So yeah… Hey… And enjoy I guess.
1: Is there going to be a pairing?
A: There probably will, but It will rather be random as I don't plan out my pairings or stories, so I just write the first thing that comes to mind as I type, which is why I usually smash a chapter out after a set amount of hours I feel like typing, I.E: I write for about 4 hours, then I don't feel like anymore I try end off the chapter there, each hour is around 1000-1200 words each. So if I feel like writing more, then there will be more, if not, then I usually have at least 2.5 hours at minimum limit so I can get a small, but decent chapter for you all to read. So yeah. It's rather random for the pairings.
2: Don't you think that Naruto's friends, Satsuki and Sasame, treat Naruto like I had Naruto's girlfriends treat him within the story "the one who stands strong."
A: Now that you mention it…. Nope! In that story, I had Naruto's girlfriends and lovers, betray him instead of talking to him first. This one isn't all that bad compared to the women within that story.
3: Do Kasumi and Mito not like Naruto due to his social standings or because of his mouth?
A: Well… Mostly for his mouth, more Kasumi than Mito, because not only does he have an "apparent" mouth on him, but he also manages to get people to believe that he is a descendant of the fourth or even Minato himself just with black hair and red eyes. Because of this, Naruto is a bit of an irritation to them as would you have someone you never knew of compare you to a complete stranger? It would be very odd and weird. Also, both Kasumi and Mito don't exactly "hate" Naruto, but they do… Dislike him and find him, or better yet his presence, irritating.
4: Why did the Uchiha get so pissed that Sasuke lost to Naruto?
A: Ok, so Uchiha have stated themselves to be the "elites" of other clans and shinobi's, and they do have very good shinobi that gains praise from their opponents who either live from a battle or seen an Uchiha shinobi battle someone else. Now, what happens when an apparent Uchiha, who is the next in line for clan heir, lose to that of an average child at birth, a commoner, what do you think that tells everyone else? It either tells everyone that there is a new strong shinobi out there, or, the Uchiha clan is quite weak compared to before. Something that would piss off any and all Uchiha within a seconds notice.
5: Aren't Naruto's current skills too simple and common?
A: Well… Somewhat. Currently all Naruto has is, skills included.-
Ninjutsu: Wind, lightning and water primary affinities, with wind being trained to an extremely high peak because of Kurama, along with a basic earth affinity and a highly advanced fire affinity gained from training with Kurama.
Taijutsu: that is currently rather common in the way Naruto, this one, still uses his taijutsu stances he learned from under yamato.
Genjutsu: High capacity to learn and preform genjutsu, due to refined chakra control gained from Kurama's help during, is able to escape a decent amount of genjutsu's due to acute awareness.
Strength: Strength matching that of higher end chunin's due to needing to keep up with the training ground Naruto currently resides in.
Speed: Matching that of higher end chunin's due to needing to keep up with the training ground Naruto currently resides in.
Reflexes: Middle range jonin due to Kurama attacking Naruto within the mindscape at somewhat fast speeds. This is a disadvantage currently as Naruto would instinctively react to attacks, only for his body to feel sluggish and slow to what he is reacting to, causing Naruto to focus more on his speed and reaction times rather than anything else.
Durability: higher up in the chunin stage as he has been through a decent amount of battles at his age.
Stamina: As his body heals, it also purges the fatigue toxins that his bodies produce, this allows Naruto to have a larger stamina than most, currently at the rate of a Mid-level jonin, as his body purges the toxins at a quicker rate, however, the body can only do so much before it is racked with fatigue toxins.
Healing factor: Allows Naruto to heal or regenerate from any form of damage, depending on the damage and the location, Naruto's body can heal things between the ranges of 1-2 weeks all the way up to months, or even, if the damage was that intensive but not enough to kill him, years. This ability however, can grow and evolve to be more efficient as time goes on.
Weapon of choice: Wrist mounted Shinobi razor wires that shoot out of the wrist mounted gadgets when using chakra directly into the item. Has the ability to also retract or detach wires shot out with a specific input of chakra into the device along with chakra conducting wires. This item was also constructed by Naruto after 5 years of tinkering.
Chakra amount: The current size of Naruto's chakra is that of a mid chunin, however, due to Naruto's potency, training by Kurama a being made of chakra, Naruto's chakra in actual strength is around a common low-mid jonin with near perfect control.
Experience: Mid chunin.
Fuinjutsu: Unable to place as Naruto is following the way through the rikudou sennin learnt fuinjutsu, trial and error while gaining a bit of understanding from each bit of trial.
Trap making: higher than an average ninja as most don't worry about this skill unless necessary.
Poison abilities: Knows a fair decent amount of things about poisons and antidotes. Around Mid-chunin in this area.
Medical Ninjutsu: Has the capacity to learn it, due to chakra amounts and mental ability, however, all this Naruto can do is use medical equipment to go along with a decent amount of knowledge of DNA and the body to a minor degree. High genin level doctor, Academy level medical ninja.
Now I understand what you mean about Naruto's skills being common and all, but there is a varying mix of things that aren't usually there, the main one coming to mind is Naruto's razor wire weapons that hide underneath his long sleeve shirt. Aside from that, I do admit my Naruto's a bit common in ability wise, but don't forget. This Naruto is a Naruto who A) doesn't have a proper sensei after Yamato. B) Doesn't have enough chakra to spam shadow clones to learn everything, although, this Naruto does have basic skills in poison making and trap making along with his own variation of fuinjutsu created from his own understanding of the art. C) He is a civilian, who would not have access to all that much "rare" abilities and skills.
Either way, there is a mix of common and uncommon skills to what I can see. However, you are right in the way he does, currently, seem a bit too common as a ninja.
Owl: 1
Lion: 1
Gorilla: 1
Reptiles (crocodiles/lizards): 2
Wolf: 16
Falcon: 17
Cat family (Lions, Tigers, Cheetahs, Cats etc.): 12
Toad: 1
Tool: 1
Dragon: 3
Frog: 1
Mouse/rat: 1
Eagle: 1
Spider: 2
Oozaru: 1
Squirrel: 1
Rabbit: 1
Praying Mantis: 1
Komodo dragon: 1
"Speaking"
"Thinking"
"Summons/ bijuu speaking"
"Summons/ bijuu thinking"
"Fire release: Great fireball technique"
"DIE! DIE! DIE!" Came the shout of an enraged teen as he sent sand bullets towards his black haired opponent, who was now bouncing around the arena as he avoided the sand bullets and whips his opponent controlled.
"FUCK! FUCK! FUCK!" Screamed Naruto internally as he twisted his right shoulder backwards slightly, watching as a spear of sand flew right past his body slightly.
It wasn't a second after the match had started that Naruto found himself being forced into evasion maneuverers as the red haired teen he was supposed to be battling against decided to screw the whole shinobi dialog battle scene which nearly every other shinobi did, either out of arrogance or due to watching everyone else do it.
Gritting his teeth, Naruto pushed against the hard ground once more, sending towards the arena wall before he quickly latched onto the hard surface with his chakra, which, was still affected from the drain his rasengan had caused.
Narrowing his eyes towards the ground, Naruto began to run around the arena wall, causing the red haired teen Garra to narrow his eyes slightly as he sent continuous sand bullets after the black haired teen.
Using the wall, Naruto continued to run as he watched countless amounts of sand bullets narrowly miss him as he ran.
Using his left hand, Naruto quickly grabbed a kunai with an explosive note out from his waist pouch before grinning slightly.
Continuing his run, Naruto began to force more chakra into his legs, sending him blasting off the wall as he over surged the amount of chakra he needed to stick to the arena wall. However, this is exactly what Naruto was planning as he held the glistening explosive kunai by the small ring attached to the base of it.
Waiting for his body to sail over past Garra's form, Naruto began to prepare his chakra for his next attack as he awaited for the perfect moment for his attack.
And it wasn't a second after that did he throw his kunai down towards Garra's head, which was now staring up towards him with a blank gaze.
That blank gaze however disappeared…. When the sole explosive kunai soon multiplied to that of hundreds.
"Boom." Muttered Naruto silently as he held his hand into the release handsign.
And just as he muttered, an explosion rang throughout the arena, which was then soon followed by that of dust and smoke which in turn caused all that were watching to cover their eyes for a few moments as the dust and smoke disappeared slowly.
However, no one could have expected to view what they did.
There, within the arena floor was Naruto, grabbing at what looked to be a massive arm of sand that then connected to the red haired teen's body.
But aside from that, the teen continued to look bored for a few moments…
Before a spine shaking smile appeared on the teens face as he looked towards Naruto's squirming body held within his hand.
Naruto however, was now mentally killing himself at how he managed to get himself caught, even now he should have been able to dodge the sand arm, but his reflexes were simply too fast for him while his body couldn't keep up.
Glaring down towards the owner of the sand arm, Naruto could only widen his eyes as he looked towards what used to be featureless teal coloured eyes of Garra… Now however as small bits of his face began to chip off…
There was a yellow coloured iris with a single star held within the centre of the eye where normally an average pupil sits now it was surrounded by four small pupil like dots in-between the star's points… That… Is not natural.
Hearing a huff from his mind, Naruto mentally visioned Kurama, who, had decided to make his presence known.
"Naruto… It seems as if your attack caused Shukaku to take over… But for him to be able to do see so easily means that either the brat Garra allows him to… Or his seal is ridiculously easy to break… Seeing as how Shukaku decided to play dirty with him being the one battling you. Most likely since the beginning… Don't hold back on him… And use what you have learnt from me and show the pathetic tanuki who is the strongest." Grumbled Kurama from Naruto's mindscape as he watched the events transpire from his most preferable mindscape.
Naruto couldn't help but blink slightly as he raised a single eyebrow.
"But how would that show that you are stronger than Shukaku if I'm not your jinchuuriki?" Asked Naruto in a curious tone.
His response however was the sound of something clapping.
"… Link up with the fool once you have defeated him… And then I can brag about it…" Finished Kurama, becoming quiet once more as he mentally grumbled at how unfair it was to have someone he would rather have as his jinchuuriki host but he can't because he was stuck in a blond and red haired monkey.
Coincidently, somewhere in the earth country, an old man with red hair sneezed along with the bijuu within him.
Giving Kurama a mental grin and pat on the back, something that weirded the fox out as a mental projection of Naruto's hand actually formed and patted his back, the black haired teen glared into the star like eyes of Shukaku before grinning.
"Hey Garra! Kurama say's hi!" Shouted Naruto, gaining a widening look from Shukaku as he looks towards the teen before he suddenly felt the sand he was using detach itself from Naruto's body.
And as Shukaku looked, he widened his eyes as the sand around Naruto's body began to slowly crystalize into a clear looking substance, much to his shock.
He was turning the sand wrapped around his body into glass!
Grinning mentally, Naruto started to squirm even more, causing cracks around the glass he was now surround in to start to chip and crack.
Releasing the fire chakra he had circulating around his body, Naruto began to form water chakra before pushing it out to just under his skin, this in turn caused the glass to crack even further as the temperature changed from hot to cold too quickly.
And with a bit more squirming… Naruto broke from the glass, small shards somehow managing to cut his arms and face, his face now holding three slices on each cheek.
This caused the sand being to narrow his eyes… Before gaining a psychotic glint within them.
The spectators couldn't believe their eyes as the black haired teen managed to escape the red haired teens grasp while also turning the sand into glass.
Not only were the spectators shocked, the shinobi too as half of them couldn't fathom the amount of skill needed, along with control, to be able to produce fire natured chakra without any handsigns and in a few seconds.
Landing down on the ground in a crouch, Naruto gave the sand bijuu a small smirk before pushing off the ground disappearing in a cloud of dust before landing a devastating punch to the bijuu's jaw, sending the red haired teen's body smashing into the arena wall before lifting a single handsign up towards his mouth.
(Kage booth.)
"I-i-is that…" Muttered Onoki in slowly widening eyes, drawing the attention of the other kage's as they sent him a curious glance.
"What are you on about Onoki?" Asked the Raikage while keeping his attention onto the black haired teen. This has been an interesting match so far.
The fourth too looked at Onoki in curiosity. However, before he could also ask, the old man gave the hokage a glare.
"That brat can't possibly be a genin… Or better yet a civilian! How is it that the brat knows Iwa's most hated jutsu's aside from the hiraishin Yondaime! He must be your spawn if he knows the Rasengan, but not only that… He knows the jutsu of one man who had still given me nightmare's since I was but a young man… So I ask once more hokage… Who… Is… That… Brat!" Shouted the Iwakage as he glared hatefully at the Yondaime, causing the blond haired man to give his fellow kage a small parting glare.
"What do you mean? I for the lack of better terms am still shocked that one of my fellow ninja managed to recreate the rasengan on his own. And as for what he is? I wasn't lying, he isn't my son or better yet any other clan's child. His name is Naruto, a civilian born shinobi… Now onto the jutsu you were talking about… What is I-" Replied the hokage, only to hear a gasp from the only female kage besides him.
"Fire release: Great fire annihilation!"
Turning his attention back towards the genin, he couldn't help but widen his eyes in shock.
"H-how…" Muttered Minato, soon followed by the other kage aside from Onoki as he glared hatefully at the technique being shown below.
"… Spawn of madara…" Muttered Onoki as he clenched his fists with blood slowly slipping down from his palm at how much force he was clenching his fists at.
(Genin section.)
The Genin could only stare wide eyed towards the black haired genin known as Naruto as he broke free from the sand.
They knew what the sand could do, they had seen it in the preliminaries when one of the unlucky teams had been captured by the red haired teen and killed within a few seconds later.
How had their fellow genin, a civilian at that, managed to escape from that attack!
"W-what is he…" Muttered Kasumi, her sister slowly nodding her own shocked head as she couldn't keep her eyes off the back of their fellow konoha genin.
Shikamaru, however, decided to give Kasumi an answer with a small glint within his eyes.
"A civilian shinobi." Muttered Shikamaru with a small grin on his face. He didn't know why… But just watching the black haired teen gave him goose bumps, he felt energised from watching, something that he found "Troublesome" and relaxing at the same time as he watched Naruto lay a vicious punch to the sand shinobi's face.
"Hn." Muttered Sasuke, his sharingan eyes boring into Naruto's back as he attempted to steal and learn everything he could off the dobe, even if the dobe somehow managed to prevent any of his jutsu being copied by him...
He will take everything the dobe had and added that onto his own power. He would not lose to the dobe again. Even if the first time he lost was a fluke… His first… And last one…
Funny enough, other Uchiha within the crowd also began to grit their teeth as they began to pull their hair out at the fact that they couldn't even copy any of the black haired teen's jutsu.
Behind the genin, the jonin themselves couldn't help but let out a small whistle in amazement as they watched the genin break free from the sand using ninja and then follow up with a sock to the face, which in turn sent the red haired kid flying into the wall.
"Gotta admit, the kids good." Muttered Asuma as he let out a small puff of smoke, much to the irritation of a beautiful woman besides him with striking red eyes.
Kakashi couldn't help but glance towards Asuma as he continued to hold his book up, causing Yamato, who had also been stationed with his fellow jonin sensei's, to give an exaggerated eye widening as he looked towards his senior officer.
Kakashi didn't seem to notice however as he sent a lazy eye towards the chain smoker before giving a small shrug.
"Now, now. The kid isn't all THAT much." Muttered Kakashi in a bored tone as he waved a single hand towards his fellow companions, only getting a raised eyebrow from Yamato and Kurenai, who had seen first-hand at how exactly Naruto was.
Asuma however decided to get his point across however as he gave out a small chuckle.
"Well from what I can see he is. Just take a look at the glass on the arena floor. Not only does that show the black haired gaki knows how to utilise fire natured chakra, it also shows that it's been trained to a point that he can physically use the chakra without any seals. Gotta say, the kids interesting enough to draw my attention." Finished Asuma with a small smirk, causing the one eyed cyclops to simply let out a small huff.
"Sure he is able to do that, something I doubt many genin his age could do, but that isn't all that much when you compare it to all the other genin we have under our teams… Although… I am curious as to where the teen had managed to learn the rasengan seeing as how I know both Minato-sensei and Jiraiya-sama would never teach anyone the rasengan unless Minato allowed or requested it. And I sure as hell would have taught him… So that begs the question… How does he know how to do it?" Asked Kakashi, getting a shrug from all the other jonin-sensei's as they too had no clue.
Soon a small chuckle alerted the jonin, the chuckle however had come from Yamato as his eyes gained a small shine within them as he looked towards his sempai.
"Who knows Kakashi-sempai. You might learn something from the genin with your sharingan. He is rather… unpredictable. That much I can testify personally." Replied Yamato, gaining a small chuckle from kurenai as she too gave the black haired genin a small glance before returning her attention towards her fellow Jonin.
"Yes, he seems to be rather… Gifted when wanting to surprise you. I mean, not only did he rescue my team and I, but also the daimyo's niece Naho from a bandit situation. Although, I won't lie, I may have been a "bit" hard on him during the entire mission since I hadn't believed the Genin's mission completion chart that Hokage-sama had given me." Sheepishly replied Kurenai with a small blush residing on her cheeks as Yamato gave a smirk to the raven haired woman.
"Fire style: Great fire annihilation!"
At that, the jonin, along with the genin beneath them, snapped their head towards the arena, their jaws dropped slightly as they witnessed a jutsu that was only spoken upon in slight whispers.
As they watched, Yamato couldn't help but give his sempai a quick glance.
"Told you that you should have paid attention Kakashi-sempai." Muttered Yamato, getting a small nod from Kakashi as he openly gaped towards the arena floor.
However, even then, the group of jonin could easily hear the screams of anger and rage of the Uchiha's as they saw their previous leader's most famous jutsu out in display… Without them gaining the knowledge on how to create the technique since the black haired teen only used a single handsign.
Back with the genin, the small group could only watch with widened eyes, Kasumi and Mito however both couldn't help but let out a small gasp.
"… Amazing…" Muttered the two sisters in synchronisation, their fellow genin giving small nods of agreement as they watched… Aside from Sasuke who was too busy, like those of his clan within the arena, gritting his teeth as his sharingan eyes spun in fury.
(With the Hyuga clan)
Hinata could only gape as she watched the terror unleased from her Naruto's, She meant Naruto's, flames and couldn't help but blush slightly as she watched the black haired teens body glisten with small beads of sweat created from the heat of his own attack.
However, before Hinata could focus on the black haired genin more, she felt her mother's mouth move over towards her ear before shivering slightly as he mother grinned.
"I approve." Were the only words spoken as Hinata's mother moved her head back, a larger than average smile firmly planted onto her face as she managed to see the developing blush appear on her daughters face.
Ah, to be young.
(With Naruto)
"Fire release: Great fire annihilation!" Shouted Naruto as he felt the building fire natured chakra expel through his mouth and onto his opponents like a flamethrower.
He had to admit, this was by far one of his favourite jutsu that Kurama had taught him, and with his rasengan being taught to him by his "little birdy" before the month preliminary break, Naruto couldn't help but grin as he sent more chakra into the attack.
I mean sure Kurama hated madara… But that didn't mean the man himself wasn't powerful in his own right, and with him battling Kurama and the fox gaining the knowledge of the techniques he used back when he originally captured him, the bijuu had managed to teach him how to utilise the ancient techniques that had been wiped off the face of the earth.
Looking into the flames, Naruto watched with a narrowed glare as the body of Garra slowly began to become crystalized, the bijuu currently in control couldn't even muster up a way for him to escape because of his limited control over his own element due to using his host's body.
However, before Naruto could finish the match off… And explosion rang through the clearing…
And with a single shout… Everyone within the stadium widened their eyes in shock and soon panic ran throughout the village.
"THE UCHIHA CLAN HAS BEEN DESTROYED! KONOHA IS UNDER ATTACK!"
And there, done. I know the first thousand words were more or less just a rundown of Naruto's skills, but hey! It's important to know things I guess. Anyway, I hope you enjoyed the chapter and I hope to see you all later Dattebayo!
Also, before someone say's "This isn't civilian Naruto if he is the spawn of madara!" Don't worry, Onoki only said that because 1. Appearance, black hair and red eyes, not sharingan, but similar. 2. Silent attitude, so far no arrogance. 3. The great fire annihilation is Madara's main jutsu aside from his Susanoo.
And yes, Naruto learned the rasengan from the hawk that he could speak to. How? Well, the hawk was just flying then came upon the sight of Minato training his daughters in how to make the rasengan while explaining the three steps while the hawk was there.
So yeah. If you got any questions, ask away!
