Disclaimer: I do not own Warriors, and I (Thankfully) do not own Starkit's Prophecy either.
Okay, before I start, I have some announcements to make! First, I want to apologise to Spiritstar, and I didn't mean to cause any offense to them by saying what I did about the name Dawnsparkle. I accept that you named one of your characters that, and did not mean to cause any harm by saying what I did. Also, to Burrfrost, it by previously published text, it means actual books, so, if I did one of these on Into the Wild, for example, it would be against the fanfiction rules, however I don't think it applies to things such as this. I appreciate your concern though! Right, enough with the serious stuff… onto the next chapter!
Chapter Ten The Recluse (so… someone's shy then?)
"EVERONE FALLOW ME" meowled StarPleam as see charred for th3 entranse to eh camp. Tares stremmed down her face1 she wuss so sad her fahter had deid her leader was gunn. "FLAMEPAW LAKEPAW DUSTPELT MOM LOINBLAZE (loinblaze?!)
FALLOW ME." She said. "I NEDD A PAROL."
The run into the frost their pass working fastly. She wood kill HolyLeaf and TigerSar for what thed don!
She batlecried using his nose to tar down the evill cats. (oookkkaaayyy…. Did that make sense to anyone?)
Her heat burneded!
Sune they had funded them. They were hidnig bwhind a bolder. "HAHAHAH" LAUGHED HOLylesf putting er claw on FiresTarS thort. "IVE GOT YOU KNOW!"
StarGleam gasped. "noooooo Fireheat!" she scemmed "FalmePawgo!" (I don't remember Flamepawgo mentioned in the alliances…)
she said.
Flamepaw hurled at HolyLeaf. Hollyleaf laked (And…. How exactly do you 'lake'?)
at her in suprise. "What how could they have fallowd me." She dogged (okay, I'll dog at them too! WOOF WOOF!)
at Flamepaw her blue eys (Hollyleaf has green eyes!)
fallshig.
"NO FLAMEPAW" whaled LakePaw seing her sisters about too die. "I LOVE YOU FALMEPAW." She yowled jumping herself in front of HOlyLeaf.
HollyLaffs paw cutt into hir throt blood came out LakePaw felt down.
"NOOOO!1!11" StarPaw screamed. (yes. Your sister just sacrificed herself, even though if you are so 'amazing' and 'special' then you could always just rush in and save them!)
"FLAMEAPWWW!" She ran for HoltLeaf but it wass no us. LakPaw was dyeing. "I lofe (you loaf of bread her?!)
you StarGleam." She wisperd before er blue I's cosed.
"NO WAKE UP LAKEPOOL" shoited Stargleam-she was so sad and depersed she was cyring!
"hahaha" laughed HollyLeaf evil. "u just dunt gedot d o you Im one of teh Tree! I have pows beyound ur emaginating!" (actually…. SPOILERS... you aren't one of the three!)
nd then…. She turned in…. A BARE! (wait a second… she lost all of her fur?)
"Gasped" gasped everyone. It was a bare!
"IM A SHAPSHITTER!" (please excuse me whilst I die of laughter! A shapeshitter?!)
siad Hollylea joyly.
"stargleam." Said FalmePaw cryingly. "I nedd to go back 2 the damp. I goat (lazy! You want to make a poor, defenceless goat bury your sister for you?!)
bury laekpaw. Ive neverbeen out of camp before how do you get back!" (She's an apprentice, yet she hasn't been out of camp?! Go figure.)
"U ju wak to te the est. said StarPaw."
Thaks said FlamePaw crying she piced up the LakePaw and putter on her back and run.
"nut so fast!" said Holyleaf! "Your not gunna get away that easly!" Wit a rar like an volcano erection (pfffffft! *Laughs immaturely*)
she jumped at StarGlaem!
Everone! Gasped! "NOOOO." Yowled STarGleam as sumething lung and sarp pluned into her bk. "YOU CANT GET ME THAT EASLY."
Everyone jumped at the HoBare! The bare rared in pane! Starepaw sent her teeth into its for. It rared.
"oak oka" HolyLeafthe bare said. "i no know Your not guna be bettin that esliay." Suddenly she was a cat1 then her body dropped her eyes went drka she was on the grund. Suddly ther wass howl from the other side of the froste. It was LaFlamePaw! (is that the French version of Flamepaw?)
"LAKEPAW UR BACK!" SHE SAD (no… you just said that it was Flamepaw. Or La Flamepaw to be precise!)
WHT SAID SPARGLAME. Thenshe locked. It was LakePool! (fastest. Warrior. Ceremony. Ever.)
She was runnin tord the forest starGleam was so appy. Then she sawyer eyes.
….
THEY WERE OLLYLEAFS!
the next chatter wil coke (oh, you're going to give us coke? Thankyou!)
soon! AND STUP FLAMMING (okay… so we can't Glamm or Flamm, but we can still Flame?)
YOU HAETRS. YOU JUST DONT BELVE IN GOOD.
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