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Peter felt so guilty he didn't know what to say or do. He wished Louise and him shouldn't have gone to stop the ship. Peter and Louise left the same day they found the letter. They went on a small ship and set sail. They saw a big black ship in the distance and were taken captive by pirate looking fellows. That's all Peter remembered.

He watched as the ship, and his sister disappeared over the horizon. He felt a hand being placed on his shoulder, and it was a sad and stressed looking Caspian. Peter couldn't blame him: if he lost Louise to pirates, he would be a mess.

Caspian said in a strained voice, "Let's go." Peter nodded his head and found Louise to be missing. Peter didn't worry about it and followed Caspian to the stairs.

Louise went into Susan and Caspian's room and noticed Lucy in the room about ready to stab Louise with a small dagger. Lucy's eyes almost popped when she saw who it was.

Lucy put her dagger away. "Louise? What are you doing here?"

Louise bit her bottom lip. "Well….Peter and I wanted to make sure this trip didn't happen. Susan being pregnant and everything."

Lucy's eyes got even wider. "Susan's pregnant?" Louise looked guilty like she didn't mean to say that.

Louise grabbed Lucy's wrists. "Please don't tell anyone. I wasn't supposed to say anything." Lucy nodded her head but wondered why Susan never said anything.

Marianna watched as the three kings were talking about everything. She then watched the two queens walk out of Caspian's chambers. She walked up to the kings and asked politely, "What's going on?"

The three turned their heads almost in sync. Peter answered back angrily, "Can't you see we were talking? Did you have to interrupt?"

Marianna jumped back in fright. Louise ran up to where they were. "Peter!" she yelled angrily.

Peter turned to his wife. She whispered angrily, "You don't talk to people like that. I know you feel terrible. I know you're stressed and upset. Don't take it out on others."

She saw Peter's anger leave through one of his exhales out of his nose. He turned to Marianna. "I'm sorry. We're going after that ship."

Marianna bit her bottom lip. "Oh. The pirates will kill her. You better move fast."


Susan was surrounded by laughter that sounded disgusting to her. Bilias said happily, "We've got the queen of old. Not only that but the high queen who is married to High King Caspian! He's her love, she's also the Gentle Queen….we'll just see about that."

He looked at her seductively, and Susan gave him a face of disgust. The crew was cheering, and some that were near her touched her like she was a prize they won. Each time Susan would smack their hands, not the normal playful way she would her siblings or Caspian.

One smacked her back in the face. She put her hand on it and it had a throbbing pain.

She pretended to fall back, and she knocked a rope over the side of the ship. She noticed the rope was already attached to something on the ship, so she knew it would be enough for Caspian to climb aboard. Bilias yelled, "That's enough boys. I want her nice and pretty tonight."

Susan then had her hands chained together. They took her to Bilias's chambers. He had to steer the ship, so she was there all alone. Susan was shocked to already see a woman in there. She had blonde hair and green eyes.

The woman had bruises and cuts over her face. The woman gasped. "Queen Susan? What are you doing here?"

Susan raised an eyebrow. "I was taken…just like you, I guess."

The woman's head fell down. "My name's Rose. I'm King Markell's wife."


Peter steered the ship, Caspian stood next to the railing playing with his wedding ring, and Edmund and Lucy were sitting next to each other. Lucy was crying over her sister, and Edmund was comforting her.

Caspian went to Louise and stood next to her. "Is he saying anything?"

Louise rolled her eyes. "Not to me. He just feels guilty. I'm letting him blow off some steam. You know Peter, one big hot head."

Caspian chuckled in a strained way. "How's the baby?"

Louise touched her stomach. "Fine I guess. I can feel his head if I press hard enough here."

She pressed in an area of her stomach. Caspian smiled, and she gasped. "Ooh another kicking phase."

He looked at her happy in pain face. "Do you mind?"

She giggled. "Not at all."

He bent down and placed his hands on her stomach. He smiled when he felt the little kicks of life under his hands. He said happily and somewhat in a glum way, "I always wished I would have this feeling with Susan. Just the feeling of life in her."

Louise hated keeping secrets especially when it could make Caspian happy. She sighed. "You never know Caspian. There might be a miracle and this feeling could be with Susan."

He grinned up at her. There was a sliver of hope in his eyes. A crew member yelled from the crow's nest, "Your highness! I see the ship!"

Caspian yelled to the crew, "Alright men. We wait until nightfall when they're sleeping to attack."


Susan stared at Rose startled. "How are you here?"

She sighed. "Markell left me a note, and I was worried. I came looking for him with two other guards….they were killed. I was captured."

Susan sat right next to her making the chains on her hands rattle. "I'm sorry. You look horrible."

Rose scoffed. "Thanks."

"No I didn't mean it that way. Markell is more than safe on my ship with my husband."

Rose gasped. "I wish he would have mentioned in the note that he was with you. I wouldn't have searched for him. You two are old friends, and I know you would have taken care of him."

Susan nodded her head in response. She took notice of the room. There was a bed, a desk, a sofa, a bookshelf, and a chest at the end of the bed. There was also a closet and a mirror. There were windows at the end of the room. She could see the ocean and the bright day outside of it.

She heard more disgusting laughter, and she rolled her eyes. The two girls heard the door open, and then Bilias came in with two dresses. He threw the dresses at them. Susan noticed they were very showy and flashy.

He had a bright smile. "Put them on, my dears."

Susan stood up. "Well I'm not putting mine on. I'm not going to do anything you say actually."

Bilias raised an eyebrow and walked closer to her. "Are you sure you want to talk to me that way? We see your lovely ship in the distance. They are so close to our territory. We could just go and attack them right now. I would make you watch."

He was inches from her face and Susan backed away. He chuckled. "That's what I thought, Gentle Queen." He said her name as if he mocked her.

He walked out, and Susan looked at Rose. "What has he done to you?"

Rose whimpered, "Everything….just not that one thing that I've only done with Markell."

Susan sighed. "Should I put this on?"

Rose nodded. "I did that once. I tried to argue, but he finds it to be a game. I would put it on if I were you."

They got the dresses on, and Susan looked in the mirror. She saw lots of cleavage and calves. She felt disgusting. She looked at Rose, she looked the same as Susan just a different color dress. She saw Rose cross her arms over her breasts, like she felt self-conscious. Susan and Rose sat next to one another. They didn't say anything; they just waited.


The crew on Caspian's vessel were waiting. They waited for the darkness to engulf the sky. Frederick sat next to Lucy. "I'll go with Caspian Lu….to help save your sister."

Lucy grinned at him and kissed his cheek. "Thank you. I want you to stay close to Caspian. Stay safe."

Markell stood next to Caspian and asked, "What's it like?"

Caspian looked Markell up and down. "What are you talking about?"

"Having your love taken away?"

Caspian's jaw clenched and his fists were in balls. "The worst thing in the world. Think about having your love with someone who could snap their fingers, and she'd be dead. All I want to know is that she is safe. I have to protect her."

Markell nodded. "I'm coming with you."

Caspian put a firm hand on his shoulder. "Thank you, Markell."

Peter was holding Louise close to him. He kissed her head. He was doing it to stay sane, to keep calm. Louise smiled in his chest. She felt safe and protected in his arms. She moved her hands in circles on his back.

It was finally twilight, and everyone who was going was getting prepared. The people going were Peter, Caspian, Markell, Edmund, and Frederick. They were getting their weapons tightly strapped to them.

Louise gave Peter one last kiss. "Stay safe."

He smiled sadly. "I always am."

Lucy gave Frederick a peck. "Look after yourself."

Frederick said happily, "Same thing yourself."

Edmund walked over to Louise and Peter. "You two know…don't you." They both looked at one another and then back at Edmund and nodded.

Edmund sighed. "It seems like everyone knows except Caspian….the father."

Caspian walked up behind Edmund. "What about me?"

Edmund turned around to see a displeased Caspian. Caspian cleared his throat. "I know all of you are keeping a secret from me. I can see it on your faces."

Louise bit her bottom lip and Peter and Edmund looked at each other glumly. Caspian crossed his arms. "I'm waiting."

Lucy was right behind Caspian and she blurted, "Susan's pregnant."


Susan and Rose heard a knock at the door, and then a guard came in. He looked at the two of them. "It's twilight. Captain Bilias would like the two of you to come out now."

Rose got up and helped Susan up from the chains on her hands. They got to the guard, and he unchained Susan's hands. They came out and saw the crew all gawk at them. Some looked like dogs when they see a juicy steak.

Susan found it to be revolting. She looked at Rose who had a face of disgust and embarrassment. Bilias stood in between them and yelled, "Tonight we celebrate! We have the queen of Narnia and the queen of Archenland!"

The crew cheered and held their swords to the air. Susan looked at Rose who was looking right back at her. They were broken away from their gazes when Bilias put his arms around them both.

Susan was very close to pulling out of his grasp but remembered what Rose said. She just stood very still and saw a very small looking ship in the background. She knew that ship from anywhere.

Bilias yelled, "Now feast brothers!" The men cheered and started to dig into whatever they were eating. Bilias whispered into the two girls' ears, "We'll be eating somewhere else."

He led them to another room on the ship. It had a big table with lots of food on it. There were four seats. Bilias smiled at the feast on the table. "My first mate will be eating with us as well."

Rose and Susan eyed each other before they sat down. Susan and Rose made sure they sat next to one another. Bilias sat across from Rose, and the first mate sat across from Susan. Bilias sighed. "So what's it like to be royalty ladies? We seem to be stealing from them all the time might as well know."

Neither of them said anything. Bilias became angry. "You know both of your husbands are on that ship. We could attack in mere minutes."

Susan first answered, "It's a lot harder than expected. Most people would think everything would be handed to them. It's not; I had to work for my place in Narnia."

Rose looked at Susan. "She's right. Every day I worry. I worry that someone might kill me or Markell for the throne."

Bilias rolled his eyes. "But you can do whatever you want."

Susan mumbled under her breath, "Not without the councils permission first."

Bilias looked at Susan confused. "What was that girly?" Susan shook her head. He took a sip of his wine and looked at the two beautiful girls in front of him.

That night most of the men were drunk and passed out on the ship. Susan and Rose were then forced back into the chamber. They both had their hands chained this time. Susan was chained to one pole in the room, and Rose was to another.

Bilias came in and smiled. "I never thought I could have two beautiful queens chained up in my chambers at once."

Susan struggled under the chain's grasp. She didn't want to go through another Demeterius dispute. Bilias came to her first. "Aww my queen you don't need to worry. I don't bite."

He touched her face with his finger slightly. She moved it away abruptly, she felt sick. He lifted up the bottom of her dress, and she kicked him back. He gave her a shocked look. "I thought you were the gentle queen. You better be careful your majesty, or I may not be so gentle."

He came back to her and moved hair out of her face. He moved in to kiss her, but she spat at him. He touched where the spit hit his chin and lips and wiped it. He then smacked her across the face. She groaned in pain.

He had a scary glare in his dark eyes. He sat back on his bed and blew out the candle. Susan could hear the muffled snores and knew he fell asleep. She whispered, "Rose? Rose are you awake?"

Rose whispered back, "Yes. Are you okay? He hit you pretty hard."

"I'm fine. Don't worry they're coming for us tonight."


Caspian faced Lucy whose hand was over her mouth. Louise, Peter, and Edmund all looked grimly at Lucy. Caspian knew it was true. "Was she ever going to tell me?"

Edmund sighed. "She didn't want you to go back because of her pregnancy. She worked so hard on this ship and keeping it from you. She didn't want to ruin it."

Caspian nodded, and Edmund was surprised; he thought Caspian would be angry and upset. Caspian looked at all of them. "Let's get her back."

Once it became very late at night, Caspian looked down at the blackened waters. He looked back at the group going with him and sighed. He first jumped in holding his breath in the air. The water raced over his body, and it was freezing cold. The four other boys jumped in after him.

Caspian noticed Edmund's lips were already blue. They all started to swim. It felt like forever to Peter when they got there. First thing Caspian noticed a rope was already down in the water. Caspian whispered, "I'll go first then the rest of you follow me. Show no mercy. Kill them silently. We don't want to wake up the whole crew."

Caspian climbed up, and his muscles felt strained. Before he pulled himself up and over he looked around to see if any guards were nearby. One was walking about but had his body turned away from Caspian. He pulled himself up quietly and snuck over to the crew member. Caspian put a hand over his mouth then put his sword through him.

He came back to where the rope was, and the men all looked up at him to know if everything was safe. Caspian nodded down at them, and Peter climbed up. Caspian stood guard, and when Peter got to the top, Caspian helped him up. The same thing happened for Edmund, Markell, and Frederick. Caspian whispered once they were all up, "Let's split up and find where she is."

They all nodded. Peter, Edmund, and Frederick went as a group, and Markell and Caspian were a group. Frederick noticed the crew member in the crow's nest started to wake up. Frederick shot an arrow at him, and the man died silently.

Peter's group went into a room that was pitch black and Edmund whispered, "I could really use my torch now."

Peter rolled his eyes and noticed it was only a storage closet. Caspian and Markell found another room that was pitch black. Caspian heard a familiar whisper, "Caspian?"

Caspian whispered, "Susan? It's me."

Susan smiled brightly, and Rose whispered, "Markell?"

Markell didn't believe at first what he could make out. He ran up to her. "Rose!"

Caspian tried to pull Susan away put all he got was a sound of chains and a look of pain on Susan's face. Susan whispered, "Bilias has the keys. He's asleep on that bed."

Caspian stood up and looked at the bed and heard snoring. Caspian ran out of the room to get the other three. Caspian told them what was going on, and they came into the room.

Markell was hugging Rose; he didn't ask questions. He was just glad to know she was safe and alive. The other men huddled around Bilias's bed looking for a sign of flashing keys.

Edmund saw them flashing in the moonlight. They were in his pocket. Caspian didn't how to do it without waking him up. Caspian looked at Peter. "I think we have to kill him."

Peter sighed and nodded. Susan whispered, "Wait. I have an idea."

Susan said very loudly, "Bilias. I'm sorry." Bilias woke up to the sound of her voice. He lit the candle next to his bed and went to her.

He squatted next to her. "What did you say?"

Susan sighed. "I'm sorry for being assaulting. Please unchain me and I'll show you my remorse."

Bilias smiled and then chuckled. "I didn't know you were so inviting."

He unchained her, and she rubbed her hands. She smiled at him, and he leaned in for a kiss. She head-butted him, and he was knocked out. She put a hand to her own head. "Ouch." She said.

Caspian was behind her and twirled her around to kiss her. Markell took the keys and unchained Rose. Susan said, "We don't have much time. Let's go."

They all started out of the room. Then they got to the railing, and Caspian looked at Susan. "Thanks for the rope by the way."

Susan giggled. "You're very welcome."

Then they all jumped into the freezing cold water one by one. Susan shivered once she got in. "It's f..freezing."

Edmund looked at her. "Start swimming, and it will be over sooner." Susan rolled her eyes at him, and he stuck his tongue out at her.

They all swam as fast as they possibly could. They finally got to the ship, and the crew members pulled up the monarchs and Frederick. They all got wrapped in towels and blankets as fast as possible.

Susan ran up the stairs letting water drip everywhere. She turned on the wheel and started to steer the ship away from the pirates. She prayed quietly, "Aslan give us strong winds to get away from these people."

Suddenly, a huge guest of wind pushed the ship forward, and Susan heard the yell of pirates in the distance behind her. She gasped and found Caspian was right behind her with comforting eyes. He put his hands on top of hers to help steer. They started to go a lot faster than the pirates. The crew just watched and waited hesitantly.

Louise was cuddling with Peter to keep him warm. Lucy was also doing the same with Frederick. Finally the Narnians were so far ahead, they didn't know where the pirates had gone. They all cheered and laughed because everything worked.

Susan hugged Caspian around his waist, but he didn't hug her back. He just looked down at her hurt and upset. He unwrapped her arms from around him and walked away. She just stood where she was, hurt and confused and watched Caspian walk away into his chamber.

Susan looked for a familiar face and stormed up to Edmund. He smiled at her, and it faded away when he immediately saw the hurt and anger on her face. She pulled him by the ear to the area of the ship that was never filled with the crew. He kept saying ow as she pulled him. When they got there, Susan crossed her arms and stood in front of him. She eyed him. "I'm waiting Ed."

Edmund looked at the ground. "Well it wasn't me…it was Lucy actually."

Susan sighed in regret. "She can never keep a secret. Why would you tell her?"

"I didn't! I don't know who told her, honestly. I just know that she told Caspian right before we went to get you."

Susan walked away from him. "Now I have to explain everything to Caspian."

She walked past many tired looking crew members, and they all gave her looks of sorrow. It was probably her face she thought. She got to the door of her room, and she took a deep breath before entering.

She opened the door, and Caspian was sitting at his desk fiddling with a pencil. She closed the door behind her quietly and walked smoothly to the desk. She sat on top of it and remembered what dress she was wearing.

She stood up again and cleared her throat and said in the most calm and loving voice, "Caspian. I'm sorry I didn't tell you. I don't even know if I really am. I just have all of the symptoms. I didn't want the trip to be canceled. I worked so hard."

Caspian suddenly looked up and noticed the sadness on her face. He stood and hugged her. He picked her up and twirled her around, and they both laughed. He then kissed her passionately. "This is the best thing that I could ever hear."

Susan giggled. "So you were upset at me but now you're happy? You're confusing."

Caspian poked her nose. "One of the many things you love about me."

She sighed of relief and happiness. "Are we near any islands?"

Caspian shrugged his shoulders and then touched her cheek lightly. "Does it hurt?"

She flinched when he touched her, and she ran to the mirror. She gasped. "I didn't think it would be this bad." It was red and swollen and in the middle it was already starting to turn purple.

Caspian stood behind her and brushed his lips over her shoulder. Susan turned to him and gave him a deepening kiss. She walked him to the end of the bed and pushed him lightly. He then fell on his back on top of the bed.

He chuckled, and they gave one another small kisses. They both smiled into them, and Susan started to unbutton Caspian's shirt. She pulled it off and smiled at his chest. He flipped her over, and she was on the bottom.

Suddenly, Susan felt a sharp pain in her stomach. She ignored it at first and kept kissing Caspian. He started to untie the strings on the front part of her corset. She felt it again and couldn't take it. She said stop breathlessly.

Caspian pulled his eyebrows together. "What's wrong?" Susan shook her head and put a hand to her mouth. She ran out of the room and violently vomited over the side of the ship. Caspian came behind her and held her hair back. Most of the crew were down sleeping. Markell ran over to where they were. "Is everything alright?"

Caspian nodded his head, and then Markell took notice that Caspian's shirt was off and Susan's dress was almost completely untied. Markell snapped out of his thoughts. "Is there anything I can do to help?"

Caspian looked at him with strained eyes. "Water would be nice." Markell nodded and stumbled to the food storage area.

Susan was done and choked out. "Sorry about that."

Caspian shook his head and started to retie her corset. She smiled down at his swift moving fingers. Markell came back with a canteen of water, and Susan swished the water around in her mouth. She then spit out the refreshing water over the side of the ship.

She hugged Markell. "Your wife's a strong one. And thanks." At first Markell didn't know what to do, but he then hugged her back.

They released their embrace, and Susan followed Caspian back to their room. They were ready to sleep. The next day was going to be a big one.


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