Alright. Listen up you mitches and bitches. Recently I got a review for this story that said, ':what is with all the grammatical errors huh?! And when since does Rev call anyone baby! Even if it is just fan fiction I just can't see that happening! worst thing I ever read one minute you call a girl a guy then a girl a girl what is up?'
First of all, the person who reviewed it. This is FANFICTION. Which means I can have Rev say what ever I want him to say.
Secondly, on episode 4 on Loonatics unleashed Rev DID say baby. And ever read some other fanfics and Rev goes into a cussing faze. Yeah.
Thirdly, lucky you're a guest. That means I can delete the review.
Fourthly, reviews are suppose to positive with SOME negative criticism. I was somewhat okay when you said I have grammar problems, even though you could've been like 'There's a few grammar problems', BUT, when you went on to the Rev part I became furious.
Fifthly, you say I have grammatical errors. What about YOU? Do you see what you review says? You're missing capitalization, periods, and commas. How dare you for saying that when your grammar is just poorly?
Sixthly, people make mistakes. I accidentally said he instead of she, okay, I get it. I messed up.
Seventhly, you NEVER tell someone that they made the worst story. That's just disrespectful. From my opinion, I think I'm a good writer. I'm not the best compared to Ghostwriter3386, Mitch 566, LittleMissHyde, or my personal favorite, Bluetitan, but I'm as just as good as a lot of others who write for fanfiction period.
Eighthly, Just shut the hell up.
So, now I'm about to get on with the chapter.
Sorry everyone for the long Author note, but since this person was a guest, so I couldn't PM him or her. So I beg everyone, no flames please.
Day one of the experiment finally came. Usually Kiko would wake up first in the morning, but she fell asleep around one in the morning; so she was still pretty exhausted.
In fact, since they didn't have to do any crime for sure, everyone had slept in.
It was around noon till everyone had woke up.
Lexi walked into the kitchen with her stomach growling. She opened the fridge to see absolutely nothing. She then remembered that the soldiers took their cooking food and left the snacks in the cabinet.
"Great." She grabbed a bag of chips from the cabinet and sat down at the table.
Kiko walked past them sleepily, scratching her head.
"Where you going Kiko?"
"I'm about to go out and eat breakfast."
"You do realize its twelve thirty in the afternoon. Right? Breakfast is over." Lexi said.
"Not at the Waffle House." Kiko walked to the elevator. When she pressed the down button, she turned around. "You coming Rev?"
"Uh, sure." He got up from the couch.
Meanwhile…
Tech E. Coyote was in his room. The room was mostly bared with his appliances and books gone.
Tech maybe a technical geek, but he did do some other things once in a while… or should he'd say, everyday.
Half the time when he would say he was busy, he doesn't want to bothered, or he would run either Kiko or Rev out the lab was for one reason and one reason only…
He loves to dance.
Yes, it might be hard to believe; but that was his secret… his passion.
With his room sound proof. He turned on some music, and got in the ready position.
(But what kind of style of dance does he do? Find out on my next chapter.)
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Fifteen minutes have passed already, and they still haven't reached the Waffle House. Mostly because they were walking to the. They would've flew, but Kiko insisted that they walked. Mainly because without her meditation, walking around would get herself from getting stressed.
Despite the fact that she is walking through a clustered city with oodles of car horns.
"Why did I move into a large city?" She grunted.
"Because - a - large - city - is - where - a - lot - of - crime - happens - and - you - can't - help - but - save - people - when - they - need - it." Rev answered, with a small smile.
"What?" Kiko said confusedly.
"I said…" She quickly clamped his beak before he could go on.
"I know what you'd said, Rev." She let go of his beak. "I said what because of that –" She pointed to the other side of the street.
They both had walked over to the scene. There was a woman in her late twenties standing staring at the building.
"Excuse me miss." Kiko started off first. "What happened here?"
"Haven't you heard? The soldiers ransacked the place in order to prevent one 'Kiko' from using it, and they did it by flooding the whole shop. Now I'll never get grandmother's tea cosy washed in time!"
Kiko started to growl angrily, which startled both the woman and Rev.
"I'm that 'Kiko', madam, and I'm going to get this fixed even if it means I have to take the entire corporation down!"
A soldier suddenly stepped out from inside the shop. "With what exactly? You know the rules. You don't have any weapons, using water, and your powers is against the rules; and I'm not even sure if it's wise for you to be taking exercise. I'd have to speak to the Commander about that one…" Kiko growled, as she had to concede to the soldier's points.
Before anymore trouble could start, Rev led her away from the area.
"Agh, I'm getting sick of these people!" She scuffed her boot on the ground.
"Calm down Kiko. Take a deep breath."
"Okay." She closed her eyes and breathed in and out. After a few seconds, she felt better. "Alright, I feel much better."
"Good." Rev smiled. "Now - can - we - hurry - and - get - to - the - Waffle - House. I'm - starving."
The coyona made a slight nod.
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The hours of the day went pretty slow, but Kiko was able to make it without lashing on anybody. Which was also a relief for Rev. He didn't have to use all his will power to restrain her.
It was only ten at night and they were both knocked the hell out.
Day one has passed. Thirteen more days to go.
Who will loss their cool next? Wait and see.