Chapter 2: The Wintersfield and The Succubus
Author's Note Part 1: Alright guys, here's the second edited chapter for this story. Now, it's still relatively the same, just a few fixes in grammar mistakes, as well as a few pieces of added/changed details. Not much else to say other than we start with the pairing today!
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"God damned infernal device. What the hell possessed me to actually set that motherfucking alarm for this ungodly hour in the morning?" I grunt to myself as I push myself up and off the futon with one hand, pushing my raven colored hair out of the way of my gold eyes as I do so with my other hand so that I can get ready for the day. I take a look over my clothes in my closet, before sighing and putting on the academy uniform. "They could have at least made it a little less restricting." I mumble, pushing the door to my room open and walking over to the sinks, gathering a bit of water into the palms of my hands before I use them to wipe at my Caucasian skinned face. Clearing it of any grime, as well as waking myself up. I finish just as Tsukune makes his way out of his room, holding onto a bowl that he fills with water before he uses it to do exactly what I did. "Hey there Tsukune." I greet him with a small smile. He turns to me, blinking a bit to clear his eyes, and gives a small smile back.
"Oh. Hey John. I didn't see you there." He admits, to which I just chuckle.
"Eh, wouldn't really expect you to this early in the morning." I reply with a shrug, before I brush my teeth, go back to my room, and grab the school supplies I'd need for the day. I lock my door at the same time that Tsukune exits his own room, and I wait for him to lock his own door before we make our way out of the dorms, and down the path that leads to the school. As we walk, I think about what's happened at the school so far. The Inner Moka, as I've taken to calling her, knows what I am thanks to my little display of power during the Saizo incident, while the Outer Moka and Tsukune are still in the dark. And the only reason for that is because I'm not too keen on anyone knowing what I am. At least, not yet anyways. But not only that, Tsukune has managed to keep his secret of actually being a human for a good two weeks! I'm honestly surprised that he's managed to last this long, especially with how Moka reacts every time the two see each other.
I let myself chuckle slightly at Tsukune's expense, before I hear a conversation start up behind us. "Hey look at that. It's her." I hear one student begin, making me turn to look over my shoulder to see who they're talking about, although I already have a good guess. And I'm proven correct as the next students start to talk, and I catch a glimpse of a head of familiar pink hair.
"Oh yeah, that new student Moka." Continues a second student, looking back with a smirk and slight blush, the same reaction that the first student had. Although, the third student to speak up…
"She's so hot it should be illegal!" He exclaims, his hands clasped together and steam coming out of his nose.
Heh, guess the number of admires that Moka has didn't lessen during the two weeks either. If anything, the number's grown. I think, my right eye twitching as I just smile at the scene with a fairly large sweatdrop falling down the back of my head. Then, the pinkette notices someone, and starts to walk a bit faster with a smile growing on her face. The numbskulls talking about her immediately assume that she saw them, get hearts in place of their eyes, and rush forwards to meet her, arms wide in an invitation to a hug… Only to face fault as she passes them in favor of hugging my brunet friend. I smirk at their disbelieving faces, before it grows into a smile when I see the red blush and nervous smile that Tsukune has.
"G-good morning to you too Moka." He greets her, the blush and smile staying on his face as he's daring enough, in my eyes, to wrap his arm around her shoulders. I have a hard time stifling the chuckles that start to escape my mouth at the sight of the fan boy's reactions. Which are to look exactly like gorillas as they rant about Tsukune being friends with Moka. Although, the effort to stop myself from laughing increases when I hear them talk about Tsukune being strong enough to take down Saizo.
Man, I guess that my little tale about that helped out. After all, none of them are going after Tsukune at the moment. I think to myself with a smirk at the thought since it's helping Tsukune survive. Although, my sweatdrop from earlier returns as the bat that seems to follow us everywhere comes flying in out of nowhere, complaining about how the trio is stealing his job. I also notice that Tsukune apparently doesn't know about my little tail about how he was the one to take down Saizo, if his disbelieving face is anything to go by. Although, that quickly disappears as Moka grabs his hand and starts to lead him to the school. I just chuckle at the sight, following them with my hands in my pockets, and leaving the trio of students to wallow in their pity that none of them are in Tsukune's position. Never once noticing the familiar head of blue hair behind a tree.
I catch up to the duo in the middle of one of the many graveyards surrounding the campus, having one of their intimate moments. I just roll my eyes at them, before I start to walk past. Although, at the next words, I stop and turn back around to face them with a smirk present on my face. Just as I turn around, I manage to catch Moka biting Tsukune's neck, with said human freaking out in panic. Wide eyed with shark teeth and all, all because of the anime logic that apparently applies in the barrier that surrounds the academy… As well as the rest of Japan. A few seconds later, he goes running around randomly, before facing Moka. "Hey! You can't go around treating me like your breakfast!" He yells at her in a scratchy voice, before he goes running off in a random direction.
"Oops. Sorry." Moka apologizes with a finger to her mouth. I just chuckle at the scene before walking over and placing a hand on the pinkette's shoulder.
"Hey, don't worry too much about it. I'm sure Tsukune will get over it in a couple hours. Although, I would suggest you tone down on the withdrawals from your personal blood bank. I mean, Tsukune is a human going to a school for monsters. He still needs time to adjust to it all, and the fact that you're sucking his blood pretty much fifty times a day doesn't help the matter." I tell her, the pinkette blushing up a storm when I mentioned that Tsukune was her blood bank, before getting a thoughtful look on her face.
"Yeah, I guess you're right…" She admits, before she seems to think of something, and turns to look at me. "Hey John, we already know that Tsukune is a human, you and him already know that I'm a vampire, but me and Tsukune don't know what you are." She comments. I just give her a smile, before walking towards the school. Facing backwards with my hands crossed behind my head so that I can continue to look at her as I go.
"You'll just have to figure that out on your own Moka." I tell her.
"John…?" She tries, but I just give her a large smile filled with teeth and close my eyes to make it seem wider. I open them to see her pouting, before I chuckle and turn back around to continue walking to the school.
"Come on Moka! Don't want to be late do we?" I ask her, hearing a huff of annoyance come from the girl, before she follows me to the school. Suddenly, the sky gets covered by clouds, and the sounds of ravens cawing and thunder roaring can be heard. Then it goes away just as quickly as it came. I stare in the direction the lighting struck, before shrugging my shoulders and continuing on my way to the academy, not feeling a spike in Yokai, so I knew that the weird weather wasn't caused by a monster. It was just one of the many "normal" things to happen within the barrier. It doesn't take long for the two of us to reach the academy, and place our things in our lockers. After that, we make our way to the roof to wait for class to start. A few minutes into the wait, Moka decides to speak up.
"I'm going to apologize to him." She announces, making me look at her, before I nod. I know that she's talking about Tsukune, and that she's going to apologize for drinking his blood constantly. She leaves the rooftop, and I turn my attention back to staring at the dead forest that surrounds the school, a soft breeze blowing by as I tilt my head down to look at the ground below.
"~Sigh~ While those two hit it off right away, I haven't even bothered paying attention to the possibility of getting a girlfriend here. I mean, every single one of them is a looker, that's for sure, not that I'm a pervert, I'm just a guy. You can't blame me for at least looking at them." I mutter to myself, before getting back on track. "But with their personalities… Well, most of them are either high maintenance, or complete bitches, and some can't even blame said bitchiness on their monster instincts." I mutter to myself, before I sigh at another problem. "And then there's also that problem. With that problem, I can really only be happy with one of my own kind, a vampire, a nine-tailed fox, a succubus, or another handful of monster races. Otherwise, the relationship wouldn't exactly be a happy one… For me at least." I mutter with another downcast expression, before I feel a shift in the yokai energy surrounding the academy, except that I recognize this one since it's been going off constantly for the past couple weeks ever since school started.
"~Sigh~ And so one of the residential succubi have charmed another man. I mean, I can understand that it's in their nature and all, but I kind of wish that their race didn't have to resort to those methods. It would be nice if they could just go on dates and get to know a person that they want to spend their lives with, instead of having limitations to only one person that they can truly be happy with. It would definitely help re-populate their race. Since it's dying out and all…" I mutter the last part with a downcast expression. Kinda like mine… I trail off in thought, before I shake my head to stop the thought process before it gets worse. Once I've rid my thoughts of the problems that my own race faces, I take a look at the time and realize that it's almost time for my first class to start. With that, I make my way to my locker, grab the stuff that I'll need, and walk into the classroom.
When I do, I can see a bit of tension between Tsukune and Moka, along with a certain bluenette at the back of the class. Why do I suddenly have a feeling that "Charm" from earlier is the cause of this? I rhetorically ask myself as I take my seat beside Tsukune, since with Saizo being suspended after Mikogami, the principal, was given our side of the story. Because of this, it freed up the seat next to my friend, and I don't doubt that when Saizo eventually comes back, he'll probably be put into a different room. That, or he'll be moved as far away from the girls in here as possible. As I take out my stuff that I'll need, I lean over slightly.
"Dude, what's going on? I mean, I can understand that you might be a little upset with Moka for earlier, but why are you two giving each other the cold shoulder?" I ask him, noticing how he stiffens up at the mention of Moka sucking his blood, before he sighs.
"It's just… I'm not sure." He admits. "See, earlier-" whatever he's about to say is effectively cut off as Ms. Nekenome walks into the room and starts the lesson for the day, which, like most of the classes before, involves cats. I just sigh, before I take out my notebook, and jot down the notes that are actually beneficial to my learning, while doodling whenever she says something that isn't important. Unfortunately, the sounds of small lightning shocks constantly going off behind me doesn't exactly help in that regard.
Finally, class ends and I pack my items away in my bag, before turning to face Tsukune and see that he's noticed that Moka left. And apparently the blue haired succubus has as well… I have a bad feeling about this… I think as I look at the chair that the girl in question had previously been sitting in, before I turn back to Tsukune with a small frown on my face. "Hey Tsukune." I start, making the human teen turn to look at me. "You wanna tell me what was going on during class between you two?" I ask him, gesturing between him and the desk that Moka sits at. He rubs the back of his head at my question as a sheepish smile appears on his face.
"Uh, yeah, sure." He replies, before waving for me to follow him out of the room. I do so, quickly stopping to place my bag in my locker so that I would know where it was before I went to my room after the school day is done, and then follow the brunet as he walks along the halls, listening to him re-tell of the events that happened this morning, and how he didn't mean anything that he said. I just let out a mental sigh at what he tells me.
Guess I was right about Ms. Succubus being the cause of all this. And I'd chalk it up to said girl being jealous of Moka getting all the attention at school instead of her… Sometimes a monster race's instincts are a tricky thing. They could either get you liked by everyone around you, or they could make it a pain in the ass to get anyone to be your friend. I think, realizing that being a succubus was probably harder than it seemed to all of us other monsters. Sure, they get all the attention from everyone because of it, but once another girl comes into the picture and the guys start to pay attention to her… Bam! it's like little alarm bells go off in their minds telling them to get the girl away from their territory. I just let out another sigh when I realize that you can't really blame the girl, Kurumu as Tsukune told me her name was, for what she's doing. Which will make confronting her about it all the more difficult. I realize. Of course, life chooses that moment to screw us over.
"Are those babes gonna fight?" I hear someone ask, and turn in the direction it came from to see a large crowd of guys.
"For our sakes I really hope so." Someone else replies. I just sigh at that remark.
Dude, don't forget that we aren't in a human school. Here, when the claws come out, it's literal. Not figurative. I think with another sigh, before I grab onto Tsukune's arm and start to pull him towards the crowd of men. "Wanna find a succubus, you gotta know where to look." I mutter out loud, referring to the fact that men would most likely crowd them, just like what's happening at the current moment, despite the fact of a possible catfight. I manage to push our way through the crowd, before I let Tsukune start talking, since he told me that he was looking around for Moka to apologize to her for what he "said" earlier. I just stand at the front of the crowd with my arms crossed, deciding not to get involved with the little quarrel that's about to happen between them. After all, I can't be around my friends every moment of the day to help them solve this kind of stuff, so they're gonna need to learn how to do it on their own as well.
"Oh, there you are Moka. We've been looking all over for you." Tsukune says in surprise as he notices Moka at the epicenter of the crowd. I vaguely hear comments from the crowd about how a catfight will most likely break out, and frown.
At least they're not as bad as Saizo. I think to myself, allowing myself to mentally growl at the thought of the bastard.
"What Tsukune?" Moka asks him in annoyance, making me flinch.
On second thought, based on Moka's tone of voice, I'd say that a catfight is actually highly likely right now. I admit to myself as what sounds like a wolf howling in the back of my mind starts up, before it's cut off and then closely followed by a ~Thump!~. But, back to the possible catfight and Tsukune's attempts at dissolving it.
"Listen, I want to talk to you about those things that I said earlier." He tells her, before the bluenette succubus lunges at him and wraps him in a hug. In response, Tsukune just stares down at her with wide eyes as she greets him. "Hey, I-I'm sorry but, I've gotta talk to Moka right now." He tells her, grabbing her arms and unwrapping them from around his waist, before a small burst of yokai energy fills the immediate area, and Tsukune's hold loosens. I mentally sigh once again at the situation, before my face changes into a scowl as she influences his thoughts so that he won't apologize to our pink haired friend.
I can understand the need to rid the academy of competition for a succubus, but making it so that said competition drives a wedge between actual friends makes me just a tad upset. I think to myself, before I notice that the girl is looking at me as well, and I end up being pulled into her eyes. Wait, what the fuck?! How the hell was I pulled down into this shit?! This shouldn't be able to happen to me this easily! I cry out in my mind as I realize that I had been placed under the succubus' charm, and based on the small glimpse of the outside world that I see where Moka's running away in tears, I'd say that nothing good came out of it. I mentally calm myself with deep breaths. She's a succubus, remember. It's in her nature. She isn't like this because she's a bitch. She isn't like this because she's a bitch. She isn't like this because she's a bitch. I mentally repeat the line over and over to myself so that when I broke free of the Charm, I wouldn't end up beating the bluenette's ass into next week.
God damn it, finally. It only took the better part of an hour to successfully get out of that. I think to myself as I manage to break free of Kurumu's Charm, and cast my eyes upwards slightly, faintly noticing that Tsukune doesn't look to good if the frown present on his face is any indication. If I had to harbor a guess, I'd say that he was able to tell what was said between Moka and us, and it wasn't pretty. Unfortunately, I end up moving my head slightly, and the partially transformed Kurumu, with her tail present, notices.
"Aww, you must be sad about what happened to Moka." She says, and the next thing I know, I'm being suffocated. But not by hands surrounding my throat, instead, it's by two soft mounds pressing into my face, and cutting off the air circulation through my nose and mouth. My eyes widen when I realize that I'm being pressed between Kurumu's breasts, and have to fight the blood that suddenly starts rushing to my nose at the thought.
Damn hormones, damn anime logic causing nose bleeds, damn soft succubus breasts! I think to myself as it gets even harder to breath. I manage to notice Kurumu's eyes are closed, at the same time that I see Tsukune staring at the scene with wide eyes. I make a motion for him to leave with my hand, making sure he gets the message that he should take the time to go and apologize to Moka… Unfortunately, due to the lack of air, I can only manage waving my hand, and not in the way that tells him to leave while he has the chance. So, he just sits there with wide eyes as I'm suffocating.
"Don't worry about that girl. After all, your bosom buddy will make you all better." Kurumu continues, making my eyes widen even more, if that's even possible.
"Bosom buddy?!" I cry out in shock. Or at least, I try to. Due to the breasts pressing against my face, it instead comes out as "Mph Murmph!?" Not even a minute later, I'm suddenly on my back on one of the beds in the infirmary, with Kurumu straddling my form. Needless to say, I'm blushing up a storm at the position, as Tsukune seems to have passed out from the blood loss through his nose. Damn sexy succubus and her damn sexy ways! I cry out internally, taking notice that she's leaning in towards me with a small smile, and a blush. Then, I see the tell-tale shimmer in her eyes, and darkness creeps into my vision once again. The only difference is that this time around, I'm not completely out of it, and I can see a whole lot more of the outside world. Guess I'm building up immunity to it. I think to myself as Kurumu continues to smile down at me. Then, as she leans in to plant a kiss on my lips, no doubt to make me her personal slave, I manage to break the last holds that are restricting me, and lean forwards to wrap her in a hug instead. When I do this, I hear a gasp of surprise come from the bluenette.
"~Gasp!~ This is my first time! You can't be so rough!" She exclaims, making the perverted part of my brain crack the classic 'That's what she said.' Joke, before it's silenced and I loosen up the hug so that I can lean back and look her in the eyes.
"Look, Kurumu. I understand what you're doing, but this isn't the right way to go about it." I tell her with a small smile. She lets out another gasp of surprise at my comment.
"But, how did you break free?" She asks me, still in shock from that fact alone. I just shrug in response.
"Honestly? I'm not too sure." I tell her, though I feel like it has to do with what type of monster I am. "But like I said, you don't need to go charming every single boy you see just so that you can find your Destined One." I tell her. Although, I re-think my wording when her face gets an angry scowl on it after I say that, and I internally flinch. Shit. I literally just told her how to act like her kind… I'm screwed. Is my thought process, before the door is thrown open, and Moka comes running in. Kurumu and I look at her in shock for a moment, before the bluenette is sent flying out the window courtesy of the vampire.
"~Phew!~ Thanks a ton there Moka. I think I was about to die! Note to self, don't give other monsters suggestions on how to behave like their race." I comment, noticing that the sound of shattering glass seemed like it was enough to wake Tsukune up. As him and Moka start to talk about their "arguments" from earlier, I notice a speck flying towards us. And said speck has a bit of blue on its head. "Shit!" I exclaim, shoving the two of them out of the way as a tail wraps around my waist, before pulling me out the window. A few seconds later, the tail is throwing me out towards the forest, where I land in a scuffed up heap.
"Ugh, another note to self, when saving your only friends, don't leave yourself open to an attack by the thing that you're saving them from." I mutter, pushing myself up with one hand while I use the other to rub my aching forehead.
"You bastard!" I look up and see Kurumu, except that she's lengthened her nails to the point where if I get sliced by them, I'm dead.
"~Gulp~ Defusing this situation just got a whole lot worse." I say in a tiny voice, before Kurumu does a sweeping run with her nails aiming to skewer me, scowling the entire time. I manage to dodge out of the way in time, and look back to see the trees that were unfortunate enough to be in her way getting cut down by her nails. "A lot harder." I mutter, before dodging another sweeping run. This continues for a few minutes, before a familiar energy fills the air, and the sky turns a blood red. "Damn." I mutter, knowing that as hard as it was before to defuse this situation, with Inner Moka now a part of it, it's gonna be nigh impossible for me to get everyone out of this in one piece.
My thoughts are proven correct as Kurumu is suddenly kicked off into the distance by a certain silver haired vampire who yells out, "Know your place!" before she then stalks in the direction that the bluenette was kicked.
Damn it, damn it, damn it! I think, running after her so that I can stop the silver haired vampire before she ends up going too far, and doing something that the Outer Moka would regret despite the fact that she wouldn't have technically done it herself. I manage to make it to the clearing just in time for me to see Moka threaten to rip off Kurumu's wings and tail, and I can tell that Tsukune has the same idea to stop her as me, but I'd rather not risk having my human friend go up against an angry vampire. So, I make it in front of Kurumu and hold out my arms just before Tsukune starts running. In response to my arrival in front of the succubus, the silver haired Moka looks at me with narrowed eyes.
"Just what do you think you're doing Wintersfield?" She asks me, not even bothering to use my first name, not that it matters at the moment. What matters is that I stop her before she does something that makes Outer Moka feel guilty for the rest of the school year, or possibly the rest of her life.
"I'm stopping you from doing something wrong." I tell her plainly. She just narrows her eyes even more when I say this.
"She dared to defy a vampire. This is the least that she deserves." Inner Moka comments. I just sigh.
"Moka, you know that's not true. Hell, think about her position. She's searching for the one person that she'll be able to be with for the rest of her life. I mean, yeah, succubi don't exactly take the best route for that, but how would you react if the vampire race was dying out, and you knew that there was only one person out there that you would be able to spend your life with? Have kids with? What would you do then?" I ask her. She stares at me for a moment, before turning around with a huff and making her way over to Tsukune.
"Fine, I will let her off for now. But," She starts, looking over her shoulder to send a slight glare my way. "She will be your responsibility. Should she step out of line one more time, I will follow through on my promise." She tells me, before she reattaches the Rosary around her neck, and changes back into the pink haired Moka, falling into Tsukune's arms in an unconscious heap. As this happens, I let out a breath of relief, happy that I'd managed to get out of that unscathed before I let a small smile appear on my face as I turn to look at a teary eyed Kurumu.
"Why…?" She asks me. I just continue to smile at her in response.
"Because, I know that even though it wasn't the best way, you were just doing what you had to for your race. Oh, and, I'm sorry about what I said about your methods earlier…" I trail off, rubbing the back of my neck sheepishly. She's silent for a moment, before she breaks off into sobs. I look at her with wide eyes, before waving my hands in front of me. "Hey! D-don't cry! Come on!" I yell, not having any effect as she continues to bawl. Soon enough I just give up trying to calm her down, sit down next to her against the tree she had been thrown into thanks to Inner Moka's kick, and let her cry into my shirt. Waving for Tsukune to go on ahead with Moka. He nods, understanding that this will most likely be a while, before taking her back to the academy to rest while I just sit there with a succubus crying on my shoulder.
"No shit? The Rosary was speaking to you?" I ask Moka, who nods in confirmation.
"It's weird huh? Maybe the seals getting weaker or something." Moka tells us, Tsukune looking into the sky at that thought.
"Really?" He asks rhetorically, before letting a small smile appear on his face. "She may not think it," He starts, getting mine and Moka's attention. "But you're both my friends along with John. I couldn't bear to be without either Moka. And you know what, if you guys want to suck my blood, its fine by me." He admits, before everything seems to go all 2D on me, and Tsukune starts to get nervous, putting his hands together. "I, want to apologize about yesterday." He starts, only for Moka to shake her head as everything goes back to normal 3D and they start on one of their many intimate moments… Oh, did I mention that for some reason, the air actually did sparkle whenever they did this… I have a sudden need to go into the human world and destroy those books now… But before my train of thought can continue on that track, the bat that we've seen all over campus lands on my shoulder.
"How'd we go from bouncing boobs to this crap?!" He cries out incredulously.
"I don't know little dude… I just don't know." I admit while shaking my head, before he goes flying off in a slight panic as a familiar voice calls out from behind us.
"Good morning! Hi John!" Kurumu exclaims, completely oblivious to the intimate moment that she just interrupted between Tsukune and Moka. "I made some cute little cookies for us. How about you and I eat them together?" She asks me with a smile, making me raise an eyebrow at her cheerful attitude as I take one of the cookies in question.
"Well, alright, but why are you asking me?" I ask, taking a bite from the cookie and mentally start crying anime tears. Best cookies ever! I cry internally.
"Oh come on, you already know that I'm looking for my one and only destined partner for life don't you?" She asks, keeping the smile on her face. I stop myself just as I'm about to take another bite from the cookie, looking at her with wide eyes.
"…Is this going where I think it is?" I ask her, part of me hopeful, and part of me scared as hell.
"Well, I've decided that it's you!" She exclaims. The reaction that this gets from Tsukune and Moka is as expected.
"What?!" They cry out in surprise, while I just finish my cookie with a calm face, before I copy their expressions of surprise.
"Hey, it's all your fault since you risked your life to protect me the way that you did. Now I'm totally in love with you!" She exclaims, coming over to me and rubbing her breasts against my chest, making me space out. Hey, I may be from an all-powerful race of monsters, but I'm still a guy from a race of monsters. And a teen at that! No matter what species you are, hormones will almost always find a way to get the better of you in situations like this.
"Go ahead and take one. They're really yummy, just like me." At that sentence the succubus whispers in my ear, my brain is pretty much turned into complete and utter mush, and it's only brought back to reality as Tsukune yells out in pain when Moka bites him and starts to suck his blood. But once that's over, I'm right back to being putty in Kurumu's hands, and the devious smirk on her face tells me that she knows it too. Especially when she breathes right into my ear… "And I wouldn't mind giving you a taste." And whispers into it, essentially shutting my brain down as she gives a seductive chuckle, and slowly trails her hand across my cheek.
Dear Mom, Dad and Joseph,
Man, you wouldn't believe the last week here at school. It was fairly normal, as normal as it can be at a school for monsters that is, just like last week. At least, it was until today. Because today, I ended up getting a girlfriend in the form of Kurumu the succubus. At first this started out as a problem with the bluenette beauty declaring war on Moka, since she's a succubus and it was pretty much instincts at that point. But in the end, I managed to resolve it in a way where no one had any lasting damage. Although, after I saved her, apparently Kurumu decided that I was her Destined One since I risked my life to save her. Well, I didn't exactly risk my life, more along the lines of I risked being hospitalized for a good year, or year and a half. But she doesn't need to know that. At least not yet she doesn't.
But, either way, because of what I did, Kurumu decided that I'm now her Destined One, and she's also agreed not to use her Charm on anyone else. As great as this is, especially with my girlfriend being a succubus, for multiple reasons, I honestly now fear for myself because she's a succubus. I can only imagine what she's gonna try to do with me over the year… Man, I'm glad I'm sixteen. I'd rather not get sent to monster jail for being underage when she decides that she wants to get intimate. Whenever we end up getting to that point at least. Actually… When is the age of consent for that kind of thing here in Japan? I guess that I'll have to check that out. But, that's all for this week.
Sincerely,
John Wintersfield
Author's Note Part 2: Alright, so the second chapter is out! A little heads up guys, because I have school off completely tomorrow, I may manage to get the third chapter out! But no promises. Anywho, the relationship for John x Kurumu has begun! And it will most likely move at a relatively fast pace. The main reason being, Kurumu is a freaking succubus! You can't expect her to take this kind of thing slowly! Hell, she's the main reason that this story is rated M! That, the excessive swearing, and the future risqué-ness of chapters, along with the fight scenes and how they'll actually include wounds and possible gore during some fights.
Now, as for the reviews from last chapter, here are the responses to them!
SirAnonymousPanda:
First off, I just have to say, great name! And, as for the Portal reference, I was hoping that someone would catch that! Thanks for the compliment, and how's this for updating soon?
LancelotAlbion567:
Hey, thanks for that! I'm glad that I was able to keep your interest with this new version, and keep you happy with the OC x Kurumu pairing. It's great that you understand the problems that come with writing stories, and I hope that this is a quick enough update for you.
Anime PJ:
Thanks for that, and I'll have to agree with you on some level. Flamers are pretty much just haters. I also like to hear that you like John being a bad-ass. I hope to see more chapters from your own R+V story as well! For those of you who don't know about it, check out his R+V story, "Freshman at Yokai". It has quite a few chapters out right now, and all of them are awesome!
(Update: This guy has actually updated his story, and the last time I checked, he's managed to edit his chapters, and update new ones. So, for those of you, like me, who have read his first version, make sure you go back and read his edited chapters before he gets to the newer chapter.)
Well, I think that's about it for the reviews, so thanks for taking the time out of your day to read this, and I hope to see you all next time!
P.s. I'm thinking of writing another (Yes, another) Rosario + Vampire story, but this one will have a different character, and he'll be paired with Mizore. I want your guys thoughts on that, and if I should write it or not. But, either way, I probably will since my brain works in mysterious ways even for me. Bye now!
(Update: July 5th, 2015:
Well guys, here's another edited chapter. Not much was changed except a few minor details here and there, but really, I like how I wrote things out the first time, and I only had to look over the grammar mistakes that I made, and give some of the scenes that I put in a bit more detail, as well as change details so that they fit in with what I wrote after those scenes. Anyways, I hope you guys are enjoying the updated story so far, and I hope that you'll continue to like the story as I continue to update it!
Also, for that other story that I talked about… Yeah, let's just say that it's not the only R+V story cooking in my mind at the moment… Although, it is the only R+V story that only takes place in the R+V category…)