Chapter 3: John and friends, meet Yukari the Witch.
Author's Note Part 1: Well guys, here's the third edited chapter for this story. After this one, the fourth one is gonna be updated, and then I'm going to make sure to write down that I've edited these chapters in the first author's note of the fifth chapter. But, not much to say about this chapter beside the fact that a few details were changed/added, and that I fixed most of the grammar mistakes that I saw though, as I go through this time after time each time I post a new chapter, I keep noticing ones that I skipped over before…
John's POV:
"God damn Japanese class…" I trail off, shaking my fist in slight anger as I look at the ground with a depressing aura hanging over my head. I'd taken a look at the mid-term test results for the school, and found that I'd placed 20th. "If it weren't for that class, then I would've been fine. Probably at least in the teens." I continue complaining. Although, that's just what I think. After all, most of the test was centered on what we learned about the human world, along with some things from the other classes we take. Had I just done better with the Japanese portion, I would have been fine. After all, I'd been living in the human world for years now, so it wasn't that hard to write down the answers to the questions. But, I definitely had trouble with Japanese. I can understand and speak it perfectly just like every other monster, but when it comes to writing the stuff out, I'm complete shit at it! I complain to myself. After a few more minutes of mentally berating myself and complaining about the class, I decide to look for where my other friends placed. It doesn't take long for me to find Tsukune placed at 128. I see him standing there in a similar manner to how I reacted to my own test score a few minutes ago.
"Well, it could've been worse." He mutters, to which I place a comforting hand on his shoulder, making him look up at me. "Oh, hey John." He greets.
"Hey Tsukune. You're right about it being worse. But, I guess that's what happens when mid-term tests happen earlier than they usually do for you guys, huh?" I ask him, getting a nod in return, before the brunet seems to remember something.
"Hey John, I just remembered, you're from America, right?" He asks, getting a nod from me in return. "Well, what's it like for school over there? I mean, it can't be much different than here, can it?" He asks me. I put a hand to my chin in thought at his question.
"Well… For one, the schools over there don't have these kinds of uniforms. I mean, the skirts here would be pretty much unacceptable over there, and there aren't many people with multi-colored hair. Besides that, the only other difference I can think of is that there aren't mid-term tests. Only ones that we take at the end of each unit that we learn, along with a giant final test for each class at the end of the year." Throughout my explanation, Tsukune is nodding his head in understanding, before we each hear a commotion behind him, and turn to find Moka walking this way, the commotion in question being that all the guys she passes by say nice things about her.
I chuckle to myself as she just passes them in favor of running up to Tsukune. No doubt they were trying to get on her good side. I think to myself, before I notice that the two of them are going into one of their infamous intimate moments when Moka stops in front of Tsukune. I swear that I can see sparkles surrounding the two love birds as fire surrounds all the jealous men glaring at my brunet friend while yelling out complaints about why it is that he's her friend, and why they're not in his position instead.
Suddenly, I feel the some of the glares and angered yelling turn their direction to me, just before I feel a soft weight on my back, and two slim arms wrap themselves around my neck while two slender legs wrap around my waist. I smile at the feeling that I've become accustomed to over the past week, before a familiar voice rings out through the air. "~Ya-hoo!~ Hi John!" Kurumu exclaims as she gets off my back, letting me turn around to face her with a smile.
"Well good morning to you too Kurumu." I greet, getting a smile in return as I hear the yelling from the group of jealous men aimed at me and Tsukune get slightly louder. "So, how'd you do on the test?" I ask, getting a nervous look in return for a second, before she waves the question off.
"Oh, I didn't see my name on the board. I guess they just forgot it or something." She says, and I respond with a sweatdrop and a small smile as I realize that she must not have done that well, and was just trying to play it off so that I didn't know her score. Oh well, I'll just go along with it I guess. After all, I'd rather not push her and make it so that she becomes upset because I just wanted to know what she got.
"Well that's too bad. Hopefully they'll remember next time." I tell her, getting a nervous laugh in return.
"Yeah…" She trails off, before getting an actual smile back on her face. "Anyways, how did you do John?" She asks, probably because she both wants to get off the topic of her score, and because she might also actually be interested.
"Eh, I ended up getting 20th." I admit with a shrug, Kurumu reacting with a gaping mouth, before wrapping me in a hug. Said hug effectively pushing my head between her large breasts.
"~Ya-hoo!~ My Destined One isn't only handsome, he's extremely smart too!" She exclaims, before pulling back to give me a seductive smile. "How about I give you a little reward for your placement?" She asks me, getting a smirk from me when I think about what the "reward" likely is. But my smirk quickly disappears when I notice a small scene happening out of the corner of my eyes. One that involves the three class presidents from the classroom next to ours, as well as a small girl in a witch costume. My eyes narrow when I see the one wearing a sash lunge towards her, and the next thing anyone knows, I'm standing between him and the girl with the his wrist clenched tightly in my hand.
"Now, just what is going on here?" I ask them with a hard tone to my voice, gaining the attention of the students around us.
"W-well, I-I was just congratulating young Yukari here on getting first place for the test scores." The guy whose wrist is currently in my grip tells me with a nervous look on his face. I narrow my eyes at the obvious liar, though in the back of my mind I think about how the girl's name sounds familiar for some reason.
"I call bullshit." I respond, before looking over my shoulder at the now named Yukari. "You're turn. What's going on here?" I ask her.
"W-well. He was congratulating me, but he wasn't being sincere about it. And then he started to make fun of me before he tried to attack me." She tells me. I narrow my eyes even more as I turn back around to look at the prick.
"Is that so? Well then, I guess that a bit of retaliation is in order here right?" I ask no one in particular, before slinging the guy over my shoulder so that he lands on the ground on his back, and then I start to pull on his arm, hearing a satisfying ~Pop!~ that signifies the guy's arm has been dislocated.
"~Argh!~" He cries out in pain, before I kick him over to his buddies, his dislocated arm flailing helplessly around when I do so.
"I'll say this once. Stop what you're doing, leave, and never do it again." I tell them with a harsh glare as the guy's pals pick him up and start to walk off so they can get his shoulder relocated.
"You bastard! Don't think this is the end, you filthy witch!" he cries out as they enter the school. I sigh as I realize that my threat isn't going to do much good, and just hope it's enough to get them to back off for a good amount of time.
"Why…?" I turn around when I hear the little girl speak, and see her looking up at me with a questioning gaze. I just give her a small smile, and kneel down to put a hand on her shoulder.
"Because you were in trouble, and I don't want to see anyone get hurt." I tell her, before standing back up as the other people in my group walk over. "Hey guys, I have the situation under control here." I tell them, getting a nod from them before I turn around to face the young witch. "So your name's Yukari, right?" I ask her, still trying to find out why the name sounds familiar.
"Yup! My name's Yukari Sendo." She tells me with a small smile, causing my eyes to widen when she tells me this, as her last name reminded me why it was that her first name sounded so familiar.
What?! This girl is Yukari?! The one who placed first in the exam?! But she's only eleven! I think to myself, my thoughts voiced by Moka right after I finish my internal surprise. Before anything else can be said though, Kurumu is holding my arm between her breasts and pulling me away from the others.
"Well, while this is all well and good, me and John have someplace to be." She tells them, before we turn the corner of the school and continue on our way.
After a few minutes of walking around the academy, Kurumu stops when we reach a more secluded part of campus with a bench off to the side. She immediately pushes me onto it, before straddling me with a seductive smirk. "I think it's time for that reward John." She purrs, before pulling me by my jacket into a heated kiss. One that I return in full, putting one hand on the back of her head and pulling her deeper into the kiss I place the other at her waist. I'll admit, it took me a few days to get used to having a succubus as my girlfriend, but with what her instincts were, I had to quickly get used to the constant kissing. At the moment that's all we've reached, although I'm not sure how much longer it's gonna be until she wants to go further… But, for now, I'll just worry about the present.
After a few minutes of lip-lock, we pull apart, panting to regain the air we lost. "Kurumu, have I ever told you that you're a damn good kisser?" I ask my girlfriend rhetorically. She just giggles, before leaning in for another kiss. I happily oblige, deepening the kiss as time goes on. After a few more seconds, it turns into a French kiss, and Kurumu moans into my mouth when I start it. As this happens, I start to rub her waist slightly, making her move her hands so that she's grabbing my hair, and deepening the kiss more than it already was. I don't complain, having gotten used to it, and even moving my arms so that they're wrapped around her waist to keep us in lip lock. When we're forced to break for more air a few minutes later, we're both red in the face, and panting a bit more than the time beforehand.
As we continue to take in our breaths, Kurumu licks her lips, and leans in so that our foreheads are touching. "I think that you deserve a bit more of your "reward" for placing 20th on that exam John. That, and this is beneficial to me as well." She whispers to me in a sultry whisper. In response, I give her a deep chuckle, and meet her amethyst eyes with my own gold ones.
"You won't find me complaining Kurumu." I tell her in my own whisper, making the succubus currently straddling me give me a seductive smirk, before she pulls me back into another French kiss, myself returning it as my arms that are wrapped around her waist pull her towards me slightly, making it so that her breasts are pressed up against my chest, and getting a moan out of the bluenette into the kiss as she starts to pull on my hair a bit harder as our tongues duel within our mouths. Our make-out session continues for around another half-hour, since the school day is over, before Kurumu eventually pulls back with a flushed face, my own in a similar state. I give her one last kiss, making sure that this one is actually loving and not the frenzied one that we had whenever we made-out, before Kurumu hops off the bench, and I stand up next to her.
As we start walking back towards the academy, I take her hand in mine, and she rests her head on my shoulder with a light blush. It still confuses me slightly how Kurumu can be so forwards with her feelings, and act on them without any hint of embarrassment, but when it comes to the little things like holding hands or a soft kiss on the cheek, she's suddenly extremely self-conscious about it. But, I've learned to take it as it is, since I care for her no matter what. When we get back to the academy, we find Tsukune making his way towards the infirmary, nursing some cuts and bruises that are present on his head for some reason. "Um, Tsukune, what happened to you?" I ask him in confusion, said confusion clear on my face as Kurumu lifts her head from my shoulders with a confused facial expression that matches mine. The brunet turns to look at us with a frown in place, before he winces in pain.
"What? Oh, hey John, Kurumu." He greets us. "Um, you know that girl? Yukari Sendo?" He asks us, getting nods in response. "Well…" As we continue to follow Tsukune to the infirmary, he tells us about what's been happening during the day so far, telling us about how Yukari announced her "Wuv" for Moka, and how the little girl is reacting to how close to the pinkette Tsukune is. By the time we reach the infirmary, and Kurumu has started to clean up the cuts and bruises on his head, he's finished explaining, and has moved on to complaining about how the alcohol stings.
"What I don't get is why you're so confused about how Yukari's acting." I say from my position leaning against the wall with my arms crossed over my chest. Tsukune looks up at me in confusion.
"What do you mean? She's eleven! And a girl! How is it not confusing as to why she's acting this way?!" He cries out, before wincing again as more alcohol is used.
"Wait, are you saying that you honestly don't realize it?" I ask him with a raised eyebrow, getting a nod in response. "Well, let's see what's happened so far. One, Yukari, an eleven year old, who is stating that she "Wuv's" Moka. Two, she's saying that she loves Moka. Another girl. I'd say that the first one would constitute to a high school crush. Meaning that said crush could last for as long as a week, or the duration of our time at this school. As for the second one… I'd constitute it as her being a lesbian." I tell them, getting nods for the first, but confused looks for the second.
"A lesbian?" Kurumu asks me in confusion.
"What's a lesbian?" Tsukune continues. My eyes widen at their questions.
"Wait, wait, wait. Are you guys seriously telling me that neither of you have any idea what a lesbian is?" I ask them, getting nods of confirmation in response. "You know, you I can understand Kurumu, what with you being a succubus and all. But you seriously don't know what a lesbian is Tsukune? I mean, we had all kinds of assemblies and what-not about accepting them and others like them back in America. I'm surprised there's nothing like that here in Japan." I tell him, getting shocked looks from both of them.
"Wait, so, Yukari likes Moka because it's a high school crush, and she likes other girls?" Kurumu asks me, getting a nod from me in response.
"Yeah. That's about it." I reply. Unfortunately, before we can get much further into the conversation, Tsukune suddenly reaches towards Kurumu… More specifically, her breasts. My first reaction is the one that any guy who's girlfriend is about to be groped does. I pull her towards me, and then smack his hand away from her. "Alright Tsukune, I know that this isn't you. So, what the hell are you doing?" I ask him with a raised eyebrow.
"I don't know! I'm not trying to do this, it's just happening!" He cries out, before Moka walks into the infirmary.
"Finally, it took me all afternoon just to-" She cuts herself off when she sees Tsukune groping the open air. "Um, Tsukune… What are you doing?" She asks, blinking her eyes in confusion. But before he can respond to her question, a familiar voice is heard from outside the window. And it doesn't sound pleased.
"No! He's supposed to be squeezing the girl's big breasts!" We all turn around and face the windows to see none other than Yukari standing there, a hay doll in one hand, while the other is clenched into a fist in frustration while her eyes are squeezed shut.
"Yukari?!" We all yell out in surprise, causing the little witch to open her eyes and stare at us fearfully when she realizes that she's caught in the act before ducking down to try and hide. Only for her witch hat to give away her position. A few minutes later, we've gotten Yukari into the room, and she's hiding behind Moka as Tsukune sends a glare her way.
"Look, I can't take this anymore. You guys have got to do something about this." Tsukune tells us, the annoyance clear in his tone.
"Look, she's just a little kid. It's not that big of a deal." Moka tells him, Yukari sticking her tongue out at Tsukune as Moka says this, further annoying the brunet. I just stand off to the side with Kurumu, watching as the two have yet another quarrel involving another person getting between them. I swear, almost everyone on campus can practically see that they're a couple, and hate it, besides the two in question.
"Come on now, that's no excuse! She's got to know that she can't go about messing with people like that!" He exclaims. "I think it's about time she learned her lesson." He continues, Moka seeming reluctant but looking at the young witch none the less.
"I suppose you're right, but…" The pinkette trails off as Tsukune starts to speak again.
"Yukari, look. If you keep this crap up, nobody's gonna like you okay? And before long, you'll end up alone with no friends." He tells the young witch, making her go on the defensive.
"Who cares? I'm a genius alright, as far as I'm concerned if people aren't at my level then why the heck should I waste my time being friends with them anyways?" She asks, before looking at the ground. "Plus… What's the big deal? After all, I've been alone since the very beginning." She tells us, getting sympathy from the group at the confession… Before she makes brass objects appear and fall on top of Tsukune's head. "Ahahaha! Oh man, you totally fell for that one!" She exclaims, prompting Tsukune to jump up and attempt to chase her out of the room.
I've gotta say, the situation could have been handled a bit better. I mean, was Yukari in the wrong? Yeah, a little. But did Tsukune need to go off on her like that? No, he didn't. As I'm thinking about this, Moka and Tsukune get further into their fight, before the prior goes running off after Yukari. Guess it's time to start talking. I think, pushing myself off the wall and placing a hand on Tsukune's shoulder.
"Tsukune, do you know anything about witches?" I ask him, getting a blank stare in response, to which I sigh. "I didn't think so, I swear, after this is over, we're gonna have to go to the library and get you caught up on the different kinds of monsters around here. But, back to the matter at hand. See, witches are considered boundary beings. Meaning that they aren't seen as fully monster, nor are they very well-liked by humans. I mean, sure, at one point they were considered the missing link between the two, but now they're just seen as nothing more than half-monsters." I tell him.
"Half-monsters?" Tsukune asks me with confusion in his eyes. I nod in response.
"Yeah, see, while the monsters don't see them as full monsters because of many different reasons that I won't go into at the moment, the humans do. Ever hear of the Salem witch trials in America? All true, and unfortunately, many innocent witches, and falsely accused humans, were killed during that time. So you see, Yukari doesn't really feel like she's accepted by anyone. So, she's probably felt this way since the very beginning. Just like she said before, even if it was just to get you to lower your guard." I tell him, getting a look of understanding from the brunet.
"So then… She's just like me." He mutters more to himself than anyone else, before he goes running out of the room with determination in his eyes. Me and Kurumu watch him go, before I sigh and start walking towards the door with a small smile on my face.
"Come on Kurumu. Don't want our friend there to get into a situation that he can't get out of on his own." I tell her, hearing her walk after me a few seconds later as we walk out of the school and in the direction that I can feel Yukari's Yokai energy coming from. And unfortunately, it seems like the three bastards from earlier are there with her as well.
"Damn it!" I exclaim a few minutes later, before I start running in the direction of the six different energy signatures that I can feel at the moment. "The three bastards just fucking changed into their true forms! Hopefully Moka can hold them off until we get there." I mutter the last part to myself as Kurumu keeps up with my pace, before we reach the clearing a few minutes later just in time to see a couple lizard men rushing Tsukune and Yukari in an attempt to skewer them. Needless to say, I rushed in there with Kurumu, myself grabbing the brunet teen, while my girlfriend grabbed the witch.
"Wha-? John?" My friend asks in confusion as I help him to stay standing, taking notice to the three long scratch marks on his back that were no doubt caused by the lizard men in front of us, who are now glaring at me and Kurumu.
"Yo. The cavalry's arrived." I reply simply, turning my gaze to the three class reps from earlier, who were the lizard men in question.
"Give me a break. Two other do-gooders?" One of them asks rhetorically, his voice filled with annoyance at our sudden appearance.
"This is getting annoying." Another one comments.
"What do you say we round them up and eat every last one of them?" The final one asks, prompting Tsukune to walk forward and hold out his hands to block any attack that may come our way.
"You want some? Bring it on!" Tsukune exclaims, surprising me slightly at his gusto.
Huh. Dude's got balls… Now if only he could apply this to every other situation, and not just times like these. I think to myself, before I notice that he's starting to sway from side to side because of blood loss caused by the scratches on his back.
"Tsukune no!" Moka exclaims, rushing to his side to help him stay standing. Unfortunately, this is exactly the situation that the bastard trio was waiting for.
"It's time boys! Attack!" The lead one exclaims, readying his claws and teeth.
"Time to feed!" Another one exclaims.
"Dinner is served!" The final one yells out. Unfortunately for them, Tsukune's hand happens to clip Moka's Rosary as he tries to find a good handhold to keep him standing. Not five seconds later, a burst of Yokai fills the area, and Inner Moka is standing in Outer Moka's place, a scowl on her face as she glares at the lizard men.
"Get back you filthy trash." She tells the lizard men in annoyance with a commanding tone as I help Tsukune to stand.
Man, is this going to be a weekly occurrence or something? I mean, every time we get into a tough spot, we end up calling on Inner Moka to solve it. I think to myself as I sling Tsukune's arm over my neck to keep him from falling to the ground.
"Look! Her hair! Don't you know that getting your hair dyed is against school rules?!" One of the lizard men exclaims as they rush the silver haired vampire.
"That skirt's way too short too! That's a clear violation!" Another yells out as they follow the first one's lead and run towards Inner Moka. Unfortunately for them, they're both draped over the branches of a fairly large tree within a time span of twelve seconds. Needless to say, the final lizard man isn't exactly happy about this.
"She took them out that easily? I can't even see her. What the hell just happened?" He asks rhetorically, not expecting an answer. Yet he receives one anyways.
"You're not worth my time. The only way you pathetic losers can gain any power is by ganging up on the weak." Inner Moka comments from her place standing behind the monster, making him look at her in fear, before jumping away from her and pulling out a book, flipping through the pages a few moments later.
"Having such strength is against our school rules!" He exclaims, lunging towards her to attack as he throws the book away, only to receive a kick to the mouth in response.
"Know your place!" Inner Moka yells, breaking quite a few of his teeth as she sends him skidding across the lake, before he crashes into a floating tree and begins sinking to the bottom. Bubbles rising to the surface as he sinks.
"That was amazing. I guess we can always count on Moka." Tsukune comments, making a tick-mark appear on my head.
"Hey! What about me?!" I yell out indigenously, making him turn to look at me.
"Oh yeah, you too John." He admits, making me sag with a depressing aura hanging over my head.
"Of course, you mention me after I remind you that I'm here." I mutter, only to be distracted from my musings as Yukari speaks up.
"But why?" She asks us, making me, Tsukune and Kurumu turn to look at her.
"What do you mean?" Tsukune asks her.
"I was so mean, and I did mean things to everybody. I don't get it, why did you guys come and save me?" She asks.
"Didn't you hear anything we said Yukari? We rescued you because we want to be there for you." Tsukune tells her, eliciting a startled gasp from the witch as I let out a chuckle, hand Tsukune off to Kurumu, and kneel down to place a hand on the little girl's shoulder.
"From now on, you won't have to be alone Yukari. All of us will be here for you. Just like a family." I tell her with a smile. She takes a look at Inner Moka, who's looking off to the side as if she doesn't care, before turning back to me, and starts to bawl. I look at her in surprise for a moment, before giving a small smile, and wrapping her in a hug. letting her cry into my shoulder. This continues for a while, before she passes out and we take her to the infirmary to rest. Inner Moka sealing herself once again before we return to campus. We also leave Tsukune in the infirmary to get the three scratch marks on his back healed. After that, Moka decided to stay behind with Tsukune, as me and Kurumu headed off to spend the rest of the day just relaxing together, with the occasional heated moment between the two of us.
Finally, it's just before seven, and we walk back to the dorm rooms. When we reach the part that separates the male dorms from the female dorms, we turn to look at one another, and I brush a strand of her hair behind her ear. "Guess I'll see you tomorrow." I say, getting a small smile in response before I lean in and give her a kiss, pulling back to see her pink face. I give her a small chuckle, which she returns, before giving her one last kiss on the cheek, and then head off to my dorm to sleep for the night.
"So did you hear? Apparently, Yukari cleaned up her act after the situation with the lizard men. She even got up in front of her entire class to apologize for all the mean tricks she pulled." Kurumu tells us as we make our way to our classroom with bags filled with snacks, three days after the events with the young witch. "Everyone actually started to feel guilty about how they treated her after that. Little by little they started to open up to her." She continues as we slide open the door and walk into the room.
"That's great." Moka says with a smile, which pretty much disappears at the scene that we walk in on. This scene happens to be Yukari hugging Tsukune around the waist with a large smile on her face.
"Oh Tsukune, I just love you to death!" The witch exclaims, making Moka drop her bag of snacks.
"Yukari?" She asks in surprise at seeing the witch hugging the brunet teen.
"Oh hey guys! Our classes are right next to each other! I should come over and play some time!" She exclaims with a large smile.
"Come over and play?" Moka asks her with a slightly nervous voice. And I have to say, I'm slightly nervous about the answer as well. Especially since she'd become like a little sister to me over the past couple days.
"Yeah, it'll be fun! Because I already love you Moka, and now I've fallen madly in love with Tsukune too, isn't that great?!" She exclaims. The only answer she receives is stunned silence, so she continues. "When I got pushed down by Tsukune that time, for some reason it made me feel like I wasn't a kid anymore." She says with a bright blush. At the implications that sentence brings on, there's only one thing that I can manage to say in response.
"So I was wrong… She isn't a lesbian… She's into both genders… Go figure." I manage to get out, before the next sentence comes straight out of left field.
"What I mean is, I want him to push me down over and over again." She says with a large smile.
"No I don't really think that's a good idea." Tsukune says in response as Moka looks down at the ground, the shadows from her bangs covering her eyes.
"You're wrong Yukari…" She mutters, getting everyone's attention just before she leaps at Tsukune with a slight blush. "Tsukune belongs to me!" She exclaims.
"No! Don't bite me!" Tsukune yells out in fear, just before exactly that happens. "Don't! Come on Moka! You're gonna suck me dry!" He yells out as Moka sucks his blood, myself still being stuck on the fact that Yukari's high school crush has grown to include two people now.
"I have a feeling that this is only a taste of what's in store for us this year." I say with a deadpan expression, getting a nod from Kurumu in response as Moka continues to suck Tsukune's blood with Yukari looking at them in shock.
Dear Mom, Dad and Joseph
Well, this week at the Academy was certainly interesting. Not only did I get a younger sister figure, but it turns out that she's into both Moka and Tsukune! I've gotta say that it came as a surprise when I figured this out. But, I guess that's what high school crushes will do to a kid.
Anyways, things have been going well with me and Kurumu. Our relationship is on stable ground at the moment, but with her being a succubus and all, I'm not sure how much longer that will last. But, it's really up to her how fast she wants to go. After all, you taught me well mom, always let the woman of the relationship decide how fast it goes, lest the woman get pissed off at the man for wanting to jump straight into things. Although, I have a feeling that this isn't exactly what you had in mind when it came to letting her decide, since I feel like when you told me, you were expecting me to choose someone who would want a slow relationship, not a succubus who will no doubt be sleeping in my dorm within a few weeks, and wouldn't mind any advances that I would make.
Anyways, that's about it for this week at Yokai.
Sincerely,
John Wintersfield
Author's Note Part 2: Well, that's it for the third chapter. As you can see, I ended up keeping with the canon. I'm not entirely sure why, but I did. If anything, I'll try to use the other option in the OC x Mizore story I post eventually.
Now, you guys should probably know that this story will be one of the ones that I'm going to be less focused on for a little while as I work on my HTTYD Fanfiction. So, I'm hoping that this will be able to tide you guys over for that time. As for the reviews from last chapter, here are the responses to them!
Firem78910:
Thanks for the suggestion, as well as that information!
SirAnonymousPanda:
Thanks for the suggestion, and I'll definitely continue with how the stories going, but that's not what I mean by a sibling relationship. What I mean is that John will be like an older brother to Yukari, being a type of role model.
Anime PJ:
No problem! I ended up using the A option for this story, but I hope that you like the eventual OC x Mizore story when I come out with it, in which I'll attempt the B option. Now the only question is what type of monster to make him…? But, thanks for the compliment, and here's the next chapter!
Pheonix Champion:
Well, I thought about using the A option, but ended up using B. As for the OC x Mizore, I'll try to get to that soon. But with all the other stories I'm working on at the moment, it might be a while. As for the cat people info, thanks for that. (However, after searching it up, I've found out that Nekenome isn't that, since she only has one tail.) And Flamers, well, flamers gonna flame.
Mineng101:
Thanks for giving the story another chance, and I hope that I can do better than last time. As for the switching personalities, that's because I don't want to make John take up the spotlight every time. So, yes, I will switch personalities a bit during this story.
Guest Nov 9:
As for his harem comment, that's because he probably won't chose to be with Moka until near the very end of the story. Also, the reason that I'm using actual canon stuff is because I'm just implementing my character. I'm not gonna completely change the story around and write out my own story. I write this because I like to see what he changes in each episode, not that he changes the storyline completely. As for multiple POV's, I'll try to implement that, but it might be a bit hard for me to write since I'm re-watching the series just so that I can write out the personalities well.
4rgeMonger:
Well, I gave myself Kurumu since Tsukune ends up with Moka, and for some reason, if I heard correctly, Kurumu is somehow supposed to end up with Gin… That just, well, no. I don't really see that happening. If anything, I'd expect the werewolf to be paired with Ruby. Also, I don't hate Tsukune. The stutter is just how he is during the first episode. So, I wrote him in like that. As for the Mizore story, again, Tsukune ends up with Moka, so I feel like she should get some happiness. So, I will end up writing a story with an OC x Mizore pairing so that it doesn't end sadly for the snow woman.
"OC's Suck":
Well, hello there flamer! As true as your statement is, the small amount of people that support me are enough! So, if you don't like this story, then why are you even reading it? After all, it's clearly labeled as an OC story. So, good day to you sir!
Shewolf-skittles-twist14:
Well, you can look forwards to the OC x Mizore story, and as you can see, I wrote down option A, but I'll be writing out option B in the story mentioned.
Dead Pann:
It's nice to know that you support this story! Also, as for how John reacts to situations, I'm trying not to make it seem like that for him, since I don't want to take the spot light off the other characters as well.
MickDunD:
Thanks for the support! As for the funny present in the story, I try my best! And I plan to reveal his monster form during the Kuyo episodes. But, feel free to guess!
Well, that's about it for this chapter. As for the next one, I'll have it out just after I upload this one, so you can look forwards to reading it after you finish this. Thanks for taking the time out of your day to read this, and I hope to see you all next time!
(Update: July 5th, 2015:
Well guys, here's the third chapter that I've updated in the time span of two days. Now, I'll probably re-upload these around the time that I post my fifth chapter, that way the story's updated at one time, and you guys won't re-read the chapters, and then have to wait a couple days for the new one. But, I look forwards to seeing you all in the next one!)