hey guys thanks for the reviews I appreciate it!
as I wrote this I noticed that hiccup's part is small less than 400 words so instead off adding more I'm going to do hicca part aswell...enjoy!
and another thing my grammar is not good and I am looking for a beta. A little late but if anyone willing to help me then please message me!
Hiccup could hear lots of noises, and screaming but everything was all unfocused. His body was aching and numb at the same time.
He tried moving his head but felt dizzy like the waves from a beach. Hearing voices and one of them telling him not to move so he doesn't. Hiccup couldn't make out the words when the man asked for his name but after a few repeats he responded.
Another person was on the phone but he paid no attention, his mind was wondering how he landed on the cold concrete with nearly his whole body underneath the car.
He couldn't remember, it was too much, the ringing in his ears. The pain devouring his body causing his vision to darken with black spots, he wanted to rest. Sleep off all the pain.
"Stay with us son, you will be alright" He couldn't listen, his head now getting heavy. The boy was losing power to stay awake.
But he did hear the siren of an ambulance and the flashes of blue, red and white. Then the shuffling of people's feet crowding around him. He didn't understand what was going on.
"Ok men lift up the front of the car so we can get him out quickly. He is losing too much blood on three, one, two and three!"
Hiccup gasped his eyes tightly shut. The agonizing pain from being moved had made it difficult for him to breathe. Quickly but gently one of the men picked him up bridal style and placed on a stretcher.
He could feel the blackness closing in, he was losing conscious.
A man wearing a green suit, a paramedic rushed over "Hey what about the girl, she is hurt as well. We should bring her in here with the boy".
They were talking about a girl, but Hiccup didn't know who. Until he felt a sharp pain he remembered.
The paramedic felt a small tug on his coat, he saw the boy trying to speak. He leaned down in front of his face hearing the word Hicca.
Seeing the confusion, Hiccup whispered it again. "My twin Hicca" when the man understood and walked away, Hiccup finally allowed his body to be swallowed by the darkness.
Hicca had not removed from her place. Not since seeing her brother being trampled by the vehicle.
Right now she was immobilized, she couldn't feel the throbbing pain in her wrist, which was now a dark deep purple due to the swelling. Her leg was worse off. The gash below her knee was bright red and raw, the blood was still flowing like a waterfall.
She could not comprehend what was happening or just didn't want to believe it.
Her ears were numb, her eyes seeing everything but not hearing what people were saying. Some standing mumbling to each other and others taking picture of the horrific scene.
Hicca tried to move, to see if her brother was ok, alive. Her body received a wakeup call when she moved her leg. The pain was immense, her head spinning from the blood loss.
She racked up a powerful cough making her chest become constricted. She began wheezing trying to calm down, but her body was going into shock.
The girl never saw a man come out of ambulance straight towards her.
He grabbed her face gently. "It will be ok, just take a slow deep breath for me ok" With a struggle she duplicated the man, her breathing still painful but better.
"We are going to put you in the same ambulance as the boy alright, everything will be fine". Her eyes were losing focus, the exhaustion taking over.
"Hiccup m-my brother" she muttered softly to the man. He nodded putting a hand on her shoulder.
"I'll be back in a moment, focus on your breathing ok" he rushed off to the man about to put Hiccup in the ambulance.
Hicca eyes were dropping and her body was falling. The blackness had overpowered her just as the man came back and quickly grabbed the girl before she fell on the pavement.
what do you think? i checked it over twice so there should not be any mistakes!
I didn't want to make the crash scene so big because of the hospital part but I liked what I had written!