Disclaimer: I do not own Warriors, and I (Thankfully) do not own Starkit's Prophecy either.
Chapter Ate The Serimmony 1
STOP REVOFIGN BAD! but than u JASZpAW for tehh godo revewis uve ben levving (she got good reviews?!)
StarPaw skided into de Camp. "FIRSTAR" SHE YOWLED "I ha to tel; uo somesting?"
"nut ow StarOaw" he sadi "yuve gut to become WARRIOR!' (After a few days of training? I think not!)
"MOGOSH REALLY creamed StarPaw.
YEAH SAID firestar "Youv been a war for onll 3.14 (very precise… wait… isn't that the value of Pi?)
dayss butt u are the best apent ice in the cAlan. (No favouritism there then. None at all… *sarcasm*)
Ur perfect. We ndd you to help dfeat BlackStar and ShadowclaN. And all teh other calns. Tehy are tyring 2 attack us were in the meddle of a warr. "
"omgosh WE ARE?" scremmed StarPal she sus so surpissed! (really? There is a war, and you haven't realised yet?)
"Ya DustPelt did while U were away in your walk Rivrclan attacked us." Said SandTrom. She locked sortaf sad she New FireStart lovved Stargleam. But it wass ok she newt wht wus best. (and what is best is that you kill Starpaw/gleam before she makes our eyes bleed anymore!)
"OMGoht" sid StarPaw. "Quickk mack me a warrror!" (very eager, but the leader decides when you become a warrior!)
"Oak" said Firestar. He wlaked up to StarPaw. "aLL Cats Gather Round Who Are Older To Cach There One Prey!" (Only on piece? Is this a new, Starpaw-introduced rule?)
"Tday we are making a new Warrior."
The calnn GASPED! (Is it really that much of a shock?)
"SarkPaw! StarPaw!: shouted the clan. They all new infancy (What have babies got to do with this?!)
it was she whom was beng mad a warrior.
Starpaw was so exited! She'd never bin so hap inner life!
"StarPaw….." said FirePaw. He was simile like shed never sent him simle behfore. (oh really? Let me see…)
"Are you ready to become a Warrior in the Name of Starcaln?:"
"Yes!" she shock3d. (And how exactly do you 'shock3?)
"oak." (is this an alternative to shouting TREE when you are angry?)
Eh sad. "Then by the powers of Starclan, I gave you this narme. From now on, you will be none as StarPaw (yes. You are not worthy of a warrior name.)
for your pel which sings like the starss (nice poetic language, but absolutely nonsensical.)
and ur conectin 2 StarClann. We onner you'r bravvery and" " kindness."
"SarkPaw! StarPaw!: shouted the clan. They
StarGleam (no… you named her Starpaw, so stick to it!)
girned. She wass a Warrior! At least!"
"FireScar," she said, cuming (*sniggers immaturely*)
over 2 him. "I wanna tell u somesing." They locked sirously (is that as in… Sirius Black?! Sorry, Harry Potter reference…)
at him.
"yeah wat is it?" he sad, hop shinning in his eayres.
Dos he knew? StarGlema think.
"Firestar…." She brethed. She cullednt she was actually dong this after so lung.
"I….."
WINDCLAN ATTAK! Shioted a voise from obove the Camp.
It was….
HOLYLEAF! (No! how dare you make Hollyleaf evil! *Takes Darkroses' frying pan and smacks her over the head* actually, Hollyleaf has sense. Kill Starpaw/gleam!)
I workd reall' herd on dis chapter n tired 2 spell good (well it didn't work. Try harder.)
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Storm