Hey guys I'm sorry I keep promising to update my stories I just like to write them down and I took all your guys idea and sort of combined them but I think I may stop this story I want to get a fresh start but I'm a little scared because so many people keep wanting more and for me to keep writing so I'm undecided if I get about ten review on this story then I will continue but if not I'll stop it.
Last on Loren and Eddie forever
Eddie: lo im not interested when i have the best person in the world to be my girlfriend.
Lo: you mean that?
Eddie: why wouldnt i you are my girl
Lo: ok
Ed: so am i forgiven and no more of the cold shoulder
Loren kisses him with full passion
Lo: does that answer your question
Ed: yes that does and can i have another you haven't kissed me for weeks
Lo: i guess one more couldn't hurt
they ended up having a make out session in the hallway till they need to breath and decide to say goodbye and go back to the penthouse
now on Loren and Eddie forever
5 months later
LOREN POV
longest 3 minutes of my life and now im just praying its negative suddenly i hear foot step then a knock
Lo: yes?
Ed: Mel's here to see you is everything okay you sound nervous
Lo: yeah everything's fine and tell mel ill be down in a few
Ed: okay see you in a few
as i heard footstep go away i checked the three test 1st test positive 2nd test positive 3rd test positive i dropped to my knees crying
Loren(mumbled):... im... im... pregnant
i put the tests in the bag and went down the stairs not befor laying the bag on the bed cause as soon as mel leaves her and eddie were ganna talk.
Lo: hey mel
Mel:hey is everything okay
Lo: yeah... eddie can you give us a minute
Ed: yeah ill be upstairs let me know if there is anything you need
Lo: okay
eddie gives me a kiss on the cheek and walked upstairs then i remember what i had left on the bed
Lo: Shit!
Mel: Lo...?
next thing you know im taking off up the stairs with mel behind me when i see Eddie walk out of the bedroom and he had the tests in his hands and i already feel the tears in my eyes and i take off back down the stair after pushing past Mel and grabbing my bag when i was about to leave Eddie yelled.
Ed: Loren wait...!
Lo: why i ruined everything
Ed: no you didnt we will get through this we can get through everything
Lo: but what are we ganna do a baby is ganna put my career on hold and i dont want to ruin your career i think it better if i just go
Ed: what about the baby loren i understand you wanting to go but dont you want the baby to have a father
Lo: of course i do but at the risk of ruining everything i cant
with that i ran out
what is ganna happen will loren come back to eddie will everything they had gone through be enough to save there relationship. Please if you critisize be gentle i got a little hate on a different story so im trying any ideas or thing you want added or changed in any of my stories PM me.