Disclaimer: I do not own Warriors, and I (Thankfully) do not own Starkit's Prophecy either.
Chapter to the rose of a Heroin (Naughty starkit! Drugs are bad!)
ok jazzie-kun pleas dont get mad at me cause your not in it yet. You'l apear soon dont worry.
StarKit wock up and sunlit was in the branches. (Bad branches! Stop trapping the poor sunlight!)
She closed her eyes againstill tired. Butter mom (so… if Dawnsparkle is made of butter, does that make Starkit a little tub of margarine? If she was, it may shut her up a bit, so one would hope…)
wouldn't let her sleep not today.
"Sweety its time to get up" said Dawnsparkle; her eys shinning. "Today is important today."
"What is it Mom" said StarKit awake right away. Then the she cat rememembered (Rememembered?!) what today was.
"Ohmigosh its my serimony today!' she squelled (squelled: a combination of Squealed and yelled.)
excercisedly. Today was the day she was an apprentice!
She flicked outside (And how do you flick outside, exactly?)
not even waiting for her Mom. But her Mom cot up to her quick.
"Sweety you know the clans don't except cat slike use sometimes." She said.
StarKit glared. She didn't lake beig told that. Just because her Mom was a usedto be Shadowclan cat and her dad was jayFeather the medicine Cat didn"t mean she ws different! (Umm… sorry to burst your bubble Starkit, but it kind of does….)
"StarPaw come here." (Well that was fast. She's an apprentice already!)
Said FireStar from the leg. He jumped down.
"StarKit it s tome for you to become an apentice: (I read: Is tome for you to become an appendix)
he said. "Your a strong brave cat and because of that I will mentor with you." (and the Mary-sueness begins)
Ever body gasped. StarKit did too. Se herd hear mother say "Wow!".
Firehert liked her shoulder. (ooookay… so, you like her shoulder, and nothing else? And, also, firestar, you are meant to be a leader at the moment!)
He whispered in her ear "youll be the best their ever was StarPaw I know ti."
Surpised she walked away when they were done howling (Alright, who transformed Thunderclan into wolves?!)
for her./ Then she went ofer to JayFeathern and DawnSparkle who were very prod.
"Daughetr where very happy but he have to say something said Jayfeather his chest puffed ouit. "You see there is this prophcy Starcaln gave me it said that out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly."
StarPaw gasped. What does it mean? (and you really have to think about that?)
lol I update fast dont i. REVEIW or ill hit over the head with a frying pan! XDD jk (woah, back off! *Brings out a sword* I have a sword and I'm not afraid to use it!)
Doing this Starkit thing is actually really fun! Review, but I promise not to hit you with a pan if you don't! *Whistles innocently and tries to hide a frying pan behind back*