Llamas Eviscerate 'jO Bekke at HUgwRts'

by Angelus Nox

Here is our first fan fiction commentary! Join us as we read through a story riddled with plot holes, total character personality derailment, and a Mary Sue main character who can't seem to remember her own name. Will we, along with our editing llama, be able to tear the story apart?

18. Chapter 18

AN: Y r yall FLAMIN mi Struy? UR MEEN! Jus bcuz I hav views dosnt meen u kneed to b meen about it. BI DA WAY, I LUVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV U DAARRYL. I CANT W8 4 TONITE~``````````````````````````

Great. Tell him in person, not on the Internet. I hope you two have fun with your terrible grammar and spelling.

Chapter 18 : DA KKK

You know, probably not a very good idea for a chapter title... Or anything...

Den da GREFfenfdurs wen up to da towr. DEr was dis old man der. HE luked relly old. He was kinda pal nd ei culd c rite thru him. IT WAS… … … … .NEERLY HEDLIS KNIK!

"HELLLO' jo bekle, "I AM NEERly HEdliss KNik!111111111111111111111111"

"CULL,;' I sed.

Actually, you can't cull him. He's dead already.

"Yes, no I must tell u a awsum secrit!111111111111111111"

What is up with people not telling secrets until the next chapter in this story? Siriusly!

:0D

...really?

What's Ron with my puns?

That they exist.

*sigh* you will Neville appreciate these puns, will you?

No.

2 B CUNTINUDE

Well, that was a short chapter.

Reviews are delicious! Thanks to those of you that have already done so!

Delicious for the llama. We don't eat our words, or yours.

*nomnomno-* *clears throat* yeah, yeah, the llamas love the reviews.