Chapter 4: The Bane of All Girls… Fanboys
Author's Note Part 1: Well guys, here's the fourth chapter in "A Wintersfield Attends Yokai". Sorry that it took so long to get out, but as you can see, I've been working on stories both old and new, and they've been taking up a considerable amount of my time. However, I've found some time to work on this story, so that's just what I'm doing.
For this chapter, you can expect me to deviate from canon quite a bit, since I've heard some of your guy's complaints about how I'm making Tsukune weak. In all honesty, he's supposed to be that way in canon until near the end of the first season! And even then he's still pretty weak! But, since this is fanfiction and I've added a character of my own into the story, I can do this however I like. Meaning that I can change Tsukune slightly, and make it so that he's not entirely weak like he is in canon.
One other thing that you guys should know is that this chapter marks the point that Kurumu starts to become even more of the seductive succubus that she would be with a guy who actually loves her back, with John returning her feelings. So, expect there to be quite a few heated scenes between the couple from now until the end of this story. After all, it's rated M for a few reasons, one of which being Kurumu. But, since you guys have been waiting for a while for this to be uploaded, I'll just let you get to reading it. So, here's chapter 4!
John's POV:
I'm woken up by light streaming in through my window onto my eyes, and let out a tired yawn. Damn. I'm lucky the light woke me up. Otherwise I'd be screwed over after forgetting to set my alarm last night. I think to myself as I push myself up off the futon, and rub the sleep out of my eyes. As I do so, I hear a light moan beside me, and turn in the direction it came from to see Kurumu lying on my futon right next to me. As it turns out, what I wrote in my last letter was right, except that instead of it being a couple weeks, Kurumu had started sleeping with me a few days afterwards.
And what's more is that she sleeps with only her undergarments on. Meaning that I could see all her skin except for what was covered by her bra and panties… But, I learned to quickly get used to it, since there would be no talking her out of it with her personality. I let out a light chuckle at the sight of my girlfriend lying asleep next to me, idly thinking about how cute she looks at the moment before I gently shake her awake. Her response is to give another light moan of protest, before turning away from me and, by extension, the light that's currently streaming in through my window.
"Just five more minutes." She mutters in a tired voice, making me chuckle a little, and decide to take more "drastic measures" to wake her up. I lower myself back onto the futon, propping myself up on my forearms so that I don't lie back down completely, lean over Kurumu, and nibble on her ear a bit. This time, she lets out a satisfied moan from the feeling, instead of a moan of protest.
"Come on Kurumu, the longer you spend in bed, the longer it's gonna be until we get through our classes. And the longer it takes us to get through the classes, the longer it's gonna be until we can spend some time alone together." I whisper in her ear, smirking a bit when I see her pause for a moment, before I suddenly find myself on my back with Kurumu straddling me with that god damned seductive smirk on her face.
"But John, we can always spend some time together right now." She purrs, leaning down to press her ample chest into mine while her eyes glint. I let a smirk make its way onto my face at her idea, and lean up to peck her lips, before pulling back.
"We can do this after school Kurumu. Right now, we need to get to class so that we aren't marked as late. After all, I haven't been late yet, and I'd rather keep it that way. The less negative marks on my record, the better." I tell her, pushing her up slightly as I sit up. She pouts at that, before leaning in to kiss me for a few seconds.
"Alright, but you're going to make this up to me after our classes today." She tells me, making me smirk as I lean forwards to lightly kiss her neck, getting another moan from my girlfriend in response.
"I'd be glad to." I whisper in her ear as the two of us get up, Kurumu pulling me into a quick, heated kiss for a few moments, before we get dressed, grab out supplies, and leave the dorms to head towards the school, holding each other's hands the entire time while Kurumu rests her head on my shoulder. On the way there, we run into Tsukune, who's blindsided by Moka, and then Yukari not moments later. After Moka's "breakfast", the four of us head off to our class, with Yukari heading off to her own next to ours. However, during said class, Tsukune seems to zone out a few times, and I end up having to poke him one of said times when Ms. Nekenome calls on him to read the next page, and he doesn't answer, or even realize that she's talking to him.
I continue to watch him throughout class, and realize that he's hardly paying attention at all. I mentally sigh at that, knowing that he'd need my notes afterwards, before I go back to writing said notes down so that he wouldn't have to work off half-assed bullet points. After the bell rings to signify the end of the school day, we all gather our things, and leave the room. I'm glad that this school has short classes. The fact that we're able to do basically whatever we want afterwards makes it even better. I think as I walk out of the classroom with my friends, and make my way towards the roof with them.
"So Tsukune, what was up in class today? I mean, you were spacing out throughout the entire thing." I tell my brunet friend while him, Moka and I are all standing in our usual spot on the roof. Kurumu had left after class to go and drop some things off at her locker, and would be joining us soon enough. In response to my question, Tsukune re-focuses after spacing out once again, and turns to look at me.
"Huh? Oh, nothing. I just wasn't awake yet. I guess I'm still not really awake." He admits, sheepishly rubbing the back of his neck as he says this.
"Well that's good to know. But look if you're ever in trouble you can come talk to me about anything." Moka tells him with a small smile, before she looks to the side with a light blush. "Because, you and I…" She trails off, and Tsukune speaks up.
"Moka…" He says, causing the pinkette to turn back to him and give a small smile.
"Tsukune…" She answers, which causes the two to repeat each other's names for a few seconds, myself smirking in the background as they go into another one of their moments, before Moka finally breaks the cycle. "…You smell good." She finally says with her blush getting slightly brighter.
"Thanks… Wait." Tsukune thanks her at first, before his eyes widen as he registers the second part of her sentence at the same time that I do.
"Just a little taste, Kay?" She asks leaning in towards the brunet to have her mid-morning snack. I quickly step between the two, and push them apart before she can start to suck his blood for the second time today.
"Oh no, nuh-uh." I say, before turning to Moka. "Come on Moka, you already had some of his blood earlier. Human blood can't replenish as fast as vampire blood, or any other kind of monster's blood for that matter. Heck, that might actually be part of the reason that Tsukune is so out of it today. If anything, he's lacking the blood that he needs in order to function properly." I tell her, making the pinkette turn to the side and innocently placer her finger on her lips as a blush appears on her cheeks due to embarrassment.
"I didn't suck too much from him yesterday, or this morning." She says, trying to deny what I said.
"Moka…" I say as if I'm scolding a child, crossing my arms in front of my chest as I do so, only for Tsukune to speak up from behind me.
"No, it's nothing really. Besides, Moka's a vampire that drinks blood. So I, don't mind meeting her needs." Tsukune tells me, but the fact that his skin is sunken in and I can see the bones that make up his skull underneath them doesn't exactly help his argument. But before I can say anything, Moka pops up next to me with stars in her eyes.
"Oh Tsukune!" She says with a large smile. I simply sigh and place my hand on my head at his statement, already knowing that it would be nigh impossible to change his mind since he's doing this for Moka. Then, I'm distracted from the two in front of me as a familiar succubus appears, jumping onto my back as she's taken to doing in greeting.
"Hey Kurumu." I greet with a small smile, turning around to face her once she's gotten off my back.
"Hey John!" She greets with her own large smile, before walking closer and wrapping her arms around my neck. "So, what's this I hear about needs being fulfilled?" She asks, a glint appearing in her eyes as she says this while making sure to press as much of her body into mine as she can. In response, I place my hands at her hips, and lightly rub them as I smirk at my girlfriend.
"Well, Tsukune was talking about how he doesn't mind fulfilling Moka's needs for blood." I tell her, getting a content hum from Kurumu, who then leans in so that she's breathing into my ear. The fact that we're practically the same size making that much easier for her to do. Though, I might be growing a bit since I'm no longer looking right into her eyes when we're looking at one another, and instead looking down by about an inch.
"Well then, if he doesn't mind fulfilling her needs, then I guess you wouldn't mind fulfilling mine, would you?" She asks in a whisper as she starts rubbing her breasts against my chest. My response is to smirk, before giving her a quick kiss, and then pulling away.
"No, I wouldn't. However, I have a feeling that these two wouldn't exactly want to be around when I do." I say, nodding over to Tsukune and Moka, who are currently blushing up a storm with how me and Kurumu are acting, despite the fact that they should be used to it by now with the amount of time that we've been together. Kurumu looks over at them, and gives them a small smirk.
"No, but I don't see why that matters? After all, it's won't be that long before they're doing the same." She says with her teasing smirk, making the blush on Tsukune get slightly darker, while Moka's blush becomes more pink in color, almost the same shade as her hair, before they go rushing off to the door that leads back into the school, Tsukune grabbing the trash barrel as he does so. Me and my girlfriend let off quiet chuckles at the sight, before turning back to face each other.
"Now…" I start, before pressing Kurumu into the railing slightly. "Where were we?" I ask her, getting a seductive smirk from my girlfriend in response as she wraps her arms around my neck to keep her body pressed against mine.
"I was about to show you one of the many reasons that I'm a succubus." She tells me with a purr, making me give a throaty laugh in response.
"I don't have any objections to that," I start, rubbing her sides yet again, and making her shiver slightly beneath me. "So you can start whenever you want." I tell her, making the familiar glint appear in her eyes, before uses the arms around my neck to pull me into a heated kiss. After a few seconds, I part my lips, and allow Kurumu to enter my mouth with her tongue, effectively starting a French kiss. As it progresses, Kurumu pushes me back slightly, myself letting her since if I wanted to I could just stay in the same position, before she pushes me to the ground, and straddles my form while continuing the kiss. As it continues, I run my hands along her back, while she goes on to rub her hands underneath my green jacket, but above my white button-up shirt.
After a few minutes, she pulls back, and straightens up so that she's completely straddling me with a seductive smirk on her face, as well as a light blush as she pants to regain her lost breath. As this happens, it causes her breasts to heave slightly with each rise and fall of her chest, and I smile up at her, before she leans down to start kissing my neck. I groan a bit at the sensations, before she makes her way back up to my mouth and practically shoves her tongue into it, doing just as she said and showing me just why she's a succubus as my eyes almost roll into the back of my head, simply from the kiss that she's giving me as she continues to run her hand over my chest. I manage to return the kiss with identical intensity, before I'm the one to pull back, and kiss her neck just like she'd been doing a couple minutes beforehand. She moans as I continue, before I go on to nibble at her ear, making her moan slightly louder from the feeling, and then pull me by my jacket into another heated kiss, which I return. Things are starting to get a bit more heated than usual, but I can't say that I'm complaining with my girlfriend being Kurumu as her hand slowly trails down my chest to my abs.
Unfortunately, life decides that it wants to screw around with me today, because our intimate moment is suddenly stopped from going any further by a voice calling out to us. "You! Get your hands off my goddess!" The voice exclaims, making the two of us pause our make-out session, and turn to look in the direction the voice came from. When we see who it is, we both stare in confusion. Standing a few yards away from us is a rather fat teen, who's wearing the regular school pants, tie and button-up shirt, but instead of a green jacket, he's wearing a pink one. He has Caucasian skin, and his hair is a dirty blond, while his eyes are brown. "You will not tarnish her any longer with your taint!" He exclaims, completely confusing me and Kurumu as she stops straddling me, and the two of us stand up.
"Uh, do we know you?" I ask him, scratching the back of my head in confusion, and completely ignoring the fact that he'd caught us making out. After all, when you're at a school where the teachers and students alike ignore the random murders that happen on campus when the student doesn't have any family, a student catching another two making out is hardly anything to get worked up about. Hell, there have been a couple instances where a student had walked in on a couple actually "doing it" before. So what just happened is hardly anything on the scale of "embarrassing/shocking". Although, Mikogami does draw the line at rape, as well as attempted rape. After all, in the monster world, killing is normal. But rape? Hey, even us monsters have morals. Though they're slightly different from human morals… But, I digress.
"No, but you will! I am the president of the unofficial Kurumu Kurono fan club!" He exclaims, before taking out what looks like a handheld megaphone. "And you shall now face my fierce fan club wrath!" He exclaims, before rushing towards me, swinging the megaphone as he runs. "Wrath! Wrath! Wrath!" He chants as he swings at me, before I catch his wrist, and throw him over my shoulder, making him fall off the roof and end up on his back on the dirt ground below, swirls taking the place of his eyes as he stares into the sky with a dazed look on his face. "Wrath." He mutters, making me shake my head at him as he finally lowers his hand and passes out, before I turn around to face Kurumu.
"Looks like you have an unofficial fan club." I state with a small smirk, making Kurumu shudder slightly.
"Yuck! I don't need a bunch of guys going nuts over me in some random room." She says, making me raise my eyebrow with my smirk getting slightly wider.
"This coming from the succubus who wanted the entire male population of the school as her harem." I say, making her give a sheepish smile, before walking over to me hugging me around my chest.
"Yeah… But that was before I met you." She admits, making my smirk change into a full out grin.
"Hm, sweet talking me now, are you?" I ask her, making her look at me with that glint in her eyes as she raises her hand to trace my cheek.
"Would you prefer I do something else?" She asks me, the tone of her voice telling me exactly what she has in mind as she presses herself against me even more. I place my hands on her hips once again, and smile at her in response to her succubus nature showing itself. After all, any man can tell you that succubi are sexy and good looking, and with one as my girlfriend, that just multiplies that fact.
"As much as I would," I start, giving her a lingering kiss on the lips before I pull back. "I have a feeling that if you have a fan club, then so does Moka. And since that's the case, it's likely that a guy similar to that one is going after Tsukune right now." I tell her, making her nod in agreement as we put our desires off to the side for now, and head off towards the exit of the roof. However, I lean in next to her ear as we get closer to the door. "But that's not to say that I wouldn't like to spend some more time with you later on." I say in a low voice, making her look at me with that seductive smirk of hers, before giving me a lasting, teasing kiss in response as she quickly slips her tongue into my mouth, before taking it out just as quickly.
"I'll make sure to hold you to that." She says in a sultry voice, making me smirk at her as we walk towards the door that will lead us back into the school.
"Hey fanboys! What the hell do you think you're doing?" I ask the two guys standing next to Tsukune, who are wearing similar outfits as the guy who attempted to attack me. Just seconds beforehand, me and Kurumu had walked over to stand next to Yukari and Moka, the former of which had been dumping trash on the two guys in question. Yukari looks up at me when I ask this with a small frown.
"Big bro! Those two just ganged up on poor Tsukune there and they were beating the stuffing outta him!" She exclaims, making me turn to glare to the two guys in question.
"Is that so?" I ask, walking towards the two guys, who start to sweat slightly as I approach while cracking my knuckles.
"Hey, isn't that Wintersfield?" The one that looks like your generic high school male student asks the other one.
"Yeah, I heard that he came here, instead of going to some kind of private school for his monster's species. Not that anyone besides the headmaster knows what species he could possibly be to begin with." The other one responds, nervousness present in his voice.
"Well, it looks like you two are well informed. And here's some new information for you." I start, before I become a blur and punch the two in their stomachs, making them go flying back a few yards and end up skidding across the ground. They eventually roll to a stop, and cough from the pain. "You'll leave my friends alone if you want to stay out of the infirmary. Got it?" I ask them with a glare, making them look up at me with nervous facial expressions, before they push themselves to their feet and run away.
"This isn't the end Aono!" The generic male student yells out.
"Yeah! We'll free our goddesses from your taint soon enough!" The other one calls, just before they round a corner and leave our sight. I let out a sigh at their parting words, before turning to face Tsukune, who's looking up at me with both gratitude, as well as a different emotion in the back of his eyes that I can only barely make out.
"Hey, thanks for that John." He thanks me, and I continue to look at him for a few seconds, before giving a nod, and helping him to his feet.
"No problem Tsukune. It's what friends are for." I tell him, getting a small smile in response, before he goes over to Moka and Yukari, and starts to talk with them as Kurumu walks over to wrap my arm in hers.
"John?" She asks, no doubt having seen the fact that I was still looking at Tsukune.
"He's self-deprecating himself Kurumu. He feels like he should have been able to protect himself, and doesn't like the fact that Yukari had to do it for him." I tell her, making her look at me in surprise, before she turns to look over at the brunet male as he continues to talk with Moka and Yukari while scratching the back of his head sheepishly.
"So, he doesn't like the fact that he had help?" She asks, making me shake my head in response.
"No. He doesn't like the fact that he couldn't do anything, and that Yukari and me did everything. It's not that he didn't like having help, it's that he didn't like the fact that he was nothing but a punching bag until the rest of us showed up." I tell her, before narrowing my eyes slightly. "Meaning, he's going to need some help in a different way." I tell her, making her turn to look at me in confusion. "I'm going to help him get stronger." I tell her.
"Oh, you mean like, make him more muscular or something?" She asks me, making me nod.
"Yeah, something like that. Although more along the lines of making it so that he can beat some of the monsters here, without having to put that much effort into it. After all, have you seen most of the monsters at this school? I mean, they mostly rely on rushing in headfirst, without actually thinking. So, if I can get Tsukune to think things through, then he could beat half of the monsters here with only a few well-placed punches and kicks, as well as exploiting weaknesses." I tell her, making her look at me in surprise, before smiling.
"Wow, I knew you were smart, but I didn't realize you were that smart." She says, making me finally turn to look at her with a smirk on my face.
"Hey, don't go assuming that just because I'm powerful, I go rushing into things without a second thought. I mean, yeah, I mostly took down Saizo because of my strength, but there are other monsters at this school that I'd have to take out in different ways." I tell her, making her smirk widen a bit, before it changes to a confused look.
"Wait, I thought that Tsukune was the one to beat up Saizo?" She asks, making me laugh a bit.
"Nah, I just twisted the story around a bit since I figured that it would help make some of the lower class monsters stay away from Tsukune. And as it turns out, my plan worked like a charm, since as far as I know, the only ones who have gone after him are those Lizard men, who originally went after Yukari, and these two guys that I just had to threaten." I tell her, getting a nod and a giggle from my girlfriend in response to my explanation as we watch Tsukune finally finish talking with the two girls, and start heading back towards one of the school's entrances with them.
"Man, you're looking out for Tsukune like he's your younger brother or something." She says, making me slightly stiffen at the suggestion, before I relax and let off a light chuckle.
"Yeah, I guess you're right." I admit in a quiet voice, thinking about what Kurumu said for a few seconds. I really am aren't I? I'm protecting him, I want him to get stronger, and I want him to live a happy life despite the danger he's always in. I really am acting like Tsukune is my younger brother, and the fact that he's a year younger than me only makes that fact more pronounce. But… Can I really do this? I mean, last time- I'm cut off from my train of thought by the fact that my girlfriend is now draped over my back once again while lightly breathing in my ear in a way that sends tingles down my spine.
"Anyways John, I think that since the school day is over, and that creepy guy from earlier isn't around, you can finally follow through on your suggestion from earlier." She whispers, making a smirk appear on my face, before I head off towards the male dorms while carrying Kurumu on my back.
"Yeah, I suppose I can, can't I?" I ask, making her giggle into my ear as she moves a bit, no doubt making sure to rub her breasts against my back as I continue walking. And then I'll go to Tsukune and get started on making him stronger. I think to myself… While the other half of my brain thinks about how soft my girlfriend's breasts are against my back. And the fact that she's giving off a seductive chuckle as we continue to walk tells me that she knows exactly what that part of my brain is thinking about, and she had planned it.
Later on that day, after another heated make-out session with my girlfriend that lasted a couple hours, since my girlfriend made things a bit more heated than usual that led to the extended time, I make my way out of my room while Kurumu lies asleep on my futon, and walk over to Tsukune's door. I lightly knock on his door, and it opens to show me the sight of my friend dressed in the school outfit, despite the fact that it's just after six thirty. "Hey John, what's up?" He asks me.
"Hey Tsukune, do you think you could change into your gym clothes for a little while?" I ask him, myself already dressed in a white T-shirt and black gym shorts while wearing sneakers over my feet.
"Uh, sure. Why?" He asks me, scratching the back of his head in confusion.
"Just meet me up on the roof afterwards, alright?" I ask, and walk towards the stairs without waiting for a response since I know that he'll be following me in a couple minutes. Sure enough, after a couple minutes of waiting on the roof of the dorms, Tsukune shows up in the school's gym uniform.
"Okay John, uh, why do you want me up here? And why am I in gym clothes?" He asks me, looking at the clothes in question as I let out a quiet sigh.
"Tsukune, you didn't feel very good when me and Yukari "helped" you earlier, did you?" I ask him, making him lower his head slightly. "Well, I want to see if I can make it so that instead of "helping" you, we can actually help you." I tell him, making him look up at me in confusion.
"What do you mean?" He asks me, making me smirk slightly.
"I'm going to teach you how to defend yourself." I tell him, making him look at me in surprise.
"W-what?" He asks in confusion, making my smirk change into a smile.
"Did I stutter? I'm going to help to make you stronger Tsukune. I'll make it so that instead of you needing to rely on me and the girls for help, you can hold your own well enough so that we can fight with you, instead of for you." I elaborate. Making him look at me in shock. "Tsukune, you're in a school full of monsters. If it wasn't for the rumors about how it was you who defeated Saizo, and me and the girls helping you, it's likely that you would already be dead. Whether by public execution or some random student wanting a mid-day snack if they found out you were human." I tell him, making his shocked expression change into one of fear.
"E-execution? Snack?" He asks in a small voice.
"Yeah. Execution for flare, or a snack simply because one of the students was hungry. But, if you get stronger, then it's likely that less of the students here will want to pick a fight with you since they'll think you're able to do this in your "human form", and that you'd be tougher in your "monster form". So, you'd be able to continue to go about your life as normally as you can in a school full of monsters. So," I start, getting into a fighting position. "Let's begin." I say, making Tsukune sweat a bit and take a step back.
"W-what? Right now?" He asks me, making me let out another quiet sigh.
"Yes Tsukune, right now. After all, the sooner I start training you, the sooner you can beat in those two guys' faces when they try to attack you again in order to gain Moka's attention." I tell him, making him think about it.
"Alright, fine." He says with a slightly defeated sigh, before he seems to think about something. "But, the guy with the glasses was actually trying to get Yukari's attention." He says thoughtfully, making my eyes widen, before they narrow.
"Tsukune." I say in a serious tone, making him turn to look at me.
"Yeah?" He asks me with nervousness, no doubt because of the scowl that I have on my face.
"That pervert is mine." I tell him, making him gulp nervously, before nodding in confirmation. "Good, now that that's out of the way, let's get to making you stronger." I say, making him nod, before he gets into a clumsy fighting position of his own. And thus began my beat down of Tsukune, making sure to give him pointers whenever I saw something he could improve upon. This lasted for a few hours, before I called it off at around eight, and we go to bed. When I get back to my room, I lie down on my futon next to my girlfriend, who smiles in her sleep as she subconsciously drapes her arm over my chest, and nuzzles her chin into my neck. I let a small smile appear on my face at her actions, wrapping my own arm around her waist, before I fall asleep myself.
A few days later, our little group is situated at "our" table in the cafeteria, eating some breakfast with Moka and Tsukune on one side, and me, Kurumu and Yukari on the other. Each side sitting in that order starting at the wall. As we eat, Kurumu speaks up about the three guys from a few days beforehand. "Hey, have any of you girls noticed those three guys from the other day hanging around a lot?" Kurumu asks, making anime question marks appear above the other's heads.
"Three? I thought there were only two?" Moka asks us in confusion as I finish my plate of pancakes. Hey, just because I'm in Japan, doesn't necessarily mean that I have to have noodles like the others for breakfast. The cafeteria here is nice enough to sell a variety of foods for monsters that aren't native to Japan.
"Oh right, we didn't tell you guys did we? Turns out Kurumu has her own fanboy." I tell them, making the anime question marks disappear in a puff of smoke as they all go, "Ah." in response.
"But now that you mention it, I have." Yukari says, before going on to tell us about the creepy guy with glasses, and how he'd been following her around the other day with a camera, taking pictures of her, mostly low shots, before she caught him and he pretended to be taking pictures of the school for the photography club and yearbook. When she tells us this, I bend my fork to match the shape of my clenched fist with a scowl on my face.
"The next time I see that guy, I'm going to bash his face in. To top it off, that was a stupid-ass excuse. The clubs aren't even open yet, so his excuse doesn't even work." I mutter, before Kurumu goes on to tell us about the fat guy that I'd taken care of, and how he'd been following her around whenever I wasn't with her. But she wouldn't tell me what she was doing at the time, and it slightly annoyed me since I would be able to take care of the guy if I found out where he usually tried to "look" at her. But, I suppose that she has her reasons.
"Getting stared at is way worse. I mean, I'd rather have my picture taken then have some pervert gawking at me like that." She says, before taking another bite of her noodles. At this, I place my deformed fork down on the table, and lean over to whisper in her ear.
"Two things. First off, I'm glad that Tsukune and Moka at least stare at each other in a loving manner, and not in the way that you're describing." I tell her, making her think about it, and then nod slightly in agreement as the two in question blush, no doubt because they're thinking about how they stare at each other, only they probably think that's how Kurumu is describing their little moments. "And secondly, what's this I hear about you preferring getting your picture taken?" I ask with a small smirk, making her stop eating, before leaning into my ear.
"Exactly that John. I also prefer getting my picture taken in costumes." She says with a slight purr, making my smirk widen slightly when she leans back with a glint in her eyes.
"Well then, I suppose that if you like that, I'll have to see what I can do." I say, making her give me that seductive smirk of hers in response, before we return to the present and the problem at hand as Tsukune and Moka finally stop blushing, while Yukari continues to stare at me and Kurumu. Yeah, as it turns out, after Yukari took on the younger sister roll, she also wanted to make sure that Kurumu was "right for me". Who knew that a younger sister would do that? But, seeing as I haven't actually had a younger sister, I guess I don't really know what to expect. What I do know, is that apparently whatever they talked about did two things. It made it so that Yukari "accepted" Kurumu as my girlfriend… And it also made it so that the two now have a rivalry. What the rivalry is about, I still don't know.
"But anyways, those guys give me the creeps." Yukari finally says, turning away from the two of us to look at Moka and Tsukune across the table.
"We can kick their asses if they try anything with us. Although, I guess that we'd have to help out Tsukune if they go after him." Kurumu adds, making sure to phrase the sentence so that it doesn't seem like Tsukune is completely weak. After all, he'd been getting stronger over the past few days, but he didn't want me to say anything about it to anybody yet. Kurumu already knows since I'd told her my plan when I thought about it, but the other two are still in the dark. I'm guessing that it's because he doesn't want the others to think that he needs training since he was weak. But, it seems like that suggestion is backfiring on him a bit.
"What do we do?" Yukari asks us, no doubt worried about Tsukune's safety.
"Maybe we should talk to a teacher about this." Moka says, making me and Kurumu share a glance, before I turn back to the other two.
"No need for that, if the need arises, then I guess that the four of us could always help him out…" I say with a shrug, trying to share a glance with Tsukune when I say the word "help", only for him to be staring in his food as he messes around with it.
"You four?" He asks us in slight confusion, no doubt because he didn't see my glance, and thought that I was saying it because he isn't strong enough yet. "Well, thanks for the offer, but I think that I'll be fine." He says, finally looking up at us, and I send a slight nod his way to show that his earlier thought was most likely false, since he'd definitely been getting stronger, if the fact that I could feel a slight impact when he punched me had anything to say about it. Hey, being from a strong line of monsters means that if a relatively weak human, like Tsukune was a few days ago, punches me, the most I'll feel is a tickling sensation. Now, if a human body builder were to punch me, it's likely that it would feel like someone had thrown a moderately painful punch at me, and it would be enough to make me grunt from the impact. However, his hesitation to let anyone else know that he's training becomes a negative choice once again, as Yukari speaks up.
"No you won't, if they attack you you're gonna get the stuffing beaten out of you!" She exclaims, making Moka nod in agreement as me and Kurumu sweatdrop from Yukari's lack of tact.
"Uh-huh, you're just not strong enough. It's because you're a hu-" She cuts herself off, before turning to face Tsukune with a light blush of embarrassment. "I'm sorry, what I meant to say is that it's because you're not that strong in your human form. But you probably are when you change into your monster form. I mean, I don't really know, but I'm sure you are." Moka says, trying to salvage her little slip up when she almost revealed that Tsukune's actually a human, despite the fact that it was only Yukari who didn't know. Although, I guess that since we're in the cafeteria, loose lips sink ships after all.
Oh yeah, we told Kurumu about Tsukune actually being human, and she actually took it well. Granted, it took a little while for her shock at a human being at the school to go away, but in the end she accepted it, and even decided that I deserved a kiss for "protecting my friends despite their race" in her words. But, I think that it was just an excuse that she used to kiss me since it was a couple days after we got together, so we weren't on the relationship level that we are now. However, we haven't told Yukari yet since we aren't sure how she'll react to being friends, and "loving" a human, since she's a witch. However, back to Moka's close call. When this happens, Tsukune's upper face is shrouded by his hair, and he speaks up in a slightly dejected tone.
"Right, yeah, I've gotta go. So, see ya." He says, before getting up from the table, and taking his leftover food with him to throw away before he leaves. As this happens, Moka stands up, and goes after him.
"Wait up Tsukune!" She exclaims, leaving the rest of us to watch as they leave the cafeteria. I stare after the two of them for a few seconds, before letting off a sigh, and getting up from the table myself.
"Well, you girls can go ahead and finish eating. I'm gonna go back to the male dorms and rest for a while. After all, Sundays are great days for relaxing." I tell them with a small smile, getting nods from the two in response, as well as a kiss from my girlfriend, before I drop my plate off near the front of the cafeteria so that the staff can clean it, and then leave for the dorms.
3rd Person POV:
Down at the bus stop that Tsukune and John had arrived at a month ago, stands the formerly mentioned teen. He's holding onto the same bag he'd had then, although he doesn't have his backpack with him. As he stands there, he lifts his watch, and looks at the time. "4:44 PM. It's almost time. Well Moka…" He trails off as he lowers his arm to his side, just before a familiar voice speaks up, cutting off anything else that he might have said.
"Where do you get off calling her Moka?" The voice asks, making Tsukune turn in the direction it came from to see the two guys from a few days before, along with another, fatter one. "She's one of our sacred goddesses. So how dare you say her name so lightly you punk?!" The one in the middle, the generic male student, asks in anger.
"We don't know where you're planning on going buddy." Starts the fat one.
"But you're off of school grounds now. That means that the three of us can do this!" The creepy one with glasses continues, just as the generic male student takes out the handheld megaphone that he'd been attacking Tsukune with the last time they met, and puts it over his head.
"Yeah! Umbrella!" He cries out as the yellow megaphone appears to grow larger to cover his entire upper-body, and it changes to a brown color as a hazel colored eye appears on the front, with a large mouth appearing beneath it with its tongue hanging out. While this happens, the creepy teen's neck grows longer, before it twists around itself.
"Necky-Neck!" The teen calls out, lighting flashing in the background as he does so. Finally, the fat one lifts his arms up with a large smile on his face.
"Blob!" He calls out, before his stomach gains layers of fat, and his face changes to resemble that of Slenderman's. Meaning that it only had the outlines of a face, but no eyes, mouth or nose. However, it keeps its Caucasian skin color, and the ears stay as well. When the trio has transformed completely, a fire seems to appear behind them, along with Japanese words that read: "The true fan club coalition" appearing in the air above them thanks to the anime logic present at the academy and around Japan. Now, had Tsukune not been practicing with John over the last few days, he probably would have reacted in shock, but instead…
"Those… Are your monster forms?" He asks with a deadpan look.
"Wait, what did you just say? Even you're dissing us now? Ah, damn it!" Umbrella cries out in annoyance. Tsukune just continues to stare at them when the Umbrella monster yells this.
"Well, you are pretty dorky looking." Tsukune admits, making the trio face fault, before pushing themselves off the ground.
"Yeah, we know." Blob says dejectedly.
"And it sucks! The chicks at this school only go for the cool, flashy, bad-ass monsters that go here. Looking like this, we don't stand a chance." Necky-Neck admits with a slightly sad expression on his face.
"And you! You and that other guy don't even try but somehow you still get girls, that's why we hate you!" Umbrella yells at Tsukune, before leaning forwards and opening up the umbrella part of his body, making it spin. "And it's why you're gonna die!" He calls out in anger as the umbrella makes wind fly towards Tsukune. Now, had Tsukune not been practicing with John, he probably would have been blown back a few yards onto his back. However, because of the training with his friend, Tsukune manages to plant his feet, and stand his ground against the winds being blown against him.
"Damn it. I've gotta make sure to thank John for that training after this." Tsukune mutters as he slings his bag over one of the branches on the tree he's standing next to, making sure that it won't go flying away, and then slowly makes his way towards the trio against the harsh winds.
"What the hell?! He should be knocked off his feet by now!" Umbrella shouts out, somehow seeing Tsukune despite the fact that his eye was spinning rapidly along with the rest of his umbrella body.
"I'll get him!" Necky-Neck calls out, attempting to wrap his neck around Tsukune's upper-body, only for the teen to duck below the neck in question, and then throw a punch that connected square with the monster's face, sending his neck back towards his body, before his head collided with his chest. "Gah!" Necky-Neck cried out from the impact, his body falling onto its back due to the fact that he can't control his balance very well in his true form, much to the other two monsters' shock.
"No way, he wasn't this strong when we faced him last time!" Umbrella yells, having stopped attempting to blow Tsukune off his feet. "How'd he get so powerful?" He asks.
"It doesn't matter. I'll take care of him, and then I'll get rid of that other guy who's tainting my beloved Kurumu!" Blob yells out as he lumbers towards the brunette teen. "Then, I'll have freed my sweet Kurumu from his evil clutches!" He continues, before he gets kicked in the side by Tsukune, and goes sliding back a bit. But because of his body's blobbiness, he didn't feel any pain from the impact.
"Damn." Tsukune mutters, backing up slightly when he realizes that he didn't hurt the guy, and gets slightly apprehensive because John hadn't told him what to do if he encountered a monster that couldn't even feel his attacks yet.
"Hah! You'll never be able to hurt me with a weak kick like that! I guess all that strength was just a one-time thing!" Blob laughs as he walks towards Tsukune again. However, he's suddenly launched to the side by a blur, which is revealed to be John, who's still in the position he was in when he shoulder rushed the living pile of fat.
"Oh no, that wasn't a hoax. I just haven't taught him how to deal with other monster's that are like you yet." John says as he straightens up next to Tsukune, dusting imaginary dust off his shoulder as he looks over said shoulder at the brunet in question. "Hey Tsukune, Moka and Yukari were overreacting about you heading over here, so I figured I'd get here before them. I didn't expect to find the three stooges here as well." He says, making a reference to an older, hilarious TV show that was present in the human world.
"John?" Tsukune asks, still trying to get over the fact that his friend showed up just before Blob could do who-knows-what to him.
"Ugh, the next thing we're working on after your strength training? Thoughts. I swear, you're gonna need to learn how to take things as they come Tsukune. I already told Kurumu, there's more to fighting other monsters besides brute strength." John says, before he notices Necky-Neck pushing himself to his feet. "Oh, looks like you've already weakened the pervert. Nice of you to leave the rest for me Tsukune." He comments, cracking his knuckles as he walks towards the creep while Blob can be seen in his human form, knocked out against the same tree that Tsukune had hung his bag on. "I'll leave you to take care of the reject-umbrella." He continues, making said "reject-umbrella" cry anime tears.
"Man, even that guy is dissing my look." He says with despair clear in his voice. Tsukune finally manages to return to reality when John tells him this, and turns to Umbrella.
"Well, hopefully those training sessions with John let me do more than throw a single punch." He mutters, before he rushes towards Umbrella with a shout.
"Huh?!" Umbrella yells in confusion and slight fear when he hears the shout, having been distracted by the guy who had been dissing his name. Because of this, he's too late to dodge when he turns around, and sees Tsukune rushing him. The brunet in question pulls back his fist, before he throws it forwards, and gets the monster right in his single eye. Said monster yells in pain from the punch, before falling onto his back, reverting to his human form as he rolls on the ground, his hands covering his eyes. "You bastard!" He yells at Tsukune, who's looking at the monster in surprise.
"Whoa. I did it." He says in disbelief, before a smile makes its way onto his face, and he turns to John. "Hey John! I-" He cuts himself off at the sight of his friend standing over the still conscious form of Necky-Neck, who's neck was actually twisted in a knot. "Whoa." Tsukune says in surprise, before his friend unties the monster's neck, and then throws him into the same tree as Blob, ending with the neck-monster knocked out with his friend, and John dusting off his hands.
"Hopefully that'll teach the guy not to be a pervert." He mutters with a scowl, before turning to look at Tsukune, and smiles at the sight of his brunet friend standing next to the "reject-umbrella", who's still rolling on the ground in pain from Tsukune's punch. Getting hit in a single, large eye will do that to a monster. "Nice job Tsukune. There's only one thing you're forgetting." He compliments as he walks over to a now-confused Tsukune.
"What's that?" He asks John, before he sees the raven haired teen bend down, pick up the monster that the human teen punched, and then toss him over his shoulder towards his friends. When he lands, his head hits into the tree, and he slumps down between the two, knocked out just like them.
"You forgot to knock him out. The most important fact about monsters is that we've grown up with the fact that we need to be in our human forms 24/7, especially if we fall unconscious in the presence of humans, hammered into our brains. So, it's a subconscious act. Meaning, once we're knocked out, we immediately return to that form if we were in our monster forms. It also means that a monster won't be able to change into their monster forms, and get the jump on you from behind, since they won't be conscious." He tells his brunet friend, getting a nod in response.
"Alright." Tsukune says in understanding, getting a smile from John in response.
"Good. Now, I think it's about time we say hello to the girls, who are currently heading this way." He says, gesturing into the sky, where a black speck can be seen getting closer, before said black speck is shown to be Kurumu, who's carrying Yukari and Moka with her. As they get closer, John gives them a wave, before walking over to Tsukune's bag, grabbing it, and then walking over to the brunet teen, who's now standing in front of the three girls.
"Whoa! Those three creepy guys are beat up!" Yukari exclaims in surprise, before they notice John. "Big bro! Did you do that to them?" Yukari asks him, making John give her a smile in response.
"Sorta. I took care of the fat guy who was going after Kurumu. It was actually Tsukune who beat up the creepy pervert, and the other one, allowing me to just knock them out." He tells them, making the three girls turn to look at the brunet teen with wide eyes.
"Whoa, no way!" Yukari exclaims in surprise as Tsukune rubs the back of his neck sheepishly.
"You took care of them Tsukune?" Moka asks him, making him give a small smile in response, as well as a small nod. While the Moka, Yukari and Tsukune talk about what happened, Kurumu makes her way over to John, and wraps his arm in her own.
"So, did Tsukune actually do that? Or are you just saying that?" She asks him, making him smirk.
"No, he actually did that to them. All I did was punch them to knock the two other ones out. The fat one I took care of, as well as doing a bit more to the pervert than just "knock him out"." He admits, a thought cloud appearing over his head showing two chibi's. One of him, and one of Necky-Neck, before Chibi-John leaps at Chibi-Necky-Neck, and an anime dust cloud appears around them. After a few seconds, it disperses to show Chibi-John standing on Chibi-Necky-Neck, with the latter's neck in a knot, before he's thrown out of sight of the cloud just like earlier when he'd been thrown into the tree by John. As the cloud disappears, John is pulled into a kiss from his girlfriend, before she pulls back with a smirk.
"Think of that as a promise for a reward later for taking care of that fat creep." She tells him in a sultry voice, making him smirk in response.
"I look forwards to it." He responds in a low voice, before the two look over at Tsukune, Moka and Yukari, as the pinkette starts trying to talk Tsukune out of "leaving" like they thought he was going to do.
"Leave? I'm not leaving. What made you think I was?" He asks them, getting gasps of surprise from the two girls, while Kurumu shakes her head at them. Although, she couldn't really blame them. After hearing their argument, and the fact that Tsukune was here, it made sense that they would think that he'd leave. In fact, she'd probably react the same way they did if she heard something similar about John.
"But, you had a packed bag!" Yukari exclaims, waving her arms around in the air for emphasis.
"What, this bag?" John asks, holding up the bag in question, and gaining the trio's attention before he tosses it to Tsukune. "It's filled with letters that Tsukune wrote for his parents living in the human world." He tells them, making Kurumu give off a light giggle as the school bus drives through the tunnel and into their view.
"So that whole matter about you wanting to leave school," She begins after she stops giggling.
"It wasn't real, just a matter of Moka jumping to conclusions?" Yukari finishes, turning to the girl in question, whose face was currently as pink as her hair. She lets off a giggle in embarrassment when their attention is focused on her.
"Uh, sorry?" She asks them, getting a quiet chuckle out of John, while Tsukune walks over to the bus driver, and starts to explain what he's hoping the man will be able to do.
"So if you don't mind, I'd really appreciate it sir." He says as he hands the driver the envelopes, getting a small smile from the man in response.
"Sure no problem kid. I don't mind." He replies, his voice not having the creepy undertone that it did when he first talked to the two male students. "Is that all you need?" He asks Tsukune.
"Yup." The teen replies with a small smile, making the man's own smile widen slightly.
"Keeping in touch with your folks is commendable. Take care." He says to Tsukune, before he turns to John, and gives a small nod of acknowledgment at the teen's own situation. Then, Tsukune climbs off the bus and the man turns it around, and drives it back through the tunnel, letting off a honk of farewell as he does so. John watches it go, noticing out of the corner of his eyes how Tsukune shuts down his phone, before they start to head off towards the academy. As they do this, Kurumu keeps her arms wrapped around John's, before the group splits, and Tsukune goes into the male dorms with John and Kurumu, while Moka and Yukari head towards the female dorms. When the guys reach their rooms, they nod to each other, Tsukune doing so with a slight blush since he still hadn't gotten used to Kurumu's open affection with John, before they each go into their own rooms.
When John gets into his room with Kurumu, the two take off their shoes, and Kurumu makes her way over to the futon while John locks the door behind them, before turning around to find his girlfriend has already taken off her yellow vest, while her skirt is in a pile around her legs, leaving her in her white button-up shirt, and pink panties. John slides off his own Jacket, as well as the tie, before hanging them on the hook on the door, and then makes his way over to his girlfriend before she can take off her shirt. Instead, he turns her around to face him, and captures her lips with his own while mentally thanking every God he can think of for the fact that he was able to do so without risking becoming her slave, since it only worked that way if she wanted it to. When he does this, Kurumu stops unbuttoning her shirt, and moves her hands to grip the front of his shirt, leaving the top two buttons on her own shirt undone, and giving John a nice view of her cleavage, and the pink bra that she's wearing underneath her shirt.
As their kiss continues, Kurumu moves her hands to the middle of his chest as she begins to unbutton his shirt, before sliding it off his upper-body, leaving him in his pants and socks. After she does this, John pulls back from their kiss in order to plant some on her neck, getting moans of pleasure from his girlfriend in response, all the while thanking the school for making the walls soundproof since quite a few monsters could go on rampages, and it allowed their neighbors to sleep peacefully by keeping all sounds within the room. He continues to trail kisses along her neck, getting louder moans from Kurumu in response, before he slowly lowers the two of them onto the futon, and moves his kisses upwards, eventually nibbling on her ear a bit. In response, Kurumu gives off a slightly louder moan, before turning them over so that she's straddling his form with her seductive smirk present on her face.
"John, don't you remember that I'm the succubus here? Unless you're monster form happens to be an incubus." She says, leaning forwards so that she's partially lying on his chest, while also straddling him. "Actually, that would explain you're looks, and how good you are at this." She purrs as she trails her hand along his cheek, making John smirk up at her, before he turns them over so that he's on top once again.
"I can tell you right now Kurumu, that I'm not an incubus. After all," He starts, nibbling at her ear a little and getting a moan from the succubus beneath him. "You're much better at this than I am. I've just learned how to respond correctly." He whispers in her ear, making her give off another moan from the feeling of him lying on her, effectively pressing her breasts against his chest, while at the same time squishing them. In response, she once again turns them over so that she straddling him, and then removes the rest of her white, button-up shirt, before throwing it off in a random direction, leaving her in her pink bra and panties.
"Well then, I guess that I'm just going to have to work harder to seduce you. After all, I don't want to fall behind." She says, leaning down and capturing John's lips in a heated kiss, which he returns wholeheartedly, before she practically shoves her tongue into his mouth, making him groan into her mouth in response. Then, she takes it a step further, much like she had a few nights before, as well as during their make-out sessions between then and now. As she continues to make out with her boyfriend, one of her hands rubs the muscles present on his chest, while the other trails down to his abs, and then finally reaches his groin area, before she starts to rub. In response, John pulls back from the kiss to let off a slightly louder groan, making Kurumu smirk in response as she continues to rub, feeling how a tent appears in his pants as she continues. "Oh, getting a little excited John?" She purrs, making John look her in the eyes, before he leans forwards initiates another kiss between them.
The two continue to make out, with Kurumu rubbing John's growing erection, before John finally lifts his left hand, and starts to knead his girlfriend's covered right breast. In response to his action, Kurumu lets off her own moan of pleasure, which John uses to his advantage as he starts to kiss the space between her neck and her shoulder, since he'd found out was actually a sweet spot for her, which she shows once again by letting off a seductive moan from the feeling. John had found out about this spot a couple days ago, and always liked to hear his girlfriend's reaction whenever he kissed it. However, this time, he wanted to hear more of the moans that were like music to his ears. So, after kissing around the spot for a few seconds, he turns them back over so that he's on top, and starts to nibble at it. The reaction he gets is much better than the moans that she'd been letting off before. As he starts to nibble at her sweet spot, Kurumu lets off a gasp of surprise, before letting off a louder moan then before.
"~John.~" She moans out his name from the pleasure that he was giving her, making him feel that much more important to her, even though he was already her Destined One. Then, Kurumu also finds a different way to pleasure John, as she starts to grind her hips upwards into the tent in his pants. John lets out a groan at the feeling of his girlfriend grinding him, before he leans down, and captures her lips with his in yet another heated kiss. Their make-out session continues, getting even more heated as time continues, though neither shedding any more clothes, before they finally stop for the night after an hour of making out, and pleasuring one another. Afterwards, the two lie down comfortably on their futon, with Kurumu resting her head on John's chest, while he rests his right arm on her back.
"Kurumu," He starts, making her lift her head slightly to look at her boyfriend. "Have I told you how much I love having you as my girlfriend?" He asks her, getting a giggle and light blush from the girl in question, before she places a loving kiss on his lips.
"Yes, yes you have." She responds, shifting slightly in order to make herself more comfortable on her personal pillow, and getting a chuckle from John in response.
"Well I'll say it again. I love you, Kurumu Kurono." He tells her, making the girl laying on his chest give a small smile, as she moves her own arm to place it next to her head, draping it across his chest.
"And I love you, John Wintersfield." She responds in a tired voice, showing just how tired she is after their make-out session, as well as the rest of the day before that. In response, John gives a quiet chuckle, and wraps his other arm around her, before the two fall asleep for the night.
Author's Note Part 2: Well guys, I've effectively deviated from canon quite a bit this chapter, since I've succeeded in making Tsukune stronger than in canon at this time, and I've started to write out the seductive Kurumu that we all like to see/read about. Now, as I said in the first AN, you can expect these two to have many more intimate moments from now on, since the pairing includes Kurumu, who's a succubus. So, for those of you who like reading about this kind of stuff, you're in for a treat. (Especially next chapter.) For those of you who don't like these kinds of scenes… What are you doing reading a Rosario + Vampire fanfiction? I mean, the entire anime just screams risqué! But, I guess to each their own.
Now, this chapter has been the longest of the four that I've posted so far, and it shows that because of this, the remaining (at least) 22 chapters will be quite long. (The reason I say at least is because I'm working off the anime, and there's only 26 episodes total. After that, it'll either be the end of this fanfiction, or I'm going to have to find some way to work off the manga. And if you guys can give me suggestions for how to do that, then I'll also be able to incorporate manga-only chapters into this story.) Now, since I got quite a few reviews last chapter, I guess I should reply to them.
Firem78910:
Hey! No integrating yourself into my story! And besides, from how Kurumu's mom acts in the anime, and possibly the manga, I think she wouldn't really care about the age of consent, and more than likely wants to know all about their relationship, and how far it's gone… (But in all honesty, it's good to see that you like the story, and I hope that I can keep you interested.)
MickDunD:
Sorry about taking so long for this chapter, but I hope you liked it! (Along with the edited ones.) As for pointers, I'd say that when you're making the story, unless it's a crossover, IGNORE THE HATERS! No matter who you pair your character with, if you even pair them with someone, you will get people who hate you for it. So, I'd suggest that you just ignore whatever flames they throw your way.
There's also the fact that you should always go over your chapters after you write them, in order to double check for any grammar mistakes, spelling errors, or scenes that you think you could improve upon. And after you've posted it to the site, go back to it after a while and read it over. That way, if you see certain scenes that pique your interest, you can change them however you want.
(Although, there is one pairing I'd suggest you not do is an OC x Moka fanfiction, unless it happens to be a crossover and you replace Tsukune with the OC. The only reason I say this is because this one pairing will gain everyone's hate, and not that many people will read your story because of it. However, if you do write it out, then like I said before, just ignore any flames that get thrown your way, and have fun writing out the story.)
Anime PJ:
I completely agree with your first point there. As for the funny-factor, I'm glad that I can get a laugh from some of the scenes that I write out. As for the Yukari factor, I'm trying to keep this story linear to canon, but deviate a bit from it as well. As shown from the above chapter where Tsukune is no longer the weakling that he is at this point in canon. Hopefully I can continue to entertain you with future chapters, and I look forwards to your edited R+V story being updated!
*Firework135* Dec 25th, 2014:
Well, it's a little late, but I've finally updated the story! And thanks for the compliment as well!
BloodDDB:
Alright, a few points that I'm going to touch on here, as well as a thank you. First off, I know that the grammar is incorrect in my stories, and it annoys me to a degree. However, there are points in the anime that I take quotes from, and I'm going to keep them as quotes. Also, I'm writing things out as if people were talking at the time, or like people sometimes talk. So, even though it is correct to put others before yourself in the English language, people do not always do so when they're talking. Believe me, I've heard multiple people say "Me and…" when they were talking about stuff. It's the way we think, by making ourselves more important, as shown by the amount of SI stories on this site.
As for the gentle and shy Kurumu, as you can see, I've started to implement that as well whenever John does something that's actually loving and caring, and not just when they start one of their heated make out sessions. So, thank you for pointing that out, as I'd forgotten about that part of Kurumu since I started watching this a few months after the last time that I'd actually watched the anime, and thus forgot quite a bit about the characters.
I'd also like to thank you for the compliment, and I hope that I can keep you interested throughout the rest of this story!
*Guest* Feb 23rd, 2015:
Well, that's not exactly something that I was thinking of while I wrote this out, but it's definitely a cool idea. If anything, I'd suggest that you make your own account, and write out your own story based on a Prototype and Rosario + Vampire crossover. If not, then I might go looking through Prototype, and end up writing out my own crossover, just with an OC since I've seen a few clips/episodes on YouTube about the games, and I don't really think that I'd be able to implement Mercer into the school, while Heller (I think that's the guy from the second game's name) is already too old to go there.
But, it's nice to see that you like the story so far, and I hope to keep you entertained throughout the rest of it!
Well, I think that's about it for this chapter guys. Thanks for taking the time out of your day to read this, and I hope to see you all next time!
(Update: July 5th 2015:
Well guys, this is about it for the updated chapters. The next one will take place during the swimming club episode, so you can look forwards to that coming out a few seconds/minutes after this one is updated! Anyways, I hope to see you all there!)