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I woke, gasping for breath. Swiftbreeze stared at me like I was from StarClan. "What?" I rasped.

"You, you were dead." She spit out. "StarClan have sent you back to the waking world." She looked puzzled. "Why?"


(Rainshadow's POV(Several minutes earlier))

I ran through the crowd of cats to the collapsing figure of Badgerpelt. "Wait, Badgerpelt! What's wrong?" I shrieked desperately.

I slumped over his fallen body, listening to his shallow breaths. I opened my eyes and stared down at ginger paws. I ran me gaze up the legs, then chest, then head of Swiftbreeze. " I need him in my den. Now." She said sternly. Foxfur, and Whitefang pushed forward to carry his body to Swiftbreeze's den. Meekly I followed.

They lay him in a mossy nest just inside the cave entrance. Whitefang padded out with his head down. Foxfur sat next to the nest and licked Badgerpelt's unmoving head. I nodded to his mother and sat on the other side of the nest. "Do you need any help?" I asked Swiftbreeze as she reappeared from behind the rocky shelves where she stored the herbs.

"Yes, keep licking his fur in the wrong direction. It should keep him warm." The medicine cat instructed.

I looked down at Badgerpelt's sleeping figure. He was shivering. I frantically began licking his creamy pelt in the opposite direction.

"Okay that should be enough." Swiftbreeze said after a while. I stepped back. Foxfur had been taken away to get rest. She had been on patrols all day. Then her only kit falls into a coma.

"Will he be okay?" I asked.

"I don't know. He's in the paws of StarClan now." She pressed her head to his chest, listening for a heart beat. Swiftbreeze gasped. "What? What's wrong?" I shrieked.

She silently looked up at me and without a word, I knew he was dead.

I sniffled. "Noo!" I moaned. I collapsed as casually as he did, burying my nose in his still warm fur.

I sobbed into his lifeless pelt. "No." I muttered. "Don't go. I love you."


(Badgerpelt's POV)

"What?" I asked Swiftbreeze. I was supposed to be dead.

"Umm. You blacked out." She started. "Your mother and Rainshadow carried you in here. They stayed for a while." She relayed the story to me. Up to the part when she declared me dead. Rainshadow said she loves me? I need to tell her I'm not dead! I need to- "Stay away from Rainshadow."


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