GIVING THANKS: TO Acetwolf94,Storygirl1015,Cherrygirl11111,and Gamergirl404
HEY Its FreakAcid its been a while , i went back and looked at all my reviews again even the mean ones ya i know did bad and im happy that there were some people who much nicer in explaining there dislike for those who did thank you very much and as you can see in the last chapter i tried to improve my format please tell if its a butts load better cause that would help me so much.
id like to to give thanks to Acetwolf94 for being around since 2012 and now 2014 and you stuck around even with my horrible structure and writing i give thanks i look forward to your reviews \(^0^)/.
thank you Storygirl1015 thanks your reviews made me happy so please do keep reviewing ill try an add more pein for you (^::^).
Cherrygirl11111 i can feel the love coming from your pleads \(^U^)/.
and last but not least thanks Gamergirl404 you have also been around for long i hope to see your reviews pop up again love how your expressive in them they make giggle and become utterly happy keep on shining un! \(^_\/)/.
i was thinking that for every awesome review i get from here on out id add them to my thanks and give props and stuff and then put you some where in the chapters and have you give me an idea for the chapters in the future and ill be picking 1 or 2 winners you know it be super fun and il be pming the winners . so to commemorate this the first winner will be Acetwolf94 thanks a lot with out your reviews . if they don't answer back then who ever answers the new chapter you be the winner
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Acid:hello peeps recently graduated and am now taking summer college classes that i am now done with woooohooo! i cant wait dont worry akaski im not gonna forget you .
Akatsuki: Did you just call us Akaski?
Acid:… *sweat drops* ehhhmm ert amm hey babys im legal and 18 you can had my birthday july 31 hahah ….. love you….
Kisame:BDSM!
Everyone: waaa?
Kisame: S&M!
Everyone: ….?
Kisame: sadisim, masochicsim
HIdan: the faq
Kisame: why did you forget about me Acid ! ever science you were there is probably tones of inappropriate fan fiction being written about us and being read ! do you know how dirty your little readers ? huh huh!? they even made me do stuff with..with..with deidara. WAAAHHHWAHHH.*Giant Shark tears*
Acid : …. …. shhh shhh its ok just suck it up and we can go play with my water speakers with the little lights .
Kisame:You Mean it
Acid:*nods*
Sasori:well while that shit is going on read the god damn chapter weeee and stuff like that. God damn perverts . Me with that blonde bimbo pffff ha perverts. read and review .{ Perverts}
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Chapter 13
There was a knock and my tears began to run faster and thicker. I hear two voices on the other side of the door, They had a sad tone o them . one was rumbling and sound like smooth ripples on a beat up towel but still soft.
The other one was was like the sky being held in a globe and gently being pet like a praise and i swore i could feel wisps of wind going through my air soft and airy . i squeeze my legs .
The global natural air speaks to me "Hey, Un .. can you please come out? Yeah." the air plead.
The raspy towel spoke to me "Yeah Kit come on we are just as surprised as you" downy wolf towel spoke to me with a hint of pity.
I hear a third voice , its as calm as air and fluttery as a fragile butterfly wing built from titanium, the sound gentle ,hard and cold but worry is plagued in there speech . "Come out honey we wont hurt you " i hear the paper thick titanium beckon .
I tightened my grip on my legs and released them to close the sliding door on the tub. My heart skips a beat when i hear scraping on the floor and a "click" was heard along with the sound came feet coming closer to me. I look up and see four shadows at the tubs door.
I gulp and shove my face back into my legs . my mind still not working , it was like a game that you download and it comes up completely blank with no traces of ever being downloaded in the first place.
I can feel it their eyes on me I don't want to look up yet, I don't want to deal with it right now, I don't know what to do when I do . why did I shut down? I ask myself these questions till I feel a flick to my knee . I breath in and look up.
In front of me are four members of Akatsuki; Deidara, Kisame, Konan, Kakuzu. I pause , They desperately need clothes I thought. Then I hear it again the Titanium butterfly speaks ."Hey … come on sweetie get out of there. Yes I know you really don't want to deal with this right now but you have to because we are all in this regardless of ninja ranking that you are being showen in your home." Finally seeing the titanium butterfly s person its revealed to be Konan . she is talking to me like a creation made from paper careful and fragile.
I noticed while she was speaking she started sound less like a butterfly and more like a drop of magma . she sounds like titanium magma .warm , smooth , and toasty. 'whats wrong with your voice?'I signed to her.
"I don't know . it must have been the crap that Uchiha turd threw… ya I do understand sign language if your curiouse" she said , her voice completely void of the butterfly affect and now the sound of slow flowing lava and reinforced titanium sounds from her throat.
"Hey , Ko do you think that the fact that your voice sounds smooth, rough, and rumbly is because that that Chisicle brat or should I say do you think your actually turning into a guy, un? " Global natural air turns out to be Deidara my cat… or used to be im sad and honestly confused.
I hear the sound of a dj turn table disk be scratched with the sound of scornful ghosts, along with wrestler announcers long sreetch to start the game , with the barest hint of a baby bunney and ducky down feathers. It's a bit impossible in every way but I hear it.
"You know Deidara its quite possible that you may actually be right …..without someone asking questions that is" the thunder cookie known as kakazu now ,says with surprise.
Raspy baby blanket inputs "hm I think blone boomshell bimbo is actually correct for a change …. Not that I don't think your not right some of the time ya know." It's the blue man of the group Kisame .(see what I did there BlUE MAN of the yeah….no ok then \(n)/).
They turn their backs to me and look at the door that has profanitys spewing from its open door . while Deidara suddenly frowns a bit . I realize while staring at their backs they have …. Tails and ears….
Dei has a golden tail that is flicking back and forth in irritation and gold ears flicking that have a metallic complex rectangle that is silver and a blue circle piece in the center of the rectangle, its embedded into his ear. He also has a weird not so tribal tattoo , itm has freedom riders written on with small black birds and a weird white dragon with no eyes. 'wow! someones artistic or did that just come with the change?'.
Kisame he had a puffy blue tail that is just swaying every other minute like the sounds of profanity are just background noise. I look up at his ears they tell me a completely different story .His blue ears are twitching non stop and are flat against his head. On his back is a tattoo of a shark with a mutated sword shark jumping out of a sake bottle with thin flowers one of buckbean (1), balm of gilead(2) both of which are being poured out from the bottle.
Konan had thick yet slim purpleish blue tail. Her ears had small gray black flowers hard to see. Her ears were relaxed as was everything else about her. On her back was two loan words wrapped in feathers that said : unity and prosper.
Kakazu he had 5 frizzy brown tails two which were different shades of orange and blue, another two , one puffed out and the other slick, while the last one was stiched and patches of ribbed areas like it was raised in certain spots like rings, that were all thumping viciously on the tub and his ears had sticjhes lining them and a rip in one of them . his back had engraved on them words that looked crudely carved that said : simplicity, money, and in Japanese said a hollow hole .
The tattoos on them were nice and some what personal and probly I shouldn't actually be looking at. At that moment some unknown reason I yanked all four of the tails in my face.
"Did I hear a poof… again?" I question then. I look around and the Akatsuki have disappeared . until I look down in my tub. Sitting there where my pets . Little Sunny bae, Diesel, white rose, and Buddha. I get of the tub and grab the kin in my tub, and walked to the open door following the cursing to the hallway .
On the floor was Hidan holding his face, while Madara`s hand is were Hidans face used to be. I bend down to his level and pull his slick silver thin tail, it was surprisingly softer than I expected it to be . I picked him up and put him I the pouch my shirt just happens to have on it.
I stare at Madara. He stared back then looked at himself and blushed. Atleast one of the uchihas still have a mind to be conscious about just walkin around naked . he turned away and sat on the floor.
His back marred with insults and words of traitor on him. He had a slick shiny tail. He looked back at me twitching his left ear that had tufts on them as if saying 'well what are you waiting for?' I pull his tail which quickly wraps around my hand , Madara gives off a barley detectible shiver. I give it a tug and add him to my collection.
I go off to find the remaining members . I got to my room and plop them down on the foot of my bed. I stare at them for a while, minutes passing I finally pull pierces tail '….umm uhh penis' I sign quickly and put a pillow over my face as face as choji running for BBQ night. I feel around the bed risking touching him for a pair of sweats for him to wear. I touch fabric and yank.
'Here j-just put these on' I sighn not looking at him . I realize he probably doesn't understand what im saying but I don't care . weather he did or didn't he still grabbed them from me. After hearing some rustling I feel a poke on my thigh.'did I just get poked in the thigh by Pein .. that is just weird' I think to myself.
"alright first . What the fuck! Hold on why..who, what, were, when, why me, and how?" I said with a little to much intensity. Pein is just looking at me and crawls towards me and sits on me like he did when he first poofed into my life naked .
A smirk graces his face and he moves a hand up my stomach . I suck in a breath and a flash back no more like a déjà vu happens then I realized this man in front me had eaten me out when he was a cat . my face grows red and I bury it in the pillow I used as a shield. I had this feeling something was going to happen.
Pein's P.O.V
Sakura spazes out on me after a few intense minutes of staring at us and changes me back and bombards me with questions. I smirk and crawl up to her . im defenitly gonna answer all those questions. But in way I want to do it. My hands on her stomach . and start with question one.
"well you see for what the fuck "I say caressing her stomach pulling up her shirt and seeing a belly button ring that has narutos family crest on it." You see theres a was a big problem "I said just leaving it at that. "That explains absolutely nothing to me" she hisses.
My hand slides up to her breast and I squeeze earning a quite muffled moan. "Why we are. "I say and give another squeeze to her both her breast. And she gives a squeak "here is because the mail shinobi dropped us off here" I answered popping her breast out of her bra and letting them jiggle in front of me. I am such a naughty leader pfff hahaha.
"as to who did this" I say liking each nipple every other word. I hear airy soft gasp so quite im pretty sure the others cant hear her. I take one of my hands of her breast and slowly drag them down her stomach to the elastic of her pjs"its kind of sort of my fault" my other hand leaves her breats and pulls up the pillow to see her face."As for the what" I smirk and like the Kyubi container rub the back of my head and switch to rubbing circles on her clit through her pj bottoms. "that's umm gonna not be answered" she groans low in her throat.
That's hot. I pull down her bottoms and barly sticks a finger in her "where is strictly confidential " I say and plunge my finger in . she lets out a gasp."mm" it was short but still I heard it. I continue on and slide my finger back and forth."sakura your so wet…mmh"I whisper out not that anyone had to hear."when most likely three days ago" I say thrusting a third finger in "ahh"she lets out . hahaha she is so cute she is trying to hide it she is so kawii.
I thrust all three of my fingers in and hear the wet sounds from my actions. I lean close to her neck and leave marks there hearing her soft moans . then I get an idea"why well I don't want to share that its really embarassing" I shove my tail in her along side my fingers emphasize on embarssing . and surprising enogh I get a sound "P-Pein mmh' she moans my name. god damn I kind of hope I don't got a cat dick cause she will then willing or not wont have sex with me at all even if shes hung over . itsl like a spiked mini bat in the vagina ow so no.
I continue to finger her with my tail . and pull out my dick and look at yes non spike dick. "as for the how" I say like the smart ass I am . I pull out my tail and fingers and stoke my dick that has a Jacobs latter and a prince albert, and take my slick fingers and stroke my cock . I look dead in her eyes and hover over her . "im not gonna tell you that" I thrust in feeling her walls tighten against m it feels like she is sucking me in. "Pein! Ahhhhmm!"she moans out louad . "shit saku your so tight mmm kami." I groan out. Iv been with chicks before and im not saying what im saying cause I just wanna fuck her . literally I was attracted to her .i start thrusting at a slow pace ."god sakura if I would have known I would be this uncontrolled…" I didn't know what to say.
I thrusted fatser and faster till I heard her scream my name . jackpot. "right there do it again" she whimpered. She was now clinging on to me like a life line . her legs around my waist awkwardly because she still the bottoms on. The feeling of her nails racking down my back and she kissed me playing with my tounge ring I promise to use later on . in the pit of my stomach it was like aa tsunami was taking place I pounded into her faster and harder whimpers and cries of satisfaction…..from both parties. 'there is no shame if you gain'
"sakura I'm going to.." I start to say and she groans her climax . I pull out when her walls clenching me make feel my release, I pull out and cum on her stomach. And smirk.
She stares at me then opens her mouth "you told me jack shit Pein" she glared at me.
"oh to make up for it"I pull up both are pants and bend down and start to like up the cum on her stomach. I pull out boxers from no where and yank on a red tail .
sasori stares then looks at sakuras face and joins in . He wipes some up with his finger and looks into sakuaras eyes and straight up im not gay and have nothing against people but sasori liked up my cum slowly and got it from her belly button like a snack. We finish and in exchange make her taste my cum.
Mmhm im such a good leader.
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acid : the Pein thing ya that was special cause I felt bad that I haven't posted in a while so the sex scene was there originally its prize and I think that scince pein is big and bad he has to have this weird wtf side that he would most likely have if bad shit had not insued meaning yahiko would have aventually got piercing cause hes a boss ass bitch. So ya normal not ooc
Akatsuki: so whats it gonna be
Acid: huh
Sasori : Ride me or I Ride you
Acid: im highly confused and I think sasori is in heat
Sasori: Acid –sama please onigai *starts stripping*
Acid: I feel like this story is gonna stop being society friendly*sweat drops*
Kisame: you can unwrap my seaweed any time you want
Acid: ummm *blushes* ahhh Tobi ya Tobi can you do the reviews please
Tobi: *smiles* tobi will *gives me a sexy look* if you spank Tobi and Talk dirty to Tobi. Tell Tobi shut the fuck and lick her gushers.
Everyone: … wtf
Garra : im not even in this chapter but yeah read and review because the Akatsuki are always horney and I need to make money by selling them off