying that you know the plot." Dawn said. She tilted and head a little and twinkled her eyes.
"Sorry Dawn, I don't know. But I do know that Zoey is helping Paul with his love business." May said and headed straight into the bathroom. Dawn groaned and went out to search for her redheaded friend. Ma sat on top of the toilet and sighed.
'Zoey, not helping.'
Dawn skipped her way out the dorm building and saw Zoey and Kenny talking in the convenience store, sitting on the table. She quietly made her way but stopped herself. Zoey seemed to be having a happy time with Kenny and it would ruin the situation if she interrupted, right? As much as she wanted to ruin the moment, she smiled and walked away back to her dorm room, telling herself to ask later after filming the music video.
Dawn walked down and then spotted Leaf and Gary making out, she hid herself behind the wall and forced herself not to laugh. They finally got together and the first thing they do is to make out, what a progress. Well they already did it even before they started dating so making out in the hallway isn't such a weird thing.
Dawn coughed, the couple broke apart. "Seriously, can't you do that somewhere private?" Dawn asked, her hands on her waist.
"None of your business." Gary said, still pretty mad at Dawn about breaking his best friends' friendship. Dawn was now guilty of it but what can she possibly do? Pick one? When she hates one and her friend as a crush on another one? No, not an option.
"Well I don't think anyone passing this hallway would be happy to see you two making out." Dawn said and Leaf, after apologizing for no practical reason, dragged Gary down the stairway. Dawn stared at the spot where the two made out and made her way to the room. On the progress she saw the two people she hated the most in the world.
"Come on Paul, just one date, please?" Ursula begged while batting her eye lashes. Paul looked down at the girl in disgust.
"Please?" Ursula said with the sweetest voice she can afford but Paul's reaction was still. 'No'.
Ursula frowned, "Why? Is it because of her? Perfect Dawn Berlitz?" Paul turned to Ursula at Dawn's name and the said girl flinched.
Paul didn't answer but to stare down into Ursula's eyes.
"I don't get why you even like her. She hates you and she's not even that pretty. And she is a jerk, bastard and- Eek!" Ursula shrieked as the wall behind her crumbled a little, with a dent right beside her head.
"Never insult her in front of me. I will kill you the next time I hear this." Paul said-growled in low voice and walked away with some blood dripping down from his fist. Ursula shuddered in fear and then started to cry. Dawn stared down at the floor, not knowing what to do.
May looked through her phone gallery and from time to time she giggled at some of the funny pictures taken by her. She then saw pictures of her young ages. She with Zoey, Kenny and Dawn. She couldn't believe for a fact that Zoey wrote a song like that. She didn't hate her but sometimes she just wondered how the two could even be friends at all.
"May, is something wrong?" May turned around and saw Leaf coming her way.
"Hi Leafy, what happened to your boyfriend?" May asked as she hid her phone.
"I ditched him. What were you looking at?" Leaf asked as she sat down next to May on the couch.
"Something." May replied and did a fake smile.
Leaf raised her brow, "May is there something wrong that I need to know?" May shook her head but to Leaf she was just trying to avoid the topic.
"May, tell me. Is there something that I need to know but you just can't tell? Like Dawn. But she opened up and finally told us, why can't you? You told us that you have nothing to hide but seeing you like this just tells me that you were lying." Leaf said in older-sister-tone. May looked at her sadly and sighed.
"You will see later. I don't want to talk about it Leaf." May stood up and headed out the dorm room. Leaf watched her leave the room and stared for a while and looked around the empty room. Why does her friends kept so many secrets?
Leaf waited until the music video came up so she could see what May meant about and her secret, maybe she could learn.
…
Paul set on the bed made to film. He was on the filming set for the music video. He was wearing black lacy dress shirt and pants of the same colour. He felt his face burning just imagining the scene he was going to film.
"Paul, you read how you were supposed to be acting, right?" Zoey asked as she walked over to the plumheaded teen. He nodded.
"You'd better thank me later, right?" She asked and Paul looked down. Zoey smirked at this. Paul Shinji, for the first time in his life, was embarrassed. Zoey thought it was pretty funny and went back to behind the camera to help the director film.
Dawn entered the studio and everyone's jaw dropped open. Her long blue hair was in elaborate French, but only on the top, the bottom parts of her hair flying freely. She was in black underwear, black lacy bras and underpants. Paul covered his mouth to hide his blush and turned away from her as she sat down right next to him. She had a small frown on her face, not enjoying the situation she was in.
"Remember, I'm only doing this for May." Dawn said and Paul nodded, his face still away from her, avoiding to face her.
"Alright, get ready!" Zoey called out, trying not to crack up at the sight while silently taking the picture of Paul.
Dawn lied down on the bed, and Paul got on his four, right above her. Dawn's frowny face turned into a small smile. Just an act, just an act. Paul thought to himself as he leaned down and kissed her cheek, slowly moving toward her lips. He gulped slightly as his lips finally touched Dawn's small lips.
Her hands grabbed Paul's hair, sliding down a little to free his purple locks from the ponytail he was in. He felt like he was in heaven, they were kissing. He licked her lips for entrance and surprisingly she opened her mouth slightly, letting him explore inside her. Paul smiled slightly due to happiness and moved his hand to cup Dawn's cheek but the thought of Dawn hating him made him sad again.
Zoey signaled to keep going and Paul gulped once again as he now reached down to her bra and while doing his best to cover her breasts, he took it off. He did his best not to get too excited since she didn't look too comfortable being half naked in front of him.
"Cut!" Paul sighed in relief and a disappointment at the same time as he sat up with her. Her long hair was covering her body, most importantly her breasts.
"Take a break and we are moving onto the next scene so get ready." The director called out. Dawn and Paul nodded.
Paul took off his black dress shirt, he didn't need it in the next scene anyway, and covered Dawn's fragile body with it.
"Thanks." She muttered while covering her front body with it. He grunted. She handed him the hair tie and he stuffed it in his pocket. His long shaggy hair covered one of his eyes. She shivered a little. Paul took a notice of this and pulled her into his arms. She tried to pull him away but Paul didn't let her go.
"You are going to catch cold." He said with quiet voice. Dawn blinked and finally gave in, leaning into his chest. Deep inside, she knew. She knew that she was acting even now as well. She didn't hate Paul that much now. She just didn't like him like she likes everyone else. But right now, it felt okay to lean into his chest and feel his warmth. She lifted her hand to touch his hair, he let her play with it. She then realized how well-built his body was. Maybe things can be fixed.
She went to the dorm building's roof and put her earphone on. She liked this place, it was cold but it kept her away from everyone. She needed to think. Besides she was wearing warm clothing so she won't catch cold. Leaf took out her phone and went to YouTube to watch the now world famous Music Video, the talk of everyone.
-MV-
May appeared, wearing white tank top which had straps connected to the white choker with ribbon of same color, the tank top showed off her belly, white shorts with elaborate belt and she was looking down. She had small wings on her back.
Feathers fall off the white angel's wings
From her lips, a sinful vow, is what she has been lured to sing
She does not care who she has loved in the past
With her hands she wipes away them all; only one love can outlast
She looked up with gun in her right hand and with a 'Bam' the scene changed, showing the title;
Alluring Secret~ Black Vow~
May Maple or Paul Shinji
It then showed a scene with May and Dawn, May in the same clothes, and Dawn had her long hair down, black veil on her head that went down. She was wearing black sleeveless dress and long black gloves that went up to her elbow. May had her hands on Dawn's waist and Dawn was holding up a red apple between them, the two both kissing on it.
May: Injured and lost, an angel found her way
Through the human world, watching the skies turn black and grey
May was on her knees, on the road looking up at the black silhouette of a girl.
And there she met a maiden so fair
O, with diamond eyes saving her from despair
The camera closed up to the silhouette and showed Dawn, smiling down at May, her hand out to help May get up. Dawn was in black dress.
The fateful moment when their gazes came to meet
The angel fell in love, embracing new emotions bitter-sweet
May's eyes were wide, staring at the girl
Weaving thoughts that she knew would never be forgiven
She touched the treasure chest that brimmed with sin
May reached out to Dawn's hand and the scene then showed a small chest with a gun in it.
And what she was yearning for, was the forbidden fruit
May and Dawn were standing, holding hands, and the camera shimmered and showed the two's back. May was holding a red fruit on the hand that was not holding Dawn's hand.
Hidden behind the gentle smiles and pleasant salutes
The scene closed up to their holding hands.
There was only one way for an angel to kiss a girl
She sacrificed all she had, as destiny sadly unfurled
May stared at Dawn's back who was smiling and then she grabbed her and forced a small kiss on her lips.
I shall abandon my platonic soul
If it means that I can live alongside you as a mortal
Dawn was standing with a man, in front of a black dress with May far behind them. The scene closed up to Dawn and her fiancé then May disappeared.
"Sever my ivory wings of chastity"
I knelt before the Demon's throne and pledged myself to thee
May opened the chest and she fell down to the ground.
During interlude it showed Dawn pushing May away, her hands over her mouth with terrified eyes. May looked down with sad eyes. Dawn cried while looking down and when she looked up the only thing she could see was a single white feather on the ground. May was not far away, behind the wall, looking down while forcing the tears back in.
Dawn, standing next to her fiancé, she was sad, regretting what she had done to her friend.
Paul: In the sanctuary of promises and rites
Was a charming bride of the colour of the night
Dawn was in the black dress and was on the wedding hall, there she stopped when she saw something in the forest.
And there she met a mysterious young man
O, his faint sad smile was where her love began
The scene showed Paul in black dress shirt, looking sadly at Dawn.
The fateful moment when their gazes came to meet
The maiden fell in love, embracing new emotions bitter-sweet
The scene showed Dawn, in her black veil, was staring at Paul, love struck.
Weaving thoughts that she knew would never be forgiven
She followed the desire that urged within
Dawn's gloved hand grabbed Paul and the two ran away from the garden, away from the blue haired girl's wedding. A white hand was shown as the veil fell down to the ground, possibly Dawn's fiancé's.
What was finally in his hands, was the forbidden fruit
The rotten gem of lust that he had craved and pursued
The two were shown holding hands and when the back showed it was Dawn was holding red fruit and on Paul's hand was black fruit.
As they fed off each other's flickering ecstasy
Her virtuous soul was pierced with a tragedy they cannot forsee
The scene showed Dawn on a bed in her lingerie and Paul above her, leaning down to a kiss. The scene slowly showed the two kissing and Paul tearing off her clothing.
Shatter the paths of time that have brought us here
Into dust, into sand, all the things we held dear
The two were sitting up on the bed, Dawn's hair was covering her bare back and the two were holding hands while Paul gave her a ring made out of a flower.
All that is left is the pain and regret
As I drown in you I shall embrace them, lest I forget
Paul looked sadly at the smiling girl and the two tangled their fingers, leaning against each other's forehead.
Ah- All of the things we did wrong
Dawn was on the field, admiring the ring the boy got for her. And then Drew stepped over, from her behind.
Etched into our bodies as permanent wounds as we carry on
The scene showed him wearing white old-fashioned suit with cross at the end, he was angry. Really angry. The flashback showed him and May smiling at each other.
Burning with wrath, the arrow of judgement
Speared into the ribs of the maiden glazed with flint
Then aiming for Dawn, he shot. Dawn turned behind, her eyes wide and fell to the ground.
Her hairs were flying as she lied on the ground, breathless and her eyes closed.
Paul stood there, staring at the dead body of his lover. His eyes were horrified and didn't know what to do. He hung onto the body and tightened his grip.
"My dear lying cold"
Paul's voice echoed through, as the scene showed him caressing Dawn's face with blood on her mouth dripping out.
"I will spend all my life for you as I swore on that day…."
Paul's angry eyes were crying, looking down at the dead girl.
"My sin against God…."
He leaned close to her face.
Paul: "All my acts of treachery should be paid by my death."
May: Feathers fall off the white angel's wings
From her lips, she sealed the vow that she was once lured to sing
It showed him from behind, holding the girl.
Paul: "so I will die for you…"
May: Saving her lover from the black depths of hell
Dawn opened her eyes a slight.
Paul: "I believe, that's my fate."
May: She left behind an alabaster feather as her last farewell
For a moment it was Paul looking down at her and then it was May in Paul's cloth looking sadly down at her.
'The moment when her eyes saw again, was when she broke the spell...'
Dawn, horrified, sat up and the angel shattered to pieces, only leaving a single black feather.
There was an angel with snowy white wings
And a bride of tarnished black whose eyes never stopped weeping
It showed Dawn crying her eyes out, desperate to get her lover back but there was no one listening for her. She was weeping, wailing and crying.
Even if we are to be punished and cursed
It showed May and Paul lying on the ground together.
We shall keep our secret vow alive, right in this very verse
The scene showed Paul, shirtless and with the scar where the wing was supposed to be.
While embracing the painful truth that we have wronged and erred
'Til the fruit of our crimes have rotten and we are redeemed
"'Til the next fateful meeting, you will live on in my dream..."
It showed May staring at the camera and then closed her eyes, then shot the screen.
-MV over-
Leaf put her phone back into her pocket to think. The first thing that came up in her head was how hot the scene between Dawn and Paul were but she shook the thought off. That wasn't necessary currently and she can tease them later on.
Her thought creep to next possibility; maybe Zoey was just trying to put Dawn and Paul together and got May's help for that. But why would Zoey want Dawn and Paul to be together? She didn't have any reasons for that so she scratched the thought out of her head.
She bit her finger nails, Let's see….. May was the angel, the fallen, corrupted angel who pledged herself to the devil. But why? Why was she fallen? Why was that May loving Dawn in the music video a sin? Why?
Was the angels not allowed to love humans? Was that the reason? Or was it that angel just betrayed her master's words so that was why she was corrupted? Or….
Leaf stood up and ran to the exit, she knew the answer. It had to be. It just had to be it.
And Zoey had to show it that way? How evil of her.
Drew and Paul were glaring at each other after watching the music video all together. Gary was trying to break them apart, Ash was avoiding them, stuffing himself with doughnuts, and Jimmy was asking Kenny about the song.
"C'mon guys, it's nothing. Drew, it was just a music video and she's not your girlfriend anymore, remember? And Paul, stop giving him a glare, you were looking at him like he does now when you heard that Dawn liked Drew's kiss better." Gary said, trying his best to calm the two.
Paul reached up and tied his hair into short, low ponytail then exited the room. Gary stood up and followed him out. He was going to the girls' room and Paul, knowing Gary's presence, entered the room together only to find Zoey and May fighting.
"What's going on?" A new voice asked, Gary glanced back and saw the grasshead standing there in the doorway. Gary stepped aside a little to help him get a better view. Leaf was standing between the two girls, trying to stop them fighting. Dawn noticed the boys and stood up.
"What brought you boys here?" She asked.
"Just wondering about the song." Gary said with a sweet smile.
Dawn rolled her eyes, "Well your girlfriend there said something about it and thanks to her the two are fighting now." Dawn said with sarcasm. Gary scratched back of his head and shrugged.
"Not my fault." He mumbled.
"It's your fault! I should have never agreed to let you write that stupid song." They all turned around to May who was giving a death glare at Zoey.
"My fault? How can it be my fault, people won't think deeply into it and probably won't think it was a personal matter." Zoey said in low voice.
"What if they do? What if they do? Were you planning to ruin my life or something?" May shrieked.
"I wasn't! And your life isn't ruined yet. Plus they will just think. 'oh our old Zoey Noy was just using her twisted brain into some kind of imagination or something. That's it, end of the story." Zoey said.
"Girls, calm down." Leaf said.
"Calm down? You just came in, asked if your thought was right and this thing happened." May yelled and Leaf stepped slightly backward. May then started to laugh, the laugh which creep everyone out.
"May, are you okay?" Dawn asked while stepping closer to her best friend. May pushed Dawn's hand away and looked straight into Leaf's eyes.
"You are right. What you thought was right. Our Leaf Green was right again." She said bitterly and stormed out of the room.
"May?" Dawn was about to go after her but Zoey stopped her. Zoey looked at Paul who nodded and held her shoulders. Drew was about to say something but Zoey was faster, "Go talk to May. She will need you." Drew saw confidence and worriedness in Zoey's eyes so he didn't complain, he just went after her.
"Zoey, what's going on? Tell us." Marina finally opened her mouth.
Zoey awkwardly scratched back of her head and sighed, "Let's just say that the song is based on a real thing." The singers looked at each other, obviously confused.
…
Drew found May crying on the dorm roof and sat beside her.
"May, are you okay?" He asked and May shook her head.
"Can you tell me?" He asked but May shook her head again.
"You will hate me if I tell you what that song is based off on." She said through her sobbing and crying. Drew smiled a little, he'd never thought he would see May crying like a weakling.
"Why would I hate you? You are a nice girl, I would never hate you." Drew said and hugged her. He then noticed her sobbing stopped a bit. She wiped the tears off of her and flashed him a smile. Drew bit his lips slightly and released her.
"May, I won't hate you. You need to tell me in order for me to understand you better." Drew said, giving her comforting looks. May sighed.
"Do you still like Dawn?" May suddenly asked.
"I asked you a question first."
"Answer me first."
Sigh, "I was thinking about giving up on her. Whatever I do and however I try, she will never return the feelings I have for her. Never."
May stared up at the sky.
"So do you like her?"
… "I guess no. But she still is my lovely younger sister."
May smiled at this.
"I will tell you now."
…
Dawn waited for May and Drew to return. She needed to hear it out of her. Se seriously needed to. Not that she doesn't trust Zoey but she just had to get it out from the horse's mouth. She shot up from her seat when the door opened, showing the brunette walking in with the grasshead.
"May…" Dawn said and May gave the blunette a small smile. Everyone exited the room except for the two. They needed to speak alone.
"Is it true?"
Hesitation followed by nodding.
"Why didn't you tell me earlier?"
"I didn't want to be avoided by you."
"I would never avoid you."
"I wasn't so sure back then."
….
"May?"
"Yes?"
"We are friends, right?"
Nodding.
"You trust me right?"
Nodding again
"Then say it. I needed to hear it out of you."
Faint smile, "…"
Last part was weird and I know that but it was intended.
Can anyone guess about May's secret?
It will show up eventually but the one who answers correct will get the honor of having your name shown up
I think it's too obvious though...
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Character Profile #11
Jimmy Gold
Occupation: Student, Singer
Association: BLACK ROCK SHOOTER, Black Divine
Personality: playful, caring, not-serious
Relatives: Parents
Height: 178cm
Voice: Pokota
Marina's boyfriend who loves her deeply. He loves playing game, any kind, and gets along with Ash the most.
Author's mention: It seems that Yoru Hana's winning so I will focus on it
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