Here's chapter 2, Please comment!
I woke with a start. Where am I? I thought. I stood and looked around. I was standing in an unfamiliar nursery. There were little lumps of fur rising and fall. I realized that they were other kits. I counted. There were seven other kits. Just like me! I said to myself. A tabby she-cat with black spots and dark brown eyes stood up and shock the moss from her glossy pelt. She looked at me with confusion mingling in her deep eyes. Walking towards me, she gently picked me up and padded out of the nursery. I squirmed and tried to reach the ground, but the she-cat clasped her teeth around my scruff tighter.
She set me down carefully and called out, "Sunstar! I found a kit in the nursery!"
A handsome golden tom padded out of the leader's den "What do you mean? Aren't there supposed to be kits in the nursery?" He asked.
"No, you don't understand," The queen meowed."She's not mine or anyone elses."
"Oh; well in that case. We will keep her. Cheethheart, she's yours now."
I looked up at my new mother. She looked down at me at the same time. She smiled down at me with love, and care. I belonged here now. This was my home.
(Cheetahheart's P.O.V.)
I watched the little silver kit pounce on the ball of moss. She was going to grow up to be beautiful, you could tell. She had long gray fur and electric blue eyes. Of course, she was only two moons old but she was the same age as my other three kits. One of her ears was torn slightly from something before she showed up here. She was pawing at the moss ball repeatedly. She looked up,"Am I doing good mama?" I didn't think she remembered anything before she got here.
"Yes, you are sweetie!" I mewed to her.
"Yay!"She shrieked with joy.
I grinned, then a little voice in my head said, I know you need a name for her. It said, Call her Rainkit. I frowned Rainkit was a pretty name; it suited her. I looked at her, "From now on we will call you Rainkit, okay?"
She smiled and agreed "Okay. I like that name!"
"Alright then, time to sleep now, come on." I turned and padded into the nursery.
(Rainkit's P.O.V.)
I bounded after my mother into the nursery. She sat down in her nest, I batted at her tail as she wagged it back and forth.
She looked down at me and gently pushed me backwards. She then turned to address my siblings, Thornkit, Thistlekit, and Cinderkit. "You three, call your sister Rainkit from now on."
"Okay, mama!" They chorused back to her.
I heard breathing from behind me, then before I could turn around Thornkit leapt on me. "Ak!" I shouted.
I rolled over and landed on her. "Ahh ha!"
"Get off me DirtClan rogue!" He pawed at my muzzle.
"Never!" I shrieked.
"Rooooaar!" Cinderkit bowled me over. We landed on top of Thistlekit. "Ahhh!"
"That's enough." Cheetahheart plucked Cinderkit off of me.
"But mama!" We whined.
"No, go to sleep." She sighed "You can play in the morning."
"Okay.." We sulked.
I turned in a circle and lay down. "Good night mama." I nestled down into the soft nest of moss.
