Hey everyone… So yeah… lucky people you are today with me being able to write on a school day… Because I hurt my leg and can't walk all that much, I am forced to stay on my bed… And since I was bored… Yay more writing!
1:Does the higher ups know about Danzo kidnapping Satsuki, Sasame and Shisui?
A: No. Danzo had made his move on Shisui now since if he were to disappear earlier on with nothing in the village going on, he would have instantly been caught out on it while Satsuki and Sasame were kidnapped earlier on during the preliminaries. Anko however? Who knows…
2: Your story is jittery and overloaded with OC's!
A: … Ouch… Since when is adding OC's that much of a crime? I'm just trying to get my Naruto to be his own person while having a few similar traits to that of the original… Only without the BS increase in power gained from Kurama, Uzumaki blood and the Sage of six paths. The sage mode was his own effort put in, but everything else just boosted him so much. Anyway, like I said in ALL my previous stories, I DON'T have a plan going into stories, I literally just start typing down on my laptop and just move my fingers to the keys as I think out a story. No planning, No pre-scripting and No editing, yep! If I usually have good grammar that's because I just have good grammar, you could literally count the mistakes I could make in the double digits, which is why I usually just leave the work un-edited and post it up. So yeah, there's a little bit of information on how my work is done up. I hope you know understand why it may seem a bit jittery. As for OC's, just trying to make the story a bit more original.
3: Shisui's eyes.
A: I may have wrote this part wrong as people think that Naruto only has a single eye of Shisui… No, he has both of his eyes as the thing with Itachi never happened and before Danzo could get the eyes of Shisui Naruto had stumbled upon him. So for a rundown, 1) Naruto find Shisui. 2) Shisui Kotoamatsukami's Naruto into grabbing his eyes and storing them away for future use of either himself or Itachi. 3) Naruto kills Shisui and destroys his body as one of Shisui's commands, thus making Danzo lose his chance at any way of gaining the Kotoamatsukami ability from Shisui. SO hope that cleared the mistake up, if there was one.
Owl: 2
Lion: 1
Gorilla: 1
Reptiles (crocodiles/lizards): 2
Wolf: 25
Falcon: 25
Cat family (Lions, Tigers, Cheetahs, Cats etc.): 12
Toad: 2
Tool: 1
Dragon: 3
Frog: 1
Mouse/rat: 1
Eagle: 1
Spider: 2
Oozaru: 1
Squirrel: 1
Rabbit: 1
Praying Mantis: 1
Komodo dragon: 1
"Speaking"
"Thinking"
"Summons/ bijuu speaking"
"Summons/ bijuu thinking"
"Fire style: Great fireball technique"
(Flashback, with kage bunshin.)
As the two were plummeting, Naruto's kage bunshin couldn't help but sigh as he felt his boss throw him towards the red haired teen, just before a massive sand fist hit him into a different direction completely.
Fuck you Shukaku.
Turning his head back towards the other teen who was freefalling with him, Naruto couldn't help but let out a small sigh as he threw his right hand out towards the teen, sending the wire that was held within to quickly wrap around the teens waist before pulling him towards himself. Once he felt the red head within his arms, the clone quickly threw out his left wrist down below towards the trees.
Watching with a waited breath as the wire wrapped around the tree's base, the clone could only narrow his eyes as he went sailing straight down.
He knew his wire was too long to use his momentum as a swing… That is unless he retracted the wire, pulling both himself and Garra into a swing that would prevent any damage towards the two, however, even the main Naruto had trouble with this as it was a rather new adjustment he made to his thin wire producing machine that resided beneath his shirt.
Closing his eyes for a few seconds, just enough time to calm himself, the clone snapped his eyes open before he began to retract the wire… Only for the wire to detach itself from the tree as the clones chakra stopped moving into the tree and into the device itself.
Watching with a twitch as the wire dropped from the large tree, Naruto gave out a grunt before glancing towards the red haired teen in his arms with a small glare before he retracted his wire completely.
His boss was going to kill him if he ran out of chakra before his mission.
As they were falling, Naruto quickly began to weave single handsigns before holding the final one as he was awaiting for the ground below.
A few seconds later Naruto felt the earth beneath him, however, just as he felt his body touch the earth, he release the jutsu he was holding.
"Earth style: Hiding like a mole!" Shouted the clone, his body, along with Garra's, had sunk into the earth as if he had just dived into a pool of water.
However, because he had dived into the earth, the chakra that was required was a bit… Larger than the initial jutsu and as such, the clone quickly escaped from the earth, making sure to drop Garra on his back as he released a small sigh.
"Boss better get his earth affinity strengthened… That was way too close to comfort." Muttered the clone as he sat down on his ass and looked towards the red head now staring at him with wide eyes…
"Stay away!" Shouted the teen, only agitating the clone as he simply stood up and walked towards the teen, completely ignoring the sand the teen threw at him with accuracy that would be accustomed to a new born.
Reaching the teen, Naruto placed his hands onto the boys head before closing his eyes and sending his chakra into him, allowing the boy to slowly widen his eyes as Naruto sent his emotions through his wire.
Looking into Garra's teal coloured eyes, the blood eyed teen gave Garra a small smile.
"See that wasn't so hard?" Asked Naruto, causing Garra to slowly nod his head before his eyes became bland… Along with the clones before it popped and disappeared in a wisp of smoke.
(Flashback end- Naruto's mindscape)
Naruto could only hold his head in pain as he sat on his knees and staring up towards the one tailed bijuu Shukaku grinning menacingly at him.
Fuck! He had Kurama around that he forgot HOW he had Kurama within him! Stupid shadow clone!
Gritting his teeth, Naruto stood himself up with a glare on his face as he stared up towards the bijuu with nothing but a determined gaze, something that brought a grin to the massive bijuu's face as he stared down towards the crimson eyed teen.
"Great seeing ya brat! Now I can have all the fun I want right here-" "Well look who it is… It's my dear little brother Shukaku." Suddenly a voice broke through Shukaku's crazed voice, however, this tone was easily identifiable to the black haired teen as he gave the massive sand bijuu a grin…
Just before an orange paw pushed the bijuu on its stomach before a larger object laid on its back with a grin.
"KURAMA! GET OFF YOU FOX PELT!" Screamed Shukaku as it attempted to wiggle its way from underneath the massive fox, only to get a huff as Kurama continued to sit on his "brothers" back.
Naruto couldn't help but chuckle slightly as he saw the sight of Kurama sitting on the younger bijuu, was he younger? He didn't know, but it was funny nonetheless.
However, Naruto wasn't the only one to chuckle and when he heard that, he turned his head to his left in a snapping like motion, causing the giggling to increase further from the owner of the said voice.
Said voice however left Naruto's mouth wide open as he stared towards the woman who was beside him.
A kind looking face greeted him, framed ever so gently by sandy blond hair that made her indigo coloured eyes stand out.
Wearing nothing but a yellow scarf and a regular jacket and pants, Naruto could help but let out a gasp.
"W-who are you? How did you get in here?" Asked Naruto with his eyes widening as the woman gave him a small giggle and smile before giving a small bow.
"My name is Karura… I am Garra's mother… Well, a chakra form of myself as I promised little Garra that I would always protect him." Replied the woman, now staring towards the black haired genin with a small smile.
"Thank you for what you did Naruto-kun… Thank you for accepting Garra for who he is and linking yourself to him… While it isn't like that of mine, I can feel the link you have made in order to let him have some closure and know that someone is there for him… After all… That's why you made the link in the first place didn't you?" Asked Karura with a gentle smile on her face, causing the red eyed teen to gain a small smile on his face as he looked back towards the pinned bijuu who had still been shouting.
However, it was his mind so he could shut the volume around the bijuu whenever he wanted silence.
Returning his gaze back to the woman, Naruto let out a small chuckle before gazing up towards the blue sky of his mindscape, the corner of his eyes catching bits of white balls of energy floating up.
"Seeing as you know if I'm lying or not… Yea… I… I did do it for the kid… His eyes, while clouded with hate and anger and a thirst for death… Were only hiding what was beneath, the desperate cry for help and companionship that no one seems to notice… It reminded of me before I met my best friend Satsuki… Who I had forgotten about in favour of my own life…" Muttered Naruto as he continued to gaze towards the sky with a hint of sorrow on his face.
Karura saw this and placed a hand on the teen gentle, allowing him to continue with his tale if he wanted.
Giving a small thankful look towards the woman, Naruto returned his gaze towards the sky.
"Early within my life, before I had become friends with Satsuki… I had an accident with the wrong people, child slavers. Originally, when I was at the orphanage, the children would be allowed to play outside for over four to five ours. Under the watchful eyes of some staff of course… I hadn't listened and wanted to explore… So… I did what I wanted to… I explored… Then I was kidnapped and dragged out of the village at a young age, basically becoming a child slave… It wasn't long before I was bought, all while I had been unconscious mind you, before I woke up inside what appeared to be a dungeon and my wrist cuffed…" At this, Naruto's eyes narrowed, his ruby red eyes shining as his mind went over what had been his first set of nightmares.
However, Karura said nothing but stood there, waiting for the genin to continue.
And with a sigh, he did.
"I remember hearing the sound of a door being opened before a man came in. He was pretty generic, brown spiky hair, buttoned up white shirt and blue trousers and a pair of sandals. Apparently, this guy had a little thing for beating on children… And I learned that first hand as I screamed for help as the man bashed my head in all over the dungeon and took his time. Some days he would do barely anything, some he would continue well after I passed out… I had been in that dungeon for over a month before someone saved me…" Muttered Naruto, a small smile appearing on his face as he gave the woman besides him a big smile.
"It was Satsuki… She… She had found me, or rather, originally followed me to where I had been captured and had taken a while to plan a way to save me… Considering that she was 8, I doubted anyone would believe what apparently was a very kind man that I had been kidnapped and stuffed in a dungeon in the man's home… So Satsuki did everything she could to help me, even when she may have gotten lost getting back to konoha… She still did it at her own risk… That… That is why I would always put up with her, no matter what she did to me… And that was also why I originally wanted to get strong. To match up to her and be better than her in every way, even if she was a prodigy at her age… Not one to Itachi Uchiha's or Kakashi Hatake's degree… But still a head above the rest…" Muttered Naruto, a small tear appearing in the corner of his eye as he remembered the fear stricken face of both Satsuki and Sasame as he found them.
Clenching his fist, Naruto gave a small grunt.
"No one but her tried to find me... Hell… Because I was one of the more silent ones in the orphanage, they hadn't noticed that I was gone! Even my records were lost during the period that I was captured! Who the hell does that to a child?" Shouted Naruto as his eyes surged with a crimson shine as he glared towards the sky, tears slipping down his face as he mentally felt the pain of being alone and abandoned down in the dark dungeon like cellar to be nothing but a punching bag.
"No hokage… No Shinobi's… No caretakers… Just a fellow orphan… And orphan that meant the world to me… An orphan… Who… I let…" At this, Naruto lost the anger that sat upon his face as he now stared down towards the ground with tears down his eyes.
Karura simply gave a small smile to the teen.
"You wanted to do what your friend also did for you… Be a hero that saved them from the darkness that was beginning to creep up on them as they were alone… But you know the feelings you have are nothing compared to the bijuu behind you, the ones who know that you felt their emotions… And yet, you can't help but cry even now…" Muttered the woman as she pulled the genin in for a small hug.
"I don't know what I can say Naruto… But… Thank you for being there for my son… Thank you for being the light that he can now use to begin anew… But… It is also a time for you to return the favour for that Satsuki girl and your other friend… Be their light and help them through what they are going through… I know you can do it Naruto… After all… Not many can hold such a flame in their heart that doesn't want to give up… Once more, as Garra's mother… Look after my son from the outside… While I protect him from within…" Muttered the woman, tears trailing down her face as she held onto the genin who hut shut his eyes before nodding his head into her neck.
Moving his head back, Naruto gave the woman a grin, his eyes shining in a crimson glow, only this time it wasn't from hate, it was from the fires that sat behind the eyes themselves as Naruto stared at Karura.
"I-I promise… I will be the light that will help Garra through his darkness… Along with that of my friends… Just count on me Karura." Spoke Naruto with a grin, gaining a nod from the woman as she began to disperse, returning back to her son's body so that she may protect him once more.
Watching as she left, Naruto felt another single tear tremble down his face before quickly wiping it off and replacing his sad look with a determined grin before turning towards the two bijuu that were still fighting.
Holding his hand out, Naruto watched as his mindscape began to rumble slightly before two massive trees began to wrap around the bijuu's arms before dragging them apart, getting a shout from the two as Naruto turned his attention to them.
"Shukaku… I know that you originally formed the link between me and you, allowing you to enter my mind as you please, and in return I am able to do so to yours… I will allow this if you promise to leave Kurama and Garra alone. I will even let you create a small pocket dimension within my mindscape for your self should you choose. Is that a deal?" Asked Naruto as he stared towards the sand bijuu with a small stare.
His only reply was from the link between them as the sand bijuu thought out it.
And like that, Naruto looked at the massive bijuu before causing a black hole to appear behind the bijuu.
Within the black hole was a massive desert, which, had made the bijuu give the teen a blank stare. That changed however when he noticed massive buildings scattered all over the desert. And with a grin befitting the psychotic bijuu, Shukaku went into the portal, not even paying attention as it shut itself behind him and disappeared.
Shukaku knew that he would keep his end of the bargain if he kept his own.
Letting the massive fox go from the tree he had manifested, the teen quickly made the orange fox's favourite massive pillow appear beneath him before letting the fox go, causing it to land on the fluffy object with a small grin on his face.
"If only my jinchuuriki would do this… I would probably only want to kill them a bit less." Muttered Kurama before shutting his eyes, gaining a small twitch from Naruto as he shook his head.
"Night Kurama." Muttered Naruto with a small smile before exiting his mindscape…
Only to stare up towards white painted walls.
"Fucking hospitals."
And that is it. So yeah, hope you liked the small bit of backstory I had for this Naruto, pretty dark, but there is a reason that will be found out later on. So don't worry about this piece of info being nothing but a waste, as, trust me, it will be a shocker for you all later on.
And yes, the chunin-invasion arc will soon be over! Just one more step towards the end of the "Naruto" series and closer towards the beginning of the "shippuden" series!
