I'm considering completely rewriting this story. The rewrite would still follow the same storyline but there would be a bit more character development and background on Clara's relationships; her relationship with Chibs, her uncle, her past relationship with Mitch Daniels. I just feel like this story could have been executed a bit better.. I want to know though would anyone be interested in reading it if I rewrote it though? Just let me know what you think. I'm still on the fence about it all.
I could still keep this version up and title the other version rewrites. That way you could judge which one you like best. Like I said though I'm completely on the fence about this.