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Mud Print
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She momentarily laid there shocked at what had just happen until she heard his chuckle. Slowly and with great difficulty she braced her hands on either side of her and pushed off the mud, only managing to get a small portion of her self released from the suction of the mud.
She let out an impressive growl for a human catching Toga's attention. He gracefully walked around the vixen and eyeing her carefully coming to the realization that she was stuck and wasn't going anywhere without someone's help. 'Indeed.'
Carefully bracing herself on one hand she slowly cleaned her face, removing some of the mud from around her mouth, nose and eyes only to find a smooth pale proffer hand extended to her. Slowly looking up she saw a pristine Toga crouching down a slight upward tilt of his lips indicated he fought a smile.
She continued to stare at his hand as he arched an eyebrow, waiting for her to reach out and take his hand. "Miko," he coolly said, watching as she took in a deep breath of air and let it out as what he assumed was resignation. Her hand now in his, he securely clasped it and stood.
Without difficulty Kagome felt herself being pulled out of the mud's suction and towards dry ground. As she stepped onto dry ground she stumbled forward and straight into Toga's chest, quickly she wrapped her arms around him tightly.
They stood there silent; Kagome smiling wickedly while Toga standing there stunned. She slowly pried her self from Toga and stepped back. Bending one arm under her breast, she gently grasped her chin with her other hand and smiling, admired her work.
Upon his pristine white kimono and hakama was a mud print of Kagome's body.
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I got a review on Chapter 27 that said my flow was horrible. I really don't mind, okay that would be lying it did bother me- a bit, but I am here to improve my writing after all. But the problem is they didn't give more info then that and I can't reply since it was done as a guest. Please tell me your thoughts on the flow of the story and what I can do to fix it, if needed. Water Flower 2009, I am still tracking on Chapter 16-18 and will go back and fix it, I have not forgotten. Thanks guys, as always you put a smile on my face with your reviews. ^_^ KiriKatana, Itachi anime, VixenKitsune147, CityOfFallenAshes, TearsDrippingDown, Esha Napoleon, Rose Haven, 2featherbraids, Veraozao, Sarah Victoria Cullen, Nobodies Perfect-Not Even You, LADY SILVERFOX and kate. Priss ^^