Hello Followers of this Story,

I am writing to all of you today to let you know, I will not be continuing this story. I did finish it originally on paper and then had planned to type it out. I have dyslexia so I knew I needed to have someone to check it for me. I did have someone but as life goes on for everyone, no one has the time for computer editing really.

That's okay because with all my editors dragging their heels, I started to drag my heels also. Which in the end made me have to edit; which I really didn't want to since I hate this story so much. I still wanted to finish it though, since it was my first fan fiction written. I however dragged my heels even more, because as I grew up over the years and I started to mature. I realized a little bit more, each time how bad this story really was.

So as a person who is trying to get back into the writers life, I was getting very frustrated. I recently decide to start editing and get back into it so I can move on from that rough patch, if you will. However as I pulled it up, I instantly got disgusted with what I wrote. I then remembered how horrible this story was. I kid you not, it's full of Mary Sue's and bad plot twists. I'm absolutely embarrassed I would call myself a writer when I was posting this crap.

Sorry for putting you through that.

I'm going to write a short summary of what the story was suppose to look like; and explain some minor details that are important.

When I first came up with the idea of this story, it was from a discussion about Janet coming back from the dead. This was around the time the website "bring back Janet " had come out. My siblings were discussing how Janet would come back from the dead if the fans succeed. Coming back as a Goa'uld was the only thing we came up with. However in the canon storyline Janet's body was actually taken to earth and to be buried. Or sent through the Stargate, can't remember that for sure.

Once I had realized that after starting to write this I figured "Hey what the heck? This is the fan fiction world. Nobody cares right?" Wrong as a person who wants to think himself or herself as a writer. There are certain rules that need to be followed; and it will make you look like a fool if you don't follow them.

I also got bored after awhile with Janet being in the story, since the years went by and I no longer cared. So eventually, I would have had her killed off again.

So here is the short summary of what would have happened…

Oh dear God forgive me.

They remove the symbiots from Janet and Daniel. Daniel wakes up to find out he has these strange powers from a DNA Resequencer that Nut gave him. She some how managed to figure out the machine for it to work on him if she gives him a dose every couple of hours.

Daniel, Sam, Caroline, Teal'c and that Mary Sue team with a female leader and all men went to the planet. They let all the Jaffa's know their false God's were dead of course; and even what happens on the planet sounds so far fetched for me to repeat.

They then let everyone go home, after a heart-warming speech that could almost bring a tear to the eye. The group then went into the room that had the DNA Resequencer to fix Daniel. And of course Janet's Goa'uld had built a bomb into the machine for anyone who touches it… Which of course she wouldn't die from it, but everyone else would.

Daniel's condition starts to get worse and they call the asgard to beam the bomb out into space for them. Which makes no sense because at this time they have Tok'ra in the area and their own ship… But they call the asgard to fix their bomb problem? Anyway Sam starts to see Caroline babying Daniel and suspects something is going on there. Oh no!

Sam believes that Janet made Daniel the host to Geb, because of Janet's personal feelings for Daniel was being transferred to the Goa'uld. Which she confirmed with Janet once she woke up. It's then revealed through a conversation between Caroline and Daniel, that they are actually engaged.

Caroline was worried about Janet being back, of course. Caroline for whatever reason was invited to a meeting upstairs with the head and almost sleeps right through it. Even though in the military you would not get away with that at all. Apparently she did, in fact they were all siting there politely waiting for her. Isn't that so nice?

Caroline sits down, and they use a Tok'ra memory recall device to some how, bring back some memories that could help them. Even though these Goa'uld have been out of human bodies for a couple of decades now; and could no way give them something they don't already know, from their own spies in Goa'uld ranks. But heck, lets give it a try anyway. Oh and did I mention the General Hammond and Jacob Carter are there? Because why not? Even though General Hammond is retired; and Jacob Carter has much better things to do, and doesn't even have to be there are at all. But whatever, all things are possible right?

Neither of them remembers anything important, till at the same time; (originally it was going to be just Janet. But apparently it makes more sense, if they have the same vision at the same time?) The vision showed the two Goa'uld preparing to send a child (harsesis) who was female through the Stargate. Wouldn't you know it, the child was sent to earth? That was the end of that vision, and pretty much for this part of the story. Except Janet says "Oh no".

The first part is bad, but wait till you hear the second part… It's worse.

Some how Janet knows where to go and Daniel doesn't. They find out of course it's in Egypt and Janet says there's a ring transporter there. Thank God right? They all leave and Sam follows Daniel into his office and begins to worry. Yes, because Sam is completely that kind of person to go out of her way, and worry about everything. Sarcasm, if you didn't catch that one. So they decide to ask Jack when they're leaving on their adventure; since apparently they didn't talking about that one at the meeting.

They go to see Jack cleaning out his office, because apparently General Hammond was coming out of retirement just so Jack can go into retirement. Yes, lets all laugh for a moment on how stupid that is. Ha ha.

Sam then goes to talk to Caroline into having steak with her at; you guessed it O'Miley's in town… Or whatever the heck that steak bar was called. They then scheme so Sam doesn't have to go on the trip and can plan dates with Jack… Yup Sam would totally give up and risk her job for Jack… Yes, sounds like her.

The next day they had a briefing at the base before they leave. Sam then pretends to break her foot and Caroline confirms it's broken. Right….

The story then splits into two different points of view for the week. Sam is the first to be written about.

So they drop off Sam at her house, because apparently Sam likes to leave her car at the base and have her friends drive her home. Most convenient and is completely logical… I'm laughing so hard just writing this part down.

Casey or Cassandra if you will lives with Sam, as she's a teen still in high school. Apparently she's the kind of girl to throw lots of parties and only gets a slap on the wrist for it and a pathetic. "Don't do that again Missy." Sam and Casey also have a good relationship, despite her constant parties and trashing of the house.

Sam comes home to a mess and calls for Casey, which she gets no answer. There are socks everywhere in the house, socks that are neither hers nor Casey's. Sam finds Casey sleeping on her bed like a bum. Sam yells for Casey to wake up, then asks Casey to clean up. She also asks about the socks and Casey explains it's some kind of funny party trick. Sam doesn't let Casey explain what it is though.

Sam then hears Jack's voice from the bottom of the stairs. Sam explains she needs Casey's help to fake a broken foot. Which Casey is totally impressed with? Casey helps Sam down stairs on to the couch. Jack is apparently a very fast mover after being fired, because now he's worried so much about her.

Casey starts to clean up, and Jack mentions the sock thing and says he did that when he was in high school. Really Jack? About fifty years ago they did it too. Really? So it's been around for a while, and yet Sam has never heard about it once? Does Sam live under a rock or something?

Anyway the week goes on as they go on a date every night. Sam reveals on their first date, that she faked a broken foot because she wanted to spend time with him. Jack like an immature teenager boy; finds that appealing apparently.

The last night Jack and Sam go on a date. Before hand Casey starts suggesting what to wear and what lipstick to wear. Casey also talks about her best friend and how her and Dominic is now officially together and will never break up.

While on the date Jack mentions that Casey must be happy Janet's back; and Sam says she hasn't told Casey yet. Which apparently the most appropriate thing to do is argue about it. Jack says there's something he wants to say. Which at that point conveniently the phone rings and it's Casey.

Apparently Casey asked if a few friends could come over and it ended up being more than a few. Sam asks Jack to drive her home. She comes home and starts to act like that on scene in "The Pacifier" movie. If you haven't watched that movie, just watch that scene on youtube or something. Anyway she has all these teens cleaning the house. In which case Casey begins to clean rooms upstairs and wouldn't you guess it. Catches her boyfriend and best friend making out. Then tells her best friend to get lost and slaps her boyfriend.

Then a snotty girl from school down stairs, pores a whole bucket of water on her skanky best friend. Casey thanks the girl and the girl just responds with a "whatever". What a great start to a friendship.

Sam then gets a phone call and starts to cry. She then explains that Janet is dead again and how they brought her back.

Then the story switches to the group going to Egypt. So this is right after they drop off Sam. Caroline comes along because apparently she also studies archeology in her free time… Like a chief medical officer would have time to also do that. She apparently even goes off world every now and then for archeology… Let that just sink in.

Anyway they get on a private jet airplane. Apparently the government paid for them to ride a private plane… Ever wonder where your taxes are going? It's to private planes. Ha ha. That was a joke.

By this time everyone knows about Casey and Daniel so they're making gaga faces at each other in front of Janet… Yup that's what adults do.

They get to Egypt and thanks to Janet they find the ring transporter in the middle of nowhere. Which apparently is also a tourist site and no one thinks of it as being strange. Even the conspiracies theorists.

After turning it on they are taken to an underground tavern, this tavern has one exit tunnel. The tunnel leads to a ship, which is covered by lots of sand. They open the hatch door and get outside again. They realize that some how this huge pyramid is actually cloaked. So no one knows it's there, even though if someone walked into it they would feel it. Yes I do realize that this pyramid is in the middle of no where… But still, no one knows.

Teal'c then states there was a myth going around about one large pyramid on earth. Apparently Teal'c didn't bring it up now, because well. I guess it just never came up right?

Janet then begins to act strange, and while Teal'c and Caroline is researching the first room they were beamed into. Janet and Daniel are in the ship to see if it will still work. Caroline goes to visit them, and hears a conversation going on which sounds fishy. She then looks in the small room, and sees Janet kissing Daniel that makes her upset and runs away. Janet apparently made the move and not Daniel.

The next part is a little confusing to me also. I don't feel like taking it out either.

Basically what happens, they realized that apparently Janet is the Harsesis and started to recall her repressed memories of evil. Which it begins to take her over, she starts a self-destruct, which will destroy the whole pyramid. Apparently this pyramid even though is sooo large the blast from the pyramid would be no big deal to the rest of the world.

Through their wrestling with Janet, Janet starts to have a Jackal and Hyde moment where she switches from both consciousness's. Which again makes no sense, because once you would regain that memory that is who you would be. Not have a DiD episode. But eh, whatever right?

Caroline shoots Janet as she was killing Daniel. I can't even remember where Teal'c is. Maybe getting the vehicle for them to escape in?

They make it a safe distance, apparently. And Caroline begins to cry because she just killed someone.

Aftermath.

Casey is mad at Sam for not telling her about Janet being alive. Freya hits on Jack at the wake. Seriously, who invited her? Which he turns down of course because he loves Sam now apparently?

Daniel visits Caroline at her house after a week of the wake and all the window currants are closed her house is dark and a mess. She's sitting in a ball next to the wall and looks terrible. What a cliché.

They talk rubbish; Daniel apologizes for being not being there for her. Caroline asks Daniel if he was having feelings for Janet again; and he says he thought about it but realized she meant nothing to him. They kiss and make up. Then finally discuss a date for their wedding.

Sam and Casey make up, Sam's reasoning for not telling Casey… If I remember correctly, was because she didn't want to lose Casey? Oh and apparently Casey had another party the night before, and was cleaning the house… Again.

Jack comes over to visit Sam, he then proposes and that's the end of the story.

And that's it.

Now I can finally be free of this story. Thank you and good night.