Disclaimer: I do not own Warriors, and I (Thankfully) do not own Starkit's Prophecy either.
Chapter three the Battle 4 the caln
thx jazzie-kun 4 th good review! (this got a good review?!)
and stop flmaing the stroy!1 i bet u cant right such a good story!1!1 (Ummm… I would maybe reconsider that.)
StarPaw walkd over too the appentice's den. Insid she saw her sister's FlamePaw and lakePaw and hr frend JazzPaw (a.n: jazzie-kin ur my bff!) (Jazzpaw?! Please excuse me while I go and whack my head off a table.)
waz slepping on the mos. (Poor Mo. People would always be slepping on him, if he could figure out what slepping actually was!)
"JazzPaw get up." She cried. JazzPaw opend her brlliaint blu eyes and looked at hr.
"Do yo (gangsta' Starpaw!)
want 2 go on pattrol wit me?" she asked.
"Sure!" Said JazzPaw getten up from the moss. They leavt and went two the entrnse too camp.
But then, a cat came in thru the entrnce! It was BlackStar!1!11
"Shadowclan are attaking!" (okay… so, now, one cat appears, and Shadowclan is attacking. Go figure.)
She yelled. All the cats came out from there dens. She jumped on a cat and clawd him and he ran of. (Wow, Starpaw. You have been an apprentice for a single day, and yet you can beat a fully trained Shadowclan warrior in a single swipe?)
"Good job StarPaw!" FireStar called, "The last cat i new that culd fiht lik that was SandStrom. Your a good fihter!" (yes starpaw. You are a really good fritter!)
StarPaw was happy. She wus a good fihgter! Maybey this was wat the prophcy meant. (umm… no. even you should be able to figure out that prophecy, and, quite frankly, you are an idiot.)
thnkx and ples no more flams (okay, no more 'flams', but you didn't say we couldn't 'Flame'!)
Third chapter done, and I think that's enough Starpaw for me today, otherwise my eyes will start bleeding from the bad spelling! Review! Storm