Me: Thanks for the reviews again :)

This is: Out Cold

It took me days to even began to think about what I should write for this chapter. And then I wrote Version 1.

FAILED.

Version 2 was a bit more complex and had an almost good ring to it. But...

FAILED again.

Version 3 was a crack chapter that had to due with Poseidon, Triton, Percy, and Tyson in a father-son bonding thing. With appearances from Apollo and you know. Egyptian gods. XD

That one was... highly amusing but not what I was going for so it FAILED.

Versions 5-9 (yes, I actually wrote this over 9 times) were something that you should never read when sober. FAILED.

But Version 10... well, it's been posted has it not? :P

Kronos

Summary preview: You were going to show them all.

&&its so quiet here
Peaceful, calming, relaxing
Or at least
That's what they wantyou to believe
.

&&yeah, those screams of the
F.O.R.G.O.T.T.E.N
I g n o r e d
B/r/o/k/e/n
Are fairly easy to ignore when you're up above having fun.
.

&&there is plenty of time to ponder your revenge
And plan out your
g
o
a
l
s
.

&&look! The Olympians finally
screwed up
&&suddenly you have a whole lot of opportunities
at your {nevernevernever} never-ending disposal
Good thing your new host has such terrible daddy issues.
.

&&that Perseus Jackson demigod was going to be a
p r o b l e m
if he didn't hurry up and die.
Soon
.

&&maybe, just maybe, you've been going at this wrong.
Maybe you should have taken Jackson as your host.
At least he wouldn't of had a weakness in the form of that
Daughter of Athena
.

&&you failed yet a g a i n.
Taken D.O.W.N. by the
Son of the eldest gods
And the girl-who-should-be-a-tree
Way to fail.
.

&&it feels so intensely
g
o
o
d
To have a body again.
Those nightmarish memories
can finally shut-the-Hades-up
You were going to be K I N G again
And not even Percy Jackson can stop you.
.

&&that cursed knife
slashes towards you despite you trying to stop it
And then the world is n/o/t/h/i/n/g but a
blaze of fire
And you are O.U.T.C.O.L.D.
for what could very well be f o r e v e r.
.

Me: I love this.

But then again, it is a freeverse, and I always love freeverses. They are just epicly done with font play. :D

Next Chapter: Spiral

Thoughts?

~ Anna/ Booklover98